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Posted: 8 years ago
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oye! hoye!😳😳😳
Hum tum...Ek kamre mein band hon...aur suitcase kho jaye...!🤣
to kitna mazaa aye...😆

really nice update...Raj and Preet scenes...tooo good!!!😳
Urrghhh !! Nihalll!! Morning mein shakal dikhane aagya

Will be waiting!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes actually it's nice when story moves fast instead of hanging on why not make it best and quick n we can start again ... 😃😃 even the shoemakers are running track saw the latest promo yesterday !!😲 that was quick😃 but it's nice
May be I will write something too ... Than please brief me on that I might need help
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I checked every two hours no updates 😭
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Originally posted by: Tanu221

I checked every two hours no updates 😭

Same here😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's Saturday already where I'd the update 😭I'm sorry for being ...and bit demanding (I guess that's what it's called) but still
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani7131

It's Saturday already where I'd the update 😭I'm sorry for being ...and bit demanding (I guess that's what it's called) but still

She's already said she lives in a different time zone. It's not even Saturday where I live yet so I think it's still Friday for her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: QueenKordeilia

She's already said she lives in a different time zone. It's not even Saturday where I live yet so I think it's still Friday for her.

I'm sorry I really didn't know about that.
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If I knew it is wouldn't have said that . I'm sorry
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It okay! I don't mind at all! Im working on it now, just got home.
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Chapter 13


Nihal entered the newlywed's room with two black suitcases in tow. It was decorated from top to bottom with roses and candles of all sorts. Raj was standing by the sofa which surprisingly looked to be extremely tousled and Preet... She was wearing Raj's clothes. Nihal looked towards the bed which was also messy. Had they slept separately?

"Nihal what do you need?', Raj said in annoyance. If Nihal hadn't arrived, Preet would still be in his arms. "Bhai, the stupid servants accidently left these suitcases in Pammi's room. I came to drop this off for you guys", Nihal replied. Raj stalked over to Nihal and grabbed the suitcases, "Ok thanks...now go", he said as he noticed Nihal was staring at the bed. Nihal left with one last look at Manu who was trying her best to hid behind Raj in embarrassment.

After Nihal left Raj turned back towards Manu. He grinned at her and she gave him a glare then pushed past him to go to the bathroom.

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Meanwhile, Mohini was yelling at Pammi. "Are you crazy Pammi, what were you going to do with that girl's suitcase? Did you think she would keep all her jewelry in there? All she had were clothes! It's not like any of it would have fit you anyway. Imagine if Harjeet found you looking through her suitcase and not me...how stupid can you get?, Mohini said as she ranted on and on. Pammi meanwhile was cowering as her extremely scary mother scolded her.

Pammi always had an affliction for girly things. With this wedding, she had only gotten three new dresses. Preet meanwhile was showered with almost a hundred sarees, suits, earrings, etc..Anything you could name, Preet was given. If Harjeet had forgotten to buy it for his Bahu, Raj had. Sadly, no one asked Pammi if she wanted something. She was simply curious to see what Preet had gotten and it wasn't like she would notice if Pammi decided to keep a few things.

Mohini, on the other hand, was taking out all her anger on Pammi. Her anger at Harjeet for being affectionate towards Amrit, anger towards Raj for coming back, and her anger at Preet for just existing! Nihal had gone to give the suitcases back and said he would make sure no one knew that Pammi had taken it. His sister sometimes made him wonder...her mind was always so focused on frivolous things that she never seemed to realize that gravity of the problems their small family was facing.

Mohini sat on Pammi's bed as she awaited Nihal's return. When Nihal came through the door Mohini went to her son and said "Listen Nihal, I can't stand what's been going on in this house for the past few days. It seems pretty soon we'll get kicked out and that idiot Amrit and her sons will rule this house". Nihal clenched his fists in anger as he thought of being out on the streets once again."Don't worry ma, I made the perfect plan to remove Raj Bajwa...he really wanted to become the Shah didn't he? I'll show him what it means to become the Shah", Nihal said. Her son's face twisted into an evil smile. Mohini shivered slightly when she saw how dark his eyes became and the visible rage boiling inside of him. Her son had surpassed her in every way, it seemed that he would manage Raj Bajwa fine. She grinned at that thought.

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About an hour later Raj came downstairs to the dining area. Manu had gone into the bathroom before he did and surprisingly she was out in fifteen minutes. His shower took much longer and to his disappointment by the time he was out, she was already gone. Harjeet was sitting by the dining table which was filled with an assortment of puris, jalebis, kheer, etc... and he gave his son a small smile when he sat down by his side. That was all Harjeet had ever wanted since Raman's death, for his son to be by his right hand.

"Bahu made some really good food Raj. Your choices have yet to disappoint me.", he said. Albeit Raj was annoyed with Harjeet for keeping Mohini around, his genuine compliments toward Preet managed to bring a smile to his face. He wondered how Preet learn to cook, Raj noted to himself that he would need to ask her later. "Of course dad, I thought this decision through very thoroughly. Marrying someone isn't just a game for me", he said. Harjeet reminisced the day he married Mohini and lost Amrit for good. He gave a slight cough and cleared his throat, " Ok, then I have another important decision for you to make. There is a mall that I wanted to build on our land. You need to go and see if the location is good and talk to the contractor about the water, electricity, costs...etc. Can you go today?".

Raj was surprised that Harjeet was even asking him. Asking wasn't really Harjeet's style. So despite his reluctance to go because of Preet, he felt that this as necessary in order to win Harjeet over completely. As if she knew he was thinking about her Manu came to the table at that moment and took Harjeet's blessings. She was wearing a yellow embroidered saree with matching bangles and earrings. Her hair was slightly damp and placed over one shoulder. Raj was so engrossed in admiring her that he forgot to respond to Harjeet. "Raj? Are you going?", Harjeet asked. "Ha..ha.ha..I'm going today dad", he said. Raj stood up to hold out the chair next to his for Manu. Manu sat down and shyly averted his eyes.

Manu wondered why Raj kept staring at her while Harjeet was sitting right there. She wasn't stupid, Raj was attracted to her and she knew it. In a way... she was also attracted to Raj but still, she wasn't letting it get in the way of their mission against Mohini. Raj also had to remember that their marriage wasn't for real, it was all part of the plan against Mohini. It seemed like Raj forgot all about that while Manu was constantly thinking of ploys. She had a few ideas and once she got Raj alone, she would tell him everything.

After eating breakfast, Harjeet got up and patted Manu on the head and called a servant over. The servant brought a jewelry box and Harjeet happily placed it in Manu's hands. She thanked her new papa-ji and touched his feet once again. After Harjeet left, Manu turned to Raj who was sitting at the table in deep thought. "Raj!", Manu whispered as she looked around to make sure no one was around. Raj turned to his beautiful wife. Her cheeks were pink and flushed from the shower and probably from cooking near the hot stove. "Raj...let's go somewhere we could be alone...let's go to our room", Manu said. Raj grinned so hard he felt his cheeks hurting. He allowed Manu to pull him up the stairs whilst he enjoyed watching her hips sway in her saree.


Edited by queenfaerie25 - 8 years ago

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