RiKara SS - You and I Collide [COMPLETE] pg 63(19/4) - Page 34

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Sakura...
omg i can't say how happy i am after reading this chapter, Annika and Ri are sisters???
wow girl your ff rocks.
so damm happy omg i really can't explain it.
and our om was so emotionally looking at here and when he brought here to his suit he cared so much for here.. ufff i don't have enough words to say how much i liked your ff.
Girl you are the best
Update soon,can't wait any longer

Love Sandjana

Yes hon, they are sisters😳
Thank you dear! I'm glad you're enjoining the ride! Yeah he does care, only doesn't want to admit it yet. God O, what am I going to do with you?🤔
You're making me blush now☺️
Updating in a minute!😃
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Unreswa... This chappy was just wow... I've read it twice and I just can't get enough of this chappy.. Now to the chappy the title is magnetic...so Om is out to hunt for Anika's past ... Plus what happened to Shivay interesting.. Bichara Om apni zindagi je he nahi sakta... Idhar jao toh Ri udhar jao to Ri... Kahen bhi jao Ri he Ri 😆. It's indeed a small world ... Hayee he recognised her voice...even though she was drunk she didn't forget her trademark being sarcastic and I really liked her dialogue saints don't drink... When Ri said he pops up ever where she goes I am like yeh sawal ka answer janta bhi Jana chati hai😆... Here it gets interesting it's her house.. I liked the name of the house RiVaNi .. It's touchy... So you kept the storyline in accordance to the actual storyline Anika is Ri's sister ... Yay!!! You again made me emotional after Ri's dialogue they are having fun seeing the drama.. Raghav this 🤬 deserved to die... But we finally get a caringkara😳

.. Ri's dialogue especially in this chappy is super intense and dil Pr lagye her each and every dialogue.. I can literally visualize the whole chappy ... Om finally knows the truth thank God.. Finally he no more looks at her as Swetalna's thank u muah love u for this...and Ri's song toh🤣... Kya bemisal composition thi.. Lift convo was cute.. And finally he sees the actual Ri without her layers on... Aww... Ri said Om bahut acha hai...pr ab tak Om ki achai Dekhi kahan hai? If you know what I mean😉.. They kiss again and I am blushing over here.. And the last line toh I died-stay with Me.. How will Om deny?? This chappy is by far my most favourite one among all... It has the perfect blend of pain as usual and a little tinge of Comedy... Thanks a ton for the PM, love Ana... PS send this to the writers they need to show some thing like this... Not that snakelana crap.. Waiting for your superfast express to give another chappy..😃 waiting impatiently

Hi Ana,
I had so much fun reading this😆 I always do when you comment but this one is just superb! It's my favorite chapter too, I like the balance here, it's just the perfect bit of everything in my opinion, now...I'm blowing my own trumpet,,,sorry!😳
They sort of run into each other everytime huh? Like the God wants them to end up together and has a good laugh watching how they struggle with their feelings.
Did you like Ri's song? The first one is an actual song, which has a very lovely visual too. I''m sure you've come across it, it's one of my favorites from old classics of 90s. But imagining Ri singing it, with a bottle in her hand made me go🤣
Imagine had they really got stuck in that lift, with drunk Ri, O ka toh Oh My Mata hojata!😆
I'm going to update now, hopefully you'll love this chapter too!
Lots of love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolove

Yay that was so good
Loved the moments between them
Can't wait to read more

Thanks dear, I'm glad you're loving it so far.
See you with the next chapter soon!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki-73

Oh My God! I am in love with your story. It gives me goosebumps everytime i read it. What an amazing writer you are. I love your Om and Gauri, can't wait to read what happens next :)

Thank you so much!
It makes me really happy to know that you're loving the story and my version of RiKara😳
Looking forward to hear your take on the next chapter😃
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi,

If you get your happily ever after without first tackling witches and fire breathing dragons, that's sort of incomplete right?

Enjoy the chapter, which is below!

Chapter 15

Bitter truth

The crisp rays of sun peering through the blinds woke him up. Omkara opened his eyes and closed them immediately, his mind blank, wondering what Gauri was doing with her head on his shoulder, or how his arm ended up wrapped around her. Then her words from the night before resurfaced.

"Stay with me." She had said. They were still snuggled close on the sofa, fallen asleep hugging each other. Her hair was a mess, and her lips tugged upwards in some dreamy smile. She looked young and peaceful. Peace was something alien on her face. He found himself drawn to her once more, his eyes drinking in her sleeping features. Those thick lashes, soft lips, unblemished complexion - there was no doubt she was the most beautiful creature he had ever seen, but then again, her beauty was only a part of the attraction she had over him. There were still traces of that pain on her expression, she was lonely; that was something he could understand better than anyone else.

His mobile beeped and Omkara realized for the first time why Shivay always ended up throwing his phone away; that damn thing really had a bad timing! Shifting slowly, so as to not wake her up, he checked his phone, and cursed immediately. He had been a fool, alright!

Kin or not he is my hero; the article read. Rudra Singh Oberoi addresses the media after the scandal that broke out recently.

It is not everyday you get to meet the blue eyed prince of the Oberois, or hear his side of the story. For gossip sites, Rudra Singh Oberoi is not a stranger, nor is his party habits vastly unknown. However in a recent press conference the young Oberoi scion broke his silence about the recent news concerning his family in a very heartwarming manner.

"I know why you are here," he had said addressing the press. "You're here to hear the truth, which I will be giving you, and then, you must stop making us heroes of your primetime drama. Mine is a family, just like yours. There are mistakes, there are secrets, they are incidents that we are not proud of. But unlike yours, my family makes it to breaking news, into evening tea discussion of every household, into the gossips that makes it hard for us to breath.

My brother is hospitalized. He is in a critical condition and someone breaks the news to the media that his DNA doesn't match with us, that he is adopted and the attack on him was planned by one of the family members to throw him off the running for the Oberoi group's chairmanship. To solidify the statement, they come up with a video of our old caretaker, admitting to the fact.

My question to you is, how does it matter?

I'm not my father to barb about how my home is a paradise, which it has never been. Everybody knows nothing is well between my parents, each and every week one of them makes it into the news with some new scandal. It hurts but it is true. And my brother had been by my side through each and every one of those fiascos. He was the one who literally brought us up, he is the shelter we run to at troubled times. My brother, is my brother, whether or not we are related by blood.

I don't understand how someone can speculate that we would want to harm him? When he was the one who has shielded us against every harm. That we would want him out of our lives, when he is the sole reason we are alive. I'm not going to bring up proof to prove our love for him, for then there would be no difference between the person who wants to break us apart and us, but I want everyone to know this.

Shivay Singh Oberoi had been the oldest son of Oberoi dynasty and he will continue to be so, whatever anyone might say. The day my brother walks out, me and Omkara would follow. There has never been a fight between us, and there shall never be.

I'm not concerned about anything else, but my brother's health at the moment. I'm waiting for him to wake up, and hug me like he used to. I'm praying for that moment and I hope you too will include him in your prayers, not in your gossip mills."

"Rudra," Omkara muttered to himself, after he had managed to bark orders to Khanna asking him to return to his brother immediately. When had he grown up so much? "You sensitive fool!" But he was feeling so proud of his youngest sibling. When he had left the family on his shoulders Omkara had not expected him to handle everything so well. Truly, Rudra had proved himself in the best way possible. He could see the tide off public opinion turning through the social networking sites, with that one utterly honest confession he had gained the complete public sympathy. There were no more articles about the leaked video, or talks about Shivay's adoption issue. He sighed, running a nervous hand through his messed up hair.

"I think you should go," a voice brought him back to his surrounding. Omkara turned slowly, to find that Ri had woken up, sure, his argument with Khanna had been loud enough. She had her hair gathered to a knot at the base of her neck and was pulling up her jacket. "Your brother might need you." He didn't say anything, as he watched her fish around for her mobile and check the time. "I think I'd better get going, or else Ragav might throw a tantrum."

"Why?"

"I'm getting engaged tonight," she raised an eyebrow and said matter of fact-ly. ""Thanks for last night Omkara." She had almost walked past him when he swiftly caught her wrist and held her back.

"Are you still thinking of marrying that guy?" He asked her, his eyes narrowed. She smiled bitterly.

"Do you have a better option?"

"You can't -" he gulped. "Marry him."

"Pray tell me why?" She placed a hand over his heart and he reluctantly acknowledged its uneven pace.

"Because I - because he is dangerous." He changed the track in mid way and Ri blinked.

"I can handle him. I have to." Her tone sounded resigned. Then she held his gaze. "We've already discussed this, why I'm doing this, why I have to."

"Please," he did not know where the word came from. His hand reached out to take hers. "Don't destroy yourself."

Ri squeezed his hand, her eyes focused on their laced fingers.

"You're doing the same thing, for your family." She smiled again. "Sometimes we don't have any other choice. It's better to fight than give up."

"I -"

She covered his lips with her finger tips, her eyes shimmering with a sheen of tears.

"Don't make this difficult for both of us, by saying things we can't hold on to." Her words were a mere whisper. "Whatever we had was good, the memories are still warm. But it can't go on, both you and I have other obligation to deal with. I was selfish last night, drunk and stupid, but it's a new day. And the reality is still unchanged. I need to go, we need to stop."

Acting on impulse she hugged him, her petite frame flushed against his torso, top of her head hardly reaching his chin. Breathing him in she smiled. Some good byes were bittersweet, and some scars beautiful. He was her first love; that he will never know.

"Have a good life Omkara."

Then before he could rise his arms and hug her back, or say anything in reply, she was gone. For a long while more, he stood there unmoved, a single drop of tear trailed down his cheek.

He only realized it later, but she could have been his chance at true love.

"Good bye Gauri," he muttered to no one in particular.

**

I tried not to make it cheesy, but happens sometimes.

Please give me some feedback, a token for motivation once in a while.

Sorry if anyone's disappointed.

Thanks a bunch for reading!

Love,

Sakura


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Posted: 8 years ago
It was not cheesy at all dear.
I loved how rudy has become responsible.
his mature words made me emotional.😭
By the way I am ERA & u r sucha awesome writer .👏🤗
Only if u were the writer of DBO what a beauty the show would have been.
Love u for updating the story regularly.
& providing my Rikara shipper heart some relief after all the torture of Svetlana in the show .
I read ur story regularly but i rarely do comment.{too lazy for it}
Thank u for Writing this awesome piece of art.
A Big fan of ur story.👍🏼
Keep Those Amazing Chapters coming.
Love u❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely chapter
As always you manage to write so well
Please keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _era_

It was not cheesy at all dear.

I loved how rudy has become responsible.
his mature words made me emotional.😭
By the way I am ERA & u r sucha awesome writer .👏🤗
Only if u were the writer of DBO what a beauty the show would have been.
Love u for updating the story regularly.
& providing my Rikara shipper heart some relief after all the torture of Svetlana in the show .
I read ur story regularly but i rarely do comment.{too lazy for it}
Thank u for Writing this awesome piece of art.
A Big fan of ur story.👍🏼
Keep Those Amazing Chapters coming.
Love u❤️

Thank you Era dear, it's wonderful to hear from you! Yes, we all want our dose of RiKara to survive the plague that is Svetlana. I'm thrilled to know you're enjoying my take. And yep...unknown to his brothers Rudy boy has grown up and ready to take the world.
Keep reading and of cause enjoying the twists. I'll look fir ward to hear from you.
Love ya,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sach kahu tho rudra ke media interview ke alawa mujhe kuch dekhna mushkil lag raha hai and rudra ke ans ne meri bolti bandh kardi hai.haan and please donot make this difficult for both of us.and his chance at true love.yeh chapter ne mujhe speechless chod diya .jara bhi nahin cheesy tha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
The only reaction whenever I am reading this ff: Omg omg omg!!!!!! Its so F* awesome!

The last two chaps were bang on! awesome work I must say!!! The drunk Gauri was so so cute! "The real woman behind the layers"- sends a chill down the spine! Too good female! 👏👏👏
Coming to the last update; OMM! Rudy's speech- i so waited for someone to put him as a samajhdar person covering up for his bros- here! he just did that! I am more impressed becaus eyou did it so beautifully even after watching the thing only after DBO!! Well done on that too!!! 👏👏

The last part was heart breaking! I just hope that nothing nasty happens to either of them!

And i'll still ask you for an early update yet again!! 😛

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