Bitter Kisses (PriVeer FF) [Ch 14 Updated Pg 34] - Page 25

Originally posted by: bworm

👏..wow

This is getting more and more interesting.

Happy to see you back.

Can't wait to know what next.

Completed reading all the 14 parts together. Its so interesting with lots of twists n turns. I'm loving the bond btw Prinku n Anika, I'm loving the way u r exploring it. Also thanks for giving Ranveer's background details. It was very helpful. Although this is Priveer story, I'm loving how u r exploring Shivika, Ishkara n Rumya stories too side by side. I'm really feeling bad for Ranveer, Prinku, Anika n even Tia. 😔 I'm just loving this story with lots of interesting twists n turns. 😃 I felt so happy reading this Priveer story. I really wish the CV's of the show explorers Priveer's relation instead of bringing tons of unwanted villains for creating problems for Shivika, Rikara, Ruvya n also for Priveer themselves. 😭 Anyways plzz update soon n thanks for the pm. 😃

P.s.- Wanted to complete reading all the parts n after completing reading I wanted to write my comment in more details in the morning, but couldn't help not to write it now itself, although this is a short comment from my side for all the 14 wonderful chapters, but plzz remember that I thoroughly enjoyed n loved reading all the chapters n plzz forgive me if I missed (not if, I missed many I know) mentioning any parts, coz I'm feeling very sleepy right now coz its 2:50 A.M, but as I said earlier that I couldn't stop writing the comment now itself, be it short or long, so I wrote it now itself. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

Wow that was super awesome. Loved it. Looking forward to next part...

Ha ha, the way she was looking/gawking at his angles and planes and was getting lost in them, was written brilliantly... 😉 ! Then the drops of water from his hair on her face and he was embarrassed! 😉 Anika is in such a limbo state! How he asked did she live here! Aww my heart goes to the poor soul(Anika)! You are including other characters and it's getting more interesting, Ishana's insights are treat to read! It's like IB ff where Priveer are at front! Looking forward to see the clash of Senior Ob-bros... !

God! That was just so good twerps! I liked the part of Anika diverting attention and Tej knowing Shakti had been the one behind this shaadi 😲 Loved each part of u describing him. That part where he was simply asking why can't they just meet and talk etc was like me asking the same. But then u gave the logic. Hats off to you Twerps 👏

This is BEAUTIFUL *teary faced*
I love the bonding Anika and Priyanka share! I also love the twist at the end: a rather devious Shakti!
I love how cute Priyanka and Ranveer are, the fact that Anika caught them in a awkward but adorable situation (I think awkward situations b/w PriVeer are always adorable, I mean c'mon, it's PriVeer!) and how Dadi just added some extra dose of laugh to this!
👏 😊
I LOVE this freaking dope update!