Swaron SS-The Valentines Week Part 3 Updated (20/04) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Heyya.. Its beautiful..😊

Great start...😃
Very well penned down..😊
Coming to update..😊
Swayam has a feelings for Sharon and he wanna make her feel special this valentine..😃
Sharon corner... you brought old memories with it.
He was talking to her photo..😃
Rose day idea was amazing..😃
Initially Sharon was confused, but later she was sure the sender is none other than our LoverBoy, who else can make her feel so special.😃
Beautifully written..😊
Update soonish..😊
Next time do PM me for ur further updates..😊
Thanks for tagging me on fb.
-Ria Vrushanholic
(Shivani)



thank you so much for the detail review
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry for being so late in the updates but I promise to end the series in the next week I had originally thought to finish it today but I am behind schedule by 4 parts

for updates follow - https://www.facebook.com/ForelsketParadise/




Part 2- Will You Be Mine ?

The next day Sharon was anxious to see Swayam. She wanted to know whether he had sent the roses to her the previous day. Her mind and heart had been fighting ever since last night. Her heart was taking Swayam's side, it knew that all those roses were sent by him. But, her mind begged to differ it knew it was not possible firstly Swayam wasn't in town and secondly he just consider her as a friend and there was nothing more to it. She was deciding what to wear today when something click in her mind. The last message she received had stated that coming days would be special for her which means that there was another surprise coming up today. She mentally recall the whole Valentine week schedule but to her dismay she couldn't remember anything after all until now Valentine Week was just rubbish. " Way to go Sharon see what you have become trying to remember all the mushy nonsense" she muttered to herself. She then messaged Simmi nonchalantly trying to ask what day it was, she knew her utterly and ridiculously romantic best friend would know about it .Soon she received a text from Simmi stating it was a Wednesday and also it was propose day and she hope to be proposed by Nilesh that day. Sharon shakes her head knowing that would not be happening today Nilesh was clueless about them. Propose Day she pondered whether she should dress up for the occasion. She suddenly started feeling jittery will Swayam propose her today? She thought to herself. In the end she decided to wear the white dress he liked on her and left for college.

Here Swayam was looking around the jewellery shop trying to find something that would suit his Sharon when a salesman grabbed his attention. " May I help you sir ?" The man asked Swayam. " hmm yes please, I am looking something for my would be girlfriend " Swayam politely replied. " ahh a propose day gift we have the right thing for you please follow me this way sir " he took Swayam to the side counter and pulled out different boxes of rings for him. Swayam looked through different selection of diamonds ,platinum, rubies, sapphire and emerald rings, he even looked through gold and kundan rings in desperation but couldn't find anything that would scream at it to buy it for Sharon. He sheepishly looked at the man hoping for an idea. " the clerk took pity at him and enquired with a knowing smile " couldn't find anything special sir? " "well Sharon is special and simple yet sophisticated, kind but fierce too these just don't do justice to her " Swayam explained to the clerk." Then perhaps we can look at another pieces of jewellery a bracelet or a pendant set " suggested the man. " nice idea let's look through bracelet first" Swayam agreed to it.40 minutes passed since then but he couldn't find that one piece for his Angel. He was getting restless by now he asked the man whether he could roam around and see explore so more. When he agreed he start seeing the various displays when a delicate pendant started screaming at him,Swayam looked around and signalled the clerk to him and asked him to wrap the pendant it was just perfect. Swayam then apologized for taking so long and took his bid bye and left .

Meanwhile Sharon had reached the college looking ravishing in her dress immediately grabbing eyeballs of the every boy in the college. Unknown to the scrutiny she started looking for Swayam. She ignored the various boys trying to catch her attention for the guy that had all her attention. She searched the whole place but couldn't find Swayam anywhere in the college. Her face dropped she was disappointed in not finding Swayam she started doubting her heart a little. She finally gave up and headed to locker room to change for rehearsals.

Sharon again found something attached to her locker door only this time it was a letter. She pulled out the letter this time it was written with post its and started to read it. "Will you be mine? I know it was direct and blunt but was sincere. Sharon these past 4 years have been like a blessing to me. There is a small pouch in hidden somewhere in your locker find the pouch and take out its content before reading ahead". Sharon started fiddling with the stuffs in her locker when suddenly she caught sight of a black velvet towards the back of the space. She gently remove the pouch and pulled out a delicate single pearl and rubies drop pendant .Sharon look with awe she had never seen such a beautiful piece of jewellery before , she gently caress it and continued reading. " can you see this pearl ? I know traditionally a ring is used to propose but when I was looking through the shop trying to decide what to buy for you this pendant was screaming at me to buy it for you. You know why ? Because you are just like this pearls ethereal beauty and not from outside bit from inside too. I have never met anyone in my life who is just like you simple sweet yet fierce, that is what makes you perfect for me. Ever since I was a kid I used to look at my parents and see them in so much love that I used to wish that someday I could feel the same emotion for someone special. You are that special person I want to love you like no one has loved anyone, yeah I know its cheesy and not original. Maybe someday grow old with you and have cute babies who would look just like you. the god gave us our necessity for our life but you gave me the reason to live my live to the fullest. Please be my life, my love. I love you. "
Sharon had tear in her eyes she felt so touched that someone could lover her so much " Oh Swayam I love you too " she said to herself unknown to her that the man himself was hiding near her and hear it .

Swayam was feeling content now that he knew she belonged to him he gave her a flying kiss and left to do arrangement for the next day.

Sharon felt something soft and warm hitting cherry cheeks as if it was kissed. She touched her cheeks and softly took Swayam's name thinking what next does he has in store for her.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1..

Swayam decides to confess his feelings to Sharon..

He makes Rose Day perfect ..
Sharon somehow guesses it must be Swayam only..

Part 2..

Swayam chooses a delicate pendant for her..
❤️

She wanna dress according to the occasion..
She is anticipating him to propose her..

Pari..
I really liked these cute n sweet updates.

Looking forward to further updates ..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was so sweet
Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3 - A Five Star Chaklet Affair

Swayam had reached home all exhausted with the day's events he never knew until today that shopping could be so confusing and tiring. Normally he would buy whatever clothes he sees and likes without giving a second thought to it but, today he actually took effort in buying gifts from jewelry to the teddy bear. He thought and considered everything he could regard with Sharon from her likes to her thoughts about them before purchasing it. The whole day went in a blur but it was totally worth it. Thinking back he could feel his heart racing remembering how elegant Sharon looked in the white dress what she wore to college today. He couldn't help but noticed that she remembered he liked that dress on her and that she wore it for him. While Sharon may have thought he wasn't around but he was right there noticing her every move her every expression. How she had frown on not finding him there and how her face had lit up while she read his proposal though with tears nevertheless she looked serene. Swayam mentally slapped himself he couldn't afford to get lost in his Sharon Land he had to plan the next day and pack her chocolates.

Next day Swayam was ready with the gift boxes for Sharon. He had bought a whole box of 5 Star which were her favourite chocolates along with a bunch of other chocolates. He hopes for a repeat performance of the previous two days he wanted to make her happy.

Here Sharon was getting ready in a blue dress and was wondering just how many chocolates she would receive from Swayam today. She loved chocolates only Swayam knew about the obsession she had for them. Last time she had sat down and research what all days are celebrated in the valentine week all the while berating herself for behaving like the girls she absolutely wish would never cross her path yet reminding herself that this was different she was in love and it was nothing wrong in being prepared ahead.

Meanwhile Swayam had deposited a box of chocolate on Sharon's door step and hid nearby yet far from view hoping to catch her reaction to the chocolates. He wasn't disappointed soon Sharon was out of the door and she took noticed of the box and eagerly started tearing into it with a big smile on her face. She opens the box to reveal various selections of dark chocolates with a note attach JUST FOR YOUR BITTERSWEET CRAVING. "He remembers I like the bittersweet taste of dark chocolates" she thought to herself as she recalls the day she told him about her chocolate love.

*Flashback*

Sharon and Swayam were at a chocolate shop trying different samples of chocolates. They were there because Sharon was bored with the movie they had come to watch with their friends and she had dragged him into the shop to get away from the theatre." You know Swayam I love chocolates like really love them" she informed him taking another bite of the delicious treat." I can see that" he smile offering her his piece which she gladly took." I love the bittersweet taste of the dark chocolate. White chocolate just melts into your mouth. The nutty flavour of the hazelnut chocolates are to die for. Liqueur chocolates are best if you ever want them for a gift for your date. Milk Chocolates are just perfect. But, 5 Star is my favourite chocolate." She kept ranting while she devours all the chocolates she can see. Swayam kept staring at her mentally taking notes for future.

*Flashback Ends*

Satisfied Swayam left for college and waited for Sharon in her locker room. Sharon reached her locker room stopped and thought for a minute and then decided to search her locker after all she had received gifts at the locker before. She got excited to see another box inside which had a Box of white chocolate .She saw the note which said "I HOPE IT MELTS INTO YOUR MOUTH LIKE YOU LIKE THEM FOR IT." Shaking her head she carefully kept it back and left for canteen to see her friends.

Swayam smiled to himself seeing her leave and asked a girl to give the box he had to Sharon in canteen. Sharon saw a girl coming towards her with a gift box she raised an eyebrow at her but the girl just gave her the box and left. The gang urged her to open the box she had she open the box contained liqueur chocolates and a note "THE PERFECT GIFT FOR TODAY ISN'T IT RIGHT SHARON?" She blushed when the gang started to tease her about it and scolded them for it.

Sharon saw gift box on her regular seat in the classroom and stared at it. She opens it after being nudged by Simmi back into the world. This time it contained hazelnut chocolates with the note saying "I HOPE YOU DON'T DIE AT THEIR TASTE". She was surprised how he remembers every bit of the rant she gave that day.

Later Sharon found a box in the rehearsal hall she knew this would have milk chocolates and she wasn't wrong the box indeed had them she looked for a note and found it at the bottom of the box "PERFECT JUST FOR YOU". She smiled to herself and hid the box before anybody could see it.

Sharon returned home to find a box of 5 Star sitting there and a letter with it "I know it seems like a repeat of rose day but I couldn't give them to you all at once I wanted it to spread throughout the day. I hoped you aren't disappointed. I Love You. Ps - I remember they are your favourite." Sharon was so happy that he remembered everything and she desperately wished for him to be there and wondered why he did not come in front of her. She had a idea and immediately acted on it.

Swayam opened the door to find box chocolates of half removed 5 star chocolates in a box with a note "All I need is your love which I know I have plenty and some chocolates .I wish you were here to share these 5-Star with me. Since you won't be coming here god knows why" Swayam could imagine Sharon shaking her head while writing it "I am sending over half of the chocolates to you at least we can have the same chocolate at the same time. Will be waiting for you signal love. I love you too" Swayam couldn't express his happiness at her gesture he texted her at once.

Both of them ate the chocolates at the same time thinking about their each other while wishing to be with each other looking forward for their future.


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