SS: Tryst with destiny.Chap 1 updated,Pg 2

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Hello people.I m new to this genre of writing ,hope you will like this. Constructive criticism is always welcome!







1942,Germany



The resonance of Beethoven lit up the abode. The playful banter with the notes filled the air with elation. He strode towards the source ,which was oozing out of this new found zeal and gusto.


There she was ,sitting on the mahogany duet bench with her fingers , creating magic on the keyboard of the spinet. Her cheerful spirits were so addictive that he was forced to surrender his distress and edginess to this lyrical connotation .


Fur Elise? He contemplated ,what was the reason for this bagatelle to be played? He walked inside the dingy room and stood behind her, looking over her shoulders to see the coated paper containing the musical notations.


Without turning back to look at him she switched to symphony five , this sudden transition in the music amused him.


What brought the sudden change from Fur Elise to Symphony five ? He mused , situation like their's didn't call out for Beethoven love or victory song. They were in Germany, her being a Jew didn't help out much with the autocracies of Nazi leader. The odds were against them and they had embraced this absolute truth long back .


This mood of hers was daunting for him, he moved forward in order to question her but reverted back thinking this may be her only respite from the harsh realities.


Ethnic cleansing by Hitler's dictatorship was at its prime . All doors to evade the horrors of war zone, on the watch of officers were closed long back . The world outside which out of the dictator's reach was blissfully unaware of their nightmarish realities. The only thing he could do was wait, wait for a better future, wait for assured togetherness and freedom in uncertainties.

His reverie was broken when she suddenly asked him in her tremulous voice

'Dev,Do you know who was Ozymandias ? '

He shrugged his shoulder in denial She stopped her tryst with the piano and turned back to gaze in his curious eyes.

'He was a tyrannical king, who like a fool believed he was mightier than the god." she answered and paused only to speak again.

"Do you know what he wrote beneath his statue?" As soon as he answered in denial she stood up and walked towards a broken table and picked up a shabby book. She strolled back towards him and showed him the sonnet which was written on the white paper in illustrative letters

My name is Ozymandias, king of kings,
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!"


Though it was out of context and he could not understand where she was going with this king and his tyranny still he gave her his half -hearted attention.


She continued her description of the once lived king and how the ruins of his statue are ironically mocked upon by people today .Then, she said something which made him look at her with rapt attention.


" Dev ,Hitler is far more worse than Ozymandias. He will lose the battle with time before our hopes do."


That's all she said .


And then he somehow , understood why the oppressive king interlude Beethoven's victory symphony .This very victory symphony will mark their Tryst with destiny.
His and Sonakshi's intertwined destiny.





A/N- Over to you readers.

A quick brush up on Facts :



1. Ludwig van Beethoven was a German composer and pianist. A crucial figure in the transition between the Classical and Romantic eras in Western art music, he remains one of the most famous and influential of all composers.

2.Fur Elise and Symphony 5 are his compositions.

3.Bagatelle -A bagatelle is a short piece of music, typically for the piano,

4.Ozymandias was a Greek name for the Egyptian pharaoh Ramesses II, who ruled from 1279 BCE to 1213 BCE, in the 19th Dynasty of Ancient Egypt. He was infamous for his cruelty as a king
5.The lines of sonnet on between the story is from one of my favorite poem called Ozymandias by Percy Bysshe Shelly It's a public domain poem hence I will not run into any sort of copyrights issue.


You can always search for it via this link

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_domain

PS - I m planning to turn this into SS of 10 to 15 parts only if you are curious to see them in this setting.

PPS-just inform me in the comments if you would like me to pm you regarding the updates
And just Add-cumberben for receiving the same.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Really Beautiful and Lovely!!❤️
U wrote it amazingly and for once, I was pulled into the scenerio Well done missy!
The backdrop set purely feels so novelty!😳
Keep it up! 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nicely written...btw r u in grade 10????
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlight3094

Wow Really Beautiful and Lovely!!❤️

U wrote it amazingly and for once, I was pulled into the scenerio Well done missy!
The backdrop set purely feels so novelty!😳
Keep it up! 😊


Ahh! The bliss of reading first comments😛
I was lurking in dark but my hands were not letting me ignore the comment so
Voila! Here I m.
Thank you for reading this absurd concept and then liking it too:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angell.17

nicely written...btw r u in grade 10????

Oh I know where It is going
CBSE -10.grade😛
Nope, I m not in 10th
It's just that this poem is , was and will remain my fav
Thanks you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...that was too good . I do agree it would be interesting to view them in a different time zone...while I read the chapter , I felt was reading one of those novels written by English Authors ...nice piece of work!! eagerly waiting for your next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You have a unique idea up! Please go forward with it...
And I'm amazed with your research in here...
Very impressive with all the history of Nazi put up here in a love story.
But I wanna ask something regarding your story, Sona might be killed as she is Jew here & living in Germany with Nazi killing all Jews...
So want to ask if you have planned a sad ending or good one?
Just curious to know...
Because I love happy ones.
But anyways, do update soon! You write well.
And welcome to forum...😊

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wow...that was too good . I do agree it would be interesting to view them in a different time zone...while I read the chapter , I felt was reading one of those novels written by English Authors ...nice piece of work!! eagerly waiting for your next update..


Thank you for liking my total weirdness 😆
I am an ardent janeite , hence the timeline( though not exact)
Thanks once again!
Will surely update if people really want to see this version of devakshi 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

You have a unique idea up! Please go forward with it...
And I'm amazed with your research in here...
Very impressive with all the history of Nazi put up here in a love story.
But I wanna ask something regarding your story, Sona might be killed as she is Jew here & living in Germany with Nazi killing all Jews...
So want to ask if you have planned a sad ending or good one?
Just curious to know...
Because I love happy ones.
But anyways, do update soon! You write well.
And welcome to forum...😊

Love,
Anushka


I believe love somehow makes a way.,
Her being a Jew is a requirement of the plot, but I won't disappoint you I hope.
Thanks for liking this attempt from my side :)
Well for the ending ,Though not decided but I don't think I have to kill them 😆
Hence welcome abode!
And thank you again for such a warm welcome!
Edited by cumberben - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear...😊
Your concept is very unusual but very captivating..I personally don't like that era but with Devakshi touch I love everythng...

And I knw it would take loads of research from your end to write it further but it would be actually worth it to revisit that era with a touch of beautiful love story..

Update soon dear...

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