Soothing the Fire-Shivika FF UPDATED(Chapter-20 on pg-144)06/09 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sandy11WARIS

hey... can u tell when r you going to update the next part... im dying to read it.

Hopefully by tomorrow,dear.❤️
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#32

Originally posted by: moon99

Okay, I just have to say this 😳 😳

I was just scrolling down the page when I read the last line of the story and guess what?

I had a million BUTTERFLIES in my stomach!!!!! 😲

Like does that even make sense? It was one line my eye accidently caught when scrolling and this is what it did to me! 😆

So just imagine what I probably went through during the entire story!?! 😳

-Sims 🤗

P.S EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART! 😃

Thankyou so much,Sims.Your lovely words mean the world to me❤️ Will try and update by tomorrow, and if not then surely the day after 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's freaking hawt.☺️😳 Awaiting for next update.😳
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Ch-2

Part-A

When Shivaay's lips touched hers, she found a missing piece of herself.

When Shivaay's lips touched hers, stars bloomed in her veins.

Annika had never kissed before, but God, if this is what kissing felt like, she wanted to do it over and over and over...

But only with Shivaay.

They were a tangled mess, the both of them.Entwined tongues and clashing teeth.Hands all over each other, knotting in hair and lingering on waist.Though inexperienced, Annika matched Shivaay with equal fervour, and this excited Shivaay to no ends.

For Shivaay, kissing Annika was heaven.She fitted perfectly in his arms, and he poured all that he had been feeling- the passion, the longing, the yearning- into the kiss.

God, she tastes heavenly, he thought.

Unfortunately breathing was necessary and they had to break apart after a few minutes.Even then, Shivaay kept his arms wrapped around her waist, and moved his mouth to her neck. Running down his lips from behind her ear, he placed a particularly delicious bite on the hollow of her neck, that had Annika moaning in pleasure.She tightened her grip on his shoulders, and was about to bring down his mouth back on her own,when they heard Rudra'a voice from the hall.

"Annika didiii,is dinner ready?" he called out.

Shivaay and Annika sprang apart. Staring at each other's dishevelled appearance, they tried to get their breathing under control.

Suddenly, Annika's eyes widened.

"I forgot to prepare dinner in all this!What will I do now?!"

Shivaay raised an eyebrow.

"And that's the first thing you say after such an awesome make-out session.How insulting!"

Annika blushed.

"Shut up, Shivaay," she muttered, pushing him away to reach the counter. "I need to make dinner for everyone, and almost nothing is ready yet!"

Shivaay came to stand beside Annika and casually draped and arm around her waist.

"Don't worry, okay?I'll prepare the puris while you cook the potatoes.It'll be faster that way.I'm sure the family can wait 15 more minutes for dinner."

"But Shivaay-"

"Sshh," Shivaay interrupted her, bringing his lips close to hers. "No buts and ifs. I know you don't like taking help from others, but this is the only option we have now.Unless, ofcourse, you'd like the to tell the family exactly why it took you so long to make dinner..." he trailed off with a smirk.

Annika groaned in frustration, and seeing no other way, agreed to his help.

They started working in perfect sync, with Shivaay expertly rolling the dough, and Annika preparing the curry. What made her job difficult was the fact that whenever Shivaay needed something that was near to her, he would come unnecessary close, and linger unnecessarily long.His hand would randomly brush against hers when passing, and at times, he would just stop his work and stare at her distractedly. This got unnerving after a while, and Annika turned to him with a frown.

"Will you stop staring at me?I'm trying to work here!"

"I can't help it," Shivaay answered with a shrug. "You're an eye-candy,you know." He said with a wink.

"I didn't know you were such a romantic person," Annika mumbled.

"Neither did I,actually.Maybe you bring out this side of me."

Annika blushed again.If this continued, she would die of an overdose of romance and flirting, and the stupid Baggad Billa would be to blame.

~

About half an hour later, the entire family was gathered at the dining table, while Annika served them. Shivaay had gone to his room to freshen up. Before leaving the kitchen, he had placed a soft peck on her lips, and moved her hair to one side. Annika later realised that that had been to hide the love bite he had left on her neck.

"Annika didi, where are you lost?Give me dinner na, I'm starving!" Rudra's voice brought Annika out of her thoughts.

"But Cry baby, won't you become FAT if you eat oily Aloopuri?" Soumya teased him.

"It's my cheat day today, Sumo.So shut up and let me eat."

Everyone laughed at their cute banter, but Annika's eyes were transfixed on Shivaay who had just entered the hall.

"Good evening everyone," he greeted his family, and gave a devillious smirk to Annika, who blushed and turned away.This did not go unnoticed by Dadi. In fact she had also noticed the skip in Shivaay's steps as he walked in. Maybe her wish was starting to be fulfilled.

Dinner passed in merriment, with everyone complimenting Annika on the food, and asking her to join in too. When Om, out of the blue, asked Shivaay what he thought of the food, he was startled.

"Um, it's good, I guess.Yeah,it's good."

Look at this bheegi billi, Annika thought with a smirk. He was acting so confident when alone, but in front of the family, all his tadi has gone down the drain.

After dinner, when it was time for Annika to leave, Shivaay as usual, instantly offered to drop her home. Annika didn't refuse this time; they had to talk, and this would probably be the best time, without any risk of being overheard. Om and Rudra found it weird that she agreed all of a sudden, but didn't say anything. Instead, they only gave teasing smiles to Shivaay.

"Have a good ride, bhaiyaa!" Rudra called out as they left the Oberoi Mansion.

~

The car ride was awkward, to say the least. The air seemed to be electrically charged, and Shivaay and Annika sat in silence, lost in their own thoughts. While Shivaay was itching to get his hands on her again, Annika was wondering how to start a conversation about what had happened. Finally, they both spoke at the same time.

"Can we talk about what happened?"

"Do you want to move to the back seat?"

Have to admit, I had fun writing this part.I may change this into a 4S, depending on whether or not I can finish it within the next chapter. Part-B of chapter-2 will be updated soon!Hope you guys liked it,do leave your thoughts!

Chapter-2 Part-B

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Amazing
Shivay and Anika's make out season
Shivay Singh Oberoi ki Flirty and Romantic side😳
Bhagad Billa to Bheegi Billi infront of family😆
Shivika have different motives for the car ride
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
U r firing up the atmosphere dear👏
nailed it 😉
bhagad billa better talk before pouncing on her😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
both t parts r amazing... shivaay's jism ki bhuk coming up ?? ... omg... such a awsm update... what a makeout session...
plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Control your harmones shivaay baby
Direct backseat
Control
First talk confess to ur girl then make a move
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Sorry for being late dear. I have read first chapter just now and you updated second when I refreshed the page... amazing na...

Loved it totally..
Both the chapters are awesome...
You totally nailed it..
Continue soon..
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Hehe...the ending in particular made me squeal.
Loving it. Waiting for more.

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