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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

SPL thanx to u bhavya, I don't know u personally & we didn't talk but through ur story we are connected, cz we are only 5-7 readers, who reading this story but you a are still continuing it. I saw that many writer stops or discontinue their story when there readers reduce but u wrote of us, thank u so much this lovely & superb story. I am not so good in English & sometimes didn't get correct word to express but I always try what I wanted to say


Thx 4 spl mention..
I don't know how to respond to ur spl mention..
Bt It really boost me to come out of less response sometime I felt to stop this story bt at that time few of them are encouraged me to continue this story of PaRud..
Ur words are making me that feel like flying...
Thx u so much dear..
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Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the update 👏


Thx u 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Flash backs are helping clear the mystery. So Mala is not married to Tejawat and Mitra is her daughter. She was actually kicked out of the house by Dilsher, how cruel. And yet he blames Mala. How is Rudra going to react when he comes to know the truth.


Thx u for ur cmt 😉
Dilsher is nt fully responsible for this cruel Bt Mohini who is talking ill abt her own sister..
Dilsher who is already vex abt his ill leg & Mohini's plot works well to throw her sis out of Haveli..
Need some time space to read Aman's report abt Mala..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

past is explained beautifully. it's better than what they showed on RR.in the show dilsher was shown horrible in the fb.but here it's mohini who brainwashed him against mala and mala hasn't loved of married tejawat unlike d show.liked it.parud scene was romantic


Thank u so much for your cmt 😉
Thx for mentioned that my FB of Mala is better than Rangrasiya..
Thank u..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AlooMatar

The ending made me laugh poor Rudra 😃

There were so many things going on simultaneously. Happy that Mitra is home finally and very curious as to what Rudra and Aman are upto.

Thanks for the PM


Thank u sis.. 😉
Thank for reading my story..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 30

Danveer is reading newspaper in hall. Maithili gave tea to him. He asks where is Samrat? She says he is getting ready. He says I want to talk to him and I need his appointment today. She says Bhabusa, why are you talking like this? I'll tell him to meet you before he left to shop. He smiles and nods. After few minutes, Samrat come to Dilsher's room where Danveer is talking to his brother. He says Bhabusa. Danveer says come in beta, I want to talk to you. He smiles and come to him and sits on the sofa. Danveer says I don't want any indirect talk. Confused Samrat rolled his eyes. He asks what happen Samrat? I know, something is bothering you and also changed you, what it that Samrat? Samrat says nothing Bhabusa, I'm not changed. He says ok beta, how you got power to decide about adoption. Samrat is shocked. Danveer continued and says Maithili told this to me, I know you're not like Sumer who is always helps Mohini to do ill things but you respect and support your mother in any situation, Samrat, I didn't saw any respect from you to your mother last few day, what happen beta? Samrat recalls how his mother tries to kill Dilsher at that night. Danveer shakes him and says I'm your father, I know my son's nature. He says Bhabusa, I saw... Rudra opened the door of Dilsher room. Samrat was taken aback of sudden entry of Rudra who says I need your signature chacha. Danveer nods and signs the paper which was given to him. Rudra asks what happen Samrat? Why are you looking so worried? Samrat didn't talk so Danveer says he is feared about his decision of adoption. Without thinking, Rudra says don't get fear Samrat, Maithili bhabisa is really a good person so that she deserves it to fulfill her life, she is not like my mother, and she will definitely took good care of a child. Samrat nods and Danveer returned the files. Rudra pats Samrat's shoulder and says don't get fear about your mother, I'll handle if she does something against your child. Samrat says thanks. Rudra smiles and left. Samrat comes to door and calls Maithili. Danveer asks why are you calling Maithili? He says she needs to know about it. After Maithili came there, he closed the door and windows. Both of them are confused to see him. Samrat comes to Dilsher and holds his hand and says Bhabusa, is Taausa important to your life. Danveer says what kind of question is this, he is my brother, and he is most important person in my life. He says but Maasa hates him. Danveer says I know that. He says you don't know bhabusa, she hurts him and she tries to kill him. Danveer is shocked to hear it and says enough Samrat, she is your mother, and did you remember that. He say I know bhabusa, that's why I didn't tell this to Rudra and I'm the soul witness of Maasa's crime, she tried to kill Taausa by removing his oxygen mask at that night and your brother is alive because of your son. Maithili carefully listens everything. Shocked Danveer sits on the sofa. Maithili says Ji, I too have a doubt about it, and have evidence which is favor to Parvati. Samrat asks what evidence? She says bridal dress of Parvati, I saw two bridal dresses, one was torn and stitched by Parvati and another one was not torn. He says I didn't get you Maithili. She says I saw a girl with Maajisa who gave her a bag of bridal dress as like as Parvati's at Haldi morning, I noticed that but I didn't care about that at that time, after I found that second bridal dress, I concluded that Parvati is not done anything to Taausa and gives that evidence to Rudra devarjisa. Danveer didn't talk anything, tears falls from his eyes. Samrat and Maithili come to him and sit in front of him and try to console Danveer who hugs them and cries.

At Happy party office, Shatabdi saw wall clock and said to herself that hereafter he won't come. Someone knocked the door of her room and she says come in. Sumer comes in to the room and sits in front of her, shocked and surprised Shatabdi who is watching him as a ghost. He asks what? She asks how could this possible? He confusingly raised his eyebrows. She says you're reunited with your family. He says han, I can understand your question now, it's my work and love to work here and be with yo... he stops and says I'll go to my cabin. After he left her cabin, she smiles and says so you love to be with me.

At BSD, Rudra is checking a mini document about his new mission. V.K calls him and says come to my cabin. He says ok sir. In V.K's cabin, V.K says Rudra, it's not our work man. He says sir, I know, but we didn't catch Tejawat because of that Minister and his money. V.K says ok, Rudra, but it's really a big risk. He says sir; we need to do this for our nation sir. V.K says ok Rudra, I will inform local police station about it. He says no sir, it will distract the case so easily. V.K says but your safety is first man and he thought for a minute and says my relative son who works as police in Mumbai, he will help you to complete this mission. Rudra nods and salutes him. In Rudra's cabin, he completes his work and leans in his chair and thinks about his promise to Paro. He saw his watch and says it's already I need to go now and grabbed his bike key. Aman came to his cabin. He asks is there any trace about Tejawat? Aman. He says no sir but and asks sir did you read my report about Mala? He says nope Aman, I'll read it tomorrow. Aman says but tonight, you're leaving for a mission. Rudra says yeah Aman, I know her testimony is not helpful for this case. Aman says that's right sir but. He put his hand on Aman's shoulder and says Aman, leave it, I'll read it for you, I'll take this file with me. Aman smiled at him and nods. Rudra left BSD.

At haveli, Mitra checks their homework and saw Parvati who is nervously watching the clock on Sunheri's room. Mitra thought them for few minutes but she felt Parvati's uneasiness and asks Sunheri to fetch some water. Sunheri left. Mitra asks what happen Bhabisa? Why are you looking so tensed? Do you want leave soon today? She says nothing; I'm fine, not like that. Mitra says ok then what happen, you're not yet concentrating. She saw her hand which are fidget her dupatta and says he is leaving today. Mitra holds her chin and makes her see her eyes and asks who? Parvati says Rudra, her eyes are filled with tears. Mitra recalls Aman's word about Rudra's mission at Kashmir and says don't worry nothing would harm him and he will return safely. Sunheri opened her room door and noticed that they stopped talking and asks what happen, am I disturbed the conversation? Mitra says not like that, Bhabisa is not well. Sunheri put her hand on Parvati's forehead and says no, she is fine. Mitra says she is mood off. Parvati hides her tears and smile at her. Sunheri thinks for few seconds and says shopping. Mitra asks what? She says shopping is the only will divert our mood so easily, so today after finishing class; we are all going for shopping. Mitra says ok, but who will come with us. Sunheri says Aman & Varsha, she took her phone and called Aman to inform about shopping plan. Aman says ok, but inform it to Rudra sir. She says ok, I'll inform and cuts the call. Someone opened the main door. Parvati was taken aback and says Rudra. Mitra nods at her. Parvati left Sunheri's room.

Parvati runs to mandir at home and thanked god and took an aarthi plate and went to Rudra's room. In his room, he is talking to someone on phone and says I'm packing my cloths now; I'll be there at sharp 2am. Parvati opened his room door and placed the plate on the table and asks what you are searching. He says my gun, Paro. She hugs him from back and says miss you, Major Saab. He makes her face and says holds her face and shocked to see her eyes are filled with tears and asks why are you crying? She says because of you. He says I won't leave you without meet you, did you know that. She hugs and placed her head on his shoulder and nods. He hugs her back and says Paro, I'm getting late. She breaks hug and says I'll pack you cloths. He says ok Mrs. Ranawat. She smiles and gave him a towel. He went to bath room. She sits on bed and folds his cloths. After few minutes, he came out of it and took his uniform. Parvati closed her eyes and says I'll wait outside. He says no need I want to talk to you, and I'll change in bathroom is that clear. She nods; she opened her eyes after she heard door closing sound.

At Haveli hall, Sunheri sits with Mohini and says about her shopping plan with Aman. Mohini is excited to hear it and says go ahead, Sunheri. She asks Maasa, I need money. She took some money from her cupboard and gives it to her. Danveer says Sunheri, don't touch it. Mohini asks what you mean. At that time, Sumer enters into the haveli. Danveer says hereafter, her Bhabusa and brother's will take care of her need. Mohini saw Sumer and laughed and says Sumer., he didn't have any money, he is living his life depending on me. Sumer asks how much you want. Sunheri smiles at him and says I need 1000 Rs. He asks is it enough? She nods. He says first time my sister asks money to her brother, so here you go with 2000Rs. She smiles and hugs him. Danveer says now your son is not depending on you. Sumer says bless me Bhabusa and bends down. Danveer blessed him and says took my brother's blessing too.

At Rudra's room, Rudra says Paro, I'm leaving tonight. She nods and says I want to do your tilak. He says no Paro, I... She put her finger on his lips and says don't says no to blessing. His eyes are locked with her's when she doing his tilak. She signs him to put his hand on his head. He raised his eyebrows questioningly. She holds his hand and put it on his head and does his tilak. He says Paro, I don't know about it, no one did this to me. She says I'm here for you Major Saab. She leaving his hand but he holds her finger. She says Major Saab, I want to give you something. He holds her by her waist and closed his eyes and says fast Paro, I need to pack my cloths. She slaps his chest and says I packed your bag. He opened his eyes and says Paro, don't waste my time. She took off the rudraksh from her hand and says it's yours Major Saab. He disappointingly looks at her. She says give me your hand. His hold on her waist loosens. She tied it on his wrist and says god will protect you. Rudra says it's Chacha's gift Paro, it's not like that the way your thinking. She smiles and says I know, you didn't trust god, but I had faith. He nods and says I need something else Paro and pointing his cheek. She says hope you successes in this new mission. He says Paro, don't divert... She says ok Major Saab, close your eyes and tip toed and placed her lips on his cheek next moment Sunheri calls her. She is about fall but Rudra holds her. She says Major Saab leave me. He asks why she is calling you. She says we are going for shopping, leave me Major saab. He says Rudra. She shyly smiles and says leave me Rudra. He smiles at her and loosen his grip on her. She runs and gets hurt by the chair. Rudra rushed to her and holds her and makes her sit. She says I'm fine Rudra. Maithili come there with tea and asks what happen Parvati. He says she hurts herself. She says no jeeja, I'm fine. She says Paro, don't go anywhere something is wrong. She says jeeja, I'm fine. She says not at all Parvati, when you took aarti plate at mindir, unknowingly you bumped the milk bowl which falls. Paro gets sad. Maithili says its bad omen, Parvati. Rudra says I'll take care of her, Bhabisa. After she left, Paro says nothing will harm me when my Major saab with me and smiles at him. He asks did you want to go to shopping. She nods at him. He says let's go. Surprised Paro asks are you coming with us. He denied and says with you only. She smiles.

At hall, Rudra says I'll drop Parvati. Sunheri says but we are going for shopping. He says after shopping I'll. He signs Aman who understood and asks them to come with him. Parvati sits besides Rudra on his jeep. Rudra says Paro, we are going to some other place after that we will join with them. She asks where Rudra? He says surprise, but you will like that place. She nods and says Mitra is good girl, she understood my feeling within few minutes, and she consoled me when I'm getting worried. He asks why Paro? I told you that I'll meet you before went to mission. She says I know, but I don't know when and where you're going? He says tonight 2am and Kashmir. She says but you didn't tell this before. He says I told you about the place, did you forget it. She nods and says sorry. He says no Paro, and he stopped jeep in front of old temple, no one is there in it. Both of them are sits under the tree near at temple. He says Paro, I want to give this to you. She asks shall we go in. He nods. She holds his hand and walks inside the temple. She prayed and asks him to pray. He says Paro. She says Major saab, I know that you didn't have faith in god but please do it for me. He smiles at her and folds his hand. After finishing her prayer, she turns to him and asks what you want to give me. He took out a small gift box from his pant pocket and gave it to her. She smiles and says gift!! What was there in it? He says open it. She slowly opened it and finally she saw a Peacock model Kumkum box. He smiles and says I brought this for my wife. She smiles and hugs him. He says Paro, I don't know when will this mission end but I hope and want to finish this mission as soon as possible for my wife and don't want to leave my wife as it is, so I brought this. She nods on his chest and says I love you, Major Saab. He kissed her forehead. She breaks hug and opened the box which was empty. She asks where sindoor is. He says one minute and went to tree and took some sindoor scattered on it and then put it on the sindoor box. She smiles at him. He asks is this enough Paro? She says yeah, you filled it. He says ok Paro, shall we move? She stops him and signs him to fill her maang. But he questioningly raised his eyebrow. She holds his hand and says your really a little kid and dips his finger on the sindoor. He smiles and filled her maang. She closed her eyes after that she slowly opened her eyes and says finish this mission soon Major saab, I'll wait for you till this sindoor got finished. He asks after that? She says I'll die. He put his finger on her lips and says don't say that Paro and hugs her. She hugs him back. He says Paro, if you need any information about myself ask Aman because Mobile phone will not work there so I can't able to call you. She nods. After few minutes, they came out the temple; she stops him near at jeep and says love you. He smiles and says get in. When he about to turn, she holds his collar and lifts her up and kisses his lips, it was a slight touch of her lips on his and she pulled away. He says it's not enough Paro and holds her by her waist and bend down to kiss her. She gasped and wants to say something but he didn't allow her speak. He placed his hard lips on her soft one. He felt her tremble in his arms and he gathered her closer by his one hand on her waist and the other one is cupping her face lovingly. She bunched his uniform collar. He licked her lips and sucked lower lip and then upper lip. Passionate kisses makes her bend backward of the jeep, she is almost inside the jeep. He slightly pulled away, flushed and breathless Paro said road... he placed his forehead on her's and says this was enough for me, it'll sufficient for so long, Paro. She opened her eyes and asks what about my condition. He says yeah, I remember it; I'll try to return soon before you emptied this sindoor box and hugs her.

Someone called Tejawat who says if you got a chance to attack her does it but don't kill her. The goon says I didn't comprehend your plan. He says attack her, show her the pain but don't kill her, I need her alive. He says ok boss and cuts the call. Shantanu says dad, what was the new plan. He says Rudra is leaving for new mission but before that I want to give a gift to him. Shantanu says are you trying to stop him. He says no, he is going to Kashmir for new mission so I don't want to stop him but I want to stress him by this attack so that he may fails to do his best at border this time. Shantanu smiles and says I don't know about this emotional game but if you're thought about Rudra is right means this was a master plan, we will win the game soon otherwise... Tejawat stops him and asks him to leave, after he left, he sits on chair and think about his plan.

At market, Aman parked the car and says Mitra stay here; we will come back within an hour. Mitra nods at him. Sunheri asks why? Why are you ordering her to stay in car? He says she is in tremble like Parvati. She nods and says I had an idea to solve this problem. He asks what? She put her dupatta on her head and veils her face. Aman says good idea. Mitra says I don't want to purchase anything. Sunheri says so what, come along with us, now we are not a teacher & student, so feel free to be with me, I'm like your sister. Mitra nods and says thanks. Sunheri holds her hand and led her to the market. Aman smiled at them and asks them to wait for him but they went into the market. After an hour, PaRud reached market. Rudra calls Aman and asks him to come to the entrance of the market. Three of them are in entrance; Rudra says I need to go to BSD now so drop Paro at her home. He says ok sir. Rudra says Sumer will pick up Sunheri. Rudra turns to Paro who says I'm fine Major saab, don't worry about me. He nods and says take care. She says you too. Rudra left. All of them are joined and started doing shopping and chatting and eating at roadside. All of them are eating Panni poori, suddenly few of them are started attacking them, Aman fights with them and asks three of them to go to car. They runs towards the car but stopped by a goon. All peoples are started running here and there after they heard the gun sound. Three ladies are shocked to see the goon who is blocking their way with knife in his hand. Mitra turns to see Aman who is fighting with four goons so that it's her turn to save them. She took some color powder in the shop and throws it on them and runs. But before they could reach the car, four goons are surrounded them and asks them to leave Parvati. But they didn't leave her. Suddenly one goon tries to attack Parvati with his knife but Sunheri holds the knife on time. Parvati is shocked to see Sunheri. The goons throw her out of their way, now Mitra and Parvati started moving backward, Parvati cries for Sunheri but Mitra pulled her away from Sunheri and says they are trying to kill you not Sunheri. Both of them are stopped by the goons. A goon says no way to run away. Mitra calls Aman, a goon took a knife and attack her with it, but before the knife touch Parvati, Aman punched him away from her. Another goon try to attack her, Mitra comes in front of Parvati. The goon throws her away. Parvati is shocked to see all those things happen in front of her and faints near at Mitra who is lying. BSD jeep surrounded the market place and arrested few of the goons. A soldier salutes Aman, Rudra is also came there with them and runs to Paro who is unconscious. Aman asks where Ambulance is, soldier says within a minute it will reach here. He asks where first aid kid is. Rudra splashes water on Paro's face and pat her cheek and asks her to wake up. Sumer is also reached the place and helps Sunheri to sit. Aman gave Sumer, a first aid kid to treat her wounds and slowly walks towards Mitra. A soldier checks her pulse and says she is fine. Aman runs to her and put her on his lap and calls her. She slowly opened her eyes and says I'm fine Aman, nothing happen to me but it's paining.

At hospital, Parvati sits on the chair outside of the ward, she didn't talk or cry but she thinking about the incident. Both Rudra's sisters are inside the ward, Doctors are treating them. A Doctor came out of the ward and says both of them are fine, but Mitra needs good care. Aman asks shall I see her. Doctor says go ahead but don't disturb her. Rudra sits in front of Paro and holds her hand in his. She didn't respond to his touch. He says Paro, they are fine, doesn't do this Paro, cry Paro, and your pain will be less, Paro. He holds her shoulder and makes her stand up and shakes her. She breaks down and cries hard. He hugs her and rubs her back. After few minutes, she cries in his arm and says they are trying to kill me but Sunheri and Mitra and cries. Rudra says shh shh Paro, it's ok, it's ok. Geethanjali came there and calls Parvati. Rudra breaks hug. Parvati runs to her and hugs her and cries. V.K is also come there and asks what's happening Rudra? He says I don't know sir, Aman is there with them, they are try to kill Parvati but Sunheri and Mitra are saved her from them. Inside the ward, Aman whose eyes are filled with tears and holds Mitra's hand and says sorry. She says thank you. He asks what? She says because of you, I'm spending some time with my family so thank you so much and don't feel guild about me because I'm perfectly fine. V.K opened the door of Sunheri's ward, where Sumer is kidding her by feeding a piece of apple. She smiles at them and says Bhabisa's Bhabusa. Geethanjali and Parvati are also joined with him and thanked her. She says I did this for Parvati Bhabisa, I love her lot so don't separate me from you all by thanking me. Geethanjali pats her cheek and says thank you. She asks can you feed me. Geethanjali smiles and says sure. Sunheri says Sumer baiyya is playing with me, I'm really hungry. Sumer gave plate to her and she feeds her. Parvati cries besides Geethanjali. Rudra saw this and angrily grits his teeth and went to next room where Mitra is there with Aman who leave her hand and stood up. Rudra come to her side and says thank you. She asks did you say this to Sunheri? He says no. She says I don't know what you're thinking about me, I did this for my Brother and my Bhabisa. He cares her head and says take care.

At hospital entrance, V.K asks did you want to go. Rudra says yes sir, but before that I need to assure the security of my soul witness, I took her under BSD custody. V.K asks what you mean Rudra?, She is my daughter. He says she is a witness too. V.K says I'll increase the security. He says no sir, I will do this. V.K asks how. He says Tejawat is planning to do something but it fails because of Sunheri and Mitra, so he will closely watches Parvati to implement his plan, so with BSD security Parvati must be stay with group of people around her like my home, service center. V.K says ok, Service center is the good place. He says soldiers should disguise like common people. V.K nods.

Precap: Geethanjali and Parvati stays in service center. Tuition class is shifted to Service center. Rudra's mission.

Dear reader and friend pls try to forgive my mistakes..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sumer tells his bapusa about Mohini trying to kill Dilsher. Danveer is hurt knowing about this. She even called Tejawat to attack Paro while shopping. But instead Sunehri got hurt.
Hope Rudra completes his mission successfully and return back to Paro.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update, cute & beautiful parud moments, liked it. Now danveer also know abt mohini, you sumer didn't tell this before? Hope Rudra finish his mission soon & come back. Why Rudra is not telling me Singh that he loves paro & want to protect her?
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Thank u for commen...
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Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the update👏


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