FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 65

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Hey Lara.

I couldnt comment on Dreams & Disasters, so this one is for that. 😊

Shravan has a pic of Sumo with a baby in his book and he keeps staring at it whenever he gets time. How cute is it...!! Yup,i had said that the baby could wait but 😉 no, I take my words back. let him get what he wishes and deserves 😊
How i wish Suman catches him admiring the pic secretly some day. 😳

That quote about Love, beautiful.

Sumo- The Thor was LIT 🤣
You had mentioned about the hammers in the previous chapter, but i never knew that it will be the highlight of the coming chapter 😆

Pushkar & Shravan running to save their asses 🤣

Shravan settling his score. 👏👏👏 I liked it...!!!

The end was 💔 Whats coming is an irrelevant question here, coz now i know what it is. 😆


Aww... the picture staring scene made you change your mind? 😳
I'll see what can be done about that. 😃

Haa haa.. tha hammer took the spotlight. lol 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ch 44 , Her Faith

Vagga...!! Oh man, Suman is in full on Sumo mode now...!! How i love it. 😆

"I brought you Pushkar here" Its like , go Sumo slaughter him. And she would have if he wasnt there.
Only Shravan can control and calm her. This is something i really love.

Another roller coaster ride it was. But this is something i love about this FF. So many ups and downs and roller coasters. This FF is one of a kind.

Kamini being the kameeeni she is 😡

Mistress...!!!! No. This cant be true. 😲
Okay he may have visited out of frustration or something but infidelity, that too on their wedding night...!!! NO...!!! This is just not happening...!!! Pls tell me its just a lie...!!!! 🥺


Thanks! I'm pleased to know you love roller coasters as much as I do. 😉😃

Well, what can I say about Kamini - her very name is a irony itself. 😆
Let's see what's in store about the Carol issue.

Take care till later.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Happy holi everyone! 🥳🤗

Dedicating this chapter to - Arpi1234







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Every relationship needs some space to revive sometimes. Suman walked out because she understood the fact. But the point is - she walked out without informing lover boy.
She knows she would return,
but does Shravan know it?😕
Oh hell, it can raise a hell! 😈

So, Shravan hadn't really cheated on Suman. But he'd the purpose to. That's what he meant about being a 'vindictive nemesis' earlier. 🥺

Are you guys relieved now? Or are you upset because Sumo left? Let me know.😳

However, one thing's for sure, Shravan is so going to get bonkers seeing no Sumo after waking up. lol...😆

What was favorite part / dialogue from the chapter? Don't forget to tell me. Your reviews are always helpful to me, your comments encourage me to write. So, please don't keep your thoughts to yourselves, tell me all about them. That would make me really happy.🤗

Press the like button too, please. Show me your love and support for Bitter Sweet Symphony.

Love and hugs,
Lara.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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For being this late!!

I really have no idea what would I write here!!

Carol like seriously!

That was Shravan's plan! They even made out, though the line wasn't crossed, but still, leave Sumo, even I am failing to digest that!!!!!

Mera Dil to puncture ho gaya



And suman left after that! That was the right thing to do! All power to her!


But a request Lara, please please please update soon!!!! Will be waiting like crazy...


Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
"THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS CHAPTER TO ME "


Really happy that you dedicated this chapter to me. I will try and give my best review on this chapter...

Great to start with a Beautiful lovely Hug ❤️ and kiss before the storm 😉
Shravan's cheeky reply..
Chachi's evil words surely hunt sumo but Lara one question I want to ask how kamini chachi knew about Shravan was with another woman in his wedding Night?...
Shravan is always a bhukkad 😃 😉
Argument is certainly life of Shravan and sumo's relationship. I always like their fight more than emotional scenes..
Shravan must be unimpressed knowing Chachi's hater towards Tiwaris..
Finally sumo asked the Question with so much courage...
While seeking revenge, dig two graves - one for yourself. That's what Shravan did digging his own grave.. .
Sumo is devastated after knowing the truth..
You explained their situation through your words beautifully 👏
Sumo realised to what extent he can go in his hater towards her, he can even go on to sleep with another woman just to take revenge from sumo..
Glad that Shravan didn't cheated on sumo..
You will not be punished for your anger, you will be punished by your anger.

Buddha

That's what happened, no body punished him, Shravan himself punished by his anger... In his anger he wanted to sleep with a woman who he even didn't love, so now he got his punishment..
Good that sumo didn't forgive him easily, he should feel sorry for his mistakes.. Sumo is right, what will happen if in future they have another argument, he might Once again go to another woman...
Sumo is giving space to their relationship so that she can deal with what happened...
So sumo is leaving Shravan for sometime as she said "it was not a good bye but sure promise to return"..
Let's see how both deal with their relationship and thanks for pm..

Love
Smita
Edited by Arpi1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lara...🤗
Awesome update bro... 👏

ShraMan's little moments were so adorable...❤️
Loved it!

Sumo did trust Shravan but Kamini's confident accusation haunted her.N thats natural.
The way Sumo initiated the Carol talk was so amazing...N Shravan's reaction 😕
He was her most beautiful nightmare...❤️ Soo love it!!
The way ShraMan's emotional state penned down by you is my fav one in this cheppii Lara...You slayed it girl 👏

Shravan had always been successful it seemed, in mending her one moment and destroying her the next...True that!!
Awesome bro.. 👏

Why?!...One word n thousand questions!!
Thousand complaints...!!
Truly ultimate sound of heartbreak!

Shravan's deep rooted hatred..n its extend 😕
Along with Sumo, I was also trying hard not to read further..cant bear reading what Shravan did!!
But I couldnt...It gave much needed relief though!..Phew!!


I found myself returning to you, I always return to you...I soo Loved it ❤️ ❤️
Sumo's breakdown...Beautifully penned down 👏
Her insecurities are well justified here... !!
Its not Sumo who had reduced ShraMan to what ifs...Its you Shravan!!

Even after that storm, ShraMan had found shelter, a sense of security in each others embrace n will always no matter what happens...This is power of their undying love !!

Sumo do need to make a peace with her own heart first...Much needed!!
It was not a goodbye...It can never be!!
The last lines...Very Well descibes Sumo...The real strong Sumo outside but a vulnerable n broken one inside!!

Sumo didnt informed Shravan ...Now thats gonna be interesting 😉
Shravan...You called it yourself bro... 😛

Spectacular upii Lara.. 👏
Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
"It was not a goodbye but a sure promise to soon return" - this one made me cry!!! 🥺
heart melting update!

beautifully written each n every emotion. ...
so so so amazing! !
keep it up, darling ❤️
and yeah...update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update... I liked the fact that its not a goodbye, and she'll certainly return... She definitely deserves the space to make peace with her heart..but shravan ko letter/msg toh chod jati😲 Hell's gonna break loose when shravan does'nt find his sumo Hope this realisation/peace making thing doesnt drag long🥱 Aur uss beech agar woh preggo hui toh😲.???!!! Headspinning already...
Update soon dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
The very meaning of their relationship has changed for Suman
She did not know everything about her other half, the man she married, the man she loved. She did not know of his life before her. This was definitely not what she imagined it to be. When your spouse has shared some physical moments with another with his own will, it makes you think how much of the heart too had been with others, it makes something in your relation incomplete.

She surely needs time to come to terms with it... to trust their love and their relationship...
And yes, she is justified to have doubts. wasn't Shravan once jealous of Pushkar's equation with Suman?
She is not wrong in wanting to protect her heart and she is not being unreasonable with Shravan. She knows she is coming back but..in time when her heart is strong again.

Very nicely written... And I am happy for Sumo's stand
My favourite line of the part?
"It's not a goodbye but a sure promise to return soon"

Love
Shveta
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heart wrenching update. ...gosh the emotions that were displayed.
Jealousy is going to be constant in this relationship. ..till they progress and start trusting themselves and their relationship.

But they will emerge stronger from this.

Shravan is going to get ballistic when he finds out...and hope he remains strong and doesn't spiral down into alcoholism.

Amazing as always

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