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Part-1

This os is based on the show after the episode where Kabir pretends to leave Nisha. Nisha is on the terrace with her cousins.

Saurav- Nisha, did you try calling him?

Ni- (while crying) I can't. He has left me. Why would he pick up my calls?

Sukku- (shocked) What are you?

Nisha looked at him confused.

Sukku- You didn't even call him! Are you mad? Are you seriously mad? Or was it your brain which had a board hanging saying I AM OUT OF ORDER'!

Dolly- Good one Sukku!

Sukku- (to Dolly) Thanks Di. (TO Nisha, angrily) Did you even think of why he left you? It was important for him Nisha. He had to go because he wanted to excel but what about you?

Nisha was about to interrupt but Sukku continued.

Su- Meri baat abhi khatm nahi hui. Tu usse rok nahi saki chal theek hai but you could have gone after him. (he held her by her shoulders with utmost care) Nisha, even if he doesn't love you, you do, don't you? (Nisha nodded) Then why don't you call him and let him know how you feel? Come on Nisha. Call him before it's too late.

All cousins- Haan...

After much insistence she called Kabir. Well, Kabir couldn't pick up her phone because he knew Nisha would come to him as soon as he tells her that he is still in jaipur and her love life with Viraj would get destroyed. She tried twice but he didn't pick up the call. Although by now he was worried if she was okay. She gave up. Just then Laxmi and Ramesh came on the terrace.

Ra- Itni jaldi haar maan gayi?

She looked at them.

Ni- Toh ab kya karoon papa. (crying) Agar woh mujhse pyaar karta toh kam se kam mera phone toh utha leta. But he is not even picking up my phone.

La- And that is enough to de-motivate you completely?! Where is the strong and stubborn Nisha who could fight the world for her family? Nisha, if you can fight the world why can't you fight yourself and this fear? Zyada se zyada kya hoga? He would reject your proposal, that's it. Itne waqt mein I came to know him enough and have realized that no matter what he won't leave you. To the least he will be your best friend.

Ra- Bacchon chalo! (everyone understood that Nisha needed to talk to Kabir alone) Neeche bhajiye tayyar hain aur haan Nisha, thodi der pakode tera intezaar kar lenge.

Mangaan ae hi duavaan main
Channa tu mainu mill jaa
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja (x2)

IN HOTEL

Kabir was all sad. He saw the call logs again. The caller id made him feel happy and sad on the same time.

Saamne baith ja takda jaaun
Akhiyon mein teri gum ho jaaun
Mujhe dhoondhe na phir koi..

He was happy because he had some value in her life. He was her best friend but was he her love?

Mangaan ae hi duavan main
Channa tu mainu mil ja
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja...

He feared rejection and that is why he couldn't tell her the truth.

ON THE TERRACE

Nisha looked at her phone. She knew she loved him and now she thought that even if he would reject her he wouldn't break their friendship. She picked up her phone and called him again. This time Kabir picked up the call out of fear because Nisha never called him so many times.

Ka- (fear filled voice) Hello?... Nisha?

Nisha heard his voice and all the tears she had held up came down. She started sobbing on the phone.

Ka- (scared) Nisha, you are scaring me. What's the matter? Please mujhe bata! Nisha! Should I come there? Do you need my help in any way? what's the matter Nisha, bata na please! Did Viraj do anything? Tell me Nisha!

Nisha just heard what he said. He was not in jaipur then how would he come to her. She felt something fishy.

Ni- (acting) Kabir, tu yahan aa kaise sakta hai? You are not in jaipur. I needed your help but... (sobbing acting)

Ka- (in concern) Nahi Nisha, I am in Jaipur. I will there within 15 minutes.

He hanged up the call. Nisha was beyond shocked.

AFTER 15 MINUTES

Kabir reached Gangwal house. He saw everyone sitting in the hall glaring at him. Everyone was there except for Nisha. He looked at Dadu who indicated in a direction. He looked in that direction. He saw Nisha standing there. He had tears in his eyes. He ran to her. He checked her if she is okay. Nisha was very angry with him.

Ka- (concerned) Nisha, tu theek toh hai na? you were sobbing on the phone. What's the matter?

Laxmi came to him and pulled his ears.

La- Woh kaise theek hogi? Ek toh tu usse chod gaya and then we came to know that you were here.

Laxmi left him and wiped her tears. Kabir understood that he did a big mistake and came here because he totally forgot that according to Nisha he was on his way to London. Idiot!

Ka- Maa...

La- Maa bolta hai aur fir aise hurt karta hai?

Kabir kneeled down in front of her while holding his ears, don't forget the puppy face.

La- Tu mujhe iss baar nahi payega.

He made a bigger puppy face. Laxmi couldn't control it and cried. He immediately hugged her.

Ka- I am sorry maa. I owe you a big apology. Please forgive me!

He broke the hug.

La- Tujhse koi zyada der gussa reh sakta hai kya? (cupped his face with one hand) Mera Bacha!

Sukku- Mom, this is cheating. Aapne kaha tha that you won't melt.

Ka- Maaf kardo saale sahab. Please!

Sukku- Nahi tu Nisha ke chodke chala ja, usko dher saara rula le aur phir bol that you are sorry.

Ka- Kitne?

Sukku- Sabke saamne, woh bhi minimum 30.

Kabir went in front of everyone who were still glaring at them except for Laxmi. He started doing sit ups while holding his ears and saying "I am sorry. I won't do it again. After 30 he looked at Sukku who looked at the cousins as if asking permission and then they all ran to him and hugged him. Nisha was shocked. This was not their plan. Their plan was to be angry with him and make him realize his mistake. Then Kabir went to dadaji.

Ka- Dadaji...

Dadaji- (interrupted) Main nahi jaanta ki tumne hamari Nisha ko kyun choda aur naahi ab main jaan na chahta hoon. Bas ab uska saath mat chodna.

Kabir promised to never leave Nisha again. He took blessings from dadaji and dadi and then from other elders. He went to Ramesh. Before he could say anything Ramesh just hugged him.

Ra- Meri beti ko chodkar mat jaana. She won't be able to bear it. Apne papa ki baat sunega na?

Kabir smiled and hugged him again. He then looked for Nisha but couldn't find her anywhere. He then saw her on the first floor watching everything from the corridor. What is he gonna say to her? She looked hurt, real hurt! Can he even apologize? He wouldn't give up in any way. he was about to leave when the cousins called him. He went to them.

Umesh- Kya tu Nisha se pyar karta hai?

Kabir looked at her again and then replied- Bahut zyada!

Kirti- Now we can implement our plan.

Kabir- (confused) Plan?

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Awesome os...
Nibir nok khol haaye
Part 1
Really feel sad for nisha... Poor girl 😔
Her family motivational trick and effort 👏
Bhuddhu kabir 😆😆
Log pair me kulhadi marte hai isne kulhadi me pair mar diya 😆😆
But the famous pout trick 😛 always work 😆
Part 2 was really cute
Kitne ache se manaya Nisha ko
Viraj ki entry 😵 kabhi bhi achi nhi lagi mujhe
Jo thapad Aman ne mara na vo Nisha Ko marna tha, show me bhi 😉
End me Tom and Jerry na aye toh kaise chalega 😆😆
Really loved it 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-2

Nisha was about to leave when the lights of the entire house turned off. She looked down and saw a spot light on Kabir who was looking at her. The music started.

Galti toh galti hai,
Galti ka kya,
Ab to ho gayi,

Par kyun hansi woh,
Tere chehre par se kho gayi?

Chamkili aankhon mein bolo,
Nami si kyon ho gayi?

He started dancing in hip hop style.

Maana maine galti kar di,
Kardo maaf ab,

He held his ears and made a cute puppy face.

Chaahe jaisa bhi,
Tere baare mein sochun har ghadi,
Tumko pata hai,
Bas do pal ki toh hai ye zindagi,

He started dancing again trying to express that he actually meant those words.

Ego ke aage kyun halki pade bolo dillagi?
Chahe jaisa bhi hun lekin dil to saaf hai,

He made a heart with his hands.

Hoo..

Is it too late now to say sorry?
Cause I'm missing more than just your body,

He made a Shahrukh Khan pose and did lipsing of the words.

Is it too late now to say sorry?
Yeah, I know-oh-oh,
That I let you down,
Is it too late to say I'm sorry now?

Now the lights came back and the cousins joined Kabir in dancing.

Oh saanu ik pal chain na aave,
Saanu ik pal chain na aave,
Sajna tere bina,
Sajna tere bina, (x2)

They danced in couple form while Kabir was standing in the centre actually telling her how much he missed her.

Message padhe hain,
Tune lekin koi jawaab nahi,

He took out his phone and made a confused look.

Insta pe photo,
Jo daali hai lagti ho khush badi,
Aisa behave na karo,
Jaisa hua kuch nahi,
Chup na baitho,
Aise baby,
Kuch to bolo?

Sukku took out his phone and took a photo of Kirti made a smiling face. Nisha was about to leave when Kabir went upstairs and actioned her to speak.

Is it too late now to say sorry?
Cause I'm missing more than just your body,

Is it too late now to say sorry?
Yeah, I know-oh-oh,
That I let you down,
Is it too late to say I'm sorry now?

He didn't dance this time but just lipsed those words expressing his regret of what he did.

I'm not just trying to get you back on me,
Oh no no..
Cause I'm,
Missing more than just your body,

He was still apologizing by speaking the words. He moved around her while Nisha just ignored.

Is it too late now to say sorry?
Yeah, I know-oh-oh,
That I let you down,
Is it too late to say I'm sorry now?

Kabir stopped and now the cousins tried convincing her by dancing.

Oh saanu ik pal chain na aave
Saanu ik pal chain na aave
Sajna tere bina,
Sajna tere bina,

Nisha was leaving for her room while Kabir knew that he couldn't do anything now. He was standing there and just lipsing the song.

Oh no no..

Oh saanu ik pal chain na aave
Saanu ik pal chain na aave
Sajna tere bina,
Sajna tere bina,

Sajna tere bina, (x2)

Nisha turned and saw Kabir standing there with tears in his eyes. He was really guilty for what he did and what he said. He just wanted Nisha to be happy but he never thought that Nisha would actually be upset with his decision. Well Nisha was at fault as well. She never told him anything about her feelings, not even through her gestures. But now she knew she has to.

Oh no no..

Sajna tere bina, (x6)

She ran to him and hugged him. Kabir somehow managed to stand straight. As soon he realized what just happened he hugged her back. They broke the hug as they heard sounds of applause.

Ka- I am sorry Nisha. I shouldn't have...

Ni- Yes, you shouldn't have...(he looked guilty) But now that you have, I can't say anything. I can just forgive you.

Kabir was really happy to see that Nisha had forgiven him.

Kabir was about to leave when Nisha called him.

Ni- Bas? Hogaya?

Ka- Haan!

Ni- (face palmed) I can't help you in any way. You are a big FATTU! Accept it and move on.

Kabir was confused. Nisha left and went downstairs while the cousins were giving an ARE YOU MAD?' look to Kabir.

Cousins- (together) Ab bol bhi do!

Everyone laughed except for Kabir who wanted to smack each one of them. He went down to her.

Ka- Nisha main woh... actually I wanna say Nisha that...

Kabir didn't know how to speak it. Come on yaar! He didn't even practice like Nisha did.

Ka- Nisha, I have to speak it now. The thing is that... I... am sorry.

Everyone face palmed and this time it includes Nisha also while Kabir just made a puppy face for he didn't know how to do it.

Ni- Tu Nisha Nisha karta reh main jaa rahi hoon.

She was about to leave when Kabir held her hand.

Ka- Vo Dard hi kya jon aankhon se bayan ho jaaye,

Vo Khushi hi kya kjo hothon par reh jaaye,

Kabhi toh samjho meri khaamoshi ko,

Vo baat hi kya jo Lafz aasaani se keh jaaye.

Nisha turned him and there she saw the enchanting smile.

Ka- Nisha, do you really want me to say that? (Nisha nodded) Okay then. Ms. Nisha Gangwal, I really really love you. I am deeply, madly, truly, foolishly and completely in love with you.

Nisha smiled with tears in her eyes. Kabir cupped her face out of concern.

Ka- Kya hua Nisha? (cupped her face) Did I hurt you?

Ni- Nahi! Yeh khushi ke aansoon hain.

Ka- But I don't like it. I can't see you crying. This is cheating. Main acha karoon toh ronoa mai bura karoon toh rona, I can't handle it.

He looked the other side faking anger. Nisha turned him after wiping his tears.

Ni- Main nahi ro rahi. (he looked at her) And I love you,, my idiot, duffer, gadha FATTU.

Kabir's happiness knew no bounds. Well if family would not have been there he would have started right then but for now he had to manage with a hug, a tight one though. Itna toh banta hai!

Everyone applauded.

Ni- Vaise tu mujhe chodke gaya kyun tha?

Viraj- Hum batate hain Ms Nisha.

Everyone looked at the door to find Viraj. He took everyone's blessings though none of them liked him there.

Vi- Ms. Nisha, Kabir came to know that you love me, at least this was what we thought (indicating him and Kabir). We had a deal that Kabir would leave and I would marry you. (everyone was shocked. Nisha glared Kabir.)

Ka- (monologue) Arre ab chale bhi jao bade bhaiya. Mere antim sanskaar ke baad hi jaoge kya?

Vi- But little did we know that you actually loved Kabir. I though Kabir left so I came to propose you today but when I came I saw your confession and realized that all this time when you were saying that you don't love me, you actually meant that and it was not out of anger. So now I can just apologize. I am sorry.

Ni- (angrily) You are not forgiven Mr. Rathore. (she went and stood in front of him) I told you like a hundred times that I don't want you in my life. I am happy with Kabir. This is something I told you long back but you are too intelligent to understand it, aren't you? (Viraj was about to speak but Nisha interrupted) Meri baat khatm nahi hui hai. Are you seriously deaf or was it your brain which had a board hanging on it saying I AM OUT OF ORDER'!

Sukku- (mumbled) Cheater! Khud ki bana leti! Mere naye innovation ko abhi hi use kar liya.

Ni- (angrily) Right now I can just say that please leave and stop interfering in my life. I am happy and even if I am not I will be but I don't need you. You have done enough for me. Please don't do anything for me anymore. Please!

Viraj understood that he has hurt Nisha enough and it was high time he leaves her and his family alone. He looked at Nisha.

Vi- Ms. Nisha I am...

Just then they heard a thud sound. It was Aman who came in front and slapped Viraj.

Aman- Main aapko apna bhai maanti thi because you did great things for me but you did too much for Nisha as well. She is family for me and I can't bear anyone hurting my family. (emphasizing) ANYONE! Now please leave.

She had tears in her eyes but she stayed strong. Viraj left. Umesh came in front and supported Aman who started crying. Laxmi and Umesh took Aman inside not before Nisha thanked him through gestures. Then Nisha gave a deathly glare to Kabir.

Ka- (scared) Dekh Nisha, main tera gadha, idiot, duffer fattu hoon na. chod de mujhe! Please! I am sorry.

Ni- (shouted) Kabir!

And then started the famous Tom & Jerry chase rather a bhooki sherni running after a rabbit chase. We don't know how is this gonna end but we can just pray for the well being of Kabir. May he rest in peace!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os ... It was a different and funny twist to the original one we saw on the show ...
Kash show me bhi kuch ayesa hota instead of confession on the last few minutes of the last episode ..😆

The thing that make your stories unique is the songs you use with the situations ... Loved it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome os ... It was a different and funny twist to the original one we saw on the show ...

Kash show me bhi kuch ayesa hota instead of confession on the last few minutes of the last episode ..😆

The thing that make your stories unique is the songs you use with the situations ... Loved it 😊


Thanks a lot Poornima. Glad you liked it.
@bold Mujhe bhi last few minutes wala confession aisa laga that the writers were burdened to show it. That is why i wrote a thing like this.

@blue Thanks a lot mate. To tell you the truth it is like i listen to a new song and then write an os for it. it is never that i write something and then think for a song in between. 😆 Ulta Dimaag😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fantabulous os...👏
and the song selection was superb..
felt bad for viraj...
nibir was...😳😳😳
thnkyouuu a lot and more for this os...😛😊😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fantabulous os...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
and the song selection was superb..
felt bad for viraj...
nibir was...😳😳😳
thnkyouuu a lot and more for this os...😛😊😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Nice os😊
NAUC ki yaad agayi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res abi k liye😉
Have read it 😃 yaar refreshed the long lost memories of NAUC
I am a little busy these days so would unres soon😊

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