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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Interesting start.
Mysterious guy after innocent Geet. She is like any other teenager.

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

wonderful story dear..intersting start..geet is 18 yrs old..and crush on yash..geet went for club with help of meera..she meet mystery man..i think he is maan..she unknownly admiring him..he touch her ..geet excited going to date with yash...and share to her mom..she got friendly parents...geet birthday..some one watching her..i think same mystery man...waiting for next update..thanks for pm and sry for late

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Lovely update

Geet was scared of the maan she

Meet in the club she wants to avoid but

All her thoughts get to stop near him

Meera and pinky with geet in Yash party

There had a nice time together and

Overall yash invited geet for a date

And her happiness knew no bond

Geet is friendly to her mom to the extent

She can share everything about herself

Even her crush for yash and the date

But what stops her to share about the

Man who see finds dangerous

Waiting for the next update

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome update dear, loved it. . . . .

Ps how is your little one doing

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SillySoni

@SillySoni

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Awesome update
Geet going on a date with yash,hope from next update we got maaneet moment.

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Nice update. You changed the story a bit. Geet, Meera and Pinki went to Yash's house for party. There Yash invited Geet for movie and dinner. Geet said yes and she is very excited. Geet's mother asked her about Yash. Geet told her about their date. Her mother asked her to be careful and back to home by 10pm. Geet is still remembering club guy and is afraid of him.

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Reading all the parts for first time.

Maan is so mysterious. How could he fall for Geet in a glimpse and follow her blindly. If he could enter her room with flower what will he do to Yash for this date plan. Prologue is coming anytime sooner????

Pls add me to ur pm list.

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

superb update

Geet is happy that yash invited her to party.. & she is going for date with him

bt who was that man.. i thinks its Maan.. who comes in Geet's dream & scare her

waiting for next part.. add me in ur pm list