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nicronyariya

@nicronyariya

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Didu loved the first part

It was so swt of jeet that he cares about Riya

But prologue dekh Kar Toh mera dil hi toot gaya...

Tragedy hi kyun...

But looking forward that what u r going to do...

Cont soon

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Sukannaya Chakraborty

@Arjunpremi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Didu sad story kiun?show main tragedy kuch kam tha kya jo ab ff main be la rahe hi.please make it happy ending.

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: NICRONY
Didu loved the first part
It was so swt of jeet that he cares about Riya
But prologue dekh Kar Toh mera dil hi toot gaya...
Tragedy hi kyun...
But looking forward that what u r going to do...
Cont soon

Thanks dear..

Glad you like it..

Stay tune to read more

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi
Didu sad story kiun?show main tragedy kuch kam tha kya jo ab ff main be la rahe hi.please make it happy ending.

Can't say about ending so soon..
Stay tune to read more dear

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Part 2:-

Abhi n Riya back to conference room n take their sits..

All are silent..Abhi is looking to Riya through corners of his eyes..

Abhi gets sad ..The girl whom he loves since childhood ..Even since he don't know what is love he loves her..But she loves someone else..

He is making himself understand to wait for riya's side ..May be it's something different..He should wait..

His attention is snatched when Sam speak up..

Sam:-abhijeet i guesses Jo bhi cases he unhe tum hi hame explain karoge toh accha hoga..

Putting out all his mind thoughts ,abhi back in cop mode..

Abhi:-mein tum logo ko apne mission ke bare me detail me nahi bata sakhta..Par important baate zarur batana chahuga..Mera mission tha "shinde gang " ke khilaf..Jo ke abhi kuch Dino Pehale take ek bahot hi badi gang thi Jo smuggling, contract killing me shamil thi..Mein iss gang ka part banake Unke khilaf kaam Kar Raha tha..So finally mere iss mission ka end ho Chuka he aur Sath hi Sath iss shinde gang ka bhi..

All except Arjun looking to him with appreciation..

Abhi:-unka gang Puri tarah finish ho Chuka he..Aur usssi mission se related Ye 3 cases hame do gayi he..

Sam:-so let's discuss these cases now..

Abhi:-first case..Imran..Shinde gang ka important aadmi ..police custody se 2 din Pehale bhag Gaya he..Usse hame pakdna he.. it's very important to catch him..

Riya:-satastic ke hisab seiImran Jaise hi log Jo aise case me police se Bach jate he Woh baad me apni khud ki gang form karke firse crime badate he ..

Abhi(smriking):-right..Jo ki hamare department me aapke Jaise research specialist he ussike wajah se aapke research ke dhyan me rakhte hue department ne decide kiya he ke ham Imran ko Usaka gang form Karne ka chance hi nahi Denge..Usse Pehale hi usse pakad lenge..

Riya give him fake glare to which abhi smiles more widely..

Arjun looking to both with sad eyes..

Sam:-second case..?

Abhi:-second case Acp shrivastav murder case he..Jo ke shinde gang me hi kiya tha..Par Kyo kiya..Aur kisane unhe iss murder ka contract diya tha..We don't know..N our case is to find the real culprit..

Shree:-n third case..?

Abhi:-iss gang se related ek minister he..Iss gang me uss minister ke liye bahot illegal kaam kiye he..Par ussmminister ke khilaf koi proof nahi..Jo ke hame collect karne he..

Sam:-ok..I guess hame one by one cases solve Karne honge..

Arjun(cutting him in mid):-nahi..Hame sabhi cases ko ek Sath hi dekhna hoga..Aur sabse Pehale hame Imran ko dundana hoga..ussise hame Baki link mil sakhti he..

Abhi:-i agree with u Arjun..

Sam:-chotu Riya hamare informers ko activate Karo..We want that Imran..Shree usake family ke phones track pe dalo..Woh unhe contact zarur karega..

Trio nodded n started doing their work..

At evening:-

All are leaving for the day..

Riya:-tum kaha Jane wale ho jeet..?

Abhi:-tum ek baar bol do toh tumhe chod ke ek second bhi na jau Kahi..

Riya rolling her eyes..

Riya:-shut up jeet..I mean Tum ka thehare ho..?

Abhi:-meri gadi toh tumpe hi aakar thehari he..

Riya:-jeet ..Stop it..I will kill u now..

Abhi(acting putting his hand on his heart):-tera Har sitam manzoor he..Tera Har gam manzoor he..Jab Tu kabool he..Toh Tera Sab kuch kabool he..

Riya started laughing..

Riya:-ab apni nautanki band Karo..Aur batao..Kaha ja Rahe ho..

Abhi(smiles):-ye cases jaldi hi khatam hone ke chances he..Jyada se jyada 1-2 months..So filhaal toh hotel me ruka hua hu..

Riya(rolling her eyes):-dimag kharab ho Gaya he Kya..?Mera ghar hote hue tum hotel me rahoge..Chalo abhi shift karege..

Abhi:-are Lekin..

Riya:-meri baat manani hi padegi tumhe..

Saying this she hold his hand n started dragging him with her..

Abhi(in dramatic way):-nahi..

Riya leave his hand n look him..

Abhi(dramatically):-nahi..Nahi..Riya..Soch lo..Muze apne ghar me Jane se Pehale Soch lo..

Riya raised eyebrow..

Abhi(dramatic way):-ek baar meine apne sasural me kadam rakha na..Fir Waha se meri arthi hi nikalegi..

Riya(started hitting):-u r just.. Unbelievable..

Abhi:-are Kya Kar rahi ho..?I m Ur senior..Aur Waise bhi Muze lag nahi Raha..

Riya:-lag nahi Raha..Ruko..

Saying this she started hitting him with more force..

Abhi run out of office..N Riya run behind him..

Choree look each other..N smiles on the duo..N left for home..

Arjun looking lost in his own world..Sam once look to Arjun..N sigh..N then left without saying anything..

At Riya's home:-

Riya n abhi shift his stuff from hotel to riya's home..Abhi is most welcome by riya's parents as they too know abhi since long time..

They enjoyed dinner with laugh n chit chat..

After then riya's parents left to sleep..Riya is sitting at tarrece..

Abhi come to her with 2 coffee mug..Riya smiles n took one mug from his hand..She smell the coffee..

N smiles more..N sip the coffee..

Riya:-umm..Wow...Tumhare hath ki coffee Muze bahot pasand he..

Abhi(smiles):-i know..Issliye toh banayi..

He too started sipping coffee..

Abhi:-hmm..Ab bata..Kya baat he..?

Riya:-kuch nahi..

Abhi:-jab muzse kuch chupa nahi sakhti toh try Kyo karti he..?

Riya sigh..

Abhi:-chal suru ho ja..

Riya:-u know..Tum nahi the..Inn one n half year me bahot kuch ho Chuka he..Papa ko do baar heart attack aa Chuka he..Aur aaj Kal woh bahot hi bimar rehate he..

Abhi:-par achanak kaise..?I mean jaha ram Muze yaad he..Uncle ko koi aise heart Ki problem nahi thi..

Riya:-unko dono bhi heart attack mere wajah se hi hue..Aur abhi bhi woh mere chinta ki wajah se hi aise bimar rehate he..

Abhi:-matlab..?

Riya:-u know na papa Aur mom muzse kitna pyar karte he..Unki ek lauti beti hi Mein..Unki duniya muzi se suru hoti he..Aur muzipe khatam bhi..Unke liye Mein hi sabse jyada important hu..

Abhi:-yah..I know..

Riya:-ek case me Muze goli lag gayi thi..uss stress ki wajah se papa ko first heart attack hua..Usse woh those thik hue..Tabhi woh exora 2 me wajah se Mein critical condition me chali gayi..Uss tension ke wajah se papa ko firse attack aaya..

Abhi:-dekh issliye vol Raha hu..Woh exora 2 wala stunt firse mat karna..

Riya shook her head in disbelief..

Abhi:-par ab toh Tu thik he..Sab thik he..Toh fir problem Kya he..?

Riya:-problem Ye he ke unhe lagne lava he ke Mein khud ko lekar bahot laparwah hu..

Abhi:-woh toh tum ho hi..Aur woh virus khake tune woh sabit bhi Kar diya he Unke samne..

Riya:-exactly..Unhe lagta he ke agar mere Upar Thodi responsibility hoti toh Mein woh kadam nahi uthati..Issliye woh meri shadi karna chahte he..Taki Mein Thodi responsible banu..Aur at least apne husband Aur family ke liye khud ki care Karu..

Abhi started laughing..

Riya:-jeet..

Abhi:-ok..Ok..

He stop laughing..

Riya:-lekin woh Ye nahi samaz Rahe ke USS waqt meri zindagi se jyada woh hazaro Jane important thi jinhe bachana zaruri tha..It's my duty to save them..Yahi toh ek police officer ka farz he..

Abhi:-yes..N i m proud of u..

He hug her with smile..N she too hug back him..

Both broke off..

Abhi:-n i m sure uncle aunty too proud of u..It's just they r little worried for u..

Riya:-hmm..Unhe samzaya bhi meine..Aur woh samaz bhi Gaye..But Ye shadi wala problem badta hi Ja Raha he..
Abhi raised eyebrow..

Riya:-u know na hamari society ..Ladki Thodi badi hui nahi ke shadi ki baate suru ho jati he..Upar se Mein..Itni padhi likhi..Job karnewali..Aur woh bhi police officer..Sabko lagta he ke Ye sahi waqt he ke Muze life me settle hone ka..Lekin Mein hu ki Mein Har ladke ka rishta reject Kar deti hu..Aur wahi Unke pareshani ki wajah he..

Abhi:-are toh problem Kya he..?Kar le na shadi..?Abhi nahi karege toh buddhi hone ke baad karegi Kya..?Aur fir Bacchae kab honge..?Kuch toh Soch..

Riya hit him playfully..

Abhi:-are Lekin Muze samaz Nahi aa Raha ke jab dulha ghodi chadne ko tayar he toh tuze Kya problem he..

Riya raised eyebrow..

Abhi:-mein..Of course kyon..?

Riya again hit him playfully..

Abhi get serious..

Abhi:-bata na..Kyon he Woh..?

Riya:-kyon..?

Abhi:-wahi..Jisake liye Tu tere parents laye hue Har ladke ko reject Kar rahi ho..

Riya:-jeet PlZ..

Abhi:-kyon he Woh Jisse itna pyar karti he ke Mera proposal bhi ignore Kar rahi ho..

Riya knows she can't hide this anymore from abhi..

Riya(softly):-arjun sir..

Abhi(mutter):-i doubt that..

N he quickly turn his face to hide his tears..

Riya turn him n make him look to her..She cup his face..

Riya:-i m sorry..Bahot buri hi na Mein..Bahot buri dost hu..Tumhara Dil Tod diya na..

Abhi hug her n started crying..

Abhi(crying):-pyar ko samza bhi nahi tha Ritz..Tabse tumse pyar kiya he meine..Tumhare Sivay kisike bare me socha nahi..Khud se bhi jyada chaha he tumhe..

Riya(too crying)::i know..

Both keep crying..

Later abhi broke hug..Wipe his tears..N wipe her tears too..

Abhi:-muze doubt hua hi tha..Jab woh baat karta he Tu usake taraf Jaise dekhti he..My guess was right..

Riya don't say anything..

Abhi:-toh problem Kya he..Jab tum dono ek dusare ko chahte ho..

Riya:-nahi..I don't know about him..But i love him so much..

Abhi:-dont tell me ke usse pata bhi nahi he ke u loves him..

Riya strug her shoulders..

Abhi:-kya yaar..Accha don't worry..Mein hu na..Dekhta hu Teri love story kaise set nahi hoti..Tu sabse Pehale tere parents ko bol De ke tune ladka dund liya he..Toh unki tension khatam ho jayegi..

Riya:-arjun sir ke bare me janane me baad unki tension Aur badh jayegi..

Abhi:-kya baat Kar rahi he..?Accha Tu issliye bol rahi he ke woh Marathi he aur Tu Bengali..?Are tere parents tuzse itna pyar karte he..Ke unhe koi problem nahi hogi..

Riya:-nahi..Woh baat nahi he..I guess i don't know.. Actually Arjun sir is already married..

Abhi stared her shockingly..

Riya:-ofcourse his wife is no more..But fir bhi..

Abhi(coming out of shock,hold riya's hand):-usse zindagi me aage badne ke liye tumse accha sathi kaha milega Ritz..Aur tere parents jab janege ke Tu unse kitna pyar karte he toh woh zarur maan jayege tum dono ke rishte ke liye..

Riya:-shayad mom papa maan bhi Jaye..Par Arjun sir..Woh Kya chahte he..?

Abhi:-dekh shree Aur chotu ki baato se toh Muze laga ke woh bahot khadoos he.. Issliye Tu usse proposal ka wait karegi toh zindagi bhar kuwari reg jayegi.

Riya glare him..

Abhi:-accha woh khadoos nahi he..Bas..

Riya:-hmm..

Abhi:-meri baat maan Tu hi usaki propose Kar..

Riya:-pagal ho Gaye ho Kya..?Muze dar lagta he..

Abhi:-yaar Tu usse pyar karti he ya darti he..

Riya:-dono bhi karti hu..

Abhi:-are why fear when abhi is here..Tuze propose karte karte Muze propose Karne ka itna experience ho Gaya he na ke Mein propose Karne ke ideas pe book likh sakhta hu..Toh Mera experience kab kaam aayega..

Riya hit him playfully..

Abhi:-lekin propose Karne se Pehale Soch Lena ..Matlab handsome he..Par mere itna nahi he..gusse wala he..Meri tarah romantic bhi nahi he..Aur kitna kam baat karta he..

Riya:-stop it yaar..

She hug him..He too hug her tighly..

Tears gathered in both's eyes..

Riya(in mind):-i know jeet ..I know how much u love me..N I know tumhe Ye sunke kitna bura laga hoga ke Mein Arjun sir se pyar karne lag gayi hu ..I m sorry..Mein tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi..Lekin tum..Abhi bhi mere bare me soch Rahe ho..Muze Aur Arjun sir ko milana chahte ho..itna kaise pyar Kar sakhte ho tum Muze..

Tears rolls from her eyes which she quickly wipe..

Abhi(in mind):-bahot pyar karta tumse Ritz..Aur tumhari khushi ke liye kuch bhi Kar sakhta hu..

He wipe his tears..

Both remains in hug..

Here..At a Ravi laudge..

Arjun has fallen in sleep on chair itself while reading a file..

He saw a knife shining in dark..Someone holding the knife n stabbed someone..

Arjun lying in pool of his own blood looking helplessly to the one who get stabbed..

The one who get stabbed by the knife fall on floor little near to Arjun..

Arjun look to painfully eyes to her..But shock to him it's not roshni..It's Riya..

Riya try to move her hand towards his hand..He too try to hold her hand..But couldn't..

She keep staring to him with pain n tears n hope he will surely save her..

But he even not able to move his hand..

Tears rolling from both eyes..N next second her eyes become lifeless..

Arjun(yell):-riya..

He wake up with this..He is bathing in sweat..N shivering..

He realised it's a dream..One of his worst nightmare which he never wanted to be true..

He wipe his sweat ..

Arjun(with wet eyelashes):-nahi..Mein Ye kabhi nahi hone dunga..Kabhi nahi..Ye sapna kabhi Sach nahi hoga..Kabhi nahi..

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Amunra.Gold

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Loved it Sonu dear
awesome update
Jeet and Riya's friendship is really strong and valuable
Jeet loves Riya dearly and keep on teasing her
He knows Riya really well and guess that she loves Arjun
Arjun has his own set of fears and insecurities
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continued soon 😊