Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
loved it
Arjun ne Riya ko Roshni ki chain di
RIya thought he wouldn't come but he did...for her
RIya aur Abhi ki shaadi bhi ho gayi
ab dono shift bhi ho jaayenge
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cont soon

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: rvss
Rula diya na yaar... Jo nahi hona chahiye tha vo ho gaya..

Riya and abhi ki sadhi..

Mera to bhot buri trike se dil tut gaya..

Tino ki zindgi pata nahi kya hoga..

Ab to ham ye wish bhi nahi kar sakte ki Ariya ko mila do..

Lekin that's owesome..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#303

Part 8:-

At night..

After giving lots of nek to his sister in laws ,abhi entered in his room,only to find riya sitting on bed in bridal attire n room is full decorated with flowers n candles..

He slowly lock the door behind him..n walked to bed..

N sit near her..remove her veil..she is looking down..

He held her chin n make her look to him..

Abhi:-come on ritz..bhale hi hamara rista bandal gaya ho..par isaka matlab ye nahi ke ham best frinds nahi rahe..ham hamesha se best friend the..he aur hamesha rahege..

Riya smiles..

Abhi:- n u dont need to be nervous around me..i like the ritz the way u r..

Riya smiles n relax..though she had expect all these words from abhi but still she get little nervous..

Abhi(cup her face):-ritz..i know..u r not ready for this..n trust me I will wait for lifetime..u just sleep here comfortably..i can manage on sofa..

Saying this he leave her face n turn towards sofa..but he stop..when he feel riya had held his hand to stop him..

He turn to look her..

She signal him to sit..he sit on bed besides her..she put her head on his shoulder..

Riya:-mere liye mushkile aur mat badao jeet..

Abhi look to her little confused..

Riya:-jitna jyada waqt lungi shayad utna hi ulazti rahugi ..

Abhi realize what she mean..he dont know what to say now..

Riya:-mana ke ye shadi meine arjun sir ke liye ki he..par mein iss shadi ko pure dil se nibhana chahati hu jeet..plz help me out..

Abhi (cup her face):-u can take time..?i dont want to..to..force u..

Riya(smiles looking to him in amusement):-u know what jeet..agar arjun sir se pyar nahi hota na ..toh definitely I would have fall for u..u r such a gentleman..

Abhi:-now u r making me nervous..

Both smiles..

Riya:-jeet sach me mein iss rishte ko nibhana chahti hu..i m so lucky to have u in my life..

Abhi just stared her for some seconds..then he come little closer to kiss her forehead..

Both hug each other..n remain like that..after few moments..abhi kissed her both cheek..soon his lips started moving all over her face..n atlast he claim her lips..

(riya thodi nervous he..arjun ko bhul pana usakeliye impossible he..par usake sath jeena bhi possible nahi..par abhi ko woh iss baat ki saza nahi dena chahti..abhi woh insaan he jo usake zindagi me khushi lana chahta he..toh riya kaise usaki zindagi me dukh likh sakhti he..he was there n he is there n she is sure he wil there for her whole life..so she had decide to give herself to him..)

She too tried to respond him but couldnt properly..this bring smile to abhi..

He started kissing her more passionately..

Soon his lips are moving to her neck ,throat..he slowly started removing her ornaments..at last he was about to remove the chain arjun make her ware..

Riya:-no..dont..

Abhi knows why she dont want to remove it..(riya had told him that arjun is gifted this chain to her)

He was about to remove her mangalsutra..but she again stop him..

Riya:-no..both are special for me.

Abhi smile n kiss lightly on her lips..soon both are out of cloths..n the whole night riya feel blissful in shower of abhis love..

Next morning:-

Abhi open his eyes..n see the most beautiful sight of his life..its like his lovely dream is come true..

His love is sleeping in his arms..he keep staring her lovingly till she herself wake up..she caught him staring her..

Abhi(softly kiss her forehead):-good morning..

Riya(trying to get up):-good morning..

Abhi(pulling her):-ruko thodi der..

Riya:-no..hame packing karni he..hamari aaj sham ki flight he kolkatta ke liye..aur sabse milana bhi toh he..(she get sad..)

Abhi(cup her face):-hey..aise sad mat ho..tumhe pata he na..tumhe aise dekhna na muse pasand he aur na usse(arjun)..

Riya smile little..

Abhi:-aur tumhe kolkatta aane ki jaldi nahi karni chahiye..waha pe tumhare joining ko abhi time he..u can stay here if u want..

Riya:-no..agar ab nahi nikal payi toh shayad kabhi nahi nikal paugi..

She put her head on abhis shoulder..

Abhi:-relax..

They here knock on door..hearing it riya run to washroom taking her cloths n all stuff..abhi smiles..n open door after waring his cloths..

Its riyas mom asking them to come for breakfast..

After packing their stuff..abhi n riya are all ready to go to airport..

Riya n abhis parents left in car for airport..

Etf team except arjun has reach there to bid bye to riya n abhi..

Riya(almost in verge of cry):-woh..woh kya aakhri baar bhi muzse milne nahi aaye..

Arjun who was wondering whole day n night in search to feel some peace to his heart..is finally back..

Arjun:-tumhe sach me laga ke mein nahi aauga riya..

Riya n arjun keep staring each other..

Abhi:-riya..hame niklna hoga..

Riya hug chotu n shree..

Riya:-I m gonna miss u guys..

Choree:-we too..

They share group hug..after then,..

Sam:-all the best riya..

Riya:-thank u sir..

Both hug each other..

Abhi hug choree n sam n bid bye to them..

Abhi then come infront of arjun..

Abhi:-take care arjun..

Arjun:-u too abhi..i want a promise from u..tum riya ka sath nahi chodoge..hamesha usse khush rakhoge..aur usse safe rakhoge..promise me..

Abhi(smiles):-I promise..

Riya some to arjun..both look each other with teary eyes..

Arjun:-riya..apna khayal rakhna..aur bas ye yaad rakho ke mein tumhe khush aur safe dekhna chahta hu..promise me u will stay happy n safe..

Riya:-yes..i will..i promise..

Riya trying to control her sob..

Riya:-appko bhi muze promise karna hoga..karege na..?

Arjun:-hmm..

Riya:-u will take care of urself..jaan buzke aap apne aapko khatre me nahi dalege..n..u will control ur anger..n..n..u will smile..

Arjun(smile with tears):-aur bhi kuch..?

Riya just nodded in negative..

Arjun:-I promise..

Riya smiles with tears in her eyes..

Riya:-I trust u..n I know..u will win..

Arjun slightly nodded trying to control his sob..

Riya hug arjun..he too hug back..

Both started crying miserably..after few seconds..riya moved away..n without looking back she sit in car..

Abhi look to choree n sam then look to arjun with tears..n sit inside car..

N started driving..

Bhula dena muze..he alvida tuze..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

Safar ye he tera.ye rasta tera..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

(arjun fall on knees..n started crying miserably..sam raise his hand to calm arjun..but took it back in mid..n left from there..)
(choree also have tears sseing arjun like this..but they dont know how to handle arjun..they just stood there..)

Tu hi he kinara tera..

Tu hi shahra tera..

(in car riya put her head on abhis shoulder..n started crying miserably..abhi put his one hand around her ..tears also flowing from his eyes seeing riyas state..)

Tu hi tarana kal ka..

Tu hi he fasana kal ka..

Khud pe yakin tu karna..

Banna apna khuda..

Fiza ki sham hu mein..

Tu he nayi subah..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

Tu\ze jeena he mere bina..

Khilegi jaha bahare sabhi..

Muze tu waha payega..

Rahegi jaha hamari wafa

Muze tu waha payega..

Miluga mein iss tarah wada raha..

Rahuga sang mein sada wada raha..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

Bhula dena muze..

He alvida tuze..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

Tuze jeena he mere bina..

Precap:-

Leap of 6 years..

Abhi n riya back to Mumbai..

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Ariya_1325

@Ariya_1325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Very emotional update
Aaj se pehle Kisi update me itna rona nai aaya hoga
Jitna iss update me aay hai
Abhi n Riya ek Ho Gaya
N abhi n Riya Mumbai se Kolkata shift Ho Gaye
Ab to bahut hi sad feel Ho raha hai
Ariya alag Ho Gaye 😭
6 year leap
Ab kitne shocked degi aap
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Tumne apna promise sach kar ke dikhaya ek baar aur...and this time it was really out of control for me...

.i am travelling now aur meine train mein hi ro padi...sab log mujhe dekh ke wonder kar rahe hai ke kun mein yun achanak ro padi...i seriously can't stop my self...

Abhi and riya scene was so beautiful and i was smiling but ariya scene was heartouching ke koi bhi ariya ka sachha slover isse padhake pakka ro pada hoga...

I love this masterpiece of yours...

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armishra

@armishra

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Very emotional update
Thanks for update
Continue soon
Waiting for next part

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Ramisa (Saba)

@Devilicious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#307

Awesome dear

What a great update

i think this was the best part the story and of your work so far.

So emotional..

It was heart touching

Ariya alag ho gaye

feeling so bad dammit.

so nicely written.

hope this 6 years leap

brings some interesting track to the story

Once again...i'd like to clap for you

i appreciate your work dear

Thank u so much for the Pm.

and thank u so much for sharing your talent with us.

Do continue soon.

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308

omgg abhi is so sweet..
and poor arjun ..
waiting for next .. what next ..
lovely updateee..dear like it..
continue soon..
updateee

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Lovely update dear Sonu
Very emotional
Abhi and Riya are now starting a new life
I really appreciate what Abhi did supporting Riya
Hmmm so finally off to Kolkata
Their departure was so emotional
I know it's hard for both of them
So now leap of 6 years
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊