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Posted: 8 years ago

Nisha Kabir NanoTales

Don't know what reactions I'll gather but still doing it😆

Finally haaash...🤣

FF, SS, OS k baad ye kalaa bhi kardi ab🤣

Those who don't know me, I'm Neeru😊, kisi janam me yaha pe likha karti thi 🤣 😃 Link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/138863137

Anyone interested in reading short tales on NiBir is whole heartedly welcomed ❤️

Each tale would have different concept. May be similar to NAUC and may not be...

At most 10 nanotales as far as I can estimate, not pretty sure right now.

Thanks in advance😊😳😆

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#1 - A Secret Sender- Scroll down

#2 - Masqueraders - Scroll down

#3 - At One Dawn - Scroll down

#4 to #10 - Coming soon😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#NanoTale 1

A Secret Sender

I drank some water and lay down taking the quilt over. It was already 3 AM and I was freaking tired after completing my work. Closing my eyes to sleep, I smiled for the relief I felt in my cozy bed.
Door bell? Did I hear a door bell? No...it might be just exhaustion taking a toll on my senses.
Again...I opened my eyes worried about hearing a second bell. So, it wasn't any illusion. There's someone at the door but at this time?
I felt jittery getting off the bed and waited for the bell to be rung again.
No sound...I still gathered courage and went near the door. Looking through the peep hole, I found none. Who was there? Where had (s)he gone? Was it a trick to barge in when I was away from my bedroom? Lots of questions whirled in my mind.
Finally, I grabbed a glass flower pot kept beside the door and was ready to shoot, if it meant any thief.
I flung the door open.
None.
I took a step in a ready to attack position but the entire corridor was empty. I relaxed a bit and thought of getting back thinking it to be a stupid prank or a mistake, when my eyes fell over a cake lighted with a red candle. It was kept just nearby the door. I looked around but found nobody.
Sighing, I picked it up. There was a red flower kept along which was tied to a paper note.
I opened the note that read:

'To the most beautiful lady,
From the most handsome gentleman.'

A smile streatched over my lips but soon faded away in confusion. I blinked twice unable to understand what was going on. I mulled over to take the cake inside or not. And soon decided to leave it. I got in closing the door and made a point to bolt it properly.
I took a glance at the clock and retired to sleep.
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Same time, same cake, same flower and the same note...it had been a week now.
Who was this 'secret sender'?
This time I took the cake in. And smelled it before cutting. Cheerfully smiling ear to ear, I dipped my finger to the chocolate lava that flowed out of the white cream layered bread. I couldn't resist chocolate after all.
Yummm...I sucked my finger. And as expected, the cake got finished within seconds. Then staring at the note for a little long, I opened it in order to come across the same words that had got imprinted in my mind reading it since 7 days. But to my utter surprise, the words weren't same.
Now, it read:

'To the most innocent smile,
From the most naughty smirk.'

I giggled grasping the meaning. So my dear secret sender, I think I caught you. I mentally laughed and prayed to be him as my heart beats started to fluctuate.
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It was five minutes to 3. Today, I'm going to catch you anyhow. Four minutes left, three minutes left, two, one...
It's three. At anytime would the door bell ring.
It's 3:05. At anytime would the door bell ring.
It's 3:10.
3:20.
3:40.
No bell. I frowned.
Great! Now what's this!
I snorted and treaded to my bedroom. I hid my sad self inside quilt.
"Seems someone doesn't want the chocolate today"
As soon as I heard his voice, I jumped out of bed. After a whole year, he was there, with a charming yet enchanting smile. His hands were behind his back.
My eyes glistened. The longest wait ever was finally over. Yes, it's him...My lost boyfriend, my Kabir.
"Suffered a memory loss or what?" He smirked.
He just can never stop pulling my leg. Idiot! I glared at him.
He giggled a bit and then keeping the cake aside, opened his arms. Without delay, I hugged him and he reciprocated the embrace.
He had promised to be back after settling in London as a chroegrapher. But every contact to him had got broken. I had lost the hope to see him ever in this lifetime.

"Itna chipakne ki zaroorat nai hai" he jeered.
"Okay" I exaggerated my smile tearing our embrace .
The next second, he got a nice sharp stomp at his foot.
"Owww"
"Now feeling better?" I queried haughtily.
"Cake is gone" he retorted standing back straight and then we hurried to grab the cake at the same time. He slyly smiled being fast and then took a large piece of cake. He explicitly showed it to me while a pouted.
"You want?"
I nodded in a childlike manner.
He forwarded the cake piece but as I opened my mouth, he quickly tried to retract his hand back which I held of course. Smart me. And fed the cake to myself looking at him. He grinned and ate the remains over his finger.

Is there any need to tell that we were eating and playing with the cake thereafter? (Wink😉)

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NanoTale #2

Masqueraders

"Kaun bewakuf farewell ki theme masquerade rakhta hai? " I sulked.
Saurav, my best friend giggled and continued wearing his coat.
Suketu poured, "Sahi to keh raha Kabir, College life me pehli aur aakhiri baar to dhang k dikhte hai... aur usme bhi chehra dhaak lo"
"Par isse makeup k paise bach jayenge" Umesh chuckled.
The three guys glared at him making him to concentrate back on dressing for his better being.

"Kya yaar mujhe nai pehenna ye mask-vask" Kabir pouted.
"Koi charges nai hai bhai ise naa pehenne k, mat pehen" Saurav tapped at Kabir's head.
Kabir frowned rubbing his temple.
Suketu started," Par vaise dekha jaaye to... ise pehenkar tu Naira ko propose karega, to at least uske thappad se to bach jayega"
To which the boys erupted with guffaws and hi-5s. Naira had been Kabir's crush since first year. She was the most eligible beauty of the entire college. Kabir tried to hit as many boys as he can while they tried to shelter themselves.
Saurav in the midst of his run jeered," Par ladkiya bhi to mask pehenengi naa, pata chala Naira k bajaaye Nisha ko propose kar daala"
More laughters emerged at Saurav's comment.
"Tu ruk beta aaj to teri khair nai!" Kabir responded almost strangling Saurav.
Why wouldn't he? After all, who proposes one's arch rival?
"Come on yaar, ab jaldi karo varna late ho jayenge hum party me" urged Umesh wearing his wrist watch.
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"Khade khade kya dekh rahe ho, let's get in" Spoke Kabir, beaming in a three piece suit. A rose brochet enhanced his handsomeness.
They entered a huge banquet lavishly decorated. All the people present had worn masquerades just like them.
"Ha bhai, tujhe to jyada jaldi hai naa, propose jo karna hai" teased Suketu and vanished thereafter to save himself.
Soon, the rest mingled with other batch mates present over there who they could recognise by voices.
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The anchor announced,"I know, all of you don't want this night to end ever but my dear friends, the last is ball game!"
Everyone excitedly cheered.
She carried on, "Okay then, each one has to pick a chit, same numbers on the chit will make a pair"
Soon the withdrawals started in a queue.
"Kabir agar Naira mil gayi tujhe to tera to set ho jana hai" Suketu nudged Kabir.
"Aur nai to kya, par Suketu tu apna soch" Umesh chuckled.
"Mujhe to vahi milegi jise mai chahta hu" Suketu smirked.
"Matlab?" Kabir asked.
"Matlab ye dekh" Suketu secretly showed a chit.
"Tune ispe Kirti ka no. Likha hai?" Saurav asked in astonishment to which Suketu smugly nodded.
"Par tujhe uska no. Kese pta chala?" Umesh asked all confused.
"Abey dhakkan vo dekh" Kabir indicated to look towards easily recognizable Kirti who had 5 number chit in hand talking with her friends.
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"7 no. 7 no. 7...7" Kabir murmured in the look out for his girl.
He smiled as his eyes fell over a girl clad in white gown holding a 7 number chit. She spun with a masqueraded face and found him swaying the token. His hands froze as she turned and advanced towards him.
Thud-thud-thud-thud
God! That was his heart beat. He felt it unbelievable that it was reality...because it felt no less than a dream where an angelic princess in white descendes on earth. And, that princess, was standing before him. Did the time stop? Yeah, for him until the girl clicked her fingers in front of his eyes.
He blinked and "Shall we ?" he quickly forwarded his hand to be on the dance floor.
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Kabir was at cloud nine matching his steps with his love. Yes, his love...who else was able to skip his heartbeat? When he couldn't see the face, it's only the inner aura that flowed into him somehow telling him he has got his princess.
Sparkles in both pairs of eyes justified the dim ambience.

"Who are you?" He finally gathered his courage to ask even though his mind had the answer...Naira.

"Nisha..." the girl let out meekly as if afraid to spill out a secret.
Here, Kabir was out of his wit.
"What?!? You're... Nisha!" He almost shrieked aghast.
That Nisha who never cared to leave her loose tops was standing before him dressed in a gown. And that too with so much style?!

Others to spin their heads to the duo on Kabir's scream. He sheepishly looked at the crowd but then felt the warmth vanish all of a sudden. Rotating his head back, he saw Nisha running away and immediately followed her.
He thanked God that she wore heels, that her feet jotled irregularly putting an abrupt halt to her stride only after coming out of the shining hall.

"You okay?" Kabir stooped.
She jerked his hand away that came near her foot,"Idiot!"
Kabir asked with surprise, "Excuse me? You were the one who fled away, that means you're an idiot not I"
"But that was because of you, why did you scream my name gadhe!"
"Tu gadhi"
"Dekh tu-"
"Arey dekhu kese? Ye itna bada mukhota laga rakha hai"
"Yaar..." she held her temple in annoyance.
"Kya hua chakkar aa rahe hai?" He chuckled taking a dig.
"Kabeeer!" She tried to lash his arm but he moved back. She lost her balance due to the cramp at her ankle.
He quickly supported her and their eyes had a little distance left between them.
"Nisha..." he started.
"Huh?"
"Can we forget that we're rivals for some time...just for a dance?" He urged staring in her jet black orbs.
A smile touched her lips, "Just for this dance okay"
An equivalent glow touched his face listening to her acceptance.
She then removed her heels but before could look upwards, she saw him removing his shoes as well.
"Itna kabse samjhdar ho gaya Kabir?" She smirked.
"Jabse tujhme thodi akal aa gayi meri baat maanne ki" he smirked.
She stared at him that converted to giggle later. Kabir too joined in giggling pulling her close for a dance under the moonlit sky enveloping twinkling stars.

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# NanoTale 3

At One Dawn

H...Hel...Hello...I...I...I'm...Ni...Nish...Nisha
Well I'm panting, nothing else. I was commanded to jog in the morning by my parents. They are suddenly getting strict, I tell you. They aren't so strict during my boards but now God!
It's ordered not in order to lose weight rather to keep fit. But I'm fit and I don't know how to make them believe this. Phew! I'm sweating badly now. Yeah, because today is the first dawn I'm going to jog.
Don't take me a fool, I have tried so many ideas to refuse and then to deceive about this jogging thing but always it went in vain. I was escorted by my father 2 km from my home jogging the way and then he went to his friend using friend's bike. It was a Sunday so he wanted to meet a friend but I the poor girl had to go back home all by foot.
Thank God I've my earphones on otherwise these people's stare really! Haven't they seen a girl on the earth or what?
I started walking to go back home but finally returned to my jogging business due to the people's stares. Well all wasn't their fault too because I must have turned almost red, I can deduce.
Wiping fresh sweat and earphones hanging in air I sped as now I wanted to go home as soon as possible. And as always happens in my case I thought of resting a bit in between the process. I used to take breaks even during my studies and so finding an empty bench I sat and closed my eyes leaning to the headrest.
The soft music was healing my pain...yeah pain...my legs were aching now. First time jogging so you understand. And I felt someone beside me so I opened my eyes and turned my head to look at the person who just occupied the place. I was literally staring at him next as he drank something from a bottle. Then he shifted his eyes to me. His hazel brown eyes were really captivating you know. But the process of ogling had started when he wasn't looking at me and that was so due to the t-shirt he wore. It was the same t-shirt ...no...actually it was a similar t-shirt to that I had purchased yesterday from the mall and was currently wearing it. Yeah these mall trends really! They get same design for men and women clothes...
He smiled at me and said something. I couldn't hear it as I wore earphones. I slid one of them down and asked, "You said something?"
He chuckled," Yeah, I said hi pink lady"
I fumed, "Shut up! and put my earphone back looking away.
He then after a while brought his mobile in front of my eyes that had an image written sorry. I sighed and shifted his phone from my face mumbling, "It's okay"
He tapped my shoulder as I was still looking away. I glared at him then. He made an innocent face keeping his hands up in air. I suspired and again put an earphone down.
"You are Ramesh uncle's daughter right?" he asked with a contented face.
"Who are you? I lifted my eyebrow.
"I'm son of the person at whose place your father is right now he uttered.
"Really?" I asked in doubt.
"Okay I'm Salman Khan" he mocked.
I flared my nose while he giggled.
"Hi I'm Kabir" he forwarded his hand.
"Nisha" I shook hands with him.
"You have gone totally pink by the way" he chuckled.
"Hmmm I know" I rolled my eyes
"Okay bye, see you tomorrow" he said getting up.
"I'm not coming tomorrow" I declared crossing my hands.
"Let's see" he smirked and left jogging.
I don't know why I smiled and then hit my forehead with my palm closing my eyes "Yaar... "
I heard a smirk and opened my eyes quickly. I found him in front of me with a lopsided grin. I pointed my finger at him and he indicated that his sipper was left there and he returned just to pick it up as I had my earphones still on. I nodded withdrawing my finger. He then took out a piece of paper, placed at my lap and hastily stepped back smiling and left jogging. As he vanished, I flipped the paper to find three words written:
'Stop blushing yaar'
I snorted with a pursed lip-smile.
'Oh I O I O I'
Well that's my ringtone.
"Haa papa" I picked up the call.
"Tujhe pata hai,teri maa ka phone aaya tha"
"Papa bas 2 minute me ghar pohoch rahi" I lied getting to begin my stride.
"Tujhe pata hai petrol k daam bhi ghat gaye hai"
I'm going to home on foot, has my father forgotten?
"Ha papa, internet pe dekhi thi mene news abi"
"To fatafat ghar jaa varna tere mobile me aag laga dunga"
Unable to restrict my laughter, I loudly let it out.
"Papa aap bhi naa" I chortled.
"Arey" he spoke in surprised tone "mai koi mazak nai kar raha, jab dekho tab mobile me ghusi rehti hai, jogging kar jogging"
I giggled and said "accha okay, I'll call you once home"
"Hmm" he disconnected.
I kept my cell inside my pocket and being too exhausted to run, I chose to stroll back home.
"Wow..." I whispered to myself feeling a ball drop of water. Immediately, I looked up at the sky happy over the mild shower that started. I love rains.
Opening my arms and inhaling the petrichor was a bundle of joy since childhood.
"Marna hai kya?" I heard a familiar voice. I turned around to see Mr. Salman Khan.
"Tumse matlab?" I rejoinered putting down my arms in a flap.
Kabir uttered playfully "Arey aise road k bicho beech khadi ho aankh band karke"
The shower transformed to a medium paced drizzle.
"Tum bhi to beech me khade ho"
He shrugged his shoulders "Mai to tumhe bachaane k liye khadaa hu"
"Accha?" I raised my brow.
He nodded sweetly.
I shook my head in disbelief and concentrated back on heading to home as the cold breeze ran a shiver.
"Baaghi dekhi hai?" He questioned from behind.
My foot ceased at the mention of the movie. I swiveled to find him smiling wide and moving backwards. He eventually turned after a slow bye gesture using his fingers and jogged the opposite way amidst the rain...
My eyes had the perfect click of the picturesque with 'Sab tera' playing in my mind. Any doubt that I'm smiling brightest?😃

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Anmol

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Posted: 8 years ago

First of Huggie Huggie 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks for posting here on my request 🤗

Love you 🤗

And they are amazing 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

They are so beautiful, neeru!❤️

Short and sweet ones!😳

I love the edits too!😳

Continue ASAP,can't wait to read more of it!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely sweet tales ... First one with choco lava cake ...

Innocent eyes and the smirking eyes... 😉

The second one is my personal favorite amoung the two ...😆

Waiting for the third one ...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Superb awesome these are so good amazing but please can you expand the second one it's seems to be short I want to know what wil happen when they will fall in love amd what about niara please it's a request

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