Maaneet SS- HOPE thread 2- Note for Next Epilouge page 107 ( 4-Jun-18) - Page 25

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wonderful update(sorry for late)...geet drank bhang & told maan not loving her...she should told NT's drama for their separation... maan & maanu should handle NT & throw her out of their live... excited for next...thanks for pm...!!
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noone waiting for hope part 😭😭😭

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Thanks for liking and comments dearies.

Part 15

After maaneet went to their room..obviously our cutie pie payback time..


Manu dancing and roaming whole garden.elders enjoying manu baby antics..poor arjun kidnapped his wife to their room insake of annie savior. Yeah none other our cutiepie.even Vicky also dragging khushi to lonely place.

Manu searching his mummaa, bua and girlfriend ( khushi)..but no one there..oh my poor baby ,he don't know already everyone dragging their respective partner to their room..but his eyes caught one special person.

Manu start his mission. Payback time to devil aunty..dont worry this time manu baby not single army to handle devil..he got new partners..

Manu: u ready mission to devil aunty with smirked face..

Persons: yes little boss

Manu scratching his own hairs : who s little boss with innocent face

Adi and pinky unison : u r our little boss.

Manu: why adi uncle with cute innocent face

Adi pickup manu in his arms: u r my boss ka sunshine..in future u only handle whole khurana empire.

Pinky: ha , manu baby, u have right to bossing us. We will do that what u will tell us..

Manu: sachi:

Pinky touched his nose through her index finger: muchi

Manu giggled.. naintara come to manu side..

Naintara: adi, whose heir of khurana mansion.

Adi: Naintara mam, one only vismeet maan singh khurana heir of khurana mansion with pride voice.

Naintara: whose said u..he is khurana..with taunting tone..u have any proof

Adi: no one want proof mam.anyone seeing manu baby first time..they will say he is great business tycoon maan singh khurana s son with pride tone

Naintara: stop ur rubbish adi with angry voice. She turn leave that place.manu baby hold her shoulder..

Naintara: why u stopped me ,little devil.

Pinky: mind ur word.he is angel for us not devil with harsh tone.

Naintara ignored pinky warning and manu baby in adi arms..

Manu: naintara aunty , till now I did not wish u with innocent face

If any human being seeing his chubby ,cute face fallen love with him but devil not.

Naintara: I don't want ur wish ..

Pinky: are u scaring with teasing tone

Naintara: iam naintara ..i am not scaring anyone mainly that little devil.

Pinky : if maan sir know about that u told his sunshine to devil..then u r gone..mind it with warning tone.

Naintara: u r just employee..but u warning me..how dare u with angry face

Pinky: I dare because iam not ur employee with casually face

Naintara stamped her foot ..went inside.

Adi: pinky , really u have more guts talk naintara this way


Pinky: Adi sir..dont talk about devil..

Nt tried open her room door and someone tucked her dress..

Nt turned suddenly color water squashing in her face..

Nt shout :haha...she went quickly to washroom..washing her face in cold water..

Yeah our naughty devil work..manu squeezed color water..(color water means color powder + water+ some amount chilli powder nothing else)..through his water gun..adi and pinky helped our manu baby..

NT eyes itching and her leg twist as her body down to bath tub .nt relax in little warm water .but she don't know already they mixed hitching powder in water tub..after few sec her whole body itching ..she scratching body through her nail..her mind cursing little devil..sry our little angel.

Nt quickly shower through warm water..after she changed her dress and layed down to her bed.after sec she shout : hahaa...she jerked bed down ..

She removed bed blanket .her eyes wided seeing throns placed in bed fully, now she scaring lay anyplace in her room..she spread blanket in floor..she layed in cold floor..

Nt mindvoice: u played me with very well..today ur last day with ur family..tomorrow ur mummaa never see u in her life time with evily face.

Maaneet room:

Maan placed his indexfinger to cherry lips .

Maan: chup bikul chup ,my chatter box geet twisted her lips with pout face.

Maan thumbs pattern cheeks to corner lips and geet closed eyes waiting for more from him..


Maan lips close geet lip only single inch gap..she breathe heavily..his breath touching her face..she clutched her dress tightly because her stomach have goosebumps. And uncontrollable feeling

Maan sense his losing self control and jerk up from geet and sit next to her..showing his back to her

Geet open her eyes and saw maan showing his back to her..she hurt so much for his rejection..

Geet tearing flicked in her cheeks and geet turned sobbing heavily..maan hearing her sobbing voice..

Maan lay next to her and turn geet to face him..his palm cupped her cheeks..

Geet raising her head and look at maan with tears eyes..

Maan: please jaan, don't cry..i cannot see ur tears with painful voice

Geet:why u penetrating my tears give u pain.why u come back in my life.i am happy with my baby ,why u come back with grabbing his shirt and placed her head to his chest .

Maan kissed her forhead: because I need u ..i need our baby..without u ..i cannot live

Geet: u saying lie ..u love Naintara not me..

Maan raised her head and look at her emotionless face: what u said , I love with nt..whom said I love her.

Geet: u only said, u love her, if u marry with her, u become happy..

Maan remembering past life yeah he told if marry with her..he become happy in his life but I never said I love NT.but Geet mentioned Nt and geet phone conversation in her pregancy time.

Maan: no jaan, I love u , geet..u r my lady love..u r only my love..noone got ur place..NT just my friend after u come back , her behavior changed so much.dont worry jaan,she did not interfere our life anymore..i will found out everything..geet already dosed off in his chest..and maan hug her waist but thinking geet insecurity about NT..why she said that he love NT..i want know everything.

*****

After some time maan placed geet in bed and kissed her forehead and went to Vicky room..he know that in his every question ka answer Vicky only give him.

Maan knocked Vicky room door and Vicky open door with yawning face.

Vicky: bhai...in night time, what r u doing in my door..oh u searching champ ..but champ in dadi room.

Maan: Vicky, I need talk with u..

Vicky: this time..we will talk in morning..iam sleepy mode..

Maan grabbed his shoulder: Vicky.. it urgent..plz help me..

Vicky: ok come inside bhai.

Maan enter in Vicky room and both comfortable settled in bed.

Maan: I want know why geet thought that I love with NT..


Vicky angry glare to maan: u asking this question to me..u don't know..with angry voice.

Maan: plz help me..i know that I am not care about geet.everytime NT with me..but I never cross limits with her.i behaved that she just friend for me.

Vicky: wow bhai..just friend..but she behaved us..she is ur fianac..

Maan: what. With confused face

Vicky: ha bhai, u don't know anything., bhai..how many my geet cried in her room lonely even she did not share her feeling with me..but I know her sadness very well, insecurities about Nt with ur relationship.with taunting tone

Maan guilt hearing Vicky taunting but he know that he deserve even more .

Maan: I deserve ur anger ..sry Vicky..plz forgive me

Vicky: no bhai..u know more about geet and her love ..vicky get up bed and searching cupboard something and back with some dairies

Vicky give diaries to maan: geet's dairy bhai..u want know about her love..read her dairy..

Maan: thanks..u go to sleep..i am going to my room.

Vicky hugged maan: bhai, don't leave her bhai.now she angry with u but she love u so much..plz understand her feeling..

Maan: i never leave her..i love her and she is my life, Vicky..

Maan went out with geet diary.

Maaneet room


Geet sleep in bed like baby sleeping..

Maan smiled and sit next her to open her diary..

Maan open First page..

Maan lips got little smile for reading her warning tone for Vicky.

Devil Vicky, if u touch my diary, next lives u never got marriage in ur life time, I know why I thinking, I curse u this lives never got marriage in ur life but I want enjoy ur marriage so.u need life partner in present life so I curse for next lives..i know why cursing only u, Vicky..u only poke ur nose my personal matter.u only dare read geet handa dairy..

Maan eyes brow raise: I also dare read ur diary..

Hmm u thinking ur maan bhai also dare read my diary..he did not want dare read my diary even he have full right with me . it just diary. My life, my soul everything belong to him..only him

Maan guilty read that lines about him..she trust him more than herself ..why she left him.

Maan turn page

Every girl dream about her life partner.but why iam searching my life partner in my life.he already infront of me.u r my air, breathe..without air no one alive same ways, I cannot alive without u.my every heart beat beating only for u, u r my strength, u r my hope .u r everything for me..i realized my love when u went away from me.why u running away from me.i tried reach u one step but he step back to 10 steps .without u my life incomplete ..i love u maan

Maan not just a name ..its my heartbeat

Yours geet handa

Maan kissed geet name in diary: sorry jaan

Turns more pages

My parent went away from me..they leave me alone .i have one in my life.but he said I am with u, my family with u.but he broke his promise.dadi want our marriage but he denied.once again I shattered..i felt why I want live in this world..i want die.but I control my every emotions .suddenly dadi said she arranged marriage with dev.one more character entry to my life..i cannot denied my darling wish..she give me everything more than her own grand children.i accept my marriage with dev.vicky fighting with me.he know very well me more than myself.what I will do.this is my fate.my love rejected me.

Yours geet handa

Turns..

I accept my marriage..but I decided that I want die before my marriage.but babaji not gave me wonderful changes .my babaji want I live in cruel world moredays..dev run away from mandap..unwillingly my marriage with my love.but I am not happy I know very well maanji not accept me to his life partner.my guessing right .my first night itself he told that iam not nothing to him.iam not shocked .but my tears not control.it flowing like river.why babaji punish me this way.i am cursing my fate.why I birth like curse person

Yours geet handa khurana

Handa striked through pen

Maan kissed sleeping geet crown head: u r not curse person...u r my angel with moist eyes.

Turns pages

Today I lost my smile. I thought this morning my life change to happy one but one again my hope failed .he forgot last night wonderful moments .he forgot everything insake of drunk.how he can forgot our passionate night , beautiful night.i thought he scopped me in his arms but he shout me.he said he happy with that devil..Naintara snatched my happiness..how many she said that he is only to her.but I am not bother about her words.i thought he is mine not anyone now he said if he marry with her , he will become happy..then whom iam with him. In his angry word , everything true one..he did not comeback to whole weeks..i hell scared about him.noone with me.my Vicky also went to abroad..if he near with me. I got little bit relief but I don't want spoil his carrier because of cursed fate.

Yours Geet kh..iam geet khurana or geet handa or sirf Geet..even I did not know..

Maan : yes I forgot our passionate night .after u left mansion .i remembered our day ..i am cursing myself .iam sry geet, whenever u need me ..i am not near u..iam sry , forgive ur love.

Maan closed diary with heavy hearted and lay next to her.and held her waist tightly..placed his head in her shoulder..

Maan: everything my fault..i am sorry.plz don't go away from me..maan slept in that position.

*******

A sunrise hit maaneet face.geet eyes open in heavy head .maan sleeping same position he did not leave her single sec.

Geet seeing maan grip in her waist and his head very close to head and his body crushing her body .

Geet : why he sleep like iam his bed to him..with rolling her eyes.

Geet pushed him but he held more tight..

Geet shake her head and tried push him once again and tapped his shoulder heavely..

Maan wake up and give smile to geet.

Geet mind voice: what happen to him..why he smiling after I tapped heavely..oh no..i think yesterday he drank bhang more.

Geet signed maan to remove his grip her waist and after sec maan realized his grip..geet went to washroom

Dinning table

Maaneet come down and everyone in dinning table.

Maan sit down to respective chairs.

Geet: maa, manu ate his food with casual tone.

Priya: no geet, I thought baby in ur room..where is he

Maan: sunshine slept in dadi room not our room

Dadi: but maan, I wake up in sleep ,manu baby not with me...I thought manu come to ur room.


Geet: dadi, he did not come to our room with worried face

Maan: geet , don't panic..i think he playing with maiyra room.vicky, go see maiyra room and bring him

Vicky nods his head but Arjun , arohi come to dinning hall with miyra.


Arjun: good morning, why everyone silent, where is my wife saviours.with teasing tone

Vicky: jiju, champ not in ur room.


Annie: no bhai, yesterday .night I saw him in dadi room.after we did not see him..what happen bhai..where is my manu baby..with worried tone


Geet tears rolled in her eyes..she got up chair and madly searching every room.everyone searching room, garden, everywhere in farmhouse..

Everyone come back with empty hand ..


Geet shattered in center of room : my baby with shouting crying voice..

Dadi: maan do anything we want our manu back..with crying voice.

Maan eyes moist , he not crying for everything . he did not show his emotion anyone but today his sunshine not infront of him.he cannot see his jaan like this way..

Part end


Next part...> part 16 -pg 62

Precap: A manu Baby day out 😈

Geet grabbed maan collar: I want my manu baby ,maanji..i cannot live without him..i don't know where is my baby. ur great maan singh khurana right, find my vismeet..with crying & painful voice

Maan hug geet : shhh..geet I will find my sunshine...nothing happen to our baby..with worried and moist eyes

Geet: it almost 4 hours..u cannot ,I will find him myself..i know he is hungry..he need me..she run out like mad.. but maan stopped her..

Maan: plz..give me some time I will found our baby..iam not leave anyone to kidnap my sunshine..with angry voice

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb pt
mannu teach nt good lesson
but know where is mannu baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
Maan talk to geet
geet dairy Maan reading
manu is awesome baby
poor nt
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Manu give good lesson to devil NT
Now she is gone
As Maan know her evil truth
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update👏
Eager for the next part😃
Thank you for the pm😃

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