Inopinatum - A PriVeer Short OS

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome harshu...

I too liked PriVeer...but in the show now they made it so horrible... but i loved to read it in your version because you gave it a very different colour...so I loved it...its tooo good...

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WriterAtHeart

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Posted: 8 years ago

I will blame you if I get Diabetic.
How can you write so sweet and such adorable stuff?

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twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow! This was lovely! I mostly stay away from fanfics in this forum since I no longer watch the show and don't ship the canon couple... But I fell hard for ACP when he walked into the Oberoi household the very first time and continue to ship this couple in my heart. For someone like me, what you have written is like an oasis in the desert. The cute interaction mixed in with the undertone of the hint that Prinku has unleashed a fount of romance in the hardened officer, revealed a side to him that no one had known even existed...was absolutely delightful!

You are one talented writer and you have created a beautiful scene of domestic bliss and intimacy. Absolutely loved it! Am so glad that you decided to watch the old scenes since it inspired you to come up with something so magnificent.

Love,

Twerps.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome harshu...
I too liked PriVeer...but in the show now they made it so horrible... but i loved to read it in your version because you gave it a very different colour...so I loved it...its tooo good...

Hi Aparna!
Thank you so much.
They looked good together, earlier.
Oh I am absolutely not watching show at all. Caught a glimpse of Rudra in wedding and the new girl roped opposite him. Otherwise, I havent seen IB in long but I get you there, when you meant they are destroyed. I am glad you had a nice read and liked this one.

Much Love
-Harshada

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Sam98

@Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

Harshada!!! this was FABULOUS- a little "Inopinatum" I must say seeing the current turn of PriVeer 😆 but I cannot complain to say the least, for you have more than make up for the lacklustre job GulNeet have done of the pair! I loved the simplicity of the story but also how beautifully you have written it! I am no Priveer shipper after their butchering- but your fic has made me feel as if there is a little hope left 😳 It was super sweet- like Kulfi on a rainy day! Amazing Only complaint- I want more 😆 Do write some more!!

Love
Sam 😳 😉

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitya14
Beautiful again!
Not much a PriVeee fan though but couldnt resist opening the thread seeing your name.
I can really read anything by you... without caring on whom it has been written because you simply write beautiful.
In love with your every story!!! Keep writing.

Stay Blessed
-Nitya

Hi Nitya!
You have left me speechless. I am actually at loss of words. I dont really know what to say.
Thank you so much. Though I am not sure if I deserve such high praises but they do mean a lot to me.

Much Love
- Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Awesome..
Penned down beautifully

Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked it.

Much Love
-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: WriterAtHeart
I will blame you if I get Diabetic.
How can you write so sweet and such adorable stuff?

Res

Oh my god 😆
That was really sweet of you ❤️ Thank you so much. Unres if and when time permits.

Much Love
-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: twerping
Wow! This was lovely! I mostly stay away from fanfics in this forum since I no longer watch the show and don't ship the canon couple... But I fell hard for ACP when he walked into the Oberoi household the very first time and continue to ship this couple in my heart. For someone like me, what you have written is like an oasis in the desert. The cute interaction mixed in with the undertone of the hint that Prinku has unleashed a fount of romance in the hardened officer, revealed a side to him that no one had known even existed...was absolutely delightful!
You are one talented writer and you have created a beautiful scene of domestic bliss and intimacy. Absolutely loved it! Am so glad that you decided to watch the old scenes since it inspired you to come up with something so magnificent.
Love,
Twerps.

Hi Twerps!

Thank you so much for the lovely and kind words. I get you there, when you say, you stay away from fanfics in this forum. Honestly speaking, I don't even remember when I watched IB last. I had joined this forum in pretty initial days, when I used to like ShivIka but as the time passed, show became for me. I, am someone, who is pretty selective in what I do, be it watching a serial or reading something. So, for now, I am only watching one show on a regular basis and that is PA. Coming to shipping a couple... there have been only two couples I can say I am a fan of... Three I would say. Fortunately, events happening in the show do not affect my writing. I mean, I can write, even if the show and the couple isn't doing good😆 because I hardly write on-track. I really like Subha Rajput. She is so pretty, isn't she? For me, most beautiful girl in IB.

That is so sweet of you.I am extremely glad to know, you enjoyed reading this. Woah, did you just call this randomly written piece 'magnificent' ? Ah, thank you so much but I am not sure if this piece deserves this much appreciation but it does mean a lot. Coming from a brilliant writer like you, itself is amazing. Thanks for dropping by.

Much Love

-Harshada

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