**The Chronicles Of Narad Muni & HeinHeinKumar** Pt 5 Pg 10

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PariKC

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

First of all, really really sorry for being so late

secondly, thank you so much for the PM

third, seriously, why aren't you a professional comic writer? not only you write well but have a great sense of humour too

I enjoyed your update more than Tuesday's ad, um' I mean episode 😉

really hilarious af, it was all Rosesh's dream 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

oh my god! you should definitely post this to the PH. i am sure they are going to love it. you are too good.

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AK3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Keep up the good work, Mahi!

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Are you sure, you aren't the secret writer of SvS.?
The punch lines are bang On.And ofc How can I not mention Roshesh's poem.🤣 Hilariously Amazing.

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

I'm so sorry to not post anything past a few weeks. I promise an update within Tomorrow 😛

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.
I'm so sorry to not post anything past a few weeks. I promise an update within Tomorrow 😛

Toh Barobar😛

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Awfully sorry people, I'm busy off late! I read each and every reply and I'm so THANKFUL to everyone out there who read & liked my work!

Here's the next one :

Part 5 : Jab They Met

Rosesh : Aap calender ke Saath kya Kar rahi Hai Moma?

Maya : Woh Sahil ki nayi clinic ki opening ke liye auspicious date khoj rahi Hoon

27, nahi. Indu Ka paun toot Gaya tha uss din. 28, yeh Bhi Nahi.

*enter Indravadan*

Kya Kar rahi ho Maya?

Rosesh : Moma Sahil Bhai ki nayi clinic ke opening ke liye auspicious date doondh rahi Hai.

Maya : 29th kaisi rahegi?

Indravadan : 29th auspicious date kahan Hai? Uss din toh Rosesh Ka janam hua tha

Maya : Woh 29th June Hai Indravadan. Main 29 July ki baat Kar rahi Hoon. But actually you're right sweetie.

Rosesh : Moma!?

Maya : Mera Matlab Hai 29th July ko Juhu Mahila Committee ke elections Hai. Toh opening mein log Kam ho jaayenge. Accha 30th kaisa rahega? Sunday Bhi Hai.

Indravadan : Maya, Maya, Maya! Tum itne khatarnak din ko shubh kaise samajh Sakti ho? Tumhe Yaad Nahi, uss din kya hua tha?

Maya : Kyun, aisa kya hua tha?

Indravadan : Aree Madhubhai Jamnagar se shift hue the Mumbai! My God!

Rosesh : Aisi Bhi kya baat ho Gayi Dad!

Maya : Indu is right Rosesh! Woh din vakayi iske liye khatarnak tha *chuckles*

Flashback

*Doorbell rings*

Maya : Kaun Hai itni subah subah...

Ji?

Madhubhai : Ae Maya Jalkukdi. Andar toh aane de!

Maya : Excuse me? Aap kaun Hain?

Oh hello? Aap Aise sofe par kaise baith sakte Hain?

Indravadan : Oh ho Maya! Kya hua? Aree, yeh kaun Hain?

Maya : Wahi toh pata Nahi chal raha Indu. Dekho naa please!

Madhubhai : Tum log yahi Soch rahe ho naa, main kaun hoon? Maya, main Madhu! Tumhaari Jamnagar waali Vrinda Mausi Ka beta, Madhusudan!

Maya : Oh, I see I see! Achanak..

Madhubhai : Mere liye bhi ek glass lassi.

Maya : Maine Kaha, I see

*enter Sahil*

Good morning Mom, Dad... Erm, yeh...

Indravadan : Yeh Hai Madhusudan Bhai. Jamnagar se abhi abhi Aaye hain

Monisha : Aree wah! Toh udhar ki fafdaa jalebi Nahi laye?

Maya : Beta, Ghar Aaye mehmaan se Aise baat nahi karte! Tumhaara kya Hai, tum toh bhelpuri waale ko aur Sarita ko Bhi ek jaisa treat Karti ho.

Indravadan : Maya... Koi inse poochega yeh yahan kya Karne Aaye hain?

Sahil : Dad, Ek minute. Hello, Madhu Foofa! *claps hand*

Madhubhai : Aree Sahil! Tu toh kitna bada ho Gaya! Chota tha tab mere goodi mein...

Sahil : Haan haan. Yahan kaise aana hua?

Madhubhai : Ganna? Mujhe puraane filmy sings Pasand Hai. Badan pe sitaare lapete hue! Oo Jaane tammanah kidhar jaa rahi ho...

Maya : Hey bhagwan! Monisha Jo Kam thi...

*After an hour*

Indravadan eating chips from a flowerpot.

Madhubhai : Tum kya Kar rahe ho Indu? *Peeps in*

Chips!? (Shouts loud)

Indravadan : Zaraa dheere boliye. Shhh, shhh!

Madhubhai : Phirse bolun? Tum chips kyun khaa rahe ho?!

Maya : Indravadan! Yeh kya hai!

Madhubhai : Aur Maya! Doosre waale mein chevda Bhi Hai.

Indravadan : Aree Yaar problem kya hai aapki! Ek toh behron ki tarah sunaai nahi deta...

Madhubhai goes away from there

Indravadan : Aree baap re, Inko bura lag Gaya kya?

Maya : Ab jao aur maafi maango!

Indravadan : Madhubhai, I'm really sorry.

(Looks at him blank)

Dekhiye, Mera Woh Matlab Nahi tha...

Madhubhai : Hein?

Maya : Bass phir, uss din se Maine detective ki tarah unko Indu ke peeche laga diya. Ek Ek karke saare chips, chevde, basundi, sab bahar aa Gaya! Aur Madhubhai ne hi toh mujhe bataya, ki Indu doodh ko Bhi plants mein daal deta Hai!

Indravadan : Aur uss din se unki Hein Hein Kabhi band hi nahi hui!

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Cheers,

Mahi.

Edited by .-Amethyst-. - 8 years ago