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Mission stopping anika's roka is going to be very interesting...all are there...it will be a rocking one
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Aww so lovely update dear
So mission anika lo roko Haan
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Sorry to disturb you😛
Plzzz update soon
I just can't wait to read more.
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Originally posted by: Mystery1234

Wow... Mission Roka Roko is gonna be interesting...

The team is all set... Waiting for the story to unfold...
A big drama is on its way
Continue soon😊


Originally posted by: Sanjana2412

Awesome. Its an amazing update. Finally Shivaay is coming to grab her queen


Originally posted by: reshma4875

read it one go...its really nyc yaar...you are an amazing writer...
shivaay was a jerk in initial chapters...poor anika...tia s such a drama queen... anne - om bonding s beautiful...malli - ani so adorable...somz 2 soumya transformation s gud 😳...waiting for shivikas meeting...anikas mom knew d whole story...she thinks shivaays s immature ...waiting for anikas n her mom's reaction 😆 ...family drama ahead... 😳


Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Can't wait for fun in roka
Continue soon


Originally posted by: Gurveen

That was edgy update
Everyone is here to break anika's roka
Tia is such a bitch ek ko choda dusre ko pakad liya
Please update soon


Originally posted by: bworm

Wah..awesome

It's all coming together now. Excited to see how the friends pull thru for each other.


Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Yeeeh fantastic 👏

Mission Annika Ko roko start.
I'm so excited 😃
Update soon 😳


Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Sorry dude for not commenting previously... Had been busy with stuff...

I just caught up with the chapters I missed and damn, weren't they pure wonder? The angst, action, sly, humour was so amazing!

Finally this huge confusion was sorted and I can't be thankful to Shivaay more than this 😆

People from the world want to stop Anika's roka... 🤣
I can't contain my excitement at the thought of the scene at Anika's roka... The Suri's are in for some college rogues breaking in and the Dilwale taking his Dulhaniya 😆
Continue soon :D


Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Mission stopping anika's roka is going to be very interesting...all are there...it will be a rocking one


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Aww so lovely update dear

So mission anika lo roko Haan


Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Sorry to disturb you😛

Plzzz update soon
I just can't wait to read more.
You can say that I am dying to read this 😭


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Awesome update

Loved it



Guys I cant thank you enough for these heart warming responses.
I hope you will all enjoy the end as much!!
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A note before the "END":
Guys this was my maiden fiction in this forum, but you all have showered so much love for me over here that I never felt new or an outsider here! You all have stuck to my story for 4 months now, and I cant thank you enough for always coming back to read and leaving such wonderful comments. There have been certain request in the storyline (for eg. Anika in Saree) that I have not been able to deliver - my apologies for that, but I promise, I will come up with something in my line up of fictions..!

For now, thank you for reading, loving, remembering and providing feedback on my fiction - I know you all have waited for too long, hence I am updating the last two chapters together - along with an epilogue!! Hope that shows my love for all you readers who commented of read silently.

This fiction will be on the forum for you to read now and again, so please read again and again and do leave me a word everytime!! I will be very happy to see continued readership.

Okay I have rambled enough!! Lets speed to the end now!!

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Chapter 24

Mallika didn't talk much while they were on their way to Mallika's - Om tried asking why she looked so worked up, she only muttered that she was busy planning something - Shivay and Om looked at her curiously - but she didn't let anything else slip. When they finally reached, before taking Om and Shivay inside the house, Mallika grabbed Shivay's hand and stopped him.

"Remember, you're not Shivay, you're Rudra - Priyanka's boyfriend. Mom knows about Shivay from di, she won't be happy to welcome you right now!" Shivay gulped and nodded and they followed her inside.

When Shiela came to the living room, she was pleasantly surprised to see so many kids around - she wasn't expecting them -after all the roka was arranged in such a rush, she never expected that Anika's friends would be able to manage.

Mallika hurried to her and introduced Shivay as Rudra and Shiela smiled at him - After all Priyanka had told her all about Rudra the other day - there was something in Rudra's goofy smile she thought - it was very childish and lovable. When they had met Shiela and Anika's daadi, Shivay was feeling agitated again, it had been an hour that they had arrived, yet there was no trace of Anika - where was she? And after reaching home, Mallika seemed so involved in celebrations that it seemed to him that maybe she had forgotten that there was a roka to stop!

"Oi cartoon!" he hissed at Mallika and she raised her eyebrows in order to argue. "Did you forget that we are here to stop the roka, not help in its preparation?" he asked.

"Be patient! When there was so much time, why couldn't you propose my di? You think you're Shah Rukh Khan of DDLJ?" she hissed back. Om laughed, "Don't worry Mallika I have punished him enough for being late - lets go on with the plan and not waste time - where is Anika?" he asked.

"Uff Om, we can't just directly take him inside and give them privacy. Our friends and cousins won't let her be alone with him - what is the use then? I have called up our other accomplice, she will come and only she can ensure their privacy!" she replied with shiny yes eagerly awaiting praise.

"Who is this new accomplice?" asked Shivay curiously.

" Why Priyanka, my bestie Priks, and your girlfriend too!" she replied laughing.

"Priks? Who Priks? And I don't have a girlfriend - Anika is my, would be girlfriend!!" he replied indignantly.

"Uff! You are Rudra! Remember?? And Priyanka is Rudra's girlfriend! Mom doesn't know that Di has met Rudra, so Priks will excitedly take you inside to introduce di to her boyfriend, and with that she can shove others outside!" she chirped excitedly.

"And what about Priyanka?? What about her? She will be with us inside while I propose my Anika??" asked Shivay irritated." Om smirked and Mallika just couldn't leave this opportunity.

"Oho Shivay, what if she is there, you are just going to propose nah? Or is there other plans? Ahem ahem..well all other plans need to wait huh" she laughed as Shivay looked at her darkly.

"Let this mess sort out, I will get back at you!" he replied crossly.

"You have all your life to get even with me, I would be your sister-in-law after all" she laughed.

"Sister-in-law, how so?" all three got tensed hearing Anika's mothers voice from behind.

"Mom actually the thing is..." she mumbled when she heard a voice from behind, "Uff Badi Ma, Malli will be a sister-in-law only nah, of my future husband?" she spoke happily and came and hugged Shivay.

"Awww Rudra baby, how are you??" she squealed much to Shivay's astonishment. Om just about managed to turn his snort to a cough as Mallika stole murderous glances at the boys for making fun of Priks.

"Mad girl! Romancing in front of me!" their mother feigned shock and lightly patted Priyanka's head.

"Um hi Priyanka, how are you?" Shivay muttered, and then glanced at the older woman uncomfortably. Anika's mother, Shiela realized he was uncomfortable with Priyanka displaying affection around her, she thought of letting them be and was about to leave when Priyanka chirped loudly, "Come baby, I will take you to Anika di, bet she will be surprised to see you!!!" she almost pulled Shivay towards Anika's room when Shiela stopped her.

"Beta Anika is getting ready, how can you take Rudra betaji now? She will get late for the function" she told Priyanka gently.

"Offo Badi Ma, nothing will happen I will take five minutes pleaseee" she coaxed and Shiela allowed.

Shivay's heart was hammering inside his chest as he followed Priyanka. He turned around one last time to see Om and Mallika showing him thumbs-up, he smiled and walked ahead.

Priyanka knocked her door, and called from outside, "diii...are you done, look who has come - Rudra! He wants to meet you!!" she said loudly.

Anika who was ready with her plan of action, stopped suddenly, what was Rudra doing here? She was almost tempted to open the door, but she stopped, she didn't have time now - she had to hurry.

"Two minutes Mallika, I am tying up the dupatta" she shouted back. A smiled escaped Shivay's lip hearing her voice. Her voice was so melodious he thought.

"Stop smiling at her voice! You will give away the plan" Priyanka hissed from beside. Then she shouted back, "Okay di, I am taking him to the living room, call me once you're done". Then she caught hold of Shivay's hand and led him away - as much as Shivay wanted to protest, he knew standing like a lovesick puppy outside Anika's door would give him away, so he followed her unwillingly.

***

She thought this hoodie would work the best as it completely covered her face, as much as that made life easier, but it was also disturbing her line of vision - she slowly pushed up her hoodie and scanned the backyard, other than the helpers and attendants, no family member was outside - she sighed in relief. Then she tip-toed out of the balcony attached to her room into the backyard and soon she jumped over their low fencing and ran as fast as her legs could take her. When she reached her destination, she saw him sitting on a bench in the park, looking distantly at nothing in particular.

"What is wrong with you man?" Anika asked in anger.

Dev slowly looked up at her, his face was drooped, clearly he was sad, very sad. "Sorry Anika, I know I shouldn't have been so impulsive, but it's in my head ever since I saw her - I thought I was over her, it's been years and it was purely one-sided - but last week when you guys came over for dinner and I saw her, I was back to square one - I was feeling hopeless for never having confessed my feelings to her - what if there was a chance. I know I am late, she was telling me she has a boyfriend, but..." Dev sighed.

"Dev! Why are you thinking all this now?" asked an exasperated Anika. "I thought you had given it a thought when you said yes to me? I had asked you! But you made me belief we are going to work out - and yes she has a boyfriend and he is here too - he arrived today morning. Dev stop tormenting yourself - imagine how shocked I was when you texted me saying you want to runaway? I must be the first bride to be in the history of Indian brides to have run away from her own roka, to try and stop the groom from permanently running away!!" she breathed hard.

"Sorry Anne" Dev mumbled holding Anika's shoulder gently. Anika flinched, "Dev, just one thing, NEVER EVER call me Anne EVER" she said breathing hard, Dev sighed, "Sorry Anika, I know..he use to call you that right? I wont. I promise - and I wont run away either - come I will drop you home and then go get ready - I have to be at yours this afternoon for the roka, remember?" he smiled.

11:23a.m. [Shivayiii - get Om and Priks and come out in the backyard like NOWWW]

11:25a.m. [Why cartoon, what happened?]

11:26a.m. [Uff this serious you monkey!! Come now else I will tell mom that you're Shivay and not Rudra. Hmph.]

11:28a.m. [Okay fine woman. Coming!]

When Om, Shivay and Priyanka reached the backyard, Mallika hurriedly took them towards the balcony attached to Anika's room, they saw the door wide open and Shivay rushed inside - only to find it empty. He looked at Mallika questioningly.

"Oyi, where is your di?" he asked her.

"Exactly Einstine! Di has run away!!" Mallika replied in excitement - "Isn't it proof enough that she loves you??" she laughed.

"Genius! If she had run away for Shivay, wouldn't she have called him??" asked Om exasperated. With that her face fell. "Om then where did di go???" asked Mallika panicking. "Maybe I should tell mom that di has run away with an unidentified entity. MOMMM" Mallika had just begun screaming when Shivay grabbed her and shut her mouth.

"Honestly Om, how do you plan to handle this one here?" asked Shivay earnestly, then he turned to Mallika, "Oyi cartoon, shut up - let's just lock this door from outside and try and look for Anika? What if she is around only?" he asked reasonably. A worried Mallika and Priyanka instantly agreed, and together then jumped off the fence with Om and Shivay and decided to search the nearby area for her.

When Soumya entered Anika's house, Shiela saw her and stared in disbelief - Anika had told her about Somz's transformation but never did she think it was so drastic! Soumya beta' was all that escaped her mouth when she saw her - Soumya went to her and hugged her and then turned around to introduce Rudra. "Aunty ji, this is my..." but Shiela peered at Rudra sternly and replied, "I know him, I heard a lot about him - just wondering why he is here though" she spoke darkly, it was obvious to her that this lost looking boy was Shivay for sure, who else remained in her daughter's gang of friends to turn up anyway?

Soumya smiled awkwardly not understanding why the usually cheerful Shiela aunty looked so displeased to see Rudra, she stupidly tried stirring the awkwardness back to norma, "Err..I hope you've heard good things about him" and Rudra shot her a confused look.

"Not necessarily betaji, but today is a holy day, my darling daughter is going to perform the first ceremony of her wedding with her beau - everyone is welcome to wish them goodluck" with that she motioned them to come in and she left. Soumya stood there awkwardly wondering what on earth was Shiela aunty talking about.

"Err..Soumya for some reason Priyanka's badi ma doesn't like me I think" Rudra spoke. Soumya convinced him that it must be a confusion and urged Rudra to follow her, they needed to meet Anika and sort her confusion. As Soumya knocked Anika's room, she heard Anika answering from inside, Soumya didn't respond, she just opened the door and barged in, as Rudra towed behind her.

"You sore loser, how dare you do this without even telling me!!!" she barked in anger.

"Oh Somu, I am soo glad to see you, I am so sorry, I should have told you at least - I soo need you here" brawled Anika, somehow seeing Somu there felt like she was closer to something related to Shivay, the silent knot in her heart she as ignoring was starting to loosen just by the mere presence of his sister.

"I HATE YOU ANNE!!" she hissed.

"Oh I love you too Somu" Anika kept mumbling and hugging her in relief. Soumya kept quiet, she was pacified seeing Anika's listless state.

"Why are you doing this Anne? You know this won't make you any happier! Did Om break your heart?" she whispered.

"Om? Why no..Oh no Somu, it's a long story - there is no time for it now - just know that Om and Mallika are happily together and I am very happy for them" as Soumya gaped at her, she just hugged Soumya and then hugged Rudra too, she was feeling high and low at the same time seeing them all there.

"Is there no way you are going to backout of this roka Anne? Are you happy?" asked Soumya in a scrutinizing tone.

"Ye---yes.." Anika stammered, but before she could talk further, Shiela called her outside.

"Yes Ma" she replied and ran away from there as Soumya sighed and crashed on her bed staring at Rudra.

"Where were you beta?" her mother asked concerned, she knew Soumya and "Shivay" were in her room, she wanted to ensure her daughter could take it - when Anika came out unperturbed, Shiela was surprised, wasn't her daughter head over heels about that Shivay boy, then why was she so unperturbed? Did she really move on? Well seems like she did - And Shiela wasn't complaining.

"Beta, did you see your friends? How nice of them to turn up in such short notice nah?" Shiela asked, clearly not bringing up Shivay's topic.

"Yes ma, Soumya and Om I would have understood, but even Rudra - I guess it will be fun" she smiled half heartedly - well if she was compromising anyway, it was better she was doing so with a friend like Dev who understood her and himself has been on her shoes - it would be that bit less difficult to forget Shivay now - wherever he was.

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Chapter 25 - FINAL CHAPTER

"Om this is futile, we need to head back and tell mom that di has run away, Dev jiju will be arriving soon - then they will find out anyway"said Mallika panting hard. Shivay gritted his teeth, "Oyi cartoon he is not Dev jiju okay! Creepy idiot stealizng my Anika!!" Om sighed, "Can you guys cut it out? This is serious - we have to go home and tell auntiji that Anika has run away"

When they reached the house, they saw the hustle for preparations for the evening ceremony was on in full swing - everyone was running around trying to make the ceremony a success - Mallika stood numb for a second, but she knew she had to eventually tell her mother, so she buckled up the courage and ran to Shiela.

"Ma I need to tell you something"

"Yeah, toh say what you have to" said Shiela unconcerned going about her chore.

Mallika took a deep breath, "Ma di has run away" she simply told her. Shiela stopped her chore and turned to look at her.

"Acha? Where has is gone?" she asked narrowing her eyes at her younger daughters' wrongly timed mischief.

"How will I know ma? She has done a bunk, Gone, Poof, woosh" she told her dramatically, "We went to look for her, me, Priks, Om and Sh"Rudra' - but she is nowhwere outside" she finished breathlessly.

"Mallika had I not been so busy I surely would have boxed your ears for this mischief, uff go now, I don't have time for this non-sense, go and serve your friends some refreshments at least - see some more have also arrived" she dismissed her.

"But ma, you're not understanding, I am damn serious" Mallika begun, but Shiela lost her patience, "Offo Mallika, if Anika has run-away who is sitting in her bedroom applying mehendi?"She asked irritated and motioned her to look towards Anika's room where the door stood ajar. Mallika glanced and was shocked to see Anika sitting there and politely talking to the women around her. She breathed heavily in annoyance and marched to her room, with a surprised Shivay, Om and Priyanka following. She walked into her room and darkly asked the women to excuse them - once they filed out, Mallika asked Om and all to come in - Anika was surprised to say the least when she saw Shivay walk in with Om and Priyanka.

"Yo--you" she stammered. And at the same time someone called out aloud in shock from the entrance of her door, "bhai???" Shivay tore his glance from Anika and his jaw dropped to see Soumya and Rudra at the door.

"Bhai what are you doing here? I thought you didn't know about her whereabouts?" she charged at him.

"I..err..I didn't until Om told me" Shivay glanced at Anika. She was still staring at him unaware that she was doing so, with shock clearly written on her face.

But before Soumya could question further, Mallika charged at her di, "Di how dare you come back after running away? I thought you will be at least responsible enough to continue bunking once you ran away? What did you think? We wouldn't be able to handle this? It's just roka di!! Why did you return??"She chided her. Anika looked startled, run-away? When did she runaway? "Mallika I.."She had begun, but Mallika didn't let her complete.

"Now that you've come back we gotta do this the more complicated way - come tell ma you don't want to do this roka"she said and tugged at her hand.

"Mallika why won't I want to do this roka?" she asked her in surprise and nervously glanced at Shivay - why was he so agitated anyway and again, what he was doing here she wondered.

"Offo di, of course you won't because -----"but this time Shivay spoke.

"Oyi cartoon, at least let me tell her the because bit nah"?" he told her exasperated, and turned to Anika, she was looking at him with the most confused and adorable face - he smiled and turned to the rest - "Guys, some privacy please?"

All laughed leaving Anika further confused and filed out to the balcony and waited, Mallika chirped before leaving, "Oyi hero don't take too long, we still have a roka to stop"

"Roka to stop?" asked Anika alarmed, "Why will the roka stop?" she wondered aloud looking at Shivay. "What are you doing here? I thought I was this heartless woman who was after her own siblings happiness?" she spat bitterly - rationality was abandoning her the more he walked closer to her - his eyes were fixed on her - "Why indeed will you stop the roka?" he mocked at her softly, she began to breathe erratically as he approached her, further closing the gap between them.

"Listen.. "She began, but Shivay shushed her.

"I will tell you why - you will stop the roka cause you are doing it with the wrong person - because you are not allowed to leave me - because Tia was never the one - because I wont ever submit another assignment which isn't done by you - because I wouldn't ever sing another song if the inspiration is not you - because if I ever see another man beside you, I will beat him worse than the way I had attacked Om that night - because you are the rock I want to hold on to for life - because I know with you by me I will never fall - because..." but he couldn't finish, Anika was breathlessly listening to him all this while with tears in her eye, spoke on his behalf.

""Because you love me so much?" she asked gently, as a tear dropped from her eyes.

Shivay gently cupped her face and whisked the tear away, he didn't realize he had tears too, not until Anika rubbed them away from his cheeks.

"Yes Anika, because I love you - because I always loved you - because you're the one - is this reason enough?" he asked quietly, and Anika just nodded and broke down into further sobs and hugged him tight burying her head deep into his hard chest.

Shivay just hugged her tightly and rested his chin on her head, finally after ages his aching heart seemed to have found peace, as he mumbled into her hair, "My Anika - Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi".

She looked up at him in shock when she heard what he mumbled, and in a swift moment, before thinking much, Shivay bent down and lightly brushed his lips on hers, she gasped at first and then to her surprise, she tiptoed to reach his lips - as their lips met, it was like ice on fire, as their lips touched each other's gently at first but soon after their tongues were mating with each other furiously - when they gasped for breath, they heard a knock on the balcony door.

"Umm Shivay - Anika is it enough for now? We have to actually stop a roka now" they heard Om's voice amidst a lot of giggles. Anika turned deep red and moved away from Shivay, but Shivay didn't let her go far, as he firmly clutched her petit waist, internally marvelling at her amazingly soft skin and the perfect way her waist fit his palm.

"Oho hero, leave my di's waist"said Mallika in mocking seriousness when she entered.

"Oyi cartoon, my girl - my wish" Shivay pouted.

They all laughed. "They look perfect with each other don't they?"Soumya whispered from behind, she always wanted to see Anne and her brother together - she was the first to get the whiff.

"Yes they do. They are made for each other" whispered back Rudra from beside her.

"So do you two - you holding her shoulder and supporting her while she enjoys a tender moment in life" came a voice from behind - Soumya and Rudra turned back to look at Priyanka eyeing them - her voice was cold. Rudra realized he was holding Soumya close, and let go of her quickly - Soumya too was visibly irked and moved a few paces away from them.

"Uff di, now you see, your running away would have been so much more convenient?" pouted Mallika and everyone laughed except Anika.

"This is unbelievable man!" and then she turned to Shivay and scolded him, "If you had to propose, couldn't you hurry up?? At least reach by early morning today? I hadn't run away in the morning!! I had gone to stop my groom from running away - I sat with him and convinced him to not run away and carry on with the roka! How will I re-convince him to run-away now??"

They all were in deep thought, they were trying to think whether to tell Dev the truth directly or to tell Shiela first. But as they were at it, someone shouted from outside that Dev and his family had arrived - all were nervous, was it too late? Shivay grabbed Anika's hand possessively; he wasn't going to let her go, not when they finally found each other.

Shivay motioned Mallika, Priyanka and Soumya to go out and join the scene there - it would look awkward otherwise - then he roughly turned Om and said, "I told you I will give you a chance to return the punch right? Now's your turn - punch me hard" he instructed.

Om was taken aback, "Shivay" he began, but he didn't pay heed, he insisted that Om punched him - without thinking further, Shivay motioned for him to repeat and he did, soon people from the living room heard noises of fist fighting and ran inside to find a bloody nosed and blue jawed Shivay being beaten by Om - Rudra had also joined by then trying to pull the two apart - but in vain.

When Shiela arrived, Shivay began to scream, "I love her and I won't let her go"

Om took queue and spoke, "So what you do? So what she does too? So what you realized late, she is going to belong to someone else now"

Shiela was taken by surprise, why was Rudra screaming, obviously Priyanka was his, what was the issue? She went to him and all boys stopped fighting, "Betaji what's the issue, you love her, you will get her. Let her complete college atleast?" she said calmly.

"College?" replied Shivay incredulously.

"Yes betaji, education is important, once Priyanka finishes..."but seeing the confusion in everyones face, Anika decided to speak up. "Ma, I am sorry for all this, but I can't do this - I love Shivay" Shiela tore her eyes from Shivay and looked at Anika, her face was as thunderous as a cloud - she walked to her and spoke through gritted teeth, "Are you out of your mind betaji? Today is your roka! I shouldn't have allowed Shivay inside the house at all!" saying so she promptly turned to Rudra and whisked him outside the room to their balcony - a startled Priyanka followed and Soumya looked at Shivay for explanation.

Shiela asked Priyanka to see "Shivay" off at the gate and walked back inside - she turned to Shivay and Om and said, "Rudra and Om - whatever differences you have regarding Priyanka, can be sorted after the roka - for the time being please behave"then she turned to Anika, "I have seen how severely that Shivay had hurt you - I am not going to let you take this decision on impulse - Dev's family has arrived - please behave and come out when called" with that she was about to leave when Mallika stopped her, "Mom I need to clarify something - this is Shivay" Shiela turned around surprised to see her pointing at Rudra. "The guy you sent off, was Rudra" she whispered guiltily" As Shiela turned to stare at them, Om, Mallika, Anika and Shivay begun to explain - whereas Soumya walked out of the balcony to stop Rudra.

***

"Baby I don't think we are going to work out" Priyanka said as they approached the main gate. As much as Rudra hated hearing the regret in her voice, he knew she was right - she had become a great friend of his, he liked pampering her, but Soumya was predominant in his mind - whether as Soumya or as Somz - it was always that one person - he looked at her regrettably and saw a few tears form in her eye.

"Priyanka I am sorry - I don't know what I want in life - I miss Somz - I like Soumya - but if Soumya is real, then who was Somz? If Somz is real then why is Soumya here?" after months Rudra felt better confessing this to someone aloud. Priyanka looked at him sceptically, "Rudra, whether it is Somz or Soumya, one thing is for sure it is not me - so I think it is good that we are parting ways - now take your time and decide who wins between Somz and Soumya inside you - Trust me Rudra she loves you - if Somz can become Soumya for you - Soumya too can become Somz for you - you need to know who you need more" with that she patted his shoulder and turned to leave.

"Indeed Rudra, who do you want more?" came a voice, Rudra turned around in a flash to see Soumya standing there - she was looking at him in despair. Rudra shook his head, "I don't know. I miss Somz - I want you too - I like you, but I am not sure - I want to see Somz" he said desperately. Soumya looked at him calmly and replied with a small smile, "I am not sure you can see him again, but he can call you. I will ask him to" Rudra's head shot up in shock. Soumya smiled, "You know, growing your hair long is a tedious job, not sure I want to crop it - what will happen then when you miss Soumya?" she laughed. Rudra relaxed - he felt at ease - he realized he found her company soothing. But Soumya's face turned sombre again, "Rudra this isn't easy for me either - and I know it's very difficult for you - having lived the guy life with me, suddenly accepting me as Soumya is as difficult for you as is with me -don't hurry Rudra, lets give this time - give yourself time to accept Soumya - till then Soumya will fulfil Somz's place in your life - and if you miss him too much, you can always call him!" she smiled - Rudra felt relieved, he hugged Soumya and realized, in their case, only time could mend things. For now they were happy.

***

While returning back to the living room, Priyanka rubbed off the tear from her eyes, Dev had followed her right from the time she had initiated her breakup with that fair guy who loved some Somz/Soumya he wasn't sure. "Priyanka" he called out just before she entered the living room, turned back surprised to see Dev standing there - he motioned her to follow him outside, so she did.

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When everyone explained the situation to Shiela, she sat there shocked, if this was Shivay - she somehow couldn't hold her grudge against such a lovable childish boy - he was bound to make this mistake of not realizing - he looked only so childish - and her Anika seemed so much more happier around him - was she really making her compromise otherwise? No how could she do that to her daughter? But Dev? He was such a nice boy - how could she break his heart - today was there roka - she sat there helplessly wondering when there was a knock on the door - Mallika opened the door shakily and saw Dev enter with Priyanka - at the same time Soumya and Rudra entered from the balcony door - Anika glanced at both the girls and a smile spread across her lips as all sat in confusion - first she ran to Somu and hugged her, "Congratulations!!!!" she whispered in her ear and she laughed replying, "Not as yet. But soon" - then she ran to Dev and hugged him, much to Shivay's annoyance and asked in shock, "Dev, how did you manage???", he whispered, "She had broken up, and I was under pressure anyway - just needed the guts - turned out she had a crush on me ever since, same story she never could tell me - we aren't going out. YET, but we want to give it a try. Anika I am sorry!!" Everyone sighed in relief - seemed like the roka was to be mutually called off - but Anika turned to Priyanka and pulled her to the balcony - she had had enough share of Mallika's sacrifice in the past, she wanted to ensure things before taking a call now.

"Priyanka when did this happen? Did you agree to date him when he asked you out - such that he cancels the roka and Shivay and I can be together? Baby we are family friends, when this ends wrongly, it will be bad - as it is because of Daksh and Mallika, we have lost some friends" she asked reverently.

"Di relax - although if this wasn't true, I would have still done this, but the good news is, it is true, I really did have a crush on him - but I never thought he too did - this time when I heard about your enagagment to him - although I wasn't heartbroken since I was over him long since, but it did bother me a bit - now when I realized Rudra isnt the one and this guy is so serious about me and is still not over me, I genuinely want to give it a chance" she smiled.

Anika smiled satisfied, and took her to the room.

"Dev, let's go outside, we got a roka to cancel now" as all of them laughed, Shiela just felt relieved, all seemed well now - finally.

As Dev and Anika announced that there will be no roka, and they were better off as friends, all guests filed out - Shiela took to explaining the elders of both family while the children decided to go out for dinner as a group - for once as a group without any cross-connections or mirchi and mime - as one group of multiple dates: Shivay-Anika, Om-Mallika, Soumya-Rudra and Priyanka-Dev. And for once the dinner didn't end abruptly!

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Epilogue

(3years later)

It was the rock concert of the nation's biggest rockstar - Rockstar Shiv. As he took to the stage and mesmerized the nation, the members of the VIP seats clapped like his mad fans too - the enclosure consisted of a certain Mrs. Rockstar, one rockstar's sister and her fianc some corporator named Rudra, Mr. and Mrs. Jai Singh the business partners of Shivay's music company and also Mrs. Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi's sister/friend and brother-in-law and a certain business tycoon Mr. Suri and his finace Ms. Priks. As their loud cheers for the rockstar aired on national television, a certain Daksh Zaveria sitting in a plush restaurant with his new musing (his secretary) pointed at Mrs. Jai Singh and said smugly, "My ex girlfriend, I dumped her" his secretary smirked internally and thought - grapes are sour sir). At the same moment sitting at a kitty party staring at the live screen Mrs. Tia Zaveri said out loud, "I was Shivay's first inspiration for music - but then I never liked the limelight" she spoke defensively as the other ladies smirked at each other.

When the show was over the rockstar invited his wife on stage and announced a sensational news to the world -

"I have never shied away from the media and hence I want to break this news to the world myself and share my happiness, me and my wife, Anika, are soon going to welcome a junior rockstar"

With that when the media went berserk, Shivay pulled Anika into him and escaped backstage where they met the rest and left for a cruise trip as they wanted to hide from the immediate media glare.

A thought before you leave: No matter how many cross connections you have, no matter how much mirchi you need to gobble or mimes you need to put up with - there will always be that one right live-wire connection waiting to ring at the right moment! Dear Readers, may your live wires, thrive and ring soon if they haven't already!


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Guys!! Happy now?? I just felt it's unfair to keep you waiting for chapters because I got busy in my life. So I have delivered my promise - the entire story is up for you to read and enjoy - I hope this story has done justice to all your expectations - if it hasn't then I am sorry :(

But all in all - I want to thank you for sticking by it given my random timing of updates. Please leave in a comment or a like if you enjoyed this journey and show me some love for this mammoth 25 chapter journey of love and friendship!

Amen!

Edited by Aafrah-SA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome ending to a fantastic fiction. Please do keep on writing more.
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Wow, like seriously, wow!
You handled all the confusion so easily 😆 and the proposal☺️

I enjoyed the mirchi as well as the mime. It was a perfect blend of comic confusions and royal romance (read : angsty)
The happy ending made me happy, the junior rockstar made me enthralled.
This was one golden story ❤️ I enjoyed throughout. There is not a single chapter that does not keep me on the edges. I loved this story a lot. The growth of all these characters was lovely. Thanks a lot for this story, it makes me really happy.


Love,
With a lot of mirchi as well as mime (not negatively of course)
Krishi ❤️

P.S. I am going to miss this story even though I have all the time to re-read it. I would love to read more from you😳
Edited by Black_Maniac - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was awsome...Loved every chapter of this FF...Totall enjoyed it...Thank u for writing this one 😊
Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago

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