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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

OMG OMG OMG...this chapter was one suspense thriller...nail biting finish...I was literally sitting on d edge of my seat...u always manage to crack it ...perfect...and I also love the fact that this Suman is sucha strong woman who does nt always rely on her Mr Perfect to rescue her...self made and self preserved ...wow...she is a woman to follow...to have as an ideal...

self- made and self-preserved, well said.👍🏼
Describes out Sumo perfectly.

loved it...too good

rgds
Anuradha

Thanks a lot, Anuradha!
Lots of love.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lizzy1299

Wow!!

I m really happy that you made Sumo her own hero.A woman doesn't need a man to fight her battles.She is capable of doing it herself.
Finally Khurrana is gone.
Hope Sumo and the baby are fine.
Waiting for the next part


I'm so glad that you liked the fact.
True said, a woman doesn't need a man to fight her battles.
Let's see what happens next.
Will updt veryyy soon.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: imshveta

You know, the last few parts, you had mentioned Sumo's car quite a few times... And I had a feeling why is suddenly the car important? I mean, a whole scene was dedicated to the car. Then I thought may be you are just being your descriptive self.

I was preparing the car to die.😭

Now I know.

So actually it's the car that took the devil away with it.

Yup.

It was definitely a wonderful move showing Sumo fight for herself... It will surely help her keep the nightmares at bay, as compared to if the Lambu had come to save her.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.❤️

Awww I hope Sumo and both her babies are okay. Pasta was after the car. I am not sure if you mentioned it running after it.

Only the next chapter can tell.😉
Hint - only one death is enough for now. 😃

I am sooo glad that you have decided to give us one more part before the epilogue 🤗

I can't stop writing, yaar.
The next chapter is freaking +5,500 words! 😕
I'm a bitter sweet maniac.😲

Please don't keep us waiting.
I won't. Not for long.

Love
Shveta

Take care, love yaa,
Shveta.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Amazing

Thanks for pm Lara
Update soon


Thanks, dear!😃
Will updt soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago


Oh I have been reading your stories on wattpad. I am hooked to your writing darling. You are...simply amazing. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Amazing chapter

Sumo is like one man army... It true. Now khuranas chapter end. Sumo get hurt. How shravan find her...
Waiting for next update
Feeling bad this amazing story going towards end...


Yup! One man... more like - one woman army she is. 😃


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Wow. .amazing update.👏

And yes, happy that Sumo saved herself and got rid of the devil. No more nightmares now.
Shravan was there in spirit, her strength. Now he will find her and bring her home.
Happy Times.
If she was pregnant, hope this fall does not hurt the baby.

Love this story.
Thanks for the pm


yes, Shravan was there with her even if he was not.
Let's see what happens next.😉
Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariumharis

I read all 3 threads in two days..

I simply beautiful.
You're a wonderful written..
Update soon


Whoa! You read it all in two days!

I'm sooo glad to know you've enjoyed the story.
Thank you so much!
Lots of love! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago




Dedicating this chapter to - Sonai_02



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Chapter 52

Truly Madly Deeply





*Removed*


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'And when the stars are shining brightly in the velvet sky,
I'll make a wish send it to heaven then make you want to cry
The tears of joy for all the pleasure and the certainty.
That we're surrounded by the comfort and protection of
The highest power, in lonely hours, the tears devour you

I want to stand with you on a mountain,
I want to bathe with you in the sea.
I want to lay like this forever,
Until the sky falls down on me...'


- Savage Garden








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When I began writing this story, I never thought I would enjoy writing it so much. This, here, this must be love. You'll never know at which point you're going to fall irrevocably.❤️ (sighs)

How did you like Shravan going mental there? The guy TRULY loves her - MADLY and DEEPLY! (song reference)

This chapter kinda demanded multiple POVs and I went with the flow. However, did the switching of perspectives seem distracting?😕

Did you enjoy Pushkar's POV after sooo long?😃

And, no, I did not go for a predicatable miscarriage segmant. That would have been so Ekta-ish. Not all falls and rolls while pregnant mean "jindagi barbad hogiya". (imagine gutthi here.) However, complications may arise. But don't worry, believe in the power of Sumo girl! Yay!

And... this was the last chapter of Bitter Sweet Symphony. There'll be an epilogue, too, so let's not get emotional yet. ;) Take care till then.

Oh, another query: I'm planning to write some bonus chapters of BSS. We've many loose threads, right? So many scopes for so much more! Please let me know, which segments of ShraMan and also of other characters you would like to see.



Don't you want to know about Shraman's baby?

About... if Suman participates in the Masterchef?⭐️

How she pays back the debt and Shravan's reaction about it? Because bomb will surely explode here.

What about Vivek's future?

Meethis education?

Sakshi?

Sanzh and baby Rahul? Also, would baby Rahul become Shravan's potential future son-in-law?😉🥳 (now, that's something). Sanzh becoming sambdhan!😲

How about Nirmala's current status?

Ramnath Malhotra's potential love interest in the last years of his life? 😎

I'll be looking forward to hear from your guys! Please, Like and Comment! Tell me which part/dialogue/scene you liked the most.

Follow me on wattpad - Click Here.



Lots of love,
Lara.




P.S.1. PMs will be sent to people who've liked and commented on the last chapter.

P.S.2. Bonus chapters will be a sure thing but will not be regularly updated.

P.S.3. Can anyone please do me a favor and tell me which moderator of indiaforums is active now.
I've been trying to contact one, it's been a month now and I've yet to hear a single something. Who do you recommend as an active person / currently behind the wheels... in the authority here? 😆🤢 Because it's getting hilariously irritating!






















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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic update, just wow!
Shran tracking suman idea was the brilliant plan but what I didn't expected Pushkar action to stop maniac Shravan. T he scenes were wonderfully written. Gosh! Suman is now equal to breath in his life, so much importance.
I am so glad that they are alright.
This was an amazing chapter.
I want to read about every thing, every lose end.
Looking forward to read more.

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