ARIYA SS - JAANA PEHCHANA EHSAAS (part-4;pg-20; 22/3 UPDATED) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
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Shayad, arjun or riya, dono ki memory loss ho chuki he
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why both friends wanna keep ariya away from each other???
Kya riya also doesn't remember arjun???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear loved it
Samsree want to keep ariya away but they dont know destiny unhe milane ka pura intezaam kar rakhi hai tabhi to riya ka naam arjun ke muh se nikla aur riya bhi jald hi ETF join karegi
Lagta hai samsree dont know about her arrival other wise they would have stopped hai aur shayad ariya ki yadash chali gayi hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
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JAANA PEHCHANA EHSAAS
part:2
Sree(pov) aaj unke muh se naam nikla hai kahi unhe sab yaad aagaya tho wo phirse ri ke piche padenge aur isse us par bahot bura asar padega abhi abhi tho wo thk ho rahi hai phirse uske samne ye chalegaye tho us par bahot bura impact padega aur my aisa nahi hone doonga kabhi nahi... manta hu ke wo mere bade bhai jaise the the nahi abhi hai par my apni riyu par koi risk aane nahi doonga

In sam cabin

Sam (pov) roz tho use sapne me dikhti thi kya ye kam tha ke aaj uska naam bhi yaad aagaya kal ko wo bhi yaad aagayi tho... Tho kya sam use tho tu apni behen manta tha na phir kya hua bhul gaya ki wo tere kalai par rakhi baanthi thi aur tu uski raksha karne ka vachan deta tha aur saare gamo ko door rakhna chahtha tha aura b khud uski saari khushiya cheen raha hai wo teri candy hai sam tho phir ab kya hua dost ke pyaar me tu apne bhai hone ka farz bhul gaya ... Nahi kuch nahi bhula my mujhe sab yaad hai par kya karu dono jab saath hote tho sab kuch bhul jaate hai yaha tak ki wo dono apni jaan ki baazi tak laga dete hai ek doosre ke liye aur mujhe yahi dar lagta hai ki unke is pyaar me kahi my kisi ek ko na khodoo isiliye my unhe door rakhna chahta hu ... janta hu agar wo dur rhenge to khush nahi rahenge par zinda to rahenge na aur mujhe pata hai unka pyaar ka junoon ek na ek din undono ko paas layega par tab tak tho my undono ko dur rakhne ki puri koshish karoonga (his trance was broke by arjun)

Arjun: kya hua sam tu itna kyu chillaraha tha yaar wo tho bas mere liye sonch rahe hai

Sam: ab tu unki tarafdari karne aagaya isilye wo itne bigad gaye hai koi second in command tere jaisa hota hai kya hamesha masti Mazak karte rehta hai jaise ki ye ETF nahi balki koi clg ka canteen ho

Arjun: are yaar sam tu bhi na hume hamare har pal ko khul ke jeena chahiye kise pata pata kal ho na ho

Sam immediately keeps his hand on his mouth and scolds him

Sam: aisi baate mat kiya kar agar phirse kaha tho dekhlena tu nahi jaanta peechli baar mujpe kya beeti thi meri tho jaan hi nikal gayi thi tujhe khone ke dares

Arjun: ok baba nahi kahoonga tu itni senti baate mat kar mujhe rona aajayega aur mere ye dost mujhe rota dekhlenge tho meri image hi bigad jaayegi

Sam (smiles little) : tu bhi na juno tujhe har baar pata hota hai ki mera mood kaise change karna hai

Arjun: pata kaise nahi hoga akhir bhai cum dost hai tu mera and hug him

Sam too hugs him

Some other place

The girl reaches her destination and search for someone but can't find him she waits for some time but no one comes she get frustrated and call some one

Girl: sree kaha hai tera ye dost kaha hai kab se wait kar rahi hu aur wo hai ki aaya hi nahi my jaa rahi hu aagar ab use mujse milna hai tho wo khud aayega mere paas my jaa rahi hu ab tu bolega bhi ya nahi

Sree: are meri Chennai express tu mujhe kuch kehne degi tab my kahoonga na aur ha myne usse baat karli hai wo kuch important kaam me phas gaya hai bus 5 minute me aayega tu wait kar waha pe

Girl: mujhse aur wait nahi hota
Sree: thk hai ri teri marzi agar tujhe teri job nahi karni tho tu jaa

Riya make a pout: thk hai wait kar rahi hu ab tu mujhe black mail mat kar
Sree: ab tu hai hi aisi ki bina black mail ke baat sunti hi nahi

Riya: agar ye meri dream job ka sawal na hota tho my teri baat kabhi nahi sunthi samjha aur ha tujhe ek good news deni thi

Sree: kya hai wo

Riya: mujhe mera appointment letter mil gaya hai kal se hi posting hai

Sree: wow it's a great news kaha mili hai tujhe posting

Riya: wo surprise hai

Sree: surprise thk hai kal hi dekhte hai ok bye warna mere boses mujhpe barsenge

Riya: kaun wo Sameer sir haina aur doosra kaun hai

Sree: ha wahi aur ek hai bahot friendly hai par kaam ke waqt bahot khadoos bante hai

Riya: acha khadoos aur friendly rare combination hai unset ho milna padega

Sree: kyu milna hai tujhe unse aur ha waise bhi tu unse dur hi reh bahoth gusse wale hai

Riya: thk hai baba ab bye wo aagaya

Sree: ok bye (kya karu ri tujhe my chah kar bhi unse nahi milva sakta)

Riya(pov) unse tho my milkar hi rahoongi sree dekhlena

Guy: hey ri kaisi ho kab aayi bahoth der tho nahi wait karvaya na

Riya: hai aman bahoth nahi bahoth zyada wait karwaya agar kisi aur roz aisa karte tho tumhare haddiya thod deti par aaj nahi

Aman: aisa kaunsi baat hai aaj ke tu ne mujhe baksh diya

Riya: aaj my bahoth khush hu kyu ki mera sapna poora ho raha hai

Aman: acha tho ye baat kaha lagi hai tumhari posting

Riya: wo tho surprise hai my kal raat ko dinner par bataungi

Aman: ok baba ab hum tumhara check up karle jis ke liye tum yaha aayi ho

Riya: ha ha isiliye tho itna intezar kiya agar tumhara approval nahi mila tho sree mujhe kal jaane nahi dega

Aman: acha and he does her checkup while doing some chit chat and after that he says

Aman: ri tut ho kaafi thk hai par haa apna dhyan rakhna aur bahar ki koi chhez mat khana

Riya: thk hai par pizza tho kha sakti hu na

Aman: no way ri warna tu kal kahi nahi jaayegi

Riya making pout: thk hai

Aman smiles at her childishness and says: bas kuch aur din uske baad tu jo chahe wo sakti hai

Riya: ok phir my chalthi hu tum us sree ko bata dena ki my perfectly fine hu

Aman: tum perfectly fine nahi ho ri

Riya: pls aman usse keh do na warna tum tho jante ho pls pls making a pout

Aman: thk hai bye

Riya : thank u thank u soo much and kiss on his cheek and run from there

Aman smiles at her and says to himself: bhagwan bas ab sab thk ho iske zingi me bahoth kuch jhela hai isne pls ise ab khushi hi dena

In sam cabin

Sam too hugs him after some time they break hug and sam says

Sam: waise tune bataya nahi tujhe ladkiyo ke naam itne paata hai and raise his eyebrow

Arjun: itne nahi yaar mujhe tho sirf ye ek hi naam pata hai pata nahi kyu mujhe aisa lagta hai ki my is ladki ko jaanta hu lagta hai ki uske jitna khoobsoorat koi nahi hoga

Sam: acha sirf naam se hi pata chal gaya ki wo kaisi dikhti hai

Arjun: pata nahi yaar par lagata hai ki uski badi badi ankhe hongi jise dekhte hi koi bhi usme kho jaye aur uske gulabi hont jispe se kisi ki nazar hate hai nahi aur jab wo muskuraye tho uske gaalo me padne wale dimples uski khoobsurti ko aur bada de aur uski naak jab bhi wo gusse me ho tho uski laal naak aur uski gardan wo bilkul patli aur uske gardan ka wo til jo baar baar uski wor attract kare aur cut by sam

Sam: bas bas bahoth hogaya tera aise features ki koi ladki bani hi nahi hogi (sorry yar bani hai par tujhe bata nahi sakta kyu ki jo features tu bata raha hai wo candy ke hai aur my nahi chahta ki tujhe abhi kuch pata chale)

Arjun: nahi sam koi na koi tho zaroor bani hogi

Sam: agar bani bhi ho tho kise pata ki wo duniya ke kis kone me ho

Arjun: wo sab mujhe nahi pata sam par agar wohi mere naseeb hai tho my usse zaroor miloonga

Sam: aur tujhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki wo tere naseeb me hogi

Arjun: dekhna sam roz mujhe uske sapne aate hai aur mere muh se uska naam bhi aagaya kuch tho connection hai

Sam: koi connection nahi hai waise to tujhe roz aane wale sapno me uska chehra hi nahi dikhta tho tujhe kaise pata ki wo ye hai

Arjun: ha par uski wo sweet awaaz se tho mujhe yahi lagta hai ki uska chehra bilkul aisa hi hoga agar wo mujhe mili tho I swear ki my zindagi bhar uska saath nahi chodoonga

Sam: acha thk hai ab bus kar aur jaake apna kaam kar
he goes from there and sam gets a call

part-3

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Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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New character

Dr AMAN KHANNA: he is a doctor and childhood friend of riya and sree and
presently treating riya and have some crush on her but friendship matters more for him

Image result for amir ali
thank u

...SANA
Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome part
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