Soothing the Fire-Shivika FF UPDATED(Chapter-20 on pg-144)06/09 - Page 65

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: smileyallora

I hate u payal for stopping this romantic sequence😡😆

Mannn!!! Trust me u rock with ur atmost skills in these scenes... 👏romantic sequence is something i suck at so i really really admire u for the ease with which u carry out romatic sequences 👏 sooo please please give us moreee shivika romance.. without drama😆

Any plans of trying passionate seq too along with romance??😉


You're the best Smiley :* And I will never beileve that you're not good with romantic sequences because I've read your story and the romance their is AMAZING.
About passionate sequences, I haven't decided yet...but hell, why not!
Anyway thankyou so much!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update payal dear...
Well shivaay and annika both were impatient hahah..!!
Pinky is happy as his son is now taking part in wedding arrangements which is ultimately not going to happen.. 😉
Well your story always bring light heartedness and tenderness alongwith it which is much needed now after this news of shivika seperation and time lapse yaar.. i was so disheartened after reading this news..
But your story gave me a relief.. well for nxt part i have to wait for 24 hrs but its okk i can wait for your amazing story..!!
Moreover how r ur vacations going on.. i hope u r njoying well payal..??
Will be waiting for nxt update till then good wishes from my side..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

This is Amazing
Shivay waiting desperately to have his hands on Anika
Pinky is so excited about the wedding which is never gonna happen😆
SSO really needs some changes in his room??😆
Pinky's over- excited self😆
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...lovely update...romantic tooo❤️
can we get omru teasing both shivu and ani scenes...🤪
waiting for tuesday
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sarcasticsmiley

Lovely update payal dear...

Well shivaay and annika both were impatient hahah..!!
Pinky is happy as his son is now taking part in wedding arrangements which is ultimately not going to happen.. 😉
Well your story always bring light heartedness and tenderness alongwith it which is much needed now after this news of shivika seperation and time lapse yaar.. i was so disheartened after reading this news..
But your story gave me a relief.. well for nxt part i have to wait for 24 hrs but its okk i can wait for your amazing story..!!
Moreover how r ur vacations going on.. i hope u r njoying well payal..??
Will be waiting for nxt update till then good wishes from my side..😊


Thankyou so much Jasman! You're amazing, along with your comments :*
I was quite disheartened too reading the separation, But post all the pain, I'm hoping we'll get to our Shivika back in full tashan, so I'm kind of looking forward to it too.
And my vacations are going great, thanks for asking! How are YOU doing?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mystery1234


This is Amazing
Shivay waiting desperately to have his hands on Anika
Pinky is so excited about the wedding which is never gonna happen😆
SSO really needs some changes in his room??😆
Pinky's over- excited self😆
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊


Thankyou so much dear!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Thank you for the update!! Finally he gets some time with her...the man is so restless...jumping in his skin to be with her...its so endearing...and SSO ki Jungli Billi...Can abide with this frustration of the distance between them and the lack of intensity in the kiss...loving that she calls him out on it! Looking forward to the next part!!


Thankyou love! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-11 Part-B

Part-A

Shivaay was having a hard time controlling himself. True, he had been taking it slow to take revenge of some sorts, but there was another reason to it- his hormones were taking him overdrive, and he didn't want to overwhelm her. He wanted to keep things slow, and in his control, because he knew that if he let go, he'd end up doing something they both weren't ready for. Well, atleast he knew she wasn't ready for.

But then she had gone on and called him out on it, and the fire, the passion he had seen in her eyes, had been his undoing. He pulled her close, crushing their bodies together this time. Instead of attacking her lips, his mouth went towards that creamy, exposed neck of hers. He buried his head there, inhaling her intoxicating scent that was a strange mixture of jasmines and something spicy, something he couldn't quite put a finger on. It was unique, he thought, just like her. He placed peppery kisses all over her neck, while Annika let out low moans of pleasure. Rubbing his nose along the length of her neck, he reached the sleeve of her top. Slightly moving it aside, he grinned when he saw that she was wearing a lacy, red bra inside. Several thoughts instantly flooded his mind, such as how red suited her so well, and whether or not she was wearing matching underwear...

That thought made him groan, and Annika emerged from the dreamy state she had retired to. Pulling him by his hair to see his face, she looked at him with quizzical brows.

"What's wrong?" She asked, a little skeptical about the answer since she was afraid that she had done something wrong. With the kind of inexperience she had, from lack of even watching any intimate scenes in movies since they gave her michmichis, her fear was understandable. And although Shivaay had told her that he had never done anything as such with any of his girlfriends, he was still a man who knew for sure what to do, and how to do it.

"Nothing," Shivaay whispered to her, smoothing out her hair a bit.

"No, tell me. Did I do something wrong?" She asked him with wide, innocent eyes.

"Huh?" Shivaay was confused. "Why would you think you did something wrong?"

"It's just that, you made this noise and I, I thought maybe you weren't pleased or... why are you laughing?"

Shivaay couldn't believe his nave Annika. Did she really think he wasn't pleased? Oh God, if only she knew, he thought as he rested his head on her shoulder, while his shook from the uncontrollable laughter. Annika frowned in annoyance.

When Shivaay was finally able to compose himself, he looked up and placed a kiss on her forehead endearingly.

"You're too innocent, you know that?" He asked her, while looking at her lovingly.

When Annika only frowned, he shook his head and placed a soft peck on her swollen lips.

"My dear girlfriend, men don't groan when they are displeased. In fact, they groan when they are... pleased beyond measure, per say." He said huskily into her ears.

Annika blushed at that.

"Oh." She said stupidly, and as Shivaay only continued to stare at her with those dreamy, kanji eyes of his, she thought of something else to say.

"Why did you call me your girlfriend?" She almost shouted as she remembered.

Shivaay raised an eyebrow in that arrogant way that only he was capable of.

"Well, I do think that is what you call someone your dating."

"And since when have we be 'dating'? Annika asked haughtily, removing her arms from around his neck and putting them on her hips. "As far as I remember, you told me that you would only ask me out when, and I quote here, you've resolved the Tia issue and informed your family and then finally taken me out on a proper date. Have you been forgetting to eat your almonds lately?"

Shivaay gulped as he remembered that was indeed what he had said. But he desperately wanted to make her his girlfriend, and give a name to their relationship. She deserved that, and more.

"Okay, well, I remember saying that. And FYI, I don't need to almonds, my memory is sharp anyway", Annika rolled her eyes at that. "But how about we do something?"

Annika narrowed her eyes at that.

"What?"

"How about," Shivaay started as he removed her arms from her hips and put them around his neck again, pulling her closer, "We skip the resolving issue with Tia and informing the family' part, and skip directly to going on that date?"

Annika pretended to think for a while. The answer would ofcourse be in the affirmative; now that she knew exactly what a cheapdi Tia was, she wouldn't possibly be able to stay away from this baggad billa of hers for long. And just the thought of dating this man, of being his girlfriend, of being his number one, made her feel a thrill of excitement.

"Hmm.. I'll think about it," She finally replied.

Shivaay frowned at that, while Annika bit her lip to stop from smiling at that adorable expression of his.

"But why? Are you still concerned about the Tia thing? But I've told you about her truth already! And if it's about the family, then Om and Rudra already know and-"

Annika had suddenly started laughing, and engulfed him in a hug.

"You just look so cute! Such a billuji, I tell you," she said, still giggling.

Shivaay breathed a sigh of relief.

"So you're just joking with me, huh?"

Annika nodded, her eyes shining bright.

Shivaay slowly slid his hands around her waist, making her top rise and his fingers brush her bare waist.

"You just keep adding on to the things I need to take revenge for, don't you?"

Annika's eyes widened at that. Suddenly, she yanked away from his grasp and ran towards the other side of the room.

"You can only take revenge when you catch me!" She called out playfully.

Shivaay smiled widely. Keeping his eyes on her glowing face, he slowly removed his coat and folded his shirt-sleeves. Then, without warning, he lunged towards her. Annika gave a squeal, but managed to get away from him time. This continued for a while, as she made him chase her all around the room, their hearty laughter reverberating. Finally Shivaay managed to grab her around the waist, and they both landed on the bed with the sudden force, side by side. Still laughing, he pulled Annika close to him, making her lay her head on his chest. He rubbed her back affectionately, in smooth motions. They lay there in silence, just feeling each others' presence. After a while Annika spoke up in a soft voice,

"Pinky Aunty will be wondering what's taking me so long."

Shivaay chuckled.

"She sure will be."

Another minute of silence, before,

"So we are up for that date tonight, right? I'll pick you up at 8.30? That should give you enough time to get ready."

Annika looked at him hesitantly.

"Shivaay, I know I said yes for the date, but I can't just leave Sahil alone at home so late at night. My friend Chanda isn't in Mumbai this week so I can't even leave him at her house either."

Shivaay thought about it for a moment, before coming up with a solution.

Grinning, he said, "Well, what do you think your 'devars' are for? I'm sure they'll love to keep Sahil company while we're out."

Annika brightened at that.

"That'd be great! Only if they're willing to, ofcourse."

"Ofcourse they will be." Shivaay said while kissing the top of her head.

Lazing around for a few more minutes, Annika finally got up.

"I really need to get going, or Pinky Aunty might come upstairs wondering where we're lost." She said, seeing Shivaay's frown.

Sighing, Shivaay reluctantly got up too.

"Fine, you can go. But only after another kiss."

Annika didn't hold back this time, and joined his lips with her own. They kissed deeply and passionately, and somewhere in the middle, Shivaay pulled Annika on his lap. Tongues entwined and exploring each others' mouth, Annika had a hard time pulling back.

"I really should get going," she said breathily.

Shivaay only hummed while nuzzling her neck. Finally, placing a soft kiss on the hollow of her neck, he let her go.

Watching her retreating back, he thought of how to make tonight's date special for her, before an idea struck his mind.

After having made a few calls here and there, he was sporting the biggest smile on his face. If everything went well, he would be able to propose to her to be his girlfriend, in the kind of romantic way every girl wished for. He distinctly remembered what Annika had said when Mallika was here, about being somebody's number.1, being someone's reason for smiling, and such. Shivaay was going to give her all of that, and more.

Can tonight just come already, he thought dreamily, as he lay back down on his bed again.

Hope you guys liked this part :) Next update will be a little late, apologies in advance!


Chapter-12

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


I love doing this
😆

RES
Unres.

I am sorry in advance because this one is going to be short

Anyway, coming to the story.

I loved how Shivaay took revenge, just simply perfect😉
though I know it was more of a punishment for Shivaay then Annika but Annika needed this!
she should know exactly how my Shivaay baby felt for these extremely 'Touch-me-not-or-else-I'll-Kick-you' 24 hours. Great Revenge Shivaay Darling😆
Finally these people are having a moment for themselves, away from all this drama and negativity. *phew*
I observe the more Shivaay stays with Annika the more romantic he turn 😆
which is, off-course a great thing. Why don't you just lock them in a room and throw away the key into an ocean ?😆
You know Rudy will readily help you too😆

But then we get to know, more than a revenge it was a controlling act, Awww Shivaay baby 😳 you stole my heart with that gesture.

And Shivaay's mind is going wild with thoughts and passion speeds within his veins, he is pleased beyond measures and beyond words by any chance if Annika get's to know exactly what's running in Shivaay's mind she would turn into pools of puddles
hehehhe.

Annika sweetie, you are such a sweet naive darling.. Awww😳😳😳
Listen to me carefully, there is absolutely nothing done by you that can displease 'your' Shivaay neither emotionally (Pinky can be an element of surprise but I know Anklet better and I am also aware why she is so happy of you not being declared as the fav bahu in SPA2017, if you get what I meant 😉) nor physically.

You know what is so special about this Shivaay, in particular, is; he is doing everything to make Annika his! he is very clear about things he want in his life and the priority right now ( and shall always be) Annika. it gives me such a great vibe.
Shivaay isn't confuse about what he shares with Annika and mostly he respects her beliefs and principles. The girl who hasn't let a guy eye her, Is allowing him to invade her privacy, That's a huge huge thing and Shivaay knows it as well as values it.
though they haven't realised the deeper feelings for each other yet but when they'll do it will be just amazing to read, how Annika will make Shivaay speak his heart😆

She is giving him a hard time now too, the way she gave it back to Shivaay,
Naah naaha, Mr. You ain't getting away with proposing her. Go bollywood romantic, flowers, hearts and Music or else Annika will taunt you through out your life, or maybe she'll just wear the board of "Touch-me-not-until-you-propose" 😆
I loved it how he mentioned OmRu here * haye* Devars
and the better part is, Annika didn't reacted any skeptical way, she just went in a flow of 'what an idea' because She too has accepted OmRu as her Devars, though the Irony is that Shivaay has to still do a lot of thing to be called as her Boyfriend😆😆
I am already hysteric thinking what will happen when he wants to marry her! Oh christ it is going to be one ride😉

Even I am waiting for the night, along with Shivaay!

And exactly when does this night of your's happens Anklet?
and again amazingly written update, so purely written that even the make out session was adorable. Loved it baby😃
Love
Divs
Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hahahaha.. Only pinky knew why shivaay calling anika in his room...
Hot hot.. Hot...

Loved it

Plzz cont doon


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