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ESCAPE PLAN !


He was standing at the door - baffled - when Preet pat him on his back.

He turned.

" what did he say "

"Huh"

" What did Nihal said to you "

"Nothing "

He quickly said and went to fold his blanket.

Anything to avoid her right now.

If only it was that easy to ignore her !

She followed him and kept staring at him unless he get annoyed and moved to collect his shoes and shocks to put them in place. She followed him there too.

" What do you want "

" He definately said something ?? "

She waited for a reply but nothing.

"

Why are you not telling you ! What so special ! Huh ??"

No reply.

"Okay fine !! I'll go ask him ?"

He stopped for a moment but continued.

"Then tell me why are you blushing so hard ?? "

"What ! I am not blushing !"

He noticed her Victorious smile. She know how to get through him. He clenched his fist and moved again.

"You know you are blushing ! So tell me why ?? "

Not a word from his side.

He noticed the blithe in her voice.

"What's she is so happy about ! Is it this much fun! She is bugging him for her enjoyment. So now I am toy !" he wondered.

" Did he compliment you ?? Nah ! Not possible ! "

He glared at her but kept quite.

"What so special that you can't even tell your wife ".

"Ignore her ! It's a bait "

He kept cleaning the room and she kept following him.

He picked her lehnga from the carpet and placed it on her suitcase after folding it. She pulled him -

" I am talking to you ! PATIDEV "

Raj looked behind her and went to get her choli (blouse) which was on the display on his couch. He was about to pick it up when she push him and picked and hide it behind her.

" Don't touch my clothes ! "

Raj watched her with an open mouth in disbelief.

" Is she completely mad ! She is standing in my clothes asking me not to touch hers - her clothes which by the way are spreading everywhere in the room."

He was about to retort when a voice came:

" leave it ! There's no point in arguing with her. "

He walked upto bed and collecting her jewellery but he knew she won't give up.

"You know I won't stop ! so just tell me "

Raj sighed leaving all the jwelery on the nightstand. He turned to her and folded his hand in a relaxed manner.

" Why do you care so much !"

" I don't ! I am just curious "

She played cool.

" And why's that so "

" Because I know it's about me ! "

He became tense.

" Did she heard him ! No she won't be asking him if she'd know it's abooouuut... - her...- giving him hickeys - right ??"

"Or may be she will - this girl is SHAMELESS !"

He tried to speak but couldn't form words.

" I think I have a right to know something when it associate me "

" You are so full of yourself "

"So are you ? So what "

"It's nothing ! - not related to you "

" a women's intuition PATIDEV !"

"Is that so !"

An idea crosses his mind ! As in the moment he has only one place to go. His Only escape.

"Then tell me what I am thinking now " he said slyly.

" And now you are deaf ! " He watch her huffed in exasperation.

"I said I am intuitive not a mind - reader ! And don't try to change the topic "

Raj felt an uncontrollable urge to smile at her sluggish behaviour but controlled himself.

" I heard what you said - so tell me what you intuition says about this "

And the next second he was standing next to her - face to face or nose to nose - so close - close enough to make her shiver and raise her heartbeat.

Raj noticed she dropped the choli she was hiding behind her out of nervousness.

"Bingo !" He thought.

" Ops ! Your intuition dropped your blouse " he chuckled.

He was elated by her reaction. He could hear her heartbeat conducting through tiny air gap between them. Her eyelid dialated and she was shell-shocked by his movements - she can't even move.

He leaned even closer, enhaling into her hair, he whispered :

" And what about this "

He nudge at her ear with his nose.

He noticed she shifted a little engrossed in his closeness. Her eyes closed - lips parted.

"And it's done ! " He backed - up satisfied by his effect on her.

He waited until she opened her eyes. She seemed surprised -

"And a little disappointed !

Shut up !! "

When she finds him at a distance.

" Your intuition sucks !"

With that Raj took a run, something he never did before. He ran to grab his towel from the hanger and made his way into the bathroom.

He was glad he was fast as when she realised, she too moved to chase him but he closed the door just in time - ON HER FACE ! Ha ha ha !

Raj leaned by the door and took heavy breaths. He'd never thought he has to outrun somebody like that.

"Nobody ever thought theywould have to runaway like that ! From their wife, their beautiful fragile small tiny little wife. INTO THE BATHTROOM !!Could things be worse !"

Speak of the devil and she'll at your door yelling -

" You cannot hide there forever ! And Whenever you will come out - I'll be waiting... HONEY !!!"

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Another short update " sorry but I don't know what's wrong. I need to get them out of room to start something starting . Let's see if I can carry on or skip a few details.'

Whatever you feel about this update let me know.

It's another part will be updates tomorrow hope you guys like it.

Today's EP was awesome. That's so my Preet. Besides I was also planning the same sequence - fearless Preet ... Making Raj nervous. But they did it quite well. I doubt if I can do any better. Let's see what happens tomorrow. Raj was so shocked so miserable. Manipulative Preet loved her.

Edited by Tanu221 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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funny update🤣 really loved today chapter👏 . btw are you going to change to title/story name?
Edited by rani7131 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanu221


Hey everyone this is my first ever anything. It was intended to be an os but words flow people so I decided to put a series of not so related os. I hope you like it please comment and tell me how I can I improve. Enjoy 😳



Game over or Game start


"Do something or atleast say something !! This can't be it !" Her inner voice was screaming. She cannot just stand there and watch him snatching away the tiniest of hope she had in humanity. She can't let that happen, she is no loser after all she is the shah of pawaniya.
So she did what she could think of.
" Ha ha ha ha !! " Amba pawaniya suddenly got out of gloomy thoughts to watch her youngest daughter laughing like a devil with her back towards her.
Harjeet Bajwa stopped in his tracks, afraid to look back cause just when he thought he had the last laugh someone was laughing and that too a women and not Amba Pawaniya then who ???
Jagan couldn't be more annoyed, he just realised his parjai made a fool out of himself that too for 18 years. Now that he decides to grasp the ongoing drama it looks like it not over yet.
Gunjan was just about to go and hug her sister to provide her a shoulder in her miserable situation when her not so ordinary sister decided to switch to exact opposite of crying.
Ravi was memorizing all the time when manu helped her crossing all the lines and now she understands why he was so different from all the men around the pind. And it's because he isn't a men. But this beautiful girl's plight is breaking Ravi's heart and just when she thought she should go to console her she started laughing !!
Mohini and Nihal exchanged a unknown look to each other. For the first time in their life time this devil duo is out of plans and that made them scared so scared that they left this beautiful opportunity to mock pawaniyas.
Sukhi veer ji can't think anymore he is just sad. His lovable small brother is a girl ?? So pretty but a girl ?? But does that matter, all he know is manu is smart and not just smart manu is so slyly smart whether a girl or boy so he knew Manpreet pawaniya is upto something and he is going to be his ally just like always.
Everyone else is just shocked and silent - wide eyes open mouth.
But out of all these people there was only one person who was shaken the most by this hideous laugh of his wife. It was Raj - " wait !! did he just call her his wife ?? No it was a slip. She is no wife. she is just a pawn in his plan by which she should be dishevelled by now from crying somehow all he can hear is a loud devious laugh!! How is that possible? And that's not it ?? He has a bigger problem - the tinge in his heart that was paining him since the moment he decided to stop his play and reveal the truth to his beautiful innocent wife - not wife !! Pawn - beautiful, innocent pawn - that tinge is no longer there. He feels a little relaxed now that she can laugh even if that means his plan failed in its last stage and all his efforts turn into ash ! No he can't let that happen. He need to go back and face that lady who is not leaving his thoughts since he met her. Wait ! What ! Oh no he need to stop thinking before he zoned out to reminiscize the few moment when she laughed. He need to put his demons on and turn back !!! "

u be had me in splits. Too funny. Your vocabulary is fine.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankxxx for reading😳😳 and I know I don't have a very impressive vocab but I am trying... Let me know if you find any improvements. ... English in not the first language that's why it's so hard ...😲😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani7131

funny update🤣 really loved today chapter👏 . btw are you going to change to title/story name?

Yes I am searching for names... Suggest me everyone.. 😃
And I'll be posting it's part 2 another short chap by the evening ... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting for update 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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THE LITTLE MESS MAKER !


" Hickeys "

Raj repeated watching himself in the mirror. He caress his fresh wound and others below his Adams Apple.

To be honest he can't blame Nihal ! These did look like hickeys. Anyone else would have thought the same.

"Crazy women ??? Why does she has do that ? I was lying in the same bed as her ! But there is not a single scratch on her Seee!! how hard it is to sleep without injuring another person ! Huh ?

" Did I do something...while... No ! I was too drunk for that ! I fell three times for god's sake !!"

He checked his head bump. " Still hurts"

Considering the morning events - she is a heavy sleeper ! No doubts !! So this all must have happened when he pulled her in the morning. Besides most of the red marks on the chest are of lipstick. He looked at his blushed cheeks in the mirror.

" Which is a good thing because it means no nails ! " He corrected his wild thoughts, still feeling the warmth on his cheeks.

" Raj ! Get out ! It's been 30 minutes ! "

He heard through her banging on the door.

" If you didn't come out now ! I'll ... I'll ??"

He waited but nothing.

He's been staring at himself for 30 minutes. Simply because he didn't want to erase those lipstick marks. These marks felt like souvenir.

"And she doesn't need to know that !"

Its not his fault. He had no intention of bathing. But she kept mugging him with her -

" Whaaat waaas that !!"

" What did he say??? "

" Why are you blushing "

" He said something that made you blush ! Hahahaha ! Seriously !"

" Come on !! Tell me na !! Please"

"Why are you not telling me "

" Okay ! If won't tell me ? I'll go ask him"

"PATIDEV !!"

and the most recent

"HONEY !"

He didn't spared her a look and ignored her by cleaning his room.

" she is such a mess ! Within hours she made his room like kinder garden ! "

"Duppatta on the bed, pillows on the floor, sheet under the bed, blanket near the door, lehnga (skirt) on carpet, blouse on the couch !! And now her anklets on the sink ! "

"Thank god ! Nihal didn't came in ! " He mumbled.

"And Who is spreading these rumours about girls being cleanines freak or keeping things carefully !! It's like she leaves litter behind as her traces ! Such a mess maker ! "

He admired the anklet in his hand. He loved it - whenever she walks around in those making that jingling sound. When he was injured and she came to bandage him. Her anklets announced her presence even before he saw her entering in that blue salwar- kameez.

" Blue suits her "

"And red "

"And yellow too"

" Every colour suits her"

"No ! She suits to all colours "

" You are crazy"

"I knowww "

"Shut up now"

He shook his head to jerk off the memories. She didn't only messed up his room but him life . If they had been distributing a nobel for messing around, she would definately make the pind (village) proud.

"Such a gem !"

He heard the clicking of door followed by her voice.

" If you will not come out in next 5 minutes ! I'll lock this door and go. Then you can enjoy there for the whole day !

"Errr !!" Raj clutched his head.

"Now a man can't have his little moment of peace - even in the bathroom ! Ha ! Perks of getting married." He thought.

He take off his clothes hurriedly and covered his body with foam as much he can within time. Wrapping the towel around his waist he opened the door only he be hit by her fist - knocking on his chest.

"Ops !" She backed off cleaning her hand, " sorry "

He felt concious when she watched him up and down -

" What do you want now !"

He asked covering up his embarassment.

" Why are you covered in soap "

" Because that's how people take bath now a days. It's the latest fashion you know "

" For 30 minutes "

"Yes ! Any problem "

" Yesss ! I need to get ready because I have other important works - other than to pamper myself and woo girls "

Raj raised an eyebrow and next words came out deliberately -

" So you get wooed by me "

"That's not the point "

"Then what is "

" GET OUT ! Let me finish then you can have the washroom for the day"

" But I don't want to"

"And I don't care "

" How about I don't get out and you come in "

"Huh "

" Oh !! So now your are deaf ! I am asking you to join me in now the shower "

Raj has no idea what he was saying and how he was able to act so cool. May be her randomness is contagious.

" Why would I do that"

" Well ! You came barge into my room then my bed so that makes the bathroom next target ? It isn't ???"

" GET OUT !! " She was stern.

"Join me " he was firm.

"Okay " she was cool.

"What !" He was confused.

" If that's what you want ... HONEY !" She mimicked her earlier expression.

He watched in horror as she turned to pick her clothes and made her way to him. With her every step his head was spinning. The only thing he could think of is - " CLOSE THE DOOR ! YOU IDIOT !"

So that's what he did. He slammed the door on her face again.

" Ohooo !! PATIIIDEV !! If You keep slamming the door like that - soon there'll be no doors left "

And he heard her laughing hysterically.

" You can't stay there forever " he remembered her words.

" God help me "

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Two more days and I'll be done with exams... Then I promise I'll bring a dinchak update ... Till then let me know... If you like this chapter 😳😳

Edited by Tanu221 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani7131

waiting for update 😃

And you got it... This one's for you😛😛
I don't for how long we can go on like this... No one reads it ...then why are we writing. ... Can't we invite people to read it😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it. I love your writing skill and story . Poor raj. 🤣.
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Originally posted by: Tanu221

And you got it... This one's for you😛😛
I don't for how long we can go on like this... No one reads it ...then why are we writing. ... Can't we invite people to read it😭

Don't worry people are reading . there is a lot of view in your story more that 2000. I guess many of them are silent reader I guess. I'm sorry if I'm wrong. thanks for the update. love your story. like I said to you before I love queenfarie story to but she it's not updating. probably busy.

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