OS - THE REALISATION

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone,

I have written a new OS on Bittu and Munni. I hope you all like it. Didnt proofread, so forgive me if there are any mistakes. Please give me feedback. Thanks

OS : THE REALISATION

He neared her. He kept on moving closer to her. He was on full rage and utmost anger on her brothers, but could express only half of it to her, don't know why. There she was standing, right in front of him. She, the main reason of all atrocities happening n the town is in front of him. How many times he had intentions to teach lessons to this family, this time his dear friend having become the victim of their absurd rowdyism, he kidnapped the apple of their eyes, their sister. He wanted to punish their dear one for all the tortures they have done. He just hated the family. He wanted to take revenge. His eyes focused only on her eyes. His anger and thoughts filled eyes met hers. The innocence in her eyes became a speed breaker to his running thoughts. Even he himself wasnt sure what was he upto yet he kept on moving closer to her. He could sense her breathe. The innocent eyes were filled with fear now, as the distance between them was decreasing.

He moved his hands towards her dress. He held her Shawl. She jerked. She felt helpless. Her mind went blank, so does his. She wished all these just to be a dream. She shouted. He removed her shawl. She cried a lot and sat down with face buried between her legs. He heard her helpless cries. He recalled everything from the very moment he met her. The way she was running to save Monty. The way she rushed to Monty to check on his condition after reaching the spot. The way she questioned him back of causing harm to Monty. The way her face changed when she got to know the reality and now the way she is crying. His anger decreased. He wanted to hurt them, by punishing her but couldnt. His helplessness increased now.

Bittu : I cannot behave in an inhuman way like your brothers...I can never repeat what your brothers have done... If I do, then there will no be any difference between your brothers and me...Just ask them to be good hereafter...

He fumed in anger...

She cried continuously...

He shouted her not to cry and threw the Shawl on her forcefully and left the spot. She looked at him...

...

She kept on crying. Her mind had train of thoughts running. Why did her brothers lie to her? What was the need of she, being protected too much ? What was the need to hurt others ? Why wasnt everything normal ? Why didnt she realise all these earlier ? Why didnt her mother-like bhabi's too hid everything? What made them behave this way to the people?

All these question ran on her mind , her body being devoid of food and water from morning became weak, she felt physical as well as mental pain. She collapsed.

...

What happened? why dint u hurt her ? asked one of his friends.

She seems to be innocent...,bittu replied.

How come she doesnot know any of the things thats happening around her? Its clear that she is acting... he replied back.

Bittu dint reply.

Hows Monty ?... , Bittu asked.

We are with him...will take care of him...you have fought with the town's greatest villain, you must be tired. Have food Bittu.... he replied.

Did she eat ? he asked

his friends gave him a taunting look.

How do we know? you brought her here... replied his friend.

Dont give her food, let her starve...said another friend.

Bittu just glared him...he shut his mouth...

The friends dispersed

...

"No Bauji nooo...Baujiii"...she shouted ,,,It was a bad dream. She started thinking of all those happened from the morning ...By repeatedly asking the same question about her family, the answer she arrived was just the "love and affection". Tears rolled down the cheeks from her eyes. They have done everything just out of their love for her. But she absolutely hated the way it was overdone. She realised that in no way they could justify the way they have been all these years. She was lost in thoughts.

...

He neared her with food packets and water in his hands...

She got up.

Bittu : Have food..., he said harshly.

Munni : Is that true ?. ... she questioned him with eyes filled with hope.

She was hoping that everything about her brothers should be a lie.

Bittu : What are you asking about ?? ...

Munni : Whatever you said about my brothers ?...

Bittu sighed...He got irritated on talking about them...

Munni : Please answer me...she begged.

Her lifeless voice and eyes composed him...

Bittu nodded : yeah true..., if you dont believe me, you can ask whomever you want in your town...Better ask ladies, else your brother will spoil the life of that man,to whom you ask all these, too...

He was sarcastic...

Tears fell down making its own path..Her face grew red.

He was noticing everything patiently... He never knew her before,,,but the sight of she crying made him weak. He felt wierd.

He tried to lighten the situation...

Bittu : Have food...

saying that he handed over her a packet...

She kept on staring him...

He was confused...

She refused to get the packet...

Bittu : I cant get the food, you like in this deserted place...This is what I got...have this...

She stood still

Bittu : Hey...what happened...are you listening...you are making me repeat the same thing...

She dint reply...

Bittu : Eat or starve to death...Why should I bother..?

saying this he moved few steps away from her...But returned to her soon...

Bittu : Listen, still my ears are paining out of the sound you made in the car...you would have won Olympic medal if there is a shouting competition...You would have lost energy...Eat this...

He gave again...

She dint get the packet from him...but folded her hands and apologized...

Munni : Iam very sorry... I never knew all these..I have been a stupid all these years, believing my brother's words...I never knew my brothers are into all these...I gave rose to Monty as he was feeling bad after hearing Aarthy's words, for not speaking properly...I wished to befriend him... I was unaware of the consequences that would happen...I am sorry again...I would have definitely not talked to him, if I had known these already...I was really worried when he was hit...I even noted down the number of car that took him away...

Bittu listened to her patiently...

Munni : I now understand why you kidnapped me...What you have done is right...Unless they suffer from the same pain they give other, they wont realise...I dont have any problem even if you take legal actions against my brother...and

after a pause, she continued...

Munni : and...I dont have problem even if you punish me...you have all the right to repeat what my brother's have done...you can hurt me in any way or every way...

Bittu's eyes widened , when she said these...

She left the place...This time her eyes had no tears...She was determined...

Bittu stood still to the spot...

Bittu was feeling very strange..The girl whom he considered as the sole reason for everything bad happening...seems to be very different now...He felt her pain...his heart ached when she cries...She being weak hurt and bothered him...he doesnt know why all these happened...She looked like a very different person now, to him...He remembered their first meet and automatically his lips curved...The words she just spoke from her heart kept on reverberating n his ears...He wanted to console her now and bring her back from the sorrow...He wanted to make her eat...His to do list on her and about her increased...he immediately speeded towards her...

...

Bittu : you have cried so much that you shouldnt cry for 2 months...

Munni didnt reply...

Bittu : ok cry...but eat this and then cry...

Munni smiles seeing the food...

Bittu : What makes you smile ?

Munni : I have promised my family that I will neither have food nor water until they find out about Monty...

Bittu gives her a caring look...

Munni : Even at that time they dint tell me that they were the ones who hit him...

Bittu kept on looking at her...

Munni : They love me a lot...right ?

She questioned him...

Bittu : Only you...They dont think about other...and that is the main problem...

He answered..

Munni : I agree....

Bittu opened the food...

Munni : Thank you...

Bittu : For food...?

Munni smiled.. : For everything...

Bittu : For kidnapping you ??

She smiled again...

Munni : for revealing the truth to me..else i would have been blindfolded all through the life...

Bittu smiled this time...

They both looked at each other with care and affection...

Bittu : Eat now...

Munni : Iam not hungry...

Bittu : But iam hungry...

Munni : You eat...what is stopping you ? You had a tiring day...you eat well...

Bittu : We dont have the habit of making the guest to starve...Also I wanna check if the food is good...You eat first...if nothing happens to you...I will eat 2 packets,...

Munni laughed out loud...

Bittu : This is the punishment I Am giving you...

saying this he smiled...He felt happy on seeing her smile...

Munni got the packet from him...

Munni : But I made my mind not to eat until Monty gets well...

Bittu : Let me say a thing...He will get well soon...

Munni : Your friend said, he is in coma ?

Bittu : He lied...

bittu winked...

Munni : You liars...

she smiled...

Bittu : just to let you know that how bad your brothers have hit him...

Munni : I understand...

Muni opened her food packet...

Munni : Ok,,,... even my family compelled, I refused to eat...but,I will eat now...

after a pause

Munni : for you...

Bittu gave her a look...She started to eat...

Both of them had their lunch together...with both looking at the other when the other doesnot notice...That was the most memorable lunch they ever had...

After few minutes...

Munni : Hey I dont know your name yet...What is your name ?

she asked ..

Bittu was lost seeing her eyes and took time to realise what she just asked...

Munni : Your name ??

she asked with eyes wide open...

Bittu : Bittu..

he forwarded his hand for a handshake...

Munni smiled and forwarded her hand too...

Munni : Munni...

she said with all smile...

All of a sudden,there was a short circuit, meters away from the spot they were standing...

Right after this supposed to be first handshake both took a trip down memory lane...To the temple, where they remember the same kind of thing happened... during their childhood...

Both became serious...gazed each other intensly...

Both their smile disappeared...both of their eyes were filled with surprise...

Bittu thought " This is she "...

Munni thought the same...

Their handshake was no more friendly...It was more than that...Both of them realised that they were bound to meet again... The were lost in the thoughts and each others eyes and kept holding the hands for hours...

THE END

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pS : Thanks for taking time in reading this story. Forgive if there are any mistakes.

Thanks again.

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Awww. That's such a sweet OS. I actually imagined all the scenes. So damn cute. Please do continue writing ❤️
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Iam super duper happy that u liked it :) thanks a ton for taking time in reading it. Will write more for sure. Thanks again 😊😊😛

Originally posted by: Lady_Bheem

Awww. That's such a sweet OS. I actually imagined all the scenes. So damn cute. Please do continue writing ❤️

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This was beautiful loved it ❤️ Keep writing more 😳
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OMG, my darling Meenu ❤️ I totally luved it 👏 How amazingly written this is! It had that Bittu-Munni essence into it! Finally, felt happy to read ur OS after a long tym nd that too on BiNni ❤️ Pls keep writing.. I cant wait to read more 😉
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Wow...It's awesome...I could imagine all this...
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Thank u thank u sooo much for reading my work. Will write more. Thanks a lot


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This was beautiful loved it ❤️ Keep writing more 😳

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Hey bhuvi chellakutty... Thank u sooo much darling. Yes romba naal kalichu iam writing.all Ur comments encourage me to write more. Thanks darls



Originally posted by: Bhuvi2592

OMG, my darling Meenu ❤️ I totally luved it 👏 How amazingly written this is! It had that Bittu-Munni essence into it! Finally, felt happy to read ur OS after a long tym nd that too on BiNni ❤️ Pls keep writing.. I cant wait to read more 😉

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Much thanks for taking time to read this one. Very happy. Thanks again for the feedback :)


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Wow.. it's awesome... n u wrote it beautifully... please keep writing would be looking forward to next one😉

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