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This is first time i am doing this without replying previous comments i am updating next part, but will definitely reply them after posting second part
So guys its sangeet for Shraman, sorry for again being late but since its sangeet so took so much time for song selection 😳
Sorry in advance since you guys may find more songs in this, kya kare sangeet jo hai😉,
so guys enjoy shraman sangeet, i tried to make it real by adding some family moments too 😛
So without any delay here is sangeet, my lovely readers you all are invited so enjoy
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Chapter 13 part A

Next day sumo woke up with summons of her name coming from outside which she didn't take much time to recognize

"suman jaldi utho kitani der ho gayi hai dekho 9 baj rahe hai, aaj sangeet hai aur kitane kam pade hai" manju screeched along with some clamor in background from outside making sumo's eyes wide open

she shoved her duvet and jumped off from the bed and went directly to washroom "shit sumo tu etane der tak kaise so sakati hai yaar, ghar me kitane kam pade hai aur aaj sangeet hai, tuh to gayi aaj mami aur masi to teri jaan le lengi" she kept ranting while completing her morning chore

quickly after taking hot shower she got ready wearing simple and elegant powder blue and white salwar suite and some eye makeup as mami clearly warned her she can't roam like jhalli in all house since its her wedding and all relatives will ask for her

She went to kitchen to check on breakfast preparation
"are suman beta aa gayi tu chal jaldi se breakfast kar le aaj sham me hum logo ko jaldi jana hai malhotra's ke yaha sangeet hai na to mahman pohachane ke pahale hume pohachana hai" rachana informed her about the conversation she had with nirmala yesterday while setting breakfast plate for her

"masi aap logo ne sab bana liya i mean breakfast ho gaya aap logo ka" a sheepish expression covered on her face, today she was very late and didn't helped others in preparing breakfast or in any other work

masi deciphered her Internal monologue "haan beta sab ho gaya tu kyu tension le rahi hai, aur waise bhi ab tu dulhan ban chuki hai adhi to ab tu koi kam mat kar hum sab hai kaam karne ke liye, yahi din hai aaram karne ke tere" masi caressed her hairs lovingly

"masi mein dulhan kaha bani hu? abhi to time hai na" sumo baffled

"are adhi dulhan ban gayi na, mehandi jo lag gayi hai shravan ke nam ki tere hath me" mami said while entering kitchen

"ohh" sumo sighed as she solved a big mystery

"haan" both masi and mami animated in unison and chuckled

sumo's face flushed and she started fidgeting with her fingers "mami . masi please na subah subah nahi kariye na aap log shuru" she whined

"achha baba thik hai mehandi to dikha kaisi khili hai are bhai jara hum bhi to dekhe kitana pyar karate hai damadji humari beti se" manju reached suman and started scrutinizing her hands and sumo now completely turned into the deep shade of crimson

rachana too joined her "haye bhabhi dekhiye na kitna gahara rang chadha hai, bahot jyada pyar hai" rachana gave a teasing look and sumo's chin deepened down

"are rachana hamari suman hai hi etani pyari kaise pyar nahi karenge, hai na beta" mami lifted her chin with fingers to make her look toward them and a new session of teasing started for sumo, after some more comment when it was unbearable for sumo she hurriedly left kitchen with her breakfast making excuse that she will have it in her room since she need to check fitting of her lahenga for evening function

sumo went in her room and had her breakfast in peace, she started packing of some important things which she will carry along with her after marrigae.
she stayed in room intensionally to avaoid further teasing after an hour or so

"di aap kya kar rahi ho?" preeti enquired while entering her room

"are my pretty preeti kuchh nahi soch rahi thi thodi packing kar lu last day sab nahi kar paungi na, so soch rahi thi abhi se jo bhi kaam ki chize hai ek ek karke pack kar lu" she said while folding her cloths

preeti plopped herself down on bed and grabbed one of the cushion to support her hands on lap, resting her face between both of her palms "di waise aap sara saman le jayengi kya?"

sumo narrowed her eyes "kahi teri mere room pe to najar nahi hai?"

"are di mein aapke room pe najar kyu dalu mere pas hai mera room, mein to bas aisehi puch rahi thi aap sab packing kar rahi hai esiliye pucha" preeti replied as a matter of fact

"thats better, kyuki mein apana room kisiko nahi dene wali aur waise bhi mein delhi me hi hu har roj to ek chakkar yaha ka to banata hai na" sumo winked and both giggled "bas jo imp chize hai wo pack kar rahi hu"

"par di aap es ghar me to nahi rahengi na" preeti shrugged and recognition dawned on sumo's face that she need leave this house though this house will be her but she will not have same authority over this house and tears filled in her eyes
preeti heeded sadness on her sisters face "di lekin aap tension mat lijiye mein na nanu ka acchese khayal rakhungi aur waise bhi mein ab badi ho gayi hu na, haan lekin nanu se muze bahot dat khani padegi" she smartly changed topic to lighten her sisters mood

sumo smiled "wah meri choti bahen to bahot badi ho gayi kya baat hai , aur nanu kyu tumhe datenge?" sumo wiggled her brows to decipher preeti's intentions

"oh ho di muze khana kaha aata hai banana, aur aapki wajah se nanu ko etna accha khana khane ki habit ho gayi hai na" she pouted sadly remembering how her di used to prepare all new recipes and her favorite dishes whenever she felt carving

sumo reached preeti and hugged her, preeti encircled her hands around her waist and snuggled her face on sumo's stomach, preeti was very young when they lost their parents so whenever she need parents love so it was sumo who gave parental love her little sister, sumo always tried to fulfill her sister wishes despite of nanu's denial sometimes, she fought for her sister and always tried to protect her from cruel world

both sisters eyes welled up but they gulped down their tears to hide it from each other,both sisters stayed their like that for some time remembering their good memories of childhood.

their moment broke by sumo's phone "di aapka phone dekhiye aur agar jijuka hoga to tell him hi from me, mein chalti hu aap jaldi aa jaiyega lunch karenge sath me" preeti broke hug and scooted outside room

sumo checked her phone and preeti was correct it was shravan, she sadly pressed answer call button and put it on her ear

"hi sumo sumno mom bol rahi thi tum logo thoda jaldi aa jana 6 baje se sab guests aana shuru ho jayenge so usnake samane tum enter karogi toh thik nahi lagega" he said huried in one breath without waiting for her response

"hmm...okay" thats the only words she could blur out in response as she was holding her tears back

shravan felt it strange "sumo, kya hua sab thik thik to hai na waha?" he cooed her affectionately

she nodded and breath in to gulp down her tears and hide it from him "nahi shravan aisi baat nahi hai bas thoda thak gayi hu esiliye..."

"sumo dekho mein yeh nahi bolunga ki i know you in and out but yeah i know you that much so that i can say you are lying now" he failed her attempt to beat behind bushes calmly yet his voice was dripping with concern

sumo sighed helplessly "kaise tum muze samaz jate ho shravan, etane kam samay me tum muze etana jaan gaye ki ab tumase bate chupana bhi mushkil ho gaya hai mere liye, har waqt muze jab bhi kisi dost ki jaroorat hoti hai tum hamesha aa jate ho, thank you so much shravan" she mused

there was long silence, shravan broke the silence "sumo don't think so much just share your worry you will feel better" his caressing words broke her trance

"hmm...actually abhi preeti aayi thi usase aisehi baatein kar rahi thi to emotional ho gayi this sorry" shravan felt little bit offensive on hearing her apologetic words but in next moment he understood that he is talking to sumo who builded so many walls around her heart and its not easy for her to break them and open her inner soul in front of anyone, but somehow he managed to pull them down and she started sharing her miseries with him

"sumo, see i know tumhare liye yeh bahot mushkil hai and i know how close nanu and preeti are with you, tum preeti ke liye usaki puri family ho maa, papa, bahen and trust me you accomplished all your responsibilities very well, and most imp is agar shadi bhi ho jati hai tab bhi woh tumhara hi ghar rahega tumhe jab bhi waha jana hai tum chali jana yaha koi tumhe nahi rokega aur tumhe kisise permission lene ki bhi jaroorat nahi hai, everything will be fine and normal in some days okay" his smooth and calm words worked magically on her she really felt light

"okay so chuck it all and now tell me meine jo tumhe bola tha main reason call karne ka woh to yaad hai na ya fir use bhi asuome baha diya" he jested and heard exactly what he want, her smile which transformed on his lips too

"shravan tum bhi na , yaad hai hum logo ko guest aane se pahale pohachana hai kaise etane jaldi bhul jaungi, aur waise bhi masi ne pahalehi muze bata diya tha" she replied happily still chuckling

"sumo ek baat bolu"

"hmm"

"tum hamesha aisehi hasati raha karo udas bilkul bhi achhi nahi lagati ho" he said dreamily and light blush crept on her chicks

"thank you shravan" she replied while tucking hair stand behind her ear

"thank you nahi bolate hai you remember we are friends correct so no thank you , he bhagwan" he shrieked

"kya hua?" she panicked

"are tumhare chakkar mein baatein karne baith gaya muze bilkul time nahi hai pushkar aur rishi ke sath bahar jana hai woh wait kar raha hai, pata nahi etane kaam kyu hote hai shadi me chalo bye bye gotta go see you in evening" he hurriedly ended call

"pagal" she giggled and resumed her work keeping her phone on bed

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Evening MM

Tiwari's reached malhotra mansion before guests, since there was some time remaining to start function nirmala suggested sumo and preeti to wait and do some touch up if required in guest room. Nirmala requested ria to bring them to guest room and stay with them if they require anything , ria happily agreed and leaded way to the guest room

trio reached guest room and settled on bed

"hey hi suman, i am ria shravan's fried and usake friend ki wife bhi hu" she winked and stretched her hand for handshake

"hi" sumo took her hand hesitantly as it was their first meeting

"suman don't hesitate, are actually mein aur rishi i mean my husband hum log aur shravan we are college friend hum log London me hi rahate hai, actually hum logo ki shadi na wahi hui so i was too much excited to attend shravan's marriage, you know with all indian functions and rituals" she chirped and clapped her hands as a child

sumo admired her candid behavior and felt connected with her within short time

"you know meine to rishi ko na warn hi kiya tha ki agar woh nahi aayega to mein akeli aa jaungi, fir kya tha akele to nahi aane deta he loves me a lot na" she chuckled coyly "aur shravan ne bhi use achhese scare kiya toh wo man gaya" she continued her ranting and both poor siblings kept staring her in awe

"oops sorry!!!" she bit her tongue and held her one ear childishly "mein akele hi baat kar rahi hu tabse, tum to kuchh bol hi nahi rahi ho, actually muze na jyada bolne ki bimari hai shravan aur rishi to bolte hai mere hote hue na tv ya radio ki koi jaroorat hi nahi hai, full on entertainment hu mein" she flashed wide smile on her own joke and both sisters giggled

"you are so sweet ria" sumo praised her for her carefree nature

"thank you so much, but i must say shravan ki choice ko manana padega after seeing you, now i am not anymore angry on him" she said naughtily

"angry??" sumo cocked her brow in perplexity

"are haan i was angry on him, jab bhi koi bhi ladki dekhane jaata tha lame reasons deke mana karta tha, usane to sare records hi break kar diye the,london me bhi etani ladkiya usake piche thi lekin woh kisi bhi ladki ke sath 2-3 dates se jyada nahi tikta tha i was so fed up of him, i tried to hook him with some of friends too" she clicked her lips in disbelief "lekin you are real match for him tumne to usaka bhi record tod diya, but you made a perfect choice most handsome hunk you chooses huh?" she winked and sumo flushed , ria and preeti giggled

"ye baat to aapne ekdam sahi kahi di handsome hunk" preeti seconded ria and both hifived

"suman you are looking killer dear, aaj to shravan gaya kaam se, koi nahi bacha sakata hai use, hai na preeti?" ria praised her along with teasing and pink rose blush started creeping on chicks starting from her neck

"aww so cute, she is blushing" ria admired her dreamily "now i know why shravan choose you" sumo slapped her on her arm playfully

"shut up na ria" sumo whined

"okay leave it mein shravan ko bulati hu okay?" ria took her phone to dial shravans number

sumo jerked from her sit "no no why you are calling him?" sumo yelped

"are woh aayega tab na tum log baher jaoge akele thodi na jaogi tum, its already 7 all guests are came" ria shrugged as matter of fact

"ohh no no, woh...woh, haan i mean you...tum dono..i mean tum preeti tum log ho na we will go out no need to call him" sumo stammered thinking about if shravan will come then again she will face more teasing so its better to avoid it

"are nahi di aise kaise apko to jiju ke sath hi jana padega na nahi to sab kya sochenge" preeti shook her head in dismay "ria di aap call kariye jiju ko"

ria called shravan "haan shravan we are in guest room where me and rishi are staying, please come fast you need to take suman along with you at sangeet place , okay" she ordered hurriedly and hanged up before sumo can protest further

shravan reached guestroom as instructed by ria, he entered room setting sleeves of his sherwani "haan sumo chalo ready ho sab wait kar rahe hai bahar" he raised his head to look toward sumo and stunned on the sight in front of his eyes

sumo was wearing royal blue lahenga along with sleeveless choli and maroon dupatta, wearing light elegant neck piece and heavy earnings, blue matching bangles with kadas and having light mackup with attractive eye mackup and her curled hairs falling freely, she was looking breathtaking

on the other hand sumo raised her thick lashes to look toward him and her breath hitched he was not looking less than Greek god in that dark navy blue sherwani and maroon bottoms perfectly fitted to his toned muscles and abs, she never saw any guy looking so alluring

both was so busy in checking out each other, ria and preeit just moved their heads to and fro between shraman with wide open eyes

ria clicked her fingers in front of them "hey guys whats going on aise ek dusare ko stare kar rahe like insan na ho koi testy dish rakhi ho aur tum log ready ho use khane ke liye" ria teased them, they broke their trance with flushed faces and started looking here and there to avoid further embarrassment

"chalo preeti muze lagata hai hum logo ko jana chahiye love birds ko space deni chahiye what you say?" ria smirked mischievously and preeti nodded naughtily sumo whacked her

"ouch di muze kyu mar rahi hai aap meine kya kiya?" preeti irked "chaliye ria di"

"chalo bye love birds we are going, but you two dont get busy come fast haan" ria winked at shravan and scooted from dragging preeti along with her

both felt awkward shravan ran his fingers through his perfectly set hairs and scratched back of his head and sumo started fidgeting with hem of her dupatta

"ahem...ahem" shravan cleared his throat to get her attention she hummed in response

"umm...chale?" he forwarded his hand and she took hesitantly without looking toward them and both headed toward backyard

All praised them as perfect couple and how they are complementing each other in looks, after some chit chat with guests nirmala requested took them to settle on the couch decorated for couple and both obeyed, other family members also occupied their seats and sangeet function started

Lights flashed on stage where ria and rishi was standing all clapped for them

"Good evening all lovely people here I am Rishi" rishi introduced himself

"and i am Ria" ria also joined him

"We are your hosts for today's function, welcome you in the sangeet function of most handsome punjabi munda shravan and the most gorgeous kudi suman" both joined their hands and welcomed guests merrily

"Yeh shravan hai na bahot chupa rustam nikala kisi ko pata nahi chalne diya chupke se engagement kar li aur badme bas call kar diya ki bhai shadi hai, aap log hi batao bhala aisa koi karta hai apane best friend sath?" and all guests clamored as no

"correct let me guess why you did that?" rishi pretended like thinking deeply for a while by rubbing his chin and shravan gave him "what?" look "yes got it ria muze lagta hai na yeh sumo ko hum logose chupana chahta tha"

"why rishi?" ria gave fake confused look

"are baby agar langoor ke haath me angoor aa jaye to woh chupayega hi na" rishi jested and all busted in laughter, shravan gave "kamine tuze mein baadme dekhunga" glare

"Okay okay all enough of teasing but really they make a beautiful couple what you say ria?" ria nodded in consent "to esi baat pe lets begin the function"

"so today's first performance is presented by oldies of family and youngest members of the family" ria continued

"so welcome on the stage nanaji, dadi along with little champs dabbo, ehan and eti" rishi welcomed them and both left stage bestowing it to the performers

All lights went off and two spot lights focused on nanaji and daboo in center facing back toward all

Badtameezee ek bimari hai
Ek aisi bimari

both turned and started tapping their one leg slowly

Jo dheere dheere waqt ke saath
Budhaape mein badal jaati hai

nanu winked at dabbo mimicking lines along with, all crowd hooted for him crazily

Main kehta hoon jab tak budhaapa nahi aata
Thodi badtameezee hi kar lete hai

daboo grinned toward nanu and both tossed their hats in air and music started flashing all lights

Paan Main Pudeena Dekha
Naak Ka Nageena Dekha
Chikni Chameli Dekhi
Chikna Kameena Dekha
Chaand Ne Cheater Hoke Cheat Kiya Toh
Saare Taare Bole Gilli Gilli Akhaa
Pa Para Para...
Meri Baat, Teri Baat
Zyada Baatein Boori Baat
Thaali Mein Katora Leke
Aaloo Bhat, Muli Bhat
Mere Peeche Kisi Ne Repeat Kiya Toh
Saala Maine Tere Muh Pe Maara Mukka
Ispe Bhoot Koi Chadha Hai
Theharna Jaane Naa
Ab Toh Kya Buraa Kyaa Bhalaa Hai
Fark Pehchaane Naa
Zidd Pakad Ke Khadaa Hai Kambakht
Chhodna Jaane Naa
Badtameez Dil, Batameez Dil, Batamiz Dil (X2)
Maane Na, Maane Na
Yeh Jo Haal Hai, Sawaal Hai, Kamaal Hai
Jaane Na Jaane Na
Badtameez Dil, Battameez Dil Badtameez Dil
Maane Naa.

music changed and dadi along with eti and ehan made their entry on stage wearing shades, nanu and daboo also stealthily put on glasses

Teri naam diya dhuman pe gaiyan
Tu Chandigarh toh aayi ni
Chandigarh toh aayi ni
Tenu dekh ke haunke bharde ne
Khare chownkan vich sipahi ni

Thodi te kaala til kudiye (x2)
Jo daag hai chan de tukde te
Tenu kala chasma
Tenu kala chasma

Tenu kala chashma jachda ae
Jachda ae gore mukhde te (X2)

dadi eti started catwalk and 3 guys started following them dramatically

Sadko pe chale
Jab ladkon ke dilon mein
Tu aag laga de baby fire

all 3 touched their chest and jerked their hands gesturing they are burning, all started laughing hysterically

varun, shravan and pushkar gave flying kiss to dadi and eti and preeti and sumo whistled for their nanu and dabboo

Nakli si nakhre tu karein
Jab dekhe humein jhooti liar!

Kala kala chashma jajda hai tere mukhde pe
Jaisa kala til jachta hai tere chin pe

Apni adaaon se zyaada nahi toh
Dus baare ladke toh
Maar hi deti hogi tu din mein

dadi and eti his guys playfully and they all acted as falling on ground

Tujh jaise chattis phirte hai
Mere vargi aur na honi ve
Vargi aur na honi ve

Tu munda bilkhul desi hai
Main Katrina toh sohni ve

Haaye main fed up ho gaya mundeya (x2)
Sunn sunn ke tere dukh de ve

Mainu kala chashma
Ho mainu kala kala kala..
Ho mainu kala chashma jajta ae
Jachda hai gore mukhde te
Mainu kala chashma jajta ae
Jach da hai gore mukhde te

all removed their shades and again started swaying in funny moves along with song and all started whistling for them

Aaj Saare, Chaand Taare
Bann Gaye Hai Disco Lights
Jal Ke, Bujha Ke Humko Bula Ke
Keh Rahe Hai, Party All Nights
Naata Betuki Dillagi Se, Todna Jaane Na
Aane Wale Kal Ki Fikar Se, Judna Jaane Na
Zidd Pakad Ke Khada Hai Kambakht
Chodhna Jaane Na... Haha...
Badtameez Dil, Batameez Dil, Batamiz Dil
Maane Na, Maane Na (X4)

Oldies along with the most youngest members of the family bowed down at the end of their performance and received standing ovation from all the people present there
Rishi and ria again took over stage "wow, kya performance thi aag laga di sabne, guys expectation are set so high by this performance correct ria?"

"absolutely correct hubby, yeh performance dekhake to etana samaz me aa gaya age kuchh bhi ho, bas josh hona chahiye, please give a round of applause for this hot performance" all guested hooted and clapped for performance

"okay okay so ab next kisaki turn hai ria?"

"hmm, oldies toh ho gaye what you say kisaki honi chahiye rishi, let me guess ladke ke mummy papa and chacha chachi correct?"

rishi nodded "ekdam correct bhai bete ki shadi hai aur mom dad kamar na lachkaye aise ho sakta hai"

"so lets welcome on stage nirmala aunty, ramnath uncle, kamini chachi nad lalaji on stage" ria welcomed them

"all the best and rock on stage" rishi wished them and again both left stage by giving space it to performers

ramnath and lalaji entered stage wearing slight heel shoes

High heel te nache tan tu badi jache

nirmala and kamini too joined them wearing heels

High heel te nache tan tu badi jache

Ik ik thumke pe, 100-100 taaliyan
Hile jab lakk tera, hilti hai baaliyan (X3)

they shakes their bodies along with music

24vi ghante munde rehnde mere agge pichhe
(Mere agge pichhe, mere agge pichhe)

Jad high heel te nache tan tu badi jache
High heel te nache tan tu badi jache

Jad high heel te nache..
Tu badi jache!

both nirmala and kamini started walking clattering their heels to imitate lyrics and lalaji and ramnath started following them dramatically

Pehli baat to yeh
Jo tu tik-tok tik-tok chalti hai
Maana ye saari teri high heels ki ghalti hai
Ruk toh jaa tu hang-on
Ye to bata tu hai kaun
Kahaan se aayi hai
Kahaan ko jaayegi
Paagal ladki mujhe marwayegi

(Shut up...)
nirmala and kamini turned slightly and hit them playfully on their forehead, both fell on floor rubbung their bumps, all girls and ladies hooded for them
music changed and both got up and took place beside their partners

Main Daalun Taal Pe Bhangra
Tu Bhi Gidda Paa Le
Chal Aisa Rang Jamaa De Hum
Ke Bane Sabhi Matwaale

lalaji and ramnath steeped forward started proper bhangra along with music

Mann Kahe Ki Main Le Aaun
Chaand Aur Taare Saare
Inn Haathon Par Main Chaand Rakhun
Iss Maang Mein Bhar Doon Taare

kamini and nirmala joined them, they waved their hands and acted filling their partitions

Hello Hello Tu Floor Pe Kab Hai Aayi
Ye Lo, Ye Lo, Badi Solid Masti Chaayi
Hello Hello Too Much Hai Tumne Lagayi
Ye Lo, Ye Lo, Control Karo Mere Bhai

all four started shaking their bodies with music flawlessly

Dhak-Dhak Dhak-Dhak Dhadke Ye Dil
Chhan Chhan Bole Amritsari Choodiyan
Raat Badi Hai Mastaani
Toh Dilbar Jaani Kar Le Gallan Goodiyan (X2)

all four swayed with full enthusiasm by doing some bangara steps and all other clapped merrily

Yeh Nain Matakka Tera
Bhi Mujhe Bada Tadpaawe

kamini and nirmala gazed them coyly

Tu Dekhe Ajj Vi Dilbar Kudiye
Teer Sa Ek Chal Jaave
Aahaa..

both clasped their chests with both hands and acted as they hit by arrow

Kar De Bin Piye Sharabi, Chehra Tera Gulabi
Koi Kyun Na Yamla Ban Jaave
Jo Itni Ho Betabi

ramnath and lalaji hugged their wives from back and pecked on their chicks turning both ladies in dark shade of red and all youngsters hooted and started whistling

"oye mere shero maja aa gaya" dadi cheered her both sons

"haye mein mar jawa " saumya chirped

"papa aaphi to sabse jawan munde ho yaha" shravan and pushkar whooped delightfully and shravan winked to his father and shown thumb up

Hello, Hello, Dil Dil Se Connect Karna
Ye Lo, Ye Lo, Yeh Baate Direct Karna

Dhak Dhak, Dhak Dhak, Dhadke Yeh Dil
Chhan-Chhan Bole Amritsari Chuidyan
Raat Badi Hai Mastaani
Toh Dilbar Jaani Kar Le Gallan Goodiyaan (X2)

they completed their performance mirthfully and left dance floor, everyone praised for their lively performance

To Be Cont...
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update was very big so i have divided in two parts, so here is part a and part b is on the way will post in sometime 😃
till the time enjoy this part




Edited by priety.priti - 8 years ago
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Picturesque update! !
Phone conversation to dance sequence... teasing to staring!
Thoda emotion...Thoda fun..!
Very well written! !
Ramu kaka in high heels !!😆
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"wow uncle aunty that was so romantic es umar me bh etana lively performance" rishi eulogized and gave salute to both men while taking his place on stage

"correct rishi but aunty ne bhi kadi takkar di uncle ko well done aunty" ria clapped for nirmala and kamini

"so ria ab ladkewalon ki turn ho gayi so now what say ladki walon ko bulaye?"

"yes of course come on masi, mausaji, mami and mamaji dikha dete hai sabko ladki wale kisise kam nahi hai"

"bilkul beta jai mata di" babulal whooped

"lets rock so lets welcome ladki wale on stage" rishi invited tiwari's on stage

manju and rachana enters dance floor first and started swaying

Hoye Hoye Hoye, Hoye Hoye Hoye... (3)

babulal and sameer joined them and pinched on their one side of waist

Saiyaan Ched Dewe, Nanad Chutki Leve
Sasural Genda Phool

manju pointed toward kamini and nirmala with her index finger and rachana pointed toward pushkar

Saas Gaari Deve, Dewar Samjha Leve
Sasural Genda Phool

all four started dance in rhythm

Chora Babul Ka Angana Bhaave Deraa Piya Ka

preeti reached sumu and bend down to wrapped her hands around her neck from back, shravan smiled on both sisters affection

Saas Gaali Deve, Dewar Samjha Leve
Sasural Genda Phool

rachana pointed to place where suman and shravan was sitting

Saiyaan Hai Vypaari, Chale Hain Pardes
Sooratiyaan Niharu, Jiyara Bhaari Howe
Sasural Genda Phool

Saas Gaali Deve, Dewarji Samjha Leve
Sasural Genda Phool

this time rachana piched manju and manju gave her fake glare

Saiyaan Ched Dewe, Nanad Chutki Leve
Sasural Genda Phool

all four winked to malhotra's who were enjoying performance joyously, all malhotra's gave them fake glare and busted laughing
music changed

Maahi Ve Maahi Ve
That's The Way Maahi Ve

they started dancing pointing toward suman

Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kanno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chanke Hai Re
Maahi Ve

Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrit Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye -

Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2)

mami and masi stretched their hands toward sumo with teary eyes

Chanda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjaoon
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re

preeti held sumo's hand and both headed to stage

Banno re banno meri chali sasuraal ko
Ankhiyon mein paani de gayi
Duaa mein meethi gud dhaani le gayi (x2)

rachana and manju caressed her chicks and their eyes welled up, all people became emotional seeing their bonding

Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho gayi (x2)

both sisters descended from stage and settled back on their places

Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rachke
Chal Bachke Oh Soniye
Dil Kitno Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2)

they ended their performance and left after thanking all
sumo glanced shravan with teary eyes. he held her left hand with his right hand and gave a gentle squeeze of assurance that "all will be fine"

"So guys that was a emotional performance what say ria"

"yes indeed ladki ki shadi means sab gharwale to emotional ho hi jate hai" ria smiled weakly remembering her bidai though it was not proper indian ritual but still it was a emotional affair

"ria sweetheart now please you don't get emotional" rishi side hugged her and she smiled in response

"yeah i am okay, so ladke ke hot bhai aur sexy bhabhi ke performance ke bina to yeh function incomplete hai correct rishi"

"yes correct, so now we invite varun bhaiyya and bhabhz to put stage on fire, please give a huge round of applause to this lovely couple" ria and rishi left stage to give space to couple

all lights went off with only one spotlight fixed on vandy, her face was covered with veil and back facing to all

Gopiyon sang ghoome kanhiyaa
Raas rachiyaa
Radha naa jaye re
Ab saanwara na bhaaye re

vandy removed her veil and started swirling with all sexy steps and all hooted for her

eti and ehaan started clapping and perky jumping on their places for their mom

Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party (X2)

varun joined her and started teasing her by holding her wrist

Panghat pe aake sayiaan marodey bayiaan
And everybody carzy on radha
Chedhe hai humka dayiaan bairi kanhiyaa
And everybody carzy on radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage bore
Hua hai aisa baawala jo kehta jaaye

both stared dancing on music as per rehearsals mimicking actual song

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya

music changes and this time it was varun's turn, he winked and pulled his collar with attitude vandy nodded her head indifferently

Ouhh ankhan de katore surma batore
lagde chhichhore bade hi fi
Dil pe daraati saade chal jaati
Maare dil gulati pucche why why (X2)

Chai mein dooba biscut ho gaya

Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya (X2)

vandy joined him and pushed him slightly by hitting his forehead

Hat re nigode neem ke pakode
Picchha kyon na chhode ghume dayein bayein
Tujhko sudharoon jutti main utaroon
Sar pe de maroon tere dhayein dhayein
Romeo bina permit ho gaya

Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
ho Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya (X2)

both started mimicking actual steps of the song

Baalon ko main set kitta gel mal ke
Chaati chaudi dolle sholle dand pel ke
Kudiya haraya tune chaal chal ke
Baaton waali baskit ball khel ke

Gel vel dekh chhori patdi nahin
Dolon se umar saari katdi nahin
Khoob pehchanoon tere dil mein hai kya
Fitrat chhoron ki palatdi nahin

Gudh dekha makhi jaisa fit ho gaya

Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
ho Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya (X2)

Ohh mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
Mein tu
ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
ainvayi ainvayi (X2)

Kyon meri galli mein aake wait karda
Harkatein down market karda
Dekhoon jo hatake khidki ka parda
Sitti vitti maar irrirate karda

Chhad attitude kabhi maan kudiye
Blank cheque de doon ya te jaan kudiye
Eentey ka yeh dil kar naram zara
Dekh le yeh gabru jawan kudiye
Chhe fut se dedh fut ho gaya

Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Ho tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya
Main to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi
lut gaya

they ended their electrifying performance and varun kissed vandy on her right chick, she blushed and hit his chest playfully.

Both brothers whistled and kept on clapping and shouting "bravo!"

"kya baat hai aaj lagta hai sare malhotra's ko apane biwiyo pe bahot pyar aa raha hai" rishi winked toward malhotra mens who were standing in row

"rishi mere bhai pyar to hamesha se hai bas aaj PDA ho raha hai" varun winked him back while hugging vandy from back

"bhiyya kya baat hai" rishi gave salute to varun all stated whooping

"Haan ji haan ji samaz gaye hum log, to ab bari hai dikhane ki kisame kitna hai dum"

"dum what do you mean ria?"

"are jab tak ladki wale aur ladko wale me dance war na ho tab tak sangeet kaise pura hoga rishi" ria beamed

"correct ria chalo dekhate hai kaun baji mar jata hai, kaun kisase superior hai"

"So all please welcome girls from tiwari's side and boys from malhotra's side to start a dance war" couple invited all girls and boys on stage

Now it was turn of suman's all girl cousins Vs Shravans boy cousins, they started in pairs first with all the the naughty looks toward Shraman

Tu giddeyan di rani
Assi bhagre de raja
Aaja lak nu hilayi ae
Hilayi ae nonstop

shraman glanced each other and chuckled

Naina naal peeke honda javan talli.
Haye chadh di hi jaave
Tere naina aali tor

Nachde tapde tere naal sohneya ve
Khul gaye black color de
Mere vaal sohneya ve (x2)

Tu kita jo, dil mainu offer
Tu kita jo, dil mainu offer
Jhat pat main mann gayi
Main mann gayi, main mann gayi

O mundeya te kudiya di
O kudiya te mundiya di

O mundeya te kudiyan di gal ban gayi
O ban gayi gal ban gayi, ban gayi
O mundeya te kudiyan di akh lad gayi
O lad gayi akh lad gayi, lad gayi (x2)

all girls and boys mimicked how shraman use to have eye locks, shraman's faces flushed

now its time for suman's embarrassment by her own cousins so all boys left stage and one of her cousin dragged sumo on stage, they made her stand in center and other circled her.

All girls started their performance with some thumka steps

Tu Ho Gayi One To Two
Oh Kudiye What To Do
Oh Ho Gayi Munde Di
Tu Turu Turu Turu..
Patanga Vargi
Tu Ainwayi Udd Di
Oh Ho Gayi Munde Di
Tu Turu Turu Turu..
Hila De Chaldi
Tuk Tuk Tu Kardi
Make Up Tu Kardi Yaar..
Angrezi Padhdi
Ghit Pit Tu Kardi
Jimme Queen Saadi Victoria
Tu Ghanti Big Ban Di
Poora London Thumakda
Oh Jaddo Nachche Pehn Di
Poora London Thumakda
Tu Ghanti Big Ban Di
Poora London Thumakda
Oh Jaddo Nachche Pehn Di
Poora London Thumakda
Haye! Haye! Haye!
Aha! Aha! Aha!

they all shook their bodies with proper thumka steps

Lathe Di Chadar
Uthe Honeymoon Kar Maahiya
Aavo Saamne, Aavo Saamne
Tera Ki Size Hai Ve Das Maahiya

dark color of red covered sumo's chicks, she blushed hardly wishing earth to open up and would swallow her up immediately, she started leaving but girls blocked her way

Malmal Da Kurta
Dikh Da Hai Sab Kuch Clear Maahiya
Tere Saamne, Tere Saamne
Lagda Hai Chhota Palang Maahiya..
(Oh Siyapa..)
(Oye Hoye Hoye
Death Hi Ho Gayi..)

shravan throw flying kiss to all girls, sumo bit her lower lip ,her chicks started aching with heat, she pushed her cousin and scooted from stage to hide her flushed face

Now it was time for boys so girls get down from stage and all boys occupied space

Jo bhida tere..

Jo bhida tere naino se tanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua (X2)

all his cousins pointed toward shravan and pushkar started whistling while scooting toward stage to join them

Tune sharma ke window se jhanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Aa sun o ri gori
Mohabbat mein tohri
Na jaane kab June se December hua

pushkar winked to shraman "bhai perfect lyrics" pushkar whooped, shraman's faces flushed and they started looking here and there to avoid more embarrassment

Tune English mein
Tune English mein jab humko danta
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Pyar se maara gaalon pe chanta

boys caressed their chicks dramatically

Toh aashiq surrender hua
Jo bhida tere naino se...

shravan rubbed back of his neck, sumo's cheeks heated up and she started fidgeting with her duppatta but that was not end of their teasing session they were very well aware about fact that there is more on the way

Now again its girls turn so boys left and girls took their positions

Garm hawa di udi gubaari
Family de haath ni aari
Jugni dugni chamak chingari

girls started dancing with some dramatic steps pointing toward sumo, sumo gaped and chortled at them

Monsoon se halki bhaari
Warning public mein jaari
Aap sambhaalo jimmedari..

girls pointed shravan and gave him fake scary look

Baat-vaat kardi ai
Haath-vaath maardi ai
Bethe kabhi na back-seat

they all did steps to show shravan how much dangerous sumo is? by embarrassing her, shravan started throwing some cheesy comments to overcome of the embarrass situation between them and all people kept hooting, sumo glanced him from corner of her eyes, though all of them are not true but some are... she chuckled

Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger...
Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger.. Sexy!
Banno tera swagger..
Sexy.Banno.

shravan glanced sumo and swiftly averted his gaze back to dancers while giggling

Gunn chhatiso gold hai tere na silver na copper
Haath lagaade jis subject pe usme nikle topper
uD jaaye apni hawaa thaam ke pankh nikal aaye proper
bande pe ehsaan hai tera maan liya jo offer

both passed their smile to all those hilarious moves and people kept cheering them adding more embarrassment to shraman's awkward situation.

Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger... sexy!
Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger laage sexy
Banno tera swagger.. Sexy!
Banno tera swagger..

again it was boys turn so they gathered on stage and girls left giving them space

Aa Aa Aah.. Hor Hor Wadhiya (X4)

all boys pointed to shravan and shook their bodies, shaking their legs swiftly like professional dancers

Punjab Da Puttar, Hai Pind Jalandhar
Yaar Wai Wai Ankhiyon Se Kill Karda
King Type Da, Hai Tang Life Da
Yaar Wai Wai Khetan Vich Chill Karda
Do It My My Way, Nahi Te Highway
Inko Farak Yaaron Ki Penda
Iski Uski Kaun Kiski Yaaran Da Imaan Whisky
Uspe Chicken Ho To Hor Wadhiya
Pretty Pretty Face Jitthe Jatta Always Utthe
Maamla Done Ho To Hor Wadhiya
Aa Aa Aah.. Hor Hor Wadhiya (X2)

two of the girls from shravan side joined them on dance floor

Punjabi Titli, Na Pate Easily
Yaar Wai Wai Ungli Pe Nachaundi Ai
Point-Blank Te Encounter Kardi
Yaar Wai Wai Jab Lakk Matkandi Ai
Left Te Dinky, Right Te Pinky
Kudiyan Di Fashion Parade Lag Gayi
Iski Uski Kaun Kiski Yaaran Da Imaan Whisky
Uspe Chicken Ho To Hor Wadhiya
Pretty Pretty Face Jitthe Jatta Always Utthe
Maamla Done Ho To Hor Wadhiya
Aa Aa Aah.. Hor Hor Wadhiya (X2)
Aa Aa Aah.. Hor Hor Wadhiya
two girls left and sumo's cousins joined boys on floor since it was a combined dance for last part, one of the sumo's cousin pulled shravan on stage

Munda thoda.. offbeat hai
Par kudiya de naal.. bohat sweet hai (x2)

girls started drooling on him, one of the girl touched shrvans chick naughtily and simpered turning his ears red, sumo giggled at his plight , he stealthy freed himself and dashed down from stage

Dhongi sa ye bada dheeth hai
Viral hogya ye Tweet

Par phool wool karne mein cool
Tu badi tezz katari hai
Shagan teri ki, lagan teri ki
Humne kardi taiyari hai

Nachde ne saare ral-mil ke
Aaj hil-dul ke
Le saare ke saare nazare (x2)

Khasma nu khaane!
Hadipa... Hadipa...

All girls and boys bowed down and ended their performance gaining round of applause for it

"wah ji kya tadkata phadakta performance tha, thank you girls and boys" rishi whooped

"really rishi it was awsome koi bhi kisi se kam nahi tha"

"en logo ne to sach me fire laga di stage pe"

"toh rishi ab kisaki bari hai?"

"ab aayega dulhan ka dewar aur dulhe ki sali"

"matlab naughy pushkar and pyari preeti" ria chirped

"yes chalo dekhate hai yeh log kya karte hai" shraman cheered and clapped for their sibs "so lets welcome this naughty pair with big round of applause" rishi invited preekar and left from stage

Wah wah Ramji, jodi kya banaayi
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai (one from K3G)

Pushkar ans preeti join their hands and did signature steps and music changed

Dance dance everybody
Getting hot in the party
Common common start feeling
Dance dance everybody (x2)

preeti shook her body with some sexy steps and got whistle from shravan,

Bhagre di queen main taan
Kudi so haseen main taan
Meri hai gazab galbaat
Figure hega kaint mera
Thumka excellent mera
Groovy groovy hoja mere saath (x2)

pushkar too joined her, both started shaking their bodies with perfect steps and co ordination

Nachange saari raat soniyo ve (X2)

Karle thoda sa pyaar soniyo ve
Karle thoda sa pyaar (x2)

all lights went off and music changed , first one spotlight gets on spotting pushkar he twisted his body and after a moment second spotlight turned on spotting preeti beside him, she too swirled her body on same music

All lights turned on and all started hooting an whistling for them

O what a look, what a grace
Tenu hi karaan main chase
What a naksh, what a nain
Dil tera ho gaya fan
What a smile, what a style
Lut'ti neendo ki ye file
Kabhi soft, kabhi rude
Killer tera attitude

preeti gave him killer look

Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke (x2)

O teri ankh da ishaara mujhe fraud lage
Tu toh Majnu aawaara by God lage

O kasme waade khake
Apni pocket money bacha ke
Aaya tere liye paise waise jod jaad ke..

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya Dilli wali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Teri galli mein bhi aana start kar diya
Ik tere naam apna heart kar diya
Karne laga aankh matakka
Ab toh aashiq ban gaya pakka
Aaj abhi maine tera boycott kar diya
Teri saari harqatein main toh note karu
Tujhe thaane mein le jaake main report karu oye

Tu na kar aise fight
Tera mood main karu light
Tujhe scene mein dikha ke film Golmaal ke..

Naam tera hi likhaya maine wedding card pe
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Yeh to ishq mein dekho badtameez ho gaya
Bina baat ke hi mujh pe ye freeze ho gaya
Refuse kiya sau baari
Phir bhi karna chahe yaari
Passion tere liye mera increase ho gaya

Tu hi day lage
Mujhe meri night lage
Mujhe future mera tere sang bright lage

pushkar grabbed her hand by wrist, preeti pushed him and winked at shravan
she swiftly reached shravan

Tujh se bhi zyada shona
Koi handsome munda hona
Leke jayega sone mein tol tal ke Oye..

she pulled shravan from his seat and held his hand, addressing him as handsome munda and headed back to stage

O tere liye aaj gaddi main toh mod-maad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chaad ke

Chal jhutta.. mere liye signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Both completed their performance thanked everyone and all people praised them for their co ordination

"Pushkar aur preeti ne to bhai aag hi laga di koi please fire brigade mangwa do" rishi jocked and all started clapping

'okay so moving to the last performance of the evening" all cheered for shraman

"yes correct humare sharmili jodi ka performance"

"so rishi why we are waiting just invite our love birds, couple of the evening on stage for their sizzling performance"

"please shravan apane suman ko lekar aaja stage todane ke liye" rishi winked and shravan shooted angry daggers to him with his eyes, rishi grinned broadly

"so lets welcome couple for the most awaited performance of the evening" ria whooped and gave a thumbs up to shraman

shravan got up from his seat and forwarded his hand as gentleman "may i?", sumo smiled and hold his hand , both headed to stage leaded by shravan

All lights went off, Shraman took their position on stage, they were pretty much confident as they selected "Gulaabo" song for their performance so no awkward moment they gonna face like engagement

but on their mere expectation music started making them dumbfounded, both gapes each other but shravan composed himself quickly and gestured her to follow him just to avoid any bedlam on stage as everyone have their all eyes on them since they were main couple of night,

shravan was pretty much sure that who was behind all this drama, he glared pushkar and received wink from pushkar in response

shravan took her left hand and put on his right shoulder, he wrapped his right hand around her waist and pulled her little closed, he intertwined their free hands and started swaying

Har pal meriyaan yadaan
Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa
Te dassa fir kinnu (x2)

"shravan ye song kaise change ho gaya hum logo ne to yeh song select nahi kiya tha na" she murmured with fake smile plastered on her face, but tensed inwardly

"yeh sab pushkar ka kam hai" he too gave a fake smile greeting his tetths "but lets dance freely otherwise our performance will be ruined and she nodded, he started creating soothing circles on her back to relax her tensed body

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do

he twirled her and hugged her from back resting his hands on her stomach, she too rested her hands on top of his

Jhoomu main naachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

she tried to part away but he pulled her back with their both intertwined hands and her back hit with his hard chest, he rested his chin on her head and started swaying by hugging her from back

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)

he twirled her twice and pulled her with jerk collapsing her front with his front and rested both hands on her waist

Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

he slowly started tracing her bare hand length with his finger creating havoc between them , she felt like current was passing from his body to her, she dipped down her chin to hide her blush

Sham wahi, kaam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam (x2)

shravan put her finger below her chin so that she can look directly into his eyes, she obeyed and they had a eye lock

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?

he whirled her with one hand and his other hand was folded at his back

Jhoomu main nachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse milkar tumko hai batana (x2)

both were lost in each other

sudden change in beats broke their trance and both flushed, but continued swaying with some sassy steps on music by maintaining some distance

Teri meri story jaise Big Bang Theory
Main sunaun chori-chori ye sab ko
Tu mujhse door main yahan pe majboor
Shikva karun main ye Rabb ko (Rabb ko..)
Ek din tum bin beete lage saal
Mera hua bura haal
Mera hua bura haal
Haal kabhi apna mujhe to bataao na
Aur laut kar wapas kabhi mere paas aao na

shravan forwarded his hand she accepted immediately, he rested his both hands on her waist and she encircled her both hands around his neck, they started swaying with eye lock

Sota hoon kabhi rota hoon
Tere bina o sanam
Paa kar sab kuch khota hoon
Tere bina o sanam (x2)

he removed his left hand from her waist and same she did with her right and they intertwined them in middle

Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?

he bend down slightly along with her and twirled her slightly and again came back to their previous position by straightening themselves

Jhoomu main naachun gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

he untangled their hands and hold her left in his left, and swayed side by side

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)

he pulled her and gently lifted her like feather with her waist she throw back her head slightly and straighten laterally her hands in air, he whirled along with her

Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

he slowly put down and rested his hands on her stomach and chin on her shoulder, his hot breath started fanning her neck making it worst for sumo to stand on her feets

Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana...

At the end of song all family members joined couple on stage and started dance on melody of

Gal mithi mithi bol and panjabi wedding song

with typical bhangra steps and live dhol
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All had dinner after formally ending sangeet function, shraman's was very conscious around each other mostly they avoided each other for remaining night.
Since it was very late so tiwari's requested leave and they left for TK

After tiwari's left shravan started chasing pushkar, after some tom and jerry race finally shravan succeeded in grabbing pushkar, pushkar fell down on floor and shravan jumped on him and straddled on his stomach, he grabbed his collar

"sale kamine pushkar teri kya dushmani hai muzase kyu tune mera song change kiya" shravan yelled

"bhai mein aapka sala nahi hu , woh to gaya ghar" pushkar pouted with fake disappointment

"tuze majak such raha hai kitani problem ho gayi thi pata hai waha stage pe kaise taise dance kiya" shravan chided by the time rishi and varun too joine them

"lekin bro aisa to nahi laga ki tum logo ko problem hui dance karne me, i mean you both were perfect in full co ordination" rishi stated as matter of fact

"rishi bro you dont know how i managed that" shravan exasperated

"really bhaiyya?" pushkar cocked his right brow in question

"correct pushkar i second you on that by seeing their performance i can bet that it was not at all difficult for them" varun quipped

"ohh to ab mein samaza yeh aap logo ki mili bhagat hai hai na, pushakr tune kal ka badla liya na" shravan tighten his hold on pushkars collar

"koi shaq?" pushkar raised his both brow

"ruk bete tu teri shadi jab hogi na tab tuze ghar chod ke na bhagna pageda na to mein apana nam badal dunga" shravan warned him with glare

"okay bhai as you wish lekin aaj to meine bahot enjoy kiya" pushkar flashed his signature smile

"are bro ab to use chod bichara mar jayega tere weight se" rishi said and patted shravan's shoulder

he got up and sat beside rishi "waise rishi and bhaiyya don't you think ke pushar ka performance bhi awesome tha and specially his tuning with preeti" he shifted focus on pushkar by stressing on preeti , he winked at pushkar and rolled his tongue at inner side of his chick naughtily

pushkar gaped him and his mouth turned into big O.

After some chit chat and some more leg pulling of pushkar they all dispersed to their respective room and drifted immediately after changing into night cloths since it was a tirey day for all of them
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So here is second part, hope you guys will enjoy their sangeet 😃
Please do comment and let me know you guys like it or not.
I really felt disappointed on response for last chapters, if you guys dont like it then let me know i will discontinue this ff 😕

Take care ❤️
Priti




Edited by priety.priti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
Late night assignments sometimes help
Baki sab thik end mein kya tha
DISCONTINUE matlab 😡
Soory for not commenting on few chapters
Uski itni badi punishment 😭
Yr story is on offf my favourite...do you get di
Plz dont ever never think of doing that
Nahi toh i will never talk to u
Luv ya di
Soon i will unress..pakka
___________________

Soooeiii for such a late



Chalo coming to chappy na 😳

First think that u luv abt yr story is
Everyone one is positive in yr story
Mammi hi maui kamini
Everyone is positive
No negativity...I love tha thing
And this made yr ff different from others

Suman adhi dulhan ban gai hai ... 😆
And solve the biggest mystery
Thats hilliarious

Suman mehandi ...wah !!!! Wah !!!!!
Shravan ka chada rang 😳

Loved the suman preeti blabbering
So real ... 😳
Too emotional di
I am just like ...ppoor baby

Shravan kitna underestanding hai towards sumo
Perfect husband ...
Despite if their arrange they are truly soulmate
Soulmate which understand each other perfectly
Their emotions their life their difficulties and their hearts ❤️

Lovely Ria
Kitna bolti hai ...
I understand mera bhi kuch yahi haal hai 😆
Ohhh mein distract hoh gayi
But I loved this Ria
Kash show mein bhi dikhate 😭
Par koi nahiii aapne dikha diya

Awww sumo blushing
I want to see more of blushing sumooo



I love shravan sumo staring game ...aww my too cuties
Shravan our sona munda ...




Now coming to Sangeet
Langur ke haath mein angoor ...diii
Tooo hilarious 🤣

Sangeet is perfect di
Seems like you have attended many punjabi sangeet 😳
Selction of song is mashaala 👏
And the efforts u have put on selection of song is mindblowing
As i feel I am reading the actual sangeet
So perfect
Family members are so cute and funny
And song suits them welll
Tooo tooo good
Now shraman performance
Yeh dekhar mujhe yeh yaad aa gaya






Their move their style chemistry
Its like complete soulmate 😳
And you show it so welll


Again well done job di
I am hoping to get an early updatw now
Waiting for next and shadi also
Update sooon na

Luv ya di
Tiii se tinnna 🤗
Edited by Tinna28 - 8 years ago
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I am so gussa with u right now
How can u say discontinue 😭
😭 😭

Sony wale toh dusht nikile ...

Par aap toh kitni aachi hoh .pretty preeti di
I hope aap aisa kuch nahi karogi di 😭 😊
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Just read both the chapters, liked the song collection ! ShraMan's dance was something 😉
Want more of their cute moments :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing updates
absolutely brilliant
loved them
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
ye Kya tha Yrr Mai to ek bar Dekh ke dukhi he ho gai ki itne din baad update usme bhi itna chotu update Phir jab baad ne second part dekha and I was like registaan me barish...itne din ka intezar rang laya...awesome update dear...your song selection was so good and every step of dance was superb ...Mujhe to such me live shadi sangeet waala feel aa raha tha...waiting for next par please please please update soon...itna wait mat karana please
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AaaNnnGggEeeLll !!! 🤗

Oookaay!!!
M fell hell hell Amazing after reading your Chap and at the same time hell hell mad at you!😡
Phlay lemme shower u wid my love...Gussa baad mein dekhati hon *pointed glare*

OMG! OMG! OMG!
Literally O to the M effing G!!!

Angel firstly m in badly need of a tight tight suffocating Hug from You!..Please give me one🤗

Now Please SACHI SACHI batana yeh poora Sangeet ka senerio kahein apki apnay Sangeet ka tu Nhi!!!😃
The reason of my asking sucha Question is coz I know u wont believe but trust me I was So so so into this chap as if i myself personally was attending that Function!..Like srsly!!!😛😃

I enjoyed every Single Bit of this Chapter!...Sachi!⭐️

Oye hoye...The choice of Songs...Killer!!!👏⭐️
You literally made me badly want to be part of such a joyful Event!
Mere itna dil.kiya k mein bhi dance floor par jump karon aur shru ho jaon😛

But let me be honest with you...I "WAS" very dissapointed by the choice of song u made for Shraman But..but but but You actually sublimated my Dissapointment in matter of seconds as i started to read about their detailed performance!
Trust me...i was completely "mesmerized" and "engaged"by the Beauty and Perfection you added to their performance![
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Angel! YOU TRUELY NAILED IT BEYOND MY IMAGINATION!!!👏⭐️
I so so so loved that part to core❤️
And the rest of the chap well it was Hell Magnifecent!👏
M totally Blowen Away!😃



Now coming towards me being hell mad at you!😡
Though tbh itna excitement k baad dantnay ka maan tu nhi par You surly need some scolding session and someone to knock down some senses into you!

So you want to discontinue this lovely FF of urs han and leave us all hanging!
Sachi batana kon say floor say geri k sar par chot agae yeh kisi baat ka sadma lay lea! Han!

Kissi ek Pagal Ullo ki dum nay bola kuch bakwas boli aur tumney descide lar leay FF ko discontinue karna ko!
Pagal ho gae ho kya!
Humara zara khayal nhi!

For God sake mjhy tu abhi bhi meri curiosity khaay jaa rhi hai yeh sooch sooch kar ki Why Sumo never wanted to get married! Aur apko yeh suspense tu lkholna hi nhi aur chali hain discontinue karnay!
Pata bhi how much i love reading ur FF ur every single piece of writing and this FF Of urs is hell.amazing and to put an abrupt end to such a magnifecent piece is a Sheer foolish thing to
do!

Aisa bhi koi karta hai apnay namay munay pyaaray say readers k sath Bolo!
Itna zulm.maat karo hum becharon pay Please!

M telling you You ARE NOT PUTTING AN END TO THIS FF OF URS ANY TIME SOON!
Did you got it!

Or else mein mooan phola kar baith jaon gi and won't talk to yoi
Issy meri dhamki na smjhna coz m deadly serious!
Got It!

Ab jaldi say achau bachon ki tarhan jaaldi say announcement karo tht u are not endinh ur FF anytime soon chalo shabaash!

Will be waiting for it!


Love you(only if u are not ending it😛)
Devil❤️




P.S.Have lot more to say and praise about ur chap but late night hai aur sona bhi hai tu abhi k leay itnay say kaam chalalo baki ka baad mein arram say paka!😉
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res!😕

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Unres



Angel!!!🤗
So sorry for being this late..i knw you must have bee eagerly waiting for my unress...This devil of urs is always the last person to unress just like a slow timid turtle😕

yes of course devil tere comment ka to mein karati hi hu 😃you are slow but not at all timid dear😉 even this time i am a so slow in replying your comment 😳

Coming towards the update...😃

So seems like Preeker's train is slightly on track han😛😆

yes side mein unaki train bhi la rahi hu track pe 😉

OMG!...I so hate this bullying!
Their family just not made them hell confused but also made them dout their very rite decision!..ab aisa bhi nhi karna chahiyay!
Bhai banda shaadi karnay jaa raha hai naki jang larnay...aur usko dara bhi aisay rahay ho ki bina talwar k hi larnay bhaja ja rha ho...

nainu baby jab shadi ho jayegi na tab yehi baat bolna 😆😆 you will never say this shadi na ek aisa laddu hai jo khata hai woh pachatata hai aur jo nahi khata hai woh bhi pachatata hai so ye common reaction hoti hai all married ppl ki 😉


Marriage wants compromise no matter what and if you really want that marriage to work out then you surly have to compromise.

yes dear it needs compromise but they are just warning them about the side effects and they all did compromises in their relations , but experience ke bol to bolne hi hai na 😛


Oookaaay I have a question!...I so smell fishy fishy stuff cooking between them...aisa bhi kya reason hai jo yeh dono ek dusray say Shaadi karnay k leay maan bhi gaay and dono hi buhat relaxed hain shaadi ki baad ki life ko lay kar as if both are still going to live their life's as bachelors 🤓...Kuch buhat solid agreement hoi hai dono k darmiyan...Right!?😈

yeh suspense very soon kholungi pakka 😃 tab tak shadi enjoy karo

Oh Angel That Mother-Son convo...Uff u nailed it for sure!👏👏👏
It was so close to reality and every word of Nirmala was true enough to accept!
The one fact i loved the most which you penned hell Brilliantly was about after marriage "Betay bhi paraay ho jatay hain!"..that very talk and was really Outclass⭐️👏

yes girls bolati hai ki woh apana ghar chod ke aayi hai lekin ladko ki responsibility jyada badh jati hai woh bhi apane maa se dur ho jate hai aur yeh karna jaroori bhi hota hai naye relation ko blossom karne ke liye 😳

"Maa honay say phlay ek aurat hon!..."...❤️...and the promise she made him make...❤️

Ek wife ka sab say bara anchor uska Husband hotay hai uskay susural mein and if she doesn't get the support from her that very anchor then she'll surly drown and if her in-law's are hell creepy then tu paka gae kaam say😛

yes for every girl first relation in her new house is her her husband and that is what wife want from her hubby to listen and support but at the same time girl should also understand that not to make situation worse by behaving beyond limits 😕

Awwwh...The way he told Nirmala that his priority will always be her...that part was really sweet and the way he expressed his love for her...So adorable!

yes he loves his mother and that is true he is getting married that doesn't mean he will make his mother as second priority or she will loose her haq on her son 😊

OMG!🤣
Pushkar and Varun are soo damn hillarious and that part in which they were convincing Shravan for a bachelorette party...Oh Angel you are so Incredible when it comes to writing a Hillarious seen⭐️😆😆

thank you devil 😃😃

Ooo WoW!
Spinster Party!😃

yes ladkiya q piche rahe correct ?😉

Shraman Tiwari Killa convo was...⭐️👏👏
They both are almost alike but at the same time both are crazy in their own ways😛😆
Deepika and Aalia and Hritik...Like srsly!...🤣

Tht flying Kiss...Awwh😳...Poor Shravan didn't got to witness another one😛😆

yes because she did first in flow and next time she was conscious so no second time 😆

Aaangelll!🤗
Yje scene in which he's about to leave and Shraman had their last convo about 1 week left for their marriage n all...Oh...Angel it was hell hell Beautiful!⭐️👏

thank you 😳😳

Yeh kya😆..Dono k dono apni hi Party mein hell bore hogaay😆
But i must say Shravan's party was more fun...I mean the way all Gents narrated their miserable stories..😛😆😆...and over that Shravan recorded it all...Woah!😆

yes sorry for that i didn't elaborated girls convo but trust me what i imagined was same hilarious as boys 😉

But the scariest part was this all mess, messed up their decision their views about getting married and the Purpose and beauty that lies behind this pure ritual...Uff these crazy Drunk fools

no no it wont affect that much that is so natural re as first reaction you see they will be overcome from that 😃 its a party before entering marriagehood so they some tips what you say 😉

I so hope Shraman doesnt get too caught up by their silly assumptions and make a nasty decision😕
Waisy bhi something is already cooked btw them bs is ready to be served just after their marriage...I have such a feling😕

jyada tension mat lo devil sab dhire dhire samaz me aa jayega 😉

Angel as always a Remarkable quote you added!
Always you surprise me with such apt quotes and the way you fit them in...Oh i must say you are quite Aamzing with that task!😉⭐️👏

thank you dear i need to do much search for perfect quote 😳

Wel i must say ab mjhy bhi dar lag raha hai for our Stupid Shraman!😕😆

no need to get scared things will be fine don't worry ⭐️

Now with out wasting a sec jumping to read the next part😃😉😆


Take Care!
Devil❤️



thank you so much devil for your lovely comment and sorry for replying so late 😳

luv u devil 🤗

angel

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