Knight on Ninety Horses-Short Story-Note Pg 102 Dec 1, 2017 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

I had been waiting for the marathi pataka to take off and here you have the southern hyderabadi flavour dishing out!!!

Hi Suse 😃
Glad to see a new thread with your name and thank you for the pm.

Will be keeping tabs on this story for sure..

Can't wait to read a story set in the 90s zamana... gosh the best decades of an innocent childhood seems to be these 80s and 90s... Now its a whole new world order!

Looking forward to the next update on alll your stories !😆😉



Aap mishti bhi ho aur mohabbat bhi. aap aaye toh iss dhage pe pyaari si mithas aa gayi😃

So please sit back and enjoy the gentle pace of this story. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Woh aaye ghar mein humare khuda ki kudrat hai,
Kabhi hum unhe kabhi apne gahr ko dekhte hai

Doc
🤗

I don't do the running and jumping on people like Avi does.

I want you to treat patients as a doctor not lie on that bed as a patient with broken bones😆

Aapki shayari pe mein Kya bolu. Waah ji waah 👏
Don't you worry jump all you want I won't break my bones are super strong 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

^ Avi meri Jaan🤗meri angel😃

How are you????


Aap ke haseen rukh ko ab bhi chuppa hua dekh ke boht khush 😆

Bas ab Mari ki kami hai.. aa jaati toh phir se mehfil mein shaan aa jaati..

Missed you tons

Good that you dropped in ..

Ek reason ban gaya smile karne ke liye 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC



Main is THAP THAP ki parampara sahi salamat rakhi hai 😉 😆 😆

Thank you ji for your paramparik talent 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC



Doc ki khidmat me ek aur irshad 😉
Aap aaye hain hamare ghar me.. Phool khile hain gulshan gulshan..
Phool khile hain gulshan gulshan 😆 😆

Itne saare bhavuk aur pyaar bhare shayari sunn kar mera dil garden garden ho gaya hai 😳😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Aap ke haseen rukh ko ab bhi chuppa hua dekh ke boht khush 😆

Bas ab Mari ki kami hai.. aa jaati toh phir se mehfil mein shaan aa jaati..

Missed you tons

Good that you dropped in ..

Ek reason ban gaya smile karne ke liye 😃



Jaane kahan gaye wo din 😲
Keep smiling Avi Janemann 😉 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Susegad 🤗

Oh! How I loved the 90's touch to this story. Actually the title is intriguing ... it got me curious as to what's in store. But it shouldn't have after all Nishaji you have a way with your words that always seems to capture my attention. 😉 Quite similar to the Geet of this story ... she's cute, fierce but also very witty.

Woh zamana kuch aur tha. Woh log bhi kuch aur the. Kuch humare jaise aur kuch aap ke jaise😉

Loved their dynamics and the explosions that happened in the first meet. 👏

This story and its setting just is so natural that it makes me nostalgic... I some how can figure out where this is leading but at the same time I still want to read it in the perspective you're going to present it in. 😉

You toh antaryami ho gurumata. Aap se kya chipa hai😉
Par phir bhi aap padhne a kasht karengi toh huke badhi khushi hogi😆

Looking forward to this one... and thanks a ton for the PM 😃 (Or else I would have missed out on this interesting brewing of yours)

So very glad to have you here. Now I can say ab pura hai chand falk pe😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hum intezaar karenge
Hum intezaar karenge update tak
Khuda kare ke commenting ho aur tu aaye😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Knight on Ninety Horses

Chapter 4



Maan walked beside her on the wide road and people greeted her constantly.

"So Maan, what do you do?"

"I am in my third year of B.E Mechanical. And what about you?"

"Oh I am going to appear for my 10th grade finals in a few months. I can't wait for my exams to be over."
"Are you done with your preparations for the exams?"
She looked at him in disgust.

"Uhh, puleez. For one whole year that question has been the bane of my life. Every uncle and aunt that I know and don't know has been asking me the same question, plus papa has banned me from watching TV for so many centuries now."
"Umm... Geet centuries?"
"Well it feels like centuries, especially when I am forced to sit in my room and I can hear the TV playing in the next. The Handas are a mean bunch and their cruelty knows no bound. My father says no TV, my sister says I can't read Mills and Boon until I am done with my 10th grade exams."
Maan wondered what kind of books these Meals and Bone were. From the name they sounded perhaps like diet and weight loss books. He looked over at the skinny girl beside him and decided to prod her about it.

"I think your sister is right in keeping those books away from you for now. You are going to appear for important exams in a few months. For your mind to work at its optimum you need to eat healthy, nutritious food and forget all about fad diets right now."
One moment she was looking at him as if he had sprouted two heads and the next she was clutching her stomach and laughing like a loon.
"What is so funny about meals and bones Geet? He looked at her in exasperation, hands on hips.
That set her off again and she was shrieking with laughter when somebody called out her name.
A middle aged lady was walking towards them from the opposite direction and a bag with leafy greens peeking out was clutched in her hand. Geet saw her and rushed towards her.

"Mai you look tired. Come sit at our place for a moment, have some lemon sherbet and then go home."

She took the bag from Mai's hand and started walking back with her.
Maan stood at the side of the road and looked on in amazement. She had forgotten about him completely. He sighed in resignation and went and stood behind her.
"Mai did you get any fish at the market today?" Geet enquired.

Mai grinned happily and stopped. She took the bag from Geet's hand, dug deep inside and pulled out something wrapped up in a newspaper.
"I got these fresh Bombay ducks for very cheap today. Wait let me give some for your mom."
At the mention of Bombay ducks Geet's head whipped around and she looked at him with embarrassment and horror. She hastily whipped the package from Mai's hand and stuffed it back in the bag, but in her haste one of the slippery ducks slipped out and landed on the street. Maan looked at the duck that was not a duck but was in fact, a skinny fish that had landed at his feet and even in death the eyes of his namesake seemed to be mocking him.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Itne saare bhavuk aur pyaar bhare shayari sunn kar mera dil garden garden ho gaya hai😳😆



Dil garden garden hogya ⭐️ 😉

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