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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Nice Idea..!

Have done this before on another forum, gope it goes well here as well..!!!

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Anika- "Mera Dil Keh Raha Hai... Koi bahut bada raita phela hai... Shivaay Shivaay jaise hain hi nahi..!"

Khanna- "Exactly Madam... Woh toh uss crash ke baad chai peene lage hain, seeti bajaane lage hain, aur unki language ki toh poori oh my Mata ho chuki hai..!"

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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Risha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Anika, "What's that language Khanna jee?"

Khanna ji, "Sorry madam ji. But aab yeh sochiye kerna kia hai?"

Anika, "Kerna kia hai. Start following Shivaay 24/7. Taake pta chaley ke problem kia hai?"

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Shanaya (shona)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Khannaji : " lekin madam ji... huum ... kuyn ?"

Annika : " bas kanna ji humm hum kuch nhi kuch ajeeb ho raha hai "

Khanna ji " ok madam ji " he put his glasses on and with with more confidence say " ok madam ji main try karta houn"

Edited by shonasyl - 8 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

The masked guy never got startled by th boldness of Shivaay.. He never underestimated him!

He already knew Shivaay Singh Oberoi will never sit back and loose all the courage he had..

And on the other hand Shivaay was loosing it in his heart! he had to get back to his family before its too late.. He had to try and yet he did!! Despite of long 10 minutes of investigation he didnt return back the phone cox he knew this phone was the key to his way back home...🥺

am always more keen to write on the Shivaay stuck in situation rather than all raita in Oberoi Mansion..i don't know why CVs are doing that to us.. i so expected Shivaay's scene,.. but i kept on waiting waiting and waiting!!

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

just when Soumya was about to return keys to Pinki.. she was interrupted by the voice of Man she loved.. Rudra needed help with flowers baskets in lounge

Anika came downstairs embellished in that golden shirt and red skirt looking for the gorgeous face who belonged to her only.. and her eyes picked him while approaching shakti-pinki who were fighting on some non-sensical issue..

Edited by -AppleOfMaEye- - 8 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

His blue eyes perfectly matching his blazer were lost in some confusion.. He was not the same; any kind of stress couldn't make him loose his nerves like that which he was oftenly doing these days..

while going to him; she bumped into Rudra who dropped flower basket on floor..

Sorry Ru.. I should help you!! she sat down to help rudra

her hand stuck to a bangle while collecting scattered marigolds..

whose bracelet is this??Anika asked soumya who just came back after shifting basket with roses to shogun settings..

Amm.. i have seen it somewhere; but i can't finger it.. soumya was even confused about that

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

someone help Me soon.. leave that stupid bracelet.. Rudra exclaimed

Anika quickly helped him to get up with basket filled of marigolds

when Soumya was about to pickup another basket.. she got to remember about key in her hands..

Anika D.. Can you give those keys to Pinki Aunty? Soumya extended her arm to give keys

Keys? Anika was confused

yes.. Dadi Ma told these keys belong to Pinki Aunty.. Soumya clarified

Okay.. i will.. but what those keys are doing with you?

i don't know actually.. Shivaay Bhaiyaa was coming out of Pinky Aunty's room in morning and he dropped those keys in corridor.. i thought its yours' but Dadi Maa told me its Pinki Aunty's

okay.. Soumya i will.. Anika took keys of Soumya's hands

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

what Shivaay was doing in Pinki Mummy's room in morning? Anika asked herself

she looked on that bracelet she found while picking up flowers..

it looks like real gold.. whose bracelet it is??

Bracelet in one hand and keys in the other.. she went to Dadi

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FoundLife

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

He felt claustrophobic, he hated situations like this. He hated being controlled, but now he was kidnapped and locked up.
"Just leave me, its my sister's wedding, I can't allow any problem there cause me!
"Your sister's wedding will go smooth, you wife will also be content" the masked man rasped!
He could see them, all of them on the screen, all were happy, none missed him. She didn't either!
Then he saw him, a mirror image, so similar that he himself wouldn't distinguish.
"Your brother will take care of everything" The master tormenter called out as he moved outside. His gasp echoed through the room "brother..?"
Shivaay sank onto the ground, as his imposter managed to hurt 'his wife' for bothering him. Tears fell on the floor, tears that were held back for over twenty years! "I'm sorry I let you down Annika, again!"

Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago

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