Removing 'Res'. I can't believe the day has come when I am finally the first one to respond/res. I'm a big fan of your writing and truly wanted this 1 opportunity someday. Thanks to luck and your surprise update!!
I don't have words to describe your beautiful writing and trail of thoughts that is shaping up the story.
Re Note: So you now realize you had a writer or creator in you since the beginning. Great! I feel it is a special talent as you can think ahead of time like God would and spin out creations and stories. Its a very selfless nature and only a few posses. You should consider yourself lucky and not let this go wasted. This applies to all the wonderful writers btw. I'm just more close to you.
There was no mention of Kanha this time... I might be getting used to connecting the two parallels and hence noticed it this time.
The Pendulums of relationships very appropriate in this situation. The point is here the nature of change in this context. Like a Pendulum, both Geet and Ana being the opposite side of pendulum but also changing with time. The point to be noted here was that both of these were the 2 most important women in his life right now.
He is mad at Arjun. a.) For messing up with his sister and b.) For touching Geet in-appropriately. Both of these cases are not acceptable to Maan and he finds himself helpless and defeated as this was a secret both kept from him - the 2 most important women in his life. He probably feels like a failure somewhere to not gain their trust and it hurts... big time!
Maan's coping mechanism with anger is justified. He is broken and can't damage things in his anger... it strange the medicinal power time can have. Mind is a funny machine, how it reacts in situations cannot be predicted by any human or computer. That's why its impossible to replicate. He is heart broken and feeling betrayed right now and wants to think logically right now and for that he needs time.
Geet is our adorable Geet. She can't imagine what storm hit her and is bearing the aftermath of it. She is connecting everything with her destiny, her past. She was left alone at major turning points of her life and this seems to be another one... her last days don't have a good track record so far although that's changing now. I'm happy for her.
The restlessness Geet has of being left alone, unable to reach Maan... the one person she has opened her heart to, is taking her back to her fears and insecurities. Being lonely is a very sad situation. Believe me, no one wants it and no one likes it. No matter how anti-social you are. Everyone wants an anchor, a family, a special someone... it could be anyone. But this is a basic human need.
Geet sees a new face of Maan.. "her" Maan. Did you notice Ms. Kawaii wrote that? "He was not her Maan... he was someone else!" Somewhere her heart knows Maan is hers, but her mind has not accepted it yet. The story is taking us there gradually and i'm loving this progression.
Arjun was not Geet's secret how could Geet tell Maan about him? I think this is very aptly put. I can relate to this as I'm a very similar person. Anytime a friend confined into me, I can never mention that to anyone as its not my secret to tell anyone else. If you do, you are breaking the trust the person has put into you and that only leads to gossips and bad relations. I think Geet was right in her stance. I would have done the same of convinced Ana to share it with Maan in the first place.
Maan is justified in his fears of not being able to protect his two most precious people and the lack of trust they had in him. What can be done now? Maan hates lies and this was one big one. Gosh!
Maan had his shortcomings and its good to know he knew how to handle them... but that was leaving Geet in pain and alone... glad he realized this soon. Time my friend, Time... is a great medicine!
Geet making cookies for Maan? Really... lol. I think she also has her coping mechanisms that just needs some distraction. Lesson learned for Geet - do not bake when you are sad.
After Maan cooled off, he realized the damage his anger might have done. He knows Geet too well and knew she would be alone and sad and he could not give priority to his anger over Geet. He finally realized it!
Maan got restless when he heard a drunk Geet. He could not take a chance, his little storm was in a mess and needed him. For him nothing else mattered after that.
Alcohol is the 2nd best healer after Time. Isn't it? Maan needed time and Geet needed Alcohol to get over this situation. Both had their own coping mechanisms. 😳 My coping mechanism... both time and alcohol and like Geet I too get high with just a few sips of beer. I wonder how much has he had so far?
Monster Puppy talking was a very very cute scene. How can you think of such amazing ideas? Geet could not believe Awara was talking and he sounded just like his Monster Maan. Can people be this crazy when drunk? I have not gone that far yet... but i'm sure that is an entertaining scene for others to watch.
Geet said she missed Maan to Awaara and Maan heard that too. Did you see that? She said - "You know what, I miss him...he just doesn't care that I'm all alone". Well Mr. Maan, don't you think this little Tornado of yours is very cute when drunk and you are getting a glimpse of her heart in this state? Why don't you take her to pubs instead of dinner next time? You will get double treat, drink and a drunk Geet who is not afraid to confess her true feelings that she herself does not know of.
Geet touching Maan to convince herself that he is really there... Maan controlling the feeling. Thanks for telling us what Maan feels... that makes us more connected to him as now we know he is affected with her mere touch. He needs more such moments to lose his control someday. Another reason to have a drunk Geet in future. 😉
They held hands again and sat on the couch... I love these moments, to me these are moments of pure love which is beyond physical attraction... its more of a spiritual connection. Just like that of Radha and Krishna. Their touch connects them to each other like no other and nothing else is needed to convey their love and belonging to each other. Irrespective... yeah Dil maange more. Someday, perhaps! After all we all are humans and so is Maan 😳
Maan likes girls who are messy and clumsy... I don't buy this. I don't know anyone who likes someone messy and clumsy. Where is such a person? I'm sure Maan likes Geet for many more reasons and does not mind her being clumsy. Love makes the world go round and makes people do something they cannot even imagine... like in this case... love is making Maan someone he is not... he does not mind the imperfections, the weak, the fragile person Geet it. Love is funny, it can make everything wrong about a person look right and that's probably why Maan is saying this. In a similar situation with a different girl, I'm sure Maan would not fall for that person.
The big confession, now I did not see that coming. Wonder what will happen next? I hope not the prologue yet. We want this FF to go beyond 100 chapters at the least. Let's see how you do it, Ms Talented Writer!
Maan leaving the wedding for his love... this is just the beginning, aage aage dekho hota hai kya... 😳
Can't wait for the next fast update now!👏
Finally - I'm the first, I'm the first... I am the 'First' today! Hope I didn't disappoint you my lovely Ms. Writer. 😳
Edited by TaranaGeet - 6 years ago
comment:
p_commentcount