Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]- Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
their mu still going on
they are not talking top much
geet loves him very much
how much she tried she can't stop her heart
hmm dadima's new plan
hope it will work
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Geet jane kya kar rahi hai
Hope she tells maan about her insecurities and termoil.
Maan baat nahi kar raha toh kya geet toh kar sakti hai.
Ab jaane kab sulah hogi
And ab sameera bhi ane wali hai , ab kya twist ane wala hai 😲
Eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Chapter 6 : Young hearts!

So she was on the verge of denying but then again can't raise any suspicions either so she decided she will deal with that problem later and so told dadi that she has no problem with a big smile.

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Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Fabulous and hilarious update 🤣
Loved it 😃
Maaneet are best when it comes to nok jhok 😊
Chalo isi bahane dono bhadas nikal rahe hai , thoda gussa shant ho jayega 😆
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
hey dear
first of all congrats on ur first story ..
read all the parts ..and liked it very much .
beautifully written ...
maan has so much ego ..and geet has lots of insecurities ..
they love each other from childhood but still ..they don't understand each other well ..
both are craving for each other's attention but their stupid ego and insecurities ...uff !!
and now sameera is coming ..I M sure she is going to create more misunderstandings in maaneet's life ..
can't wait for next ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Nice update
Maaneet nook jhok Wala part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
lovely update ..
sameera seems nice to me I hope she stay like that only :p
all the junior khurana's r enjoying ..
loved maaneet's cute nokjhok ..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
maan and geet are fighting like tom and jerry
lovely part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Super update loved the nok jhok
Zaalim singh khurana
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: sagorika93

hey dear
first of all congrats on ur first story ..
read all the parts ..and liked it very much .
beautifully written ...
maan has so much ego ..and geet has lots of insecurities ..
they love each other from childhood but still ..they don't understand each other well ..
both are craving for each other's attention but their stupid ego and insecurities ...uff !!
and now sameera is coming ..I M sure she is going to create more misunderstandings in maaneet's life ..
can't wait for next ..


Hi, Thank you so much for your supportive feedback dear. My main motto is giving maaneet effect i hope am not going over board with their characters!
ego= maan
😆
Maan has some key elements into his character and attitude is definitely one of that.
Sam! Hmm she is of course going to be the spice element 😉
Keep tuned and do give any suggestions for me to improve!
Edited by Iptida - 9 years ago

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