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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi All 😃

Suddenly after a long time I felt like writing something. And it obviously had to be about Maaneet only.

So here is the OS I wrote a few days back. Still unsure about how it has turned out to be. Well, your comments can help me decide that. 😳

I hope you like it.
*Fingers Crossed* 😉


So here you go...Enjoy!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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But where is the OS ?
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Dekho Na



They had been childhood friends or should I say best friends, well it has been a controversial topic even for them ever since his family shifted next to her house. The first time they met, it was an instant connection and they never needed anyone else. They would love to play pranks and tease each other to death. But one tear in the other's eye, and it would make them so restless that they would move heaven and earth to bring back smile on the other's face. And as the time passed, the bond only grew stronger making them inseparable.


The first time she learnt meaning of the word LOVE, she had loved him since then or maybe even before that. It had always been him for her. She could neither imagine herself with anyone else nor she wanted to. But his feelings had always been a mystery to her. She could never guess if he considered her just as a friend or was there something more to their relation from his side. He was a very private kind of person and always kept his emotions enclosed in the deepest part of his heart where no one was ever allowed to venture. She being the bubbly one, always wanted to confess her feelings, to say what was in her heart. But scared of his rejection, never voiced out her wish to anyone, just kept praying for some kind of miracle to happen and grant her the love she so much desired.


Today maybe the God was in a very good mood and decided to shower his blessings on her else who would have thought her dreams would come true. It was the happiest moment of her life. She was just informed by her parents that they had fixed her alliance. For a moment she was felt numb as she imagined herself married with a total stranger, the idea itself felt so alien to her that her eyes started to get moist. But the moment she heard it was with her childhood sweetheart, the only person with whom she wanted to spend the rest of her life, it was difficult to hide the happiness that was dripping from every part of her mind, body and soul. She could not stand there a moment longer else she would have definitely made a fool out of herself with the amount of excitement that was present on her face. And maybe to reflect upon her feelings it started raining just as she reached in the balcony of her room.


Music starts


She extended her hand outside to play with the water droplets, which seemed eager to quench the thirst of the Earth just like the news of her alliance seemed to quench the thirst of her aching soul.


yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na


She closed her eyes and brought her right hand near her face, delicately touching and gliding on the skin with the back of her hand. She felt shy with all her feelings and held the railing with both her hands for support.


hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na



Suddenly she felt him standing behind her, her back glued to his chest. Both his hands slowly moved to rest on her stomach possessively while he sensuously started nuzzling her neck and kissing her shoulder. She held his hands upon her waist resting her back completely on his chest, finding it difficult to stand with the sudden assault on her senses.


phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

haayee phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam


He removed the dupatta from her neck that was hindering his access and let the wind fly it away from them. He turned her around to attack her neck from front.


haa saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada
kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha


She lovingly cupped his face, looking directly into his eyes, trying to show him the shower of her love through the windows of her soul.


samjho na samjho na
samjho na samjho na


He brought her face closer to his and kissed her eyes one by one, telling her that he understood what her eyes said to him.


hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na
dekho na dekho na



She opened her eyes and started kissing his forehead, his eyes, his cheeks and got lost in him.


jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe
meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe
meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare


Suddenly she returns back to her world feeling the loss of warmth and hits her head for day dreaming about about him so vividly. Feeling embarrassed she runs inside her room.


hmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon na
saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon na


Reaching inside her room, she closes the door and stands there resting her back on it. Feeling a presence there, she opens her eyes only to find him standing few centimeters away from her face. Their breaths mingling into each other's and lips coming near.


chhuu lo na chhu lo na
chhuu lo na chhu lo


She closes her eyes, anticipating and accepting his next move.


hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
na duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na...
dekho na hmm hmm hmm
hmm hmm hmm dekho


Getting her permission, he starts to kiss her. The kiss starts with just a peck, turning into a passionate one. They get lost into each other and stop only when they become too breathless to continue, resting their foreheads together.


Once her breathing became normal, she opened her eyes only to find him still standing there, gazing lovingly into her orbs. Realization dawns upon her. The kiss that she thought was a figment of her imagination, was actually as real as it could get. Her first kiss. With him. Shyness covers her whole being, she abruptly frees herself from him and tries to run away and hide somewhere, not able to look at him.


He holds her hand from behind to stop her and slowly comes near, locking his hands at her waist while resting his chin at her shoulder.


Trying to run away from me? Do you really think I will let you go away so easily?


He bit her earlobe while she hissed at the new sensations he was evoking in her.


You have been running away from expressing your feelings for a long time now, today I won't allow the same.


Geet looks at him so shocked while a smirk appears on his face. He knew about her feelings all along?


B.. But h.. How? When?


Seriously did you really think yourself such a good actor that I won't know what is in your heart? If yes, I am sorry to tell you that you suck at acting. I knew about your feelings even before you realised them.


Now she was shocked beyond limits while Maan gave her a triumphant smile.




Well, let's leave it upto them to find out who started loving the other first and when. We won't like to disturb them during their personal fight now. Would we? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

But where is the OS ?



Sorry...Didn't expect someone to find the thread so fast 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Swagat hai aapka...hmare gareeb thread pe 😛 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi_jain



Swagat hai aapka...hmare gareeb thread pe 😛 😉



pm kar na pagal
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... it's such a beautiful OS... So simple and so loving... loved every bit of it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous os 👏 childhood friends turning into soulmates. They don't need words to express their feelings for each other as it comes naturally to geet and maan. They were, are and will always be ment to be together and forever 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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kr diya already
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

wow... it's such a beautiful OS... So simple and so loving... loved every bit of it



Thanks dear 😊

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