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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

Very emotional update... I liked the fact that its not a goodbye, and she'll certainly return... She definitely deserves the space to make peace with her heart..but shravan ko letter/msg toh chod jati😲 Hell's gonna break loose when shravan does'nt find his sumo Hope this realisation/peace making thing doesnt drag long🥱 Aur uss beech agar woh preggo hui toh😲.???!!! Headspinning already...

Update soon dear.


Those are a lot of head spinning possibilities!😲
Let's see what happens, will be updating in an hour.
Thanks!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: imshveta

The very meaning of their relationship has changed for Suman
She did not know everything about her other half, the man she married, the man she loved. She did not know of his life before her. This was definitely not what she imagined it to be. When your spouse has shared some physical moments with another with his own will, it makes you think how much of the heart too had been with others, it makes something in your relation incomplete.

She surely needs time to come to terms with it... to trust their love and their relationship...
And yes, she is justified to have doubts. wasn't Shravan once jealous of Pushkar's equation with Suman?
She is not wrong in wanting to protect her heart and she is not being unreasonable with Shravan. She knows she is coming back but..in time when her heart is strong again.

Very nicely written... And I am happy for Sumo's stand
My favourite line of the part?
"It's not a goodbye but a sure promise to return soon"

Love
Shveta


Yes, things have changed between them. Insecurity and fear had stepped in.
Let's see what's in store.
Thanks! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Heart wrenching update. ...gosh the emotions that were displayed.

Jealousy is going to be constant in this relationship. ..till they progress and start trusting themselves and their relationship.

But they will emerge stronger from this.

Shravan is going to get ballistic when he finds out...and hope he remains strong and doesn't spiral down into alcoholism.

Amazing as always


They will emerge stronger from this - key words.
Thanks!
By the way..., spiraling down into alcoholism. Hold onto that thought /fact, read the next chap that will be posted in an hour and lemme know if that thought tilts a bit for you. 😉 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Clara,i finished reading the chapter with a very heavy heart😭

I am with Sumo for the decision she took at the end...
What others would feel i don't know right now; but this is my opinion...
I don't think whatever Shravan did was right however he hated Sumo...
I am not sure whether i have expressed myself fully or whether it makes sense at all..
Waiting for your next update to see what happens next with Shraman...
And thanks for the PM.


I understand what you're trying to say here, completely!
Shravan didn't cheat on Sumo (thankfully) but the very fact that he was hell determined to do just that and in such a cruel way, it was enough for Suman to be rattled about.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Lara ka update!! 🥳
Much needed on a boring day!! 😕

Waiting for Shravan's reaction
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update. First I want to thank you for writing it and then god that you are here to give us what sony could not give. Such an amazing writer you are. Very entertaining. Thanks again😊 looking forward to more updates. Ye dil mange more always.
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Dedicating this chapter to - Sumodreamer05


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What do you think about this chapter? *wiggles brows

Being drunk is a cute and crazy thing, until you do it in a regular basis. This type of drunk Shravan in an explosive mode is what I prefer more than what we got in the show.😎 I hope you liked it. And the reactions of the audience. lol...

Another imp fact - it's not offensive to be in relationships in the past. What actually is offensive and disgusting is cheating when you're comitted to someone. There's a line between the two, and Shravan had managed to dangle himself right there. Some difficult place, right? Poor lambu.😭😆🤢

Don't forget to like and comment. Lemme know of your views about the chapter, tell me which was your fav part / dialogue / scene. It always helps me so much when I read your wise overviews.🤗

Thanks a lot, from the deepest part of my heart for the likes and comments on the last chapter. Your support and love make me so happy!❤️

Love you all so much,
Lara.

P.S. People who've liked and commented will get PMs.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Res!! And post heading pe naya update kyun nahi dikha raha?! 😕

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Unress ⭐️

Oh my Lara! 🤗

Man this feels like coming home!! Its my comment!! 🤪

Before I start my rant on the chapter, lemme tell you, don't, under any circumstances whatsoever, excuse me for not commenting on the chaps for this long, OK?! 😕 🥱
(Well not for forever... Hehehe)

Yeah so where was I? Yes! Yes! Yes! The effingness that this chapter was, or rather the hilariously cute ending! 🤣

You know you are in a league of your own...being the badass sassy Lara! 😈

Always throwing a curve-ball at us and leaving us at the most unexpected cliffhangers but I bet this is the only story where we even love those cliffhangers man! 🤪 😛

Such is your awesomeness ⭐️ 😎

Now coming to my babies, oh our poor ShraMan... My heart just went out to them man 😭

Sumo's take on what probably constitutes a home stirred something in me, something too personal and my heart leapt out to her...

And yes, home is more about a person (s) than a physical space.

For every relationship, distance is as necessary as intimacy sometimes.

Word. Absolutely agree to each and every word. Sometimes we tend to hurt each other more rather than heal being together during or after such shockers in our lives that completely shake the very foundation of our relationships...

Negativities must be ripped off from the depth of their roots and in the soonest possible time.

We often look to instill as much positivity in our lives and relationships that we don't give a thought, consciously or unconsciously, to the negativities that are there in the undercurrents of the basis of our relations.

For a truly thriving life, this must be done before going ahead...

I see here Preeti has brains! Wow how did that happen again?!! 😆 😛

And the carpenter bit got me like 🤣
Only you can pull of such a thing in a situation such as this! 👏 😛

And then the parallel with the brothers' freaking qualities! Too good yaar!😆

Of course Pushkar was sneaking in or else how would he have kneaded the metaphorical bun along with Preeti?! OMG!! What did I just say?! I'm hilarious...!! 😈 🤣

Must have been the burglar blood secretly running through their veins.

But back to Serious-Land, Suman's apprehension on calling her husband and the chances of her resolve breaking down to bits was so to the point.

He had wanted to break her. But he didn't know, she would have prefered to be killed in stead. Anything but the kind of betrayal he'd planned.

For any woman out there, the prospect of her man, her love cheating on her, choosing another woman over her is the worst possible nightmare to live through. And one can't argue with that.

So Sumo's fear and dilemma over the hatred that Shravan once had for her is completely understandable. Anyone would feel the same...

But not everyone loves with the intensity and passion and loyalty as Suman.

Instead of breaking everything off, she only took some time for herself. But again no one would have predicted the actual extent of its impact on Shravan...

Because yes, its a given that he would suffer in the worst possible way when Suman leaves him, even if temporarily...

And we just saw that...

Her thinking about their impending meeting, in front of their families... Oh shoot!! 😲

But her Shravan didn't come... 😭

Even Pushkar hit the nail right on spot!! Twice!!

My brother is like a volcano, you know, he keeps it all in until he can not anymore and finally explodes.

But Kamini's Carol jaap got me all like... 😡

But! But! But! Kya badawalla popat hua re uska!! Mangaye Re Lara 🤪 🤣

And I know it sounds weird but can I just say I absolutely love this Ramnath Malhotra?!! 😳

But amidst all this, I just felt like going over and giving Sumo a big bear hug! Her insecurities and self-doubt were just 🥺

Love had dragged many new things in her life, some good and some bad. It was not a road covered with cheese and stars after all.

Yes it is dear. But don't worry, you still have your Shravan who would help you in crossing over to all the cheeses and lift you high enough to touch all those stars ⭐️ 😳

Par Bhai yeh ghost story kahan she aa gayi bich me??

And then...

He comes. Shouting.

I frankly thought he would create a bigger ruckus and fight with Suman but again you just made me go all 'Aww' with fits of laughter!! 🤣

That's quite a combo dude 😛 😆

And Ramnath's reaction!!! OMFG!! That was too hilarious along with Kamini's too... 😆

Man more than Sumo, I am curious as to how that happened... 😉

Please Lara please update soon! I can't wait for Shravan to wake up and the family's reaction and and the Raaz of Shravan Malhotra's Virginity!

Waiting
Till then
Love
Cas
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oops..its really embarrassing , but true confession.. Lara, the carpenter remark was really cool.. i am going to love the next update more.. only if Preethi and Pushkar had this much brains and be attentive in show as well...shraman had a better life there too..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaval05

Thanks for the pm. Loved the update

Felt bad for Suman it is hard to find out such truths and sometimes you need time and space to figure things out..
It would have been better if she told shtavab and left but would Shravan would have let her go ... Not likely

Can't wait to read what happens next... update soon


Thanks, dear!
I hope you'll enjoy the already uploaded chap 46 as well. 😳

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