Akdha ss: MY DAME; MY DOCTOR teaser for chapter 12 updated pg 73

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Hello every this is kritu. I am here with my very first story. I don't know how will this come out but I can try at least.
PROLOGUE

Site: somewhere on the highway
Thakk!! Bullet fired,Blood shot, gun powder filling the air,

Bye bye jalaluddin mohammad . may your soul rest in peace. Laughs the evil.😡

Site: hospital

doctor X: we can't operate. Its a police case. Let the police arrive first
Nurse: But doc
Doctor x: I will not
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GET THE OT READY WE ARE GOING TO OPERATE. Comes a soft yet powerful voica marking the entry of HIS DAME HIS DOCTOR in his life...

So here is the prologue of the story . please let me know I you all like it and interested in this story or not by your precious reviews.😊

Character sketch
Jalaluddin Mohammad: business man,very successful and multi billionaire,soft only to Hamida(Jalal's mom) otherwise a bull headed person. A cunning business man.

Hamida Mohammad: business woman, loves jalal. Jalal mom.

Jodha chauhan: best neurosurgeon, beautiful, passionate, untamed, bull headed yet soft, and kind hearted only to those who deserves. Very serious at work.

Aayushmann chauhan: jodha's twin bro, neurosurgeon, jodha's half life, sweet and kind hearted, only person that have key to jodha brain. Loves jodha a lot and is highly protective to her.

Mohammad family members: Mirza(jalal cousin), salima (jalal cousin), Nadira( Jalal grandmom), Adgha( jalal uncle).

Chauhan family: Bharmal, Maina, sujamal (Jo and aayu elder bro), Daya(Jo grandmom).

Chauhans and mohammads are business partners and new formed friends, but mohammad had not seen jodha and aayushmann as they are in London since 9 years.

Index

Chapter 1- pg 3
Chapter2 a- pg 7
Chapter2 b- pg 9
Chapter 3- pg 14
Chapter 4- pg 18
Chapter 5-pg 23
Chapter 6-pg 31
Chapter 7 -pg 39
Chapter 8- pg 47
Chapter 9-pg 55
Chapter 10-pg 60
Chapter 11-pg 69
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congo buddy for new story...
interesting concept...
will look forward for updates...
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Keen to read the story. Update soon.
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Nice concept! N congrats for your first story dear.
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congrats for new story...😳
waiting for more !
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Nice concept! N congrats for your first story dear.

thank u very much. And may I know your name please😊.
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

congrats for new story...😳

waiting for more !

thanks a lot dear for showing interest in the story but seriously tell me if this story is worth a try.
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Originally posted by: Kritu98

thanks a lot dear for showing interest in the story but seriously tell me if this story is worth a try.


Offcourse , u should write...am waiting for chapter .
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Congrats kritu fr ur frst story 😊
Nice prologue dear..
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Love to read 😊

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