RISHBALA SS- My Magic Man (Last part pg 13 dt 18/4) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu beautiful update loved it

Ria misunderstood them.
Madhu confessed her feelings for him and he too loves her but they can't become one 'coz RK is a genie. Madhu kissed him.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya..will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Nice update aishu😊 Rk should obey madhu's order because he is geni and i think she asked him to marry her.😆

Thank you..if she tell him to marry her then his situation will be😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Hi friends here is the next part..sorry for a short update..pls ignore mistakes..



My Magic Man




Part-3


"That means u too love me.."madhu hugged him & he closed his eyes..
"rishab u r doing the same mistake that ur papa had done.."he hears guru's voice & jerked..
"what happend..??"madhu..
"no...i will not do that mistake.."rk..
"rk..mistake..what mistake..?"madhu look him..
"pls leave me..i beg u..y u want me..i am not a human..i cant be urs.."rk..
"y not rk..u have everything that humans have love,emotions everything then whats the problem..?"madhu..
"the problem is that o life is not free like urs..& i am not a.."he stopped..
"u r not a.."madhu looks him..
"that..ur highness.."he starts sweating..madhu looks him astonished he is always a marvel to her..sometimes she feels like he is not a genie but something more than that he have all things that humans have..rk have more things that genie's not have..
"Rishab tell me.."madhu said in a strong tone but he remained silent..
"its an order.."madhu..he looks her with wet eyes..
"i am not a complete genie.."rk..
"then..?"madhu..
"i am the upshot of my papa's mistake.."rk..
"papa..??u r a genie hah..genie's have papa..??"madhu..
"no..but.."rk..
"u r making me mad..say it clearly.."madhu..
"i am the son of a genie & a human.."rk..
"what..?"she looks him astonished..
"yes..my ma is a human..& my papa is a genie.."rk..
"but..how this happen..?"madhu..
"becoz my ma was like u.."rk..
"like me..?"madhu..
"hah..she loved a genie..my papa was her slave but she fall in love with him..papa denied it becoz he know the truth that a human & genie cant be together..but somehow he gets drunk one day &..its result was papa got punished in our world & ma leaves this world after giving birth to me..they did'nt accept me to their world as i am not a complete genie but our guru helped me becoz i am a half genie..he helps me to reduce the human habits in me & told me to become any human's slave & serve him/her & after that they they will accept me to our world & i can become a complete genie & after that u became my owner but what u r doing..the same mistake that my ma had done..but..i really wished if i born as a complete human i can live a life like u all but..so pls.."rk pleaded...
"how u became a genie rk if u still have feeling for me.."madhu..
"u told me na u like human life.."madhu..
"but its not possible.."rk..
"its possible u r the proportion of both human & genie..if u have a genie inside u that means u have a human inside too..u try to wake up the human instead of genie.."madhu..
"i told u na its not possible.."rk..
"u can it.."madhu..
"will u pls shut up.."he shouted..
"look rk...u r getting angry on me..its a good symbol na.."madhu..
"sorry..."rk..
"look i am ready to bear anything for u..think is there any idea..?"madhu..
"hah..u forget me.."rk..
"stop talking like this this..think positively..."madhu..rk disappeared..
"Rk..rk.."she called but he didn't appeared..she caressed the ring & he appeared..
"u cant go away from me..."madhu..he looks her without knowing what to do..
"hey guys...what r u doing here..?"dips & sultan came there..
"nothing v were just talking.."madhu..
"hm..what about next..??"sultan..
"what..?"madhu..
"ur marriage.."dips..rk & madhu looks them awestruck..
"what..marriage..??"rk..
"what..dont u want to get married..??"sultan teased..
"no..not like that.."rk..
"then whats the problem she have no one to ask..v r her family.."dips..
"but his family.."madhu..
"they r in USA na.."sultan..
"so what.."madhu..
"dont they know about ur affair..??"sultan..they fumbled..
"yes..but.."rk..
"so whats the problem..??"sultan..
"its about marriage na v want some time to think.."madhu..
"ok then..carry on.."dips..they leaves..
"uff.."he pressed his head..
"madhu..madhu.."trish came there by running..
"what happend trish...?"madhu..madhu balraj sir is calling us..v want to go now.."trish..
"now..but its around 8.00..y he is calling now..whats the matter..?"madhu..
"i dont know.."trish..
"hm.."madhu..
"rk u also come with me v all r going na so u dont want to sit here alone.."trish..he nodded...

after sometime they reached balraj's apartment...
"hah come..come..i were waiting for u.." balraj welcomed them happily..
"sher is looking happy today.."ria whispers in mukund's ear..they entered inside..balaraj notices rk & asked about him..trishna told that he is their friend & he nodded..
"come to lab.."balraj..
"lab..but for what..?"madhu thought..they went to lab..
"look i got some clues from this.."balraj showed the iron plate which trishna finds from the old bungalow...
"sir this..?"trishna asked him..
"yes..yes..this is that same iron plate..i got something important from this.."balraj.
"what..?"sikky..
"this 250 years old..& something is written in this using a special language & codes.."balaj..
"what is it..??"ria..
"dont know but.."balaj..
"what sir..?"mukund..
"it is about genies.."balaj..
"what..about genies.."everyone..rk & madhu looks it astonished..




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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Awesome update,
Rk is half human and half genie,
like Madhu his mom also loved a genie,
Rk too loves her but he is not accepting her love,
balraj found about genies hope his research won't trouble Rk,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
beautiful update aishu
so rk father is genie and mother is human. .
rk is half genie ,half human. .
genie guru told him if he serve human. .then they accept rk. .
but look first time ..rk meet madhu and both fall in love. .
Balraj find some about genie. .
early waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Aishu, Awesome update, loved it.
RK's mom was a human and papa a genie but they were not accepted in genie world that is why RK has both the traits in him.
Madhu won't leave him easily, Rishbala will become one for sure.
What is written on the plate about genies and what will Balraj do now.
Curious for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Awesome update so rk is half human
Curious to know what written on iron plate
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Awesome update Aishu..
RK is in dilemma..
He is half human and half genie..
she won't leave him..But he tries to avoid her..
No way escape from her...
Balraj found, some clue about genie..
Maybe it will use to ,Change his life..
Thanks for pm..
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
short but nice update !!
rk is half human & half genie..
oh no..
now what balraj found.. and he suspects its of genie..
hahaha.. rk's expression..
loved it ;)

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