My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8 - Page 11

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Hlw frnds.. I m so happy bcoz I got 80+ likes for my last update 😛 .. Thanku so much everyone.. This update specially for "Rithika"who got her new color & turned into " Goldie "..congratsss dear..

Part - 2




MiMi are still sitting hand in hand in coffee shop meanwhile mihika saw her watch & hurriedly stand up & says - shit mihir kitna late ho gya h see the time its 6pm or mujhe 5:30 tk pahuchna tha pta nhi ishu amma ko kaise tackkle kr rhi hongi..mujhe abhi niklna hoga saying she took her bag from table..

" wait mihku i will drop you"saying he went to bill counter for clear their bills..

She nodded & went out of coffee shop..

Mihir came & both settled in car and drove towards mihika'home..

"Stop mihir" saying mihika step out from car..mihir also came out & asked..

Mihir - mihku abhi to tera ghr 5,min due h to tu yhan q utar gyi..

Mihika - I know mere budhu ram BT I think you forget that whenever I was late my Amma will definitely pacing in fro outside of my house..

Mihir hit her temple with his hand and says - ohh haa how can I forget when one day I came to drop you and your Amma saw me with you & asked lots of question ...bt thank to ishu who came & save us saying he relaxed..

Mihir laughed looking mihir face...

Mihika - really us din to mujhe lga tha ki hmara bhanda phoot gya & ur face mihir ..I m still remember that all time u r try to say something BT Amma send another question & u again silent saying she start laughing uncontrollably..



Mihir made faces & says - tujhe hasi aa rhi mera to us din haal kharab ho gya tha & or haa ab tujhe Der nhi ho rhi..

Mihika - ohh haa okk I m going saying she turned to go BT mihir held her hand ..

Mihir forward his cheek & says - phle mera gud bye kiss to deti jaa saying with wink..

Mihika without any fuss she gave quick peck on his cheek and from their saying byee budhu..


Mihir ruffled his hair & drove towards his home..

Mihir reached his home after dropping mihika he entered & saw all helps are running here & there..
He don't know what's going on..

Mihir(st)- what happen all helps in so much hurry today is not any festival to kya kisi ka b'day h Omg mihir u r such fool mihika sahi kehti h tu ek number ka budhu ram h..BT kiska b'day h papa ka nhi nhi to maa ka nhii phr kiska h saying he held his hair in frustration...
Then he called his maa- maa maa where are u?

Toshi from kitchen - ha puttar bol ki kaam h..
Mihir -ap kaha ho maa?
Toshi - puttar mai kitchen mein hu tu yahi aa Jana mai bhutt busy hu saying loudly..

Mihir (st) - aisa kya bna rhi h maa Jo itna busy h..CHLO wahi dekhte h..

Mihir went to kitchen & stunned to see that his mother was preparing so many dishes..& asked ...
Mihir - maa aj kuch khaas h kya Jo itni taiyari ho rha hqki aj koi festival to h nhi or na hi kisi ka b'day h to phr ,,kya koi guest aa rhe h..

Toshi ji smiles & said - WO puttar..she was going to told him the reason of this preparation BT Mr. Bhalla called him at
Same time & mihir immediately went from there without listening her..


Mihir step inside study room where Mr. Bhalla called him..

" ji papa apne bulaya" mihir asked

" ha beta WO tujhse kuch jruri baat krni h" saying Mr .bhalla forward a file ..

Mihir pick that file & asks - ye konsi file h papa..

Mr. Bhalla - puttar ye hmare naye project ki file h jiske silsile mein tu pichle hafte Mumbai gya tha presentation dene..

Mihir - ohh woww papa uska mtlb WO deal hme mil gye..

Mr.bhalla - yes puttar & its all credit goes to you and ur hardworking..

Mihir - that's great news papa BT ye SB apni mehnat ka nateeja h apke guidance ke main ye SB kbhi hasil nhi kr pata to thanku papa saying he hugged him..
Mr .bhalla - so from now you start work on this project u know naa if we have to complete this project successfully that's will gave new heights to bhalla industry..

Mihir nodded happily & asks - its means bahar Jo preparation chl rhi h ish project ki khushi main h papa ..

Mr. Bhalla - no puttar WO to Raman ke aane ki khushi men h announced Mr.bhalla..

Mihir - Omg papa that's a brilliant news Raman aa rha h apni pdhai khatam krke said mihir with excitement..

Mr bhalla- hmm puttar BT is me itni taiyari krne ki jrurat nhi thi Maine mana kiya tha toshi ji ko BT WO h ki manne ko nhi taiyaar ...

Mihir - ap aisa q bol rhe h papa ye to celebrate krne ki baat h aakir poore 10 saal baad WO apni studies complete krke aa rha h..

Mr.bhalla - ha aayega or phr aawaragardi mein lag jayega..

Mihir - arey papa don't say like this..

Mr . bhalla - or kya koi jimmedari h uske andar..waha use pdhne bheja tha naa ki aye din parti krne..

Mihir - arey papa abhi chota h WO dheere dheere smjhdari aa jayegi..

Mr. Bhalla - kya kaha tune WO abhi chota h..

Mihir bend his head & nodded...

Mr.bhalla - achha can u tell kitna chota h tujhse..

Mihir - 5 min..

Mr.bhalla - not 5 min BT only 5 min u both are in twins..r u remembered..

Mihir nodded..

Mr bhalla- ek tu h Jisne yhan rehke sari pdhati ki or ab mere business sambhal rha h or ek WO h Jo kehta h papa abhi mai chota hu WO Q tu or Teri maa bhi ..

Mihir - I understand papa BT u know naa I love him so much & tbhi mai use mana nhi kr pays jb Usne mujhse bahar Jake padhai krne ki request ki..

Mr bhalla - or isliye tmne apna Jana cancel kr diya..

Mihir - its past papa plz bhool jaaiye..or dekhiye naa Maine yahan rehke bhi to apke marzi se pdhai ki Jo ap mujhe chats the WO bann gya so plzz forget this..

Mr bhalla- that's what I m trying to says ki tu yhan rehke Kabul banned gya BT WO mihir interrupted okk now plzz close this topic papa for me..

Mr bhalla nodded..& mihir went out of room ..

Toshi ji saw him coming from study & asks- kya puttar Bina poore baat sine chala gya tainu pata h ki aj Raman aa rha ...

Mihir hugged her tight & says - yes maa papa told me and I'm so happy..

Toshi - me too puttar kitne dine baad mai uski dekhungi saying she start crying..

Mihir wiped her tears - ohho mere senti maa khushi mein bhi koi rota h kya aisa welcome kroge uska ap..

Toshi - nhi puttar ye khushi ke aansu h..

Mihir - that's not fair maa Raman kya aa rha ap to mujhe hi bhool gye saying he pretends angry...

Toshi - oye pagal h kya maa ke lye sare bachhe Usk kaleje ka tukda vote h..

Mihir smiles &says -to phr meri chain kha h phr..

Toshi called neelu ..
Neelu came with tea ..& serve to mihir..
Mihir drinks tea and praise her then ask - maa kitne bje ki flight h Raman ki..

Toshi - 5 bje ki..

Mihir - okk to mai use pic krne jaunga & ap uske swagat ki taiyari krke rakhna..

Toshi - good good puttar.. Changa..

That's all for update.. I know Maine Raman ki entry nhi kiya BT kya kru I m so busy bcoz today I m in my relatives home BT next update mein pakka ..



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Edited by harshiidiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updated next part..
Read it & gave ur feedback also.. 😛
Rayaland thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part n pls update part 3 soon
Ishradiv thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear wating for raman entry Continuee soon as possible and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
congratulations dear... awesome update di... mihir and raman r twins... ... waiting for raman arrival... continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank u dii ❤️

The update was awesome
MiMi scenes were cute
Buddu Mihir 😆
Oh Raman and Mihir are twins
The celebration is for welcoming Raman
Waiting for our hero's entry and IshRa encounter
Update soon dhi
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear
Mimi scenes were too good
Raman is coming to home after 10 yrs.
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
so raman and mihir are twins
nice
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
Loved it.
Mimi nokjok was superb.
Ishita is always a lifesaver for them from her Amma.
So Mihir n Raman r twins n mihiri is responsible whereas Raman is carefree.
Would love to read this bindas Raman who is not overloaded with families responsibilities.
So mr.bhalla was not so pleased with him for going out for studies n for not taking any responsibility.
But he have full support of his bro n mother.
Very excited for Raman entry.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the pm dear:)

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