Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June - Page 4

Sweet one Ila..

Originally posted by: yayini

Sweet one Ila..

Keep writing more..😊

Thank you.. glad you like it...

"Nayak Nhi Khalnayak Hu Main...Zulmi Bada DhookDayak Hun Main..." "Hai Sa Hai Kya Mujhko Kya Khabar...Bas Yaar Nafrat K Layak Hun Main..."

[Kaali's Point Of View]

Arz Kiya Hai..."Kisi ne sahi kaha hai...""Khushkismat hote hai voh log jisse dusra maouka milta hai...""Badnaseeb Hote hain voh Jiske Dushmano ko dusra mouka milta hai..."

Ab koi humaare hi ghar se humaari chiariya ko uda le jaaye aur hum usse apni muh dikhaayi b naa kraaye hain bhala yeh b koi baat huyi... humne toh pehle hi kaha tha humaare pitaji todha ahimsa k pujari the par hum unke putra todhe tedhe kism k hain. hum ahimsa se jyada himsa pe bharosa rkhte hain. Aur U Omkara humaari Taqat k saath saath humaari kamzori b le gya. Ab jab usne humse humaari dono cheez dur kar di hai toh.. todha sa life mein twist toh bnta hai... hai ki nhi... vaise b kaali thakur udhaar nhi rkhta sut samet vaapis leta hai aur yeh toh udhaar toh kya sut b le gya...

Mumbai mein humaara aana aur Omkara k baap Tez Singh Oberoi se milna yeh humaara hi plan tha... Aakhir humein Omkara ki Kamzori jo jaanani thi... Aur jab yahan pahunche toh kya dekhte hain Saala bada enjoy kar rha hai apni family k saath Chalo todha Rang mein bhang daal dena chaahiye...

Omkara ko shock laga yeh smjh aata hai party main magar uske saath uske naukar kya naam tha saala chironta kam aur chiraiya jyada lgta hai... uske hawa kyu nikal gyi be... aise jaise ki jaanta ho merko. Hain bhayi aisa kaun aa gya jisse hum mile aur humei hi yaad nhi apne aas paas k logon ki to humein saanse bhi yaad rehti hai... Chalo iss Chulbul urf bulbul ko baad mein dekthte hain filhaal toh Omkara ki kamzori dhundte hain...

Hum toh aise hi takraaye the Jhanvi ji se par shayad... Sahi mein Humne toh uski dukhti rag mein pair rkh diya be... Kis tarike se chilaaya tha maano ki humein maar hi daalega Abbe Kaali Thakur ko maarna itna asaan nhi hai be... Ab Kamzori toh pata lag gyi Uski taqat... Ka Kya karein...

Arre hum kaise bhool gye be un ko jo humesha dhaal ki trh khade rehte hain... Kya naam tha Sivaay and Rudra... Saala jab jab voh saath hote hain alag hi josh dikhta hai usme... Omkara ki Taaqat uske bhai... hahahaaa.. Ab Aayega Maza jab Main uske Dono Taaqat aur Kamzori ko usse cheen lunga...

Par usse pehle apni chiraiya ko toh qaid kar lun kahan udd gyi... yeh... Socha tha Oberooi Mansion mein padi hogi kahin par u vahan bhi nhi hai... Par Gauri voh bhi apne pati parmeshwar k begair kahin aur rahe... aisa ho skta hai kya?? Jarur issi shehar mein hogi voh chiraaiya... Aakhir kha tak bhaagogi mere se Gauri Kumari Sarma... LAutke toh ussi pinjare mein aana hai jaha se tum bhaagi ho...

Ab Bisaat toh humne bicha di hai bas Khel shuru krne ki deri hain... Ab voh b shuru karenge pehle Mumbai Darsan kar lein hain ki nhi... You continue pleaj... Kyunki iss khalnayak ka dav abhi baaki hai...

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Its really nice n hilarious loved it

Originally posted by: pt311288

Its really nice n hilarious loved it

Thank you it has two other part check the page 1 too if you haven't

Hello Ila, 😊
Bilkul KT k andaaz se likha hai! 😛 It was fun to read. 😉 Thanks for the pm dear. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

KT is one classy villain for a daily soap. His dialogue delivery is superb..

KT was fun to read... Love the way you have understood the characters ...and penned them.down

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Thank you it has two other part check the page 1 too if you haven't

Ila this os series of yours is literally marvellous. Loved it. Are you gonna continue with it? Please say yes.