An open love letter from rangeela to shivani

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Raate gumnaam hoti hai,
Din kisi ke naam hota hai,
Hum jite hai kuch is tarah,
Har lamha tumhare naam hota hai.

Mujhe sulane ki khatir jab raat aati hai,
Mein so nahi pata raat so jati hai,
Puchne per dil se aawaz aati hai,
Aaj yaad karlo, raat to roz aati hai..

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Ho poori dil ki har khwahish aapki,
Aur mile khushiyon ka jahan saara,
Agar aap maange aasmaan ka ek taara
To khuda dede aapko aasmaan saara.

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Na Shikayatein na gila kare,
Koi Aisa shakas bhi hua kare,
Jo mere liye hi Saja kare,
Mujhse hi batein kiya kare,
Kabhi roye jaye woh be panah,
Kabhi baypanah udass ho,
Kabhi chupke chupke be qadam,
Mere peeche aakar hansaa kere,
Meri qurbatein meri chahtein,
Koi yaad kar ke qadam qadam,
Main taweel safar mein hoon magar,
Meri wapsii ki dua kere.

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Dil~e~zindgi ki basti bikhar gayi hoti
Ki rooh ke ye zakhm bhar gaye hote,
Ye zindagi to aap ki amaanat thi warna,
Hum to kab ke mar gaye hote.


P.S: Though this letter is from rangeela to shivani but This letter is also dedicated to someone especially close to me.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Beautiful one 👏👏
But am not sure if it suits the current Rangeela's situation because he still doesn't feel anything for Shivani as such 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What beauty ❤️
Awesome creation 👏
But i think there is time for rangeela to feel like this for Shivani.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That is just awesome.
Hope rangeela fel it soon for Shivani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
Beautifully written👏

Enjoyed all the lines.. Particularly 'mein so nahi pata raat so jati hai' is killer one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah Wah Very Well Written👏😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankyou everyone for taking time to read this and thanks again for appreciating this😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's very beautiful..keep writing na 😃

Ps- best wishes 😉

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