Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Sorry sorry sorry for such a late comment...

Loved both the OSs. Particularly the KT one... you got the tone and language perfect, I could almost see and hear Rahul Dev speaking the entire thing!

I'm not a great fan of Tej but you managed to make me feel a little sorry for the man and that's an achievement!

Great writing... keep up the awesome work!

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Sorry sorry sorry for such a late comment...
Loved both the OSs. Particularly the KT one... you got the tone and language perfect, I could almost see and hear Rahul Dev speaking the entire thing!

I'm not a great fan of Tej but you managed to make me feel a little sorry for the man and that's an achievement!

Great writing... keep up the awesome work!

Really thank you glad you liked my this work ... Love to have your comments and be active soon i really love to hear from you...

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Fursat Ke Lamhon Mein, Mashroof Raahon Par...

Jo Saath Tum Chalien, Aaya Safar Ka Maza...

Aise Mujko Mile, Hai Dhoop Mein Saaye Se...

Yun Banke Aaye Ho Tum Mere Rehnuma...

Tumse Jude Kuch Aise Hain Silsile...

Dil Yeh Mera Harpal Yeh Tumse Kahe...

Thanks Brother For Being There...

Hello Peeps

I am very thankful to those who have commenting on my previous One Shot I am glad you liked it and shared you views I am very obliged to have your comments in this One Shot Series...

Above Lines are the future prediction for this One Shot Series I hope you will like this One Shot too... Hope to get lots of comment from you guys...

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Ila