There are so many complex and conflicitng emotions this story makes me feel, it is not easy to gather my thoughts and put them down. Though I will try.
There are some chapters that have absolutely mesmerized me and some that have frustrated the heck out of me.
I have cried real tears for these fictional characters and forgotten momentarily that they are just a figment of your imagination.
Their joy and their misery have somewhere become so relatable that it feels just like an extension of me and my tribulations in life.
The city of New York...it's amazing that you have never been to that city. The sights the sounds the smells you have studied them thoroughly and made the city your own.That dear Aishu is the sign of a brilliant writer
There have been a few favorite chapters of mine so far. This chapter has now joined those favorites rank.
Not only because of it being a game changer chapter, or because it is the chapter about Maan's realization(Oh my that in itself is so precious. I thought this man would never get there)
What I love is how you brought about the realization.
How you defined what perfection meant to him personally.
He met a perfect woman with marriage in mind and it only helped underline the imperfections of his Geet that suddenly were perfect for him
The poem/shayari that you incorporated was absolutely beautiful, and though there were many words that I did not grasp I understood that it just made it that much more mysterious and beautiful. Kuch Maan aur Geet ek rishte ke jaise.
Suna hai dard ki gahak hain chashm-e-naaz us ki
So ham bhi us ki gali se guzar ke dekhte hain
This is going to be self- prophesying isn't it? She is not going to make it easy for him. But he is finally aware of the truth in his heart,so that's half the battle won.
And now we wait... for her.
There is another song that came to my mind that I think fits beautifully right now.
John Legend's, "All Of Me"
What would I do without your smart mouth?
Drawing me in, and you kicking me out
You've got my head spinning, no kidding, I can't pin you down
What's going on in that beautiful mind
I'm on your magical mystery ride
And I'm so dizzy, don't know what hit me, but I'll be alright
My head's under water
But I'm breathing fine
You're crazy and I'm out of my mind
'Cause all of me
Loves all of you
Love your curves and all your edges
All your perfect imperfections
Give your all to me
I'll give my all to you
You're my end and my beginning
Even when I lose I'm winning
'Cause I give you all of me
And you give me all of you, oh oh
How many times do I have to tell you
Even when you're crying you're beautiful too
The world is beating you down, I'm around through every mood
You're my downfall, you're my muse
My worst distraction, my rhythm and blues
I can't stop singing, it's ringing, in my head for you
Edited by Susegad - 7 years ago
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