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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Congrats for your new story..

Interesting concept...

Liked it...

Thanks for pm...

Thanks for update..

Continue soon..

Maan lost his father in an accident...

His fiancee's father broke his engagement...

His father had too many debts ... Which they cleared ...

Their company is in crisis ... N dev is working hard to bring it up again...

Maan joined adi in his event management to help dev n his family...

But why he didn't join his own company...

Geet's father wants them to sell off their company ..Why..

Maan is in danger ... What happened..


will reveal in a bit
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep002

Amazing update dear


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desigirls12

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6" color="#ff0000">Part 2</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6" color="#ff0000">Wow lovely update..so my
maan preparing for pari's wedding after facing so many insults..geet ki entry was
lovely making my maan to laugh
forgetting his worries..te way he helped pari's dad and he became his fan but
still tat stupid mahi..te way my maan ki intro with geet and he regerreting for
not asking her surname..is she mahi's daughter?..i love te update yar
</font>



Hmm yes..She is 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! i just thoroughly enjoyed the 1st meet of maaneet...Geet is feisty and maan seemed to be enjoying her antics ...She is like a breath of fresh air in maan's twisted life...Poor guy...he just ran away after facing the wrath of geet...and maan watched the whole drama and laughed his hearts out...interesting...

By the way , what is pari's full name? Are they handas?


No pari isn't handa...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Part 3

I had no idea why she hesitated to utter her sur name but I did with proud:MAAN SINGH KHURANA


Geet:aap neh sach mein,aap khi papa khi dream company koh bachane khey liye poori property chod dhi..

Maan:kyun,nahi karna chahiye..

Geet:nahi,aisa nahi..par

Maan:my dad was my pride,still is,if he is no more that doesn't mean his dream too had no more imp for us...

Geet:u r lucky to have a father like him...unlike others who value money more than anything...she uttered sadly

I smiled at her words,truly I am lucky to have him,we chatted for somemore tym and finally she asked the question which I guess she intended to ask me from the moment she came here..

Geet:u r not sad,seeing pari marrying some one..she was your fianc..

Maan:I don't believe in relations which change with tym and money ..so...

She smiled brightly and extended her hand asking FRIENDS, I shaked mine agreeing..not knowing how and where I will land myself into...

Pari wedding happened without much twists and I made quite a profit which helped dev to stabilize our company for few projects..still there is a long way to go to bring back the lost glory...which my dad had dreamed...expected us to achieve...

Even after the marriage geet and I met some tyms accidentally which we later turned into planned ones,she is bubbly,talkative,and with in few meetings I find myself attracted towards her,needless to say she too possess same feelings for me..i can see it in her eyes..the way she admire me gave away her feelings ,I introduced her with my family guess meera and geet feel like soul sisters and my mom was much impressed with her and dev often felt who was kid geet r prem ...well over all more r less my life was almost back to normal,and geet insisted me to meet her family next week...I am looking forward for it..guess its tym to get engaged officially.

Geet seems to b more nervous then me ,I confused seeing her continuously fidgeting with her dupatta end,she was behaving extremely odd comeon I am not any road side Romeo ,ok agreed I had my problems but they can b solved easily ,I ahd a job ... ... with god grace our company may run well in coming days ... With this points, I am pretty sure I can convince her parents with my theory,so I sat there confidently waiting for her parents to arrive,who seems to b taking forever to greet their guest...

THE SMILE ON MY FACE STILLED SEEING THE PERSON INFRONT OF ME..THIS HAD TO B A NIGHTMARE..

All my confidence was flushed through drain seeing MAHI as geet father,the person who asked his frnd(pari dad) to broke the alliance as we r in crisis,no way will agree to marry his daughter in the same family..i cursed my fate out of all people why after all why I had to fall for her...i looked at him to say something instead of he is more interesting in glaring at me...

Mahi:so what brings u here...did u here to sell your company shares...

Maan:was this man real... .keeping my thoughts to myself I replied:no sir,I am here for geet.

Mahi:what my daughter has to do with you..

This tym geet replied..while her mom came to serve us tea which I politely declined..

Geet:I love him,he is here to ask my hand from u..

Mahi:what will he do with yor hand and how will you agree to your hand to him...

If only looks could kill that is what I feel seeing geet and her mom both heated gaze on mahi

Rano:ladka accha hai..geet bhi pasand karthi hai..kyun naa

Even before she finished her line the tea cup kissed the floor breaking into pieces and next what I heared made me feel disgusted of mahi..

Mahi:geet seems like something broke ask your mom to clean it,and take care of kitchen,which was her only work in this house...

I know they both didn't talked from 17 yrs...but this was no way to insult your wife..in that instance I decided to take geet away from him,I can now clearly see why geet always in looking for reasons to meet my family because she craves for it..i decided to have a man to man talk with him.

Maan:I love your daughter geet sir,and she too,we want to marry with your blessings..

Mahi:what will I get,if YOU marry her!?

Maan:sorry.i didn't get...

Mahi:its simple business,u love my daughter marry her its your profit,but I loss my daughter to you,what is that I get in return ,by marrying her to YOU!?

Maan:can anyone stoop this low:bargaining own daughter marriage:so u need my company shares,if it is the only way...then ..

Mahi:no,it is not the only way ,well yes,it is one way...but there is another too..

Maan looked at him with amused eyes,where as mother daughter duo silently crying on their fate...

Mahi:well I have a land in hoshiyarpur which costs few crores but it was illegally taken over by brijeshwar singh...I tried all ways legally and illegally but he was more powerfull in all ways ,being a local don,defeating I talked to him he asked me if I could get him shares of well known contruction company for his siter than he can release my land ...so for land I had to give him shares ...either way my loss but instead of crores it may get few lakhs for any shares...

Maan:thtas why u r hell bent to get our shares..which only belong to my family..

Mahi:yes,but now I guess u can get my land on your terms with brij to marry my daughter..that too in aweek,if not forget about geet..

SO IN A WEEK I HAD TO EITHER CONVINCE BRIJ R TO FIGHT HIM TO HAVE MY GEET WITH ME
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks guys for the lovely response...
Updated next part..
Do ignore mistakes...
Love u all
Sanju
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Fantastic Chapter

Mahi has no feelings for his daughter making deals with Maan

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update so geet's father the same greedy person but still maan standing with geet he loves her so much now his condition how will he do it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm. Nice update. Mahi is a money sucker creature. He is so much money minded that he did not think once before doing a deal of geet in exchange of maan company shares. Geet n her mother are ashamed of his nature n attitude. He is a rude person who treat his wife as a servant. A person who cant respect his wife cant get peace n love in his life.
What will maan do now.
Waiting for next.

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