AvNeil TS- I'll Fight Death for your Trust (Part 2-Page 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

This is on public demand😳 and also for those who want AmNi to be like any other siblings😊


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Part 2- You are my everything

She knew her husband! He would come back! No matter how difficult it was, he would be back. Aman peeped in the messy room to see her sister sit on the bed with a photo frame. He had got it framed for her on her birthday.

It was Neil' and Avni's candid picture during the small party Avni had thrown after Neil had successfully solved a high-profile case. Neil was laughing at Avni who was making faces at him. Happy times!

"Di?" She came out of the reverie and looked at him.

"He'll be fine," He said as he sat on the bed.

"I know Aman, he'll come back." Toh kyun khud ko taqleef de rahe ho?" He arched his eyebrows.

"Maa, Shweta aunty, Prakash uncle, Bebe, sab aapke liye kitne pareshaan hai. Aapne subah se kuch nahi khaaya, aise kaise chalega?"

Avni's tears brimmed with tears.

He hugged her protectively. Who said elder sisters are the ones who can be the strongest? Even baby brothers can be.

He patted her head. Both didn't speak a word. For Avni, her husband's return was the most important thing right now and for Aman, his sister's health.

"Aman, woh thikh hoga naa?" She mumbled in his chest.

"Haan Di, woh Neil hai. Agar mujh jaise ko sudhar kar sakte hai, aapko heal kar sakte hai, toh woh kuch bhi kar sakte hai. You just need to be a little patient."

"Patience hi toh nahi hai Aman, har waqt darr laga rehta hai." She broke the hug and looked at him.

"Pehle yeh moti pouch lo," he said and wiped her tears which again reminded of Neil.

"Dekho Di, aap jaante ho naa, agar Neil ki koi weakness hai, toh woh aap ho, phir aap kaise weak pad sakte ho?"

"Bahut badi-badi baatien karte ho?" She smiled between her tears.

"Aap please kuch khaa lo, mera champ ko bhuka mat rakho." She nodded.

Neela, who had entered with a plate of food for Avni, smiled as she watched her children. She thanked and prayed the man who was busy fighting the country's enemy.

~~~~~~~

He looked at the terrorist as he fell to the ground. Slowly, his vision went blurry. He looked at the bullet in his arm. The wound as untreated for last half hour. He saw the constable give a thumbs up, which meant that the field was clear.

He thought of his love. He had promised to go back to her, but now he would probably go away from her. He didn't mind dying for his country.

~~~~~

The sharp light forced him to flutter his eyelashes. Slowly he adjusted his vision. He looked at his wife who was staring at him.

"Neil?" He name sounded magic when she said it.

"Tum... thikh" he stammered.

She nodded as tears trickled her eyes. She held his right hand.

"I am so proud of you." She kissed his palm. He smiled.

"Ouch!" She screamed. He looked at her in confusion.

"Your baby kicked. Even our baby is proud of you Neil." She smiled between her tears.

"I missed you." She said.

"Avvv...nni" He couldn't muster up enough strength to speak due to the sedatives.

She just smiled. Seeing him in front of her was heaven. She ignored his injuries, they would soon be fine. He just wanted to stare at him.

"Tum rest karo." She said and stood up. He held her and shook his head. She sat and caressed his face.

"Main yahin Hoon." She tried to reason with him, softly.

He nodded. He didn't want her to go away. The fear of losing her was haunting him.

She understood this and sat there. The nurse came and injected him with a sedative so that he could fall asleep.

She watched as his eyelashes dropped slowly. She kissed him on his forehead.

As he slept, she stared at this miracle. He loved her so much that he feared to lose her even when he as the one in pain.

He was her miracle and she would love him and their child till her last breath.

Edited by __shibani__ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Aman Avni bond is so lovely
I want to watch this in show also
Neil was back
Lovely update dear
Keep treating us with lovely peices by you

Lots of Love
Zainab
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Wow..
This part is also amazing..
Loved it totally..
Please do continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Beautiful.like aman talking some sense
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Omg that was amazing Shibz
I really love AmNi bond. That was so sweet.
Pata nahi Aman kab sudhrega real main 😒😆
Neil is back.
Awww. I am in love with AvNeil.
Shibz that was an amazing TS.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
OMG shibz... such a nice update.. was waiting for it... oh my goodness. .. loved AmNi...
Amazing ts... it deserves 👏🤗... I wish cvs tumse yeh idea le aur aisa kuch add kare in the show...😳
Write more soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
wow AmNi❤️i loved his lines agar muj jaise ko sudhar sakte..👏
cute update yar..
he had the fear of losing me even when he was d one in pain💔
loved it🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Amazing ...Loved AmNi bond..hope to see them like onscreen...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Neil is fine that's what matters???
Superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
That was damn awesome...
Thank God he is ok...
Loved it...
Amni are really adorable..
Proud of soldiers like Neil...

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