FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: arena99
Hi maithu
I just love all your sukor story
Just amazing
Cay,coc and wattpad story
I would like to thanks all sukor story writers for
Your tremendous writing
Thankyou everyone maithu and others also for such a wonderful and elegant story
I am silent reader all of yours story
Thanks all of you for just enlighten the story of sukor thanks everyone😊

Thanks a lot dear!

It's an immense pleasure to know that you like all of my stories!

Doing Happy Dance in the morning after seeing your comment!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: arena99
Sry for the double post

No pbm!😊

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arena99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Hi maithu

Just now I read ur one short story keep it simple as sweet

Just love it ,beautiful, spectacular

Thankyou ur a phenomenal writer,just amazed with ur writing

I comment here as I am not in wattpad I wish we can really watch this type story with vj and meera

You just give the life to the story

Thankyou so much

Pls update here also that story if you want😊😊😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Hello dears!
As said in my previous message, from now on I will post 1 to 3 parts per week depending on the time I have!And they will be between 1000 to 2000 words only, so sometimes short, sometimes medium longer compared to my other works.I'm doing this in order to complete this FF.Hope you all understand!
Link to previous part: Part 9 : Siblings
This chapter is a short one!Happy reading!
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Part 10 : Father-Son Duo

ACHOUM
"Not again!" his inner voice started as he came back to the reality where the dishes are set on the side table in kitchen and Chakor holding a tissue paper in her hand."Bless you!" he said when his inner voice said "Bless me too! Bless me too! To have some brain and stop this unnecessary imagination."
He felt those sensation, feelings, and reactions to be so real that he couldn't figure out what is the actual reason for his visuals. Or is it just imaginations?
ACHOUMHelping with the tissue paper she was holding, she thanked him and called him to set the table.
They started to have the dinner in the silence of the small discussion they were having on the university's future activities and their siblings' life while one brain was cooking questions about the wildest of imagination he was having, whereas the other human being was thinking about the future of her bond with her sister and her sister bond with her future family.
Thanking her for the dinner, he went back to where he belongs repeating the phrase "She is my friend and nothing else!" for millionth time.
- Who thinks about friends like that?~ Our boss!- Friendship is pure!~ Love is eternal!- Don't blame me when you get hurt!~ Trying to get to see what the real feeling is, will not hurt; it will help to move on.- It's your choice!~ My choice is to ask her for a date and see if the feelings are stronger.- Date! From when in these idiotic ideas started to come from you!~ From the moment you started to work out your mind a lot!- I warn you to not do anything silly and then feel miserable!~ Suraj Rajvanshi never feels miserable!- It will be the case when you ask her for date and she refuses which will make you knock your head on the brick!~ You are exaggerating things!- Who says that!~ Think positive!~ I'm just saying the possibilities! You may even ruin your brother's life, pulling him to suici
"Nooo" he screamed and sat on his bed!It has been 4 days since they had dinner and he met her mostly every day.They greet each other and do friendly talks out of university but his mind was questioning him about his thinking.And the battle between his mind and heart is going on since that day!
"Bro! What happened?" Vivaan asked from outside his room as the door is locked!"Nothing" he checked the time to find it to be 2:48 "Go and sleep you have exams!"
Once he was sure his brother was in his room, he laid back in his bed after having water and closed his eyes "I need to put my mind in some other work and it will drift away from her thoughts."
He was happy that he was no more frustrated with his mother's death since the day he shared it with her but this new thoughts is troubling him when he want to consider her as friend and family relative in future.
As decided, he started to take upon his father's other business too, to occupy his mind with works.
Weekend arrived and Vivaan made his way to his lover's place while Suraj went to see his father who is in his study room of their mansion.
"How is your works going on?" once they settled with tea on different couches, facing each other."Good Papa!""Was there nothing to do in the university that you took the textile business under you?""It's just I wanted to see if I can tackle between 2 elements!" LIE his mind screamed."I know you can do more than what you think you are capable of!" his father said.
He just smiled."Do you know why I called you here Son?""That's why I'm here to know.""Let's not talk like businessman." his son nodded "Come here!" patting the place besides him.Suraj changed his place and waited for his father to start the important talk.
"What do you think about marriage?" KN asked putting his arm around his son's shoulder."Whose marriage?" is he becoming alerted or just asking the question by curiosity."Yours!""Ne never thought about it! And I don't think to be interested in it." his heart yelled 'What are you planning to do with Chakor?'"Do you remember Mr. Raichand? Our steel business partner!""Hmmm""His daughter Tina is coming back from US after completing her studies! She is the one who is going to take her father's business from next year.""Papa! Please come to the point directly." knowing very well where this is going on."We want to change our business relationship in to family.""Sorry Papa! I'm not interested!""But""Please listen Dad!" when he calls Dad, it means serious business "I don't want to marry" 'Right decision!' his inner voice."Can I know the reason?""You and Vivaan are my only family. I have seen my friends to get out of their family after marriage"
"All family is not the same." his father interrupted."I don't want to be one among them Dad! I prefer to be with you all.""You brother will be married and he will be with his family. I don't know when I will be called by""No Dad!""I can't buy the reason you are saying Son!""My way of telling might be not clear but I know what I'm doing and I think it's better for me and for us." 'What about Chakor?' his heart 'Shut the hell up!' his mind.
"If I get you and Vivaan married on the same day with 2 sisters from same family!" KN exclaimed after few seconds of thinking.
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Thanks for reading!As I said, it's short but I will update this regularly.Like 1 to 3 parts a week, whenever I get time!I know it was a filler chapter but a needed one.If you liked! Hit the LIKE button and COMMENT.

Next part: Part 11 : Marriage Talks

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

It s nice update sis..

Suraj started to feel for chakor..

Atlast it was suraj's imagination as i thought..

Loved it..

Wat will suraj say to kn about marrying sisters..

Waiting for next update..sis

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

It was amazing maithu di I loved it very much I liked the battle between suraj and his mind .waiting for next part eagerly...

Waiting to see suraj reaction.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It s nice update sis..
Suraj started to feel for chakor..
Atlast it was suraj's imagination as i thought..
Loved it..
Wat will suraj say to kn about marrying sisters..
Waiting for next update..sis

Thanks dear!

Glad you liked it!

What do you want him to say to KN?

If he talks about Chakor, do you think Chakor will be ok with this?

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: pershial
It was amazing maithu di I loved it very much I liked the battle between suraj and his mind .waiting for next part eagerly...
Waiting to see suraj reaction.

Thanks dear!

Happy that you liked the small battle.

Will try to update the next part soon.