ARIYA SS - JAANA PEHCHANA EHSAAS (part-4;pg-20; 22/3 UPDATED) - Page 4

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JAANA PEHCHANA EHSAAS
part:1

arjun:sam ye sapna kyu mujhe baar baar aata hai aur wo ladki kaun hai wo ladki jo mujhse itna pyar karti hai ye sapna hai ya hakikat kyu mujhe us ladki kesapne se itna sukoon milta hai uske kareeb ek
JAANA PEHCHANA EHSAAS... hota hai kaun hai wo kya my use kabhi mila tha ya fir aage miloonga kuch samaj nahi aaraha hai
sam: excitedly kya tune uska chehra dekha kaun hai wo
arjun: wahi tho nahi dikhpata har bar wo mere sapne me aati hi par chehra dundla sa nazar aata hi jab bhi my use gaurse (concentratedly) dekhna chahtha hu tho achanak se mere sar me dard shuru hojata hi (holding his head in his hands) aisa lagta hi kisi ne mere sir pe koi bhari cheez rakh di ho (he yell in pain) aah.. aah.. mera sar
sam: worriedly bas bas aur zor mat laga jab tujhe uska chehra dikhnahoga dikh jaayega tu ab zyada sonch mat aur ye(giving him medicine) le ye tablet dalle sar me dard kam hoga aur thodi der relax kar office ke liye aur time hi
arjun: take the medcine and lye on the bed and close his eyes
sam: tum aram kar my breakfast ready karke lata hu
arjun goes in to slumber due to medicine effect
sam(pov) pata nahi mere dost ki ye halath kab sudhregi ye sab sirf uski galti ki wajah se hi aaj mere dost ki halat aisi hui hai pata nahi usko sab kab yaad ayega my use arjun se kabhi milne nahi dunga kabhi nahi door rakhunga use my apne dost se
he come out of the thoughts by a phone call
he receives the phone call
sam: jai hind sir
os:""...
sam: jee sir aur kab
os""...
sam:ok siir jai hind
call gets disconnected

he goes to kitchen and prepare breakfast for both and go to arjun room to wake him up
he goes to his room and call him for breakfast

sam: arjun kaha hai chal breakfast ready hi

arjun: ha chal my bhi ready hu

both go to dining hall and take their breakfasts and leave for office

IN EFT

In CH all are present their and doing chit chat

Sakshi: yaar my itni khubsurat hu phir bhi wo arjun hai ki kuch samajta hi nahi humesha sabse hasta bolta hai par jab my flirt karti hu wo tho chup ho jata hi koi jawab hi nahi deta

Ayesha: wo to aisa hi hai yaar tu kyu nahi samaj rahi ki unhe tujme interest nahi hi
Sakshi: mere jitni khubsurat ladki me use interest nahi hi tho phir tho use kisi ladki me bhi interest nahi hoga

Ayesha: aisa kaisa keh sakti tu koi tho hogi jisme unhee unka humsafar milega

Sree(pov) ha ek hai nahi thi ab my use kabhi bhi unse nahi milne dunga aur nahi unki zindagi ka hissa banne dunga

Sakshi: koi nahi hogi pata nahi use kaise characters chahiye ek ladki me aur kya wo ladki is duniya me bani hogi

Some other place

One girl with dimple smile wakeup and open her arms to feel fresh air coming from outside her face is glowing in the sun shine she see the watch and rush to the washroom and come out in some time and get ready and go to her destination

IN ETF

Liza: ek ladki hi jise dekhte hi arjun sir apna dil har baitenge

Ayesha: kaun hi wo aur tujhe itna confidence kaisa hi

All are looking at her in excitement

Liza: mujhe pura yakeen hai agar ek baar arjun sir use dekhenge na dekhte reh jaayenge wo bahoth khubsurat hai sirf surat se hi nahi balki seerat se bhi meri clg frnd hi wo . wo itni achi hi sirf students hi nahi balki sare teachers ki fav thi wo

Saksh: acha naam kya hi uska

Liza: naam ha naam hi yaad nahi aaraha hi

Chotu: tune kaha ki frnd hu phir uska naam bhi yaad nahi hi

Liza: wo kya hi ek baar kuch seniors meri ragging kar rahe tho usne mujhe bachaya tha aur hum frnds ban gaye par wo kya hi ki bas hum kabhi kabhi milte the

Ayesha: naam tho yaad hona chahiye na

Liza: ha yaar bas yaad nahi aa raha hai kuch tho naam tha uska R se shuru hota hi uska naam

Sakshi: roshni

Liza:nahi

Ayesha: reva

Liza: nahi

Chotu: reena

Liza: nahi

Sree: tho kya hai yaar sab ne tho bata diya apna apna naam aur kya hai uska naam

Arjun: RIYA

(when liza started to about the girl samjun arrived and listned every thing and when they start to say about name on R his toungue automatically slps the name of riya)

Liza: exactly yahi hi uska naam RIYA ... RIYA MUKHERJEE

Sam in anger: kya kar rahe ho tum log arjun ke liye rishta doond rahe ho ek kaam karo tum log ETF ko resignation deke ek marriage beuro khollo

Arjun: relax yaar ye tho bas (cut him in mid by sam)

Sam: ye sab tumhari hi laparwahi hai arjun jo tum apne second in command ki zimmedari nibhate tho ye log aaj aise nahi hote and go to his cabin

All(except sree) sorry sir hamari wajah se koi nahi guys let it be ye hamara chief na thoda khadoos hai (all giggle) my jaata hu use manane tab tak aur koi kand mat karna ok( all nod their heads) aur ha liza waisa RIYA naam bada pyara hai aisa lagta hai jaise koi jaana pehchana rishtha hai is naam se mera

Liza: par ye naam aapko kaise pata

Arjun: pata nahi par jo features tumne bataye wo sunte hi mere muh se ye naam apne aap nikal gaya aisa laga jaise uska riya ke alawa koi aur naam ho hi nahi saktha and he go to sams cabin

All sigh in relief unaware of one more storm is on the way

Liza: thank god bach gaye

Chotu:ha yaar

Sree(in anger): lizaa agli baar tum riya ka naam arjun sir se kabhi nahi jodegi samjhi tum warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

All are in shock to see happening sree in this avtar

Sakshi: kyu sree aisa kya kiya liza ne jo tum itne gusse me ho aur riya ka naam mat lena matlab tum jaante ho use

Liza: oh haa my tho bhul hi gayi thi tum tho riya ke best frnd ho na

Sree: ha isliye keh raha hu uska naam arjun sir se kabhi mat jodna

Ayesha: kyu sree kya kharabi hi arjun sir me

Sakshi: ha aur tum aisa kyu react kar rahe ho

Chotu: haa bata na wo itne handsome hai achi job hai aur koi affair bhi nahi aur na koi girlfriend

Sree: wo tum sab ke liye ache honge par meri ri ke liye wo kabhi fit nahi honge samjhe tum log and he go to his cabin

Sree(pov) aaj unke muh se naam nikla hai kahi unhe sab yaad aagaya tho wo phirse ri ke piche padenge aur isse us par bahot bura asar padega abhi abhi tho wo thk ho rahi hai phirse uske samne ye chalegaye tho us par bahot bura impact padega aur my aisa nahi hone doonga kabhi nahi


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Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Different update kahiin aisa to nahi ariya ka past that sure Kisi incident ki wajah se unki yadasht chali gai ho poor guessing na😉 eagerly waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
N nice cs
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting chapter
Arjun having dreams abt girl but couldn't see her face
But Sameer doesn't Arjun to be with the girl as he blame her for Arjun current state
Poor Arjun lost his memories
Same goes with shree he also doesn't like ariya name together
Liza know riya as they were in same college & riya saved her from ragging
Shree think if Arjun will enter in riya's life again he will destroy riya's life
But must say Arjun without memory still remember riya's name
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesomee updateee
but past mai esa hua kya he
jo sam n ri dono ko
dur rakha rahe hai..
hmmm intresting dear..
waiting for next..
continue soon.

thanks for pm dear...
updateee..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome amez super update
Loveit
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome one
Nice CS and starting
Thanks for the PM and please continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Full of confusion
But still very intresting
Sam Aur shree ke bachhe ko Toh mein chodungi nahi
Ghade kahinke...
Bade aaye mere ariya ko alag Karene waaale
Bewakoofon kismet ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti
Aur hum ariya fans ke aage unne door karne wale kabhi tikte nahi hai
Abb sys...
Cont soon
Thanx for pm dear

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