Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey sweety, i was waiting for your reply hehe,
It's dream or real to know that you gotta read the next update. Agar readers ke response acche aai toh aaj raat ko hi update karungi nahi toh kaal 😉
Next update is very erotic so... Thoda wait toh banta hain! Precap se kaam chalao philhaal ke liye!

Thanks a lot 😊 waiting for your feedback dear.

Wait Karne ka mann bilkul bhi Nahin gain precap dekhne ke baadd... Jaldiii karooo... Aaj hi update Karlo na plzzz

Edited by Roopaamrutha - 8 years ago

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Awesome updates ..

To be honest i m angry with geet .. Because of her maan is in this state ...

And upar se sam ..She assumed everything by her self and daydreaming about maan ..Hadd hai !!

I hope geet mana le maan ko ..

Waiting for next ..

Continue soon..

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

maan is in angry mood daadi observing him and he

getting drank and coincidently sam was there and she twice mu him that he's in love with hr

geet now can't see maan distancing

so he told him she's ready wat ever he says

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Hope so it's geet with maan not Sam..

Wish their misunderstanding to go away otherwise their life can be in mess all due to their egos and Sam..it's not all geet's fault even maan must keep his anger aside and think what's right or wrong ..

Thanks for update

Waiting for next

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

sorry 4 late likes n comments! Part 8 - lovely update! well written! Maan upset! Dadi n his mom worried! Dadi senses something wrong btwn Maaneet! Geet tries 2 help Maan n he refuses! Last part - was that Sam or Geet?

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

chap 9 - spectacular update! excellently written! Maan drunk! he mistook Sam 4 Geet! Oh no Sam loves Maan n assumes he loves her too! 😡 Geet helps Maan! she kisses Maan while he is asleep! she is so bold! Maan awakens n ignores her! Geet wants Maan 2 hold her n gets closer 2 him! he is confused n she explains that she was wrong! she wants him 2 do as he pleases! Is update soon

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Updating chapter 10.
Thank you all for all the likes and comments. Writing is such a hard job i got to taste while writing this chapter. It may seem easy to read but writing erotic stuff is damn hard.
Your responses gather courage within me to unfold the story so do leave your comments. Add me in your buddy list for pm.

Warning :This chapter is very bold and contains pretty mature stuff so beware before you proceed as i already stated in my first post that this story is going to be passionate so...☺️