#2Rewriting YHM Living for each other:Pt-16;Pg-05;6/2/17 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
a naughty raman is always adorable
he was teasing her in front of all
adi seeing d difference between her n shagun
madrasan seems in mood
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DikshaN

waiting for the next update and congratulations for new thread

thankew dear hope u liked it too!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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R u alive Shreya .I miss u so much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART-16



Resting his forehead on hers, he groaned lowly unable to contain his urges.

"Madrasan! Blame yourself for my struggle", he husked into her ear, nibbling it, breaking her from her stupor.

As her mind flew back to the present, the momentarily gone worry got back into her eyes, which was noticed by him. He quickly maneuvered them in such a way that she lay safe upon him and asked her to shoot her worries. She explained how excited Ruhi was as she gifted this gown and requested her to dress up in the same which is quite uncomfortable for her to roam around in the party.

He just unfastened her already messed up hair, allowing it to fall freely to the sides of their faces and softly whispered

"Trust me!"

Ducking his head up, he pressed a deep kiss onto her heart making her smile gently. As he saw her serene grin, he peppered her face with tender kisses and sucked at places making her land into a pile of giggles.

"I owe Ruhi, so much, for this dress" he snickered.

"Raman! You are spoiling my make-up" Ishitha whined unable to stop the blush creeping onto her cheeks.

"Wow! Akka, you're looking gorgeous" Mihika gasped.

"Chitti! I brought this dress for Ishima online. Simmi bua helped me" Ruhi proudly exclaimed, pulling her mother and pecking her cheek.

"But Bhabhi, are you sure that you're comfortable in this dress?" asked Mihir concerned.

Ishitha just smiled at him and ruffled his hair lovingly which had him nestling into her like a kid. Her thoughts revolving around, how she had got a concerned brother in the form of Mihir. Her Bala jiju was definitely like her brother, but a mature one. With Mihir and Romi around she found the younger brothers she never had. They were both protective and child-like.

Shagun fumed looking at the duo, envying Ishitha for the affection which she never got from her own brother.

"Get away from my wife, you nut!" Raman growled at them, breaking them apart.

"Mihir! Why don't you attend the party with Mihika?" he asked for which Mihika eagerly agreed.

"Okay done! So meet you people at the party" he left holding Ishitha holding her by the waist.

Settling himself in the passenger seat, he gestured Ishitha to drive making her smile at his attempts of drifting her attention towards something other than her attire, she never tried before.

"Raman! Thanks for this and asking Mihika to attend the party. I know it's just to make me comfortable" she expressed her gratitude igniting the engine. He gave a smile which got her suspicious as it had a mischievous glint coated. She shrugged it for time being and enjoyed the drive in the brightly-lighted city.

"Ishitha! Stop the car" Raman asked her suddenly while she looked around puzzled, slowing down the car. But before she can ask him anything, he was walking towards the small Dhaba( Inn) they visited last time. Drowning in the memories of their last visit, her face adorned a beautiful smile and she failed to notice Raman getting in the car.

"Madrasan! Let's go" he said startling her and disposed of the bags he brought onto the back seat.

"Raman! What's going on? Why did you get the food, when we are supposed to have it in the party?" she asked for which he grabbed her closer and whispered against her lips

"Madrasan! It's a surprise"

She drove as he guided and soon they were in a secluded place. As they passed through the gate, Raman nodded at the watchman and he let them in. They drove more into the area until he asked her to stop. As she tilted her window, a smile decorated her face as the smell of the wet soil pleasured her nostrils. She saw the big trees on the both sides of the narrow lane with the headlights of the car brightening the place.

"Raman" her voice held both surprise and happiness.

"Hmm...Madam! I thought to bring you to this place after the marriage thinking it might give you some rest. But looking at my sexy biwi I have changed my plans" he emphasized on the word sexy leaving her blushed.

"But Raman, you said that it's an important party" she was cut off by him.

"That's why I have sent Mihir and Mihika" he raised his brows with a mischievous smile skipping a beat of her heart.

Cupping the side of his face she slowly brought her lips closer to his and rubbed against them. They kissed each other gently before breaking it and Raman pushed his seat backward pulling Ishitha onto his lap at the same time, not once breaking his eyes off hers.

His mouth chased hers again, but not close to the sweet one earlier. It was fierce and demanding, to consume all her thoughts. She held his head close to the skin of her throat and chest as his teeth and lips took full advantage of her attire. His left hand went deeper into her back loosening the cloth around while the other was revealing her slender legs as she sat her knees folded.

"Ra...man" she breathed out.

"No one can enter this place without my permission, let alone see us in this position" he assured her and resumed his job at hand. As they made out till they had their desires satiated for time- being. She had her head placed onto the warm chest of his as she managed to take off few buttons of his shirt. He took out the food he brought and fed her, having few bites himself.

"Raman! These are so tasty. Do I make this good?" she asked raising her head.

"Yep...these are good. But I love my madrasi paratha more" he kissed her cheek chuckling as she shied away.

"This can be termed as a date. Thanks for having me here Mr.Bhalla" she said smiling away.

"Pleasure is all mine, my lady" he replied before they laughed out.

As he cleaned his hands, he tangled her legs around his waist crunching her robe to make her comfortable. He carried her out of the car and seated her onto the bonnet. Turning his back to her, he smiled as he felt her hugging him almost immediately.

"Raman! I love you" she kissed his ear thanking him in her own way.

"Ishitha! Do you know how much I love star gazing?" he revealed a new side of him.

"From my childhood, I felt at peace whenever I gazed at them. You know I aimed to be an astronaut" he said chuckling.

"Raman! Tell me more na..." she asked eagerly tightening her hands and bringing him much closer to her.

She was a very good listener while he told her all the science of star birth and various concepts around it. They shared many things about their interests and likes.

"Raman! Please na give me that stone. I'll hit that branch and get that flower when it falls down" she pointed both the pebbles and flowers.

"Use this! One of our romance intruders will be gone" he gave her his phone making her ask for the stone sternly. He bent down and took a pebble but threw it directly into the tree. Puffing, Ishitha got down the car slipping off her heels and took another stone hitting the branch.

"It's my turn now" Raman smirked.

Both of them took many chances before Ishitha could really hit the high branch and get the flower.

"Flower bhi hai, Handsome banda bhi hai... Come on Propose me!" he naughtily asked making her hit him playfully. She tickled him laughing more than him, while he grabbed her hands and did the same to her till she was begging him to stop, panting hard. They hugged each other tightly before making their way to the car and leaving home. Tiptoeing they entered into their room and rolled into a peaceful slumber in each other's arms.

Both of them cast their eyes down as the family was glaring them in the breakfast table.

"Where were you last night Raman?" Mr.Bhalla asked him sternly.

"Papa!I texted you that we were in my site" Raman replied.

"When did you text me? After Mihir almost a panic attack that he couldn't find you people in the party even after it had been two hours since you people left" his father asked him again only to have Raman mentally slap Mihir for being overly-concerned.

"Don't repeat this again" he continued, his voice softer seeing the guilty eyes of his daughter-in-law.

"What were you people doing there, jiju?" Mihika asked naughtily lightening the atmosphere.

"Ask your dufus fiance. He disturbed me last night with his continuous calls and made Papa shout at me" Raman replied having Mihir looking him with puppy-eyes. Raman just glared at him before gorging onto his breakfast without sparing a look at the latter.



Sorry for the extreme late update. Will try to update the next ones earlier. Its completely an ishra-update just to relieve you people from the shit cvs are showing us. Hope it serves its purpose.


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Edited by shreya303 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Kya baat hai somebody back after a year..
Its superb update.
I totally love it..
CVS aur friendship torture se kuch time ke nijat mila.
How beautiful is.Raman wants to astronaut..yeh idea kaha se aeya..welcome back..
Now update next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Yes it is...
It's a complete lovable ishra update...
It's superb...
But fell as a chotu update...
Pls do give regular updates...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Ong update after so long
Beauty update
Fully ishra
Raman wanted to become a astronautlijed how Ishita wanted to listen to him
Beautiful pair they r

Pls update the next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
beautiful update dear
and an ishralicious update by u after so long
plz try to give regular updates if possible I really miss this story
such a relief this update is from CVS torture
ishra spent some lovely romantic time with each other
how I wish ishra have a cute convo like ur story in the show too
so Raman wanted to become an astronaut
hehe poor him got firing from papaji for not informing and Mihir got a mini panic attack not seeing them at the party
do continue soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
and plz pm me the next update if possible 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Update after sooo long...
Superb...
Lovely update..

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