Sumo's Predicament described in my version of 'Saare sapne'

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Resss 😳

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Its tooo good
How do u write so welll lubs

[B]Wish to send my appreciation,
You deserve a standing ovation.

Genuine, is my gratitude,

I really like your attitude.


A positive person, I must say,

Hard worker, that enjoys to play.

I could only say good things,

When you're around, good fortune brings.[B]


Feeling so emotional now



Luv
Tina

Originally posted by: Tinna28

*****************
Its tooo good
How do u write so welll lubs

[B]Wish to send my appreciation,
You deserve a standing ovation.

Genuine, is my gratitude,

I really like your attitude.


A positive person, I must say,

Hard worker, that enjoys to play.

I could only say good things,

When you're around, good fortune brings.[B]


Feeling so emotional now



Luv
Tina

Now you made me emotional by your comment. Thank you so much Tina. You are a lovely person. Appreciate it so much. You are such a good writer yourself. Thank you so much for such beautiful lines. Can't think of any words that would thank you enough, first time received such beautiful lines for myself.

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Lubs!

This was so beautiful yaar..👏.and this song 'saare aapne Kahin kho Gaye' ..this is my all time favorite..

I am listening to this after a long time thanks to you.

And as always, the lyrics fit the tune to the T😃

My favorite part was this one:

Un raahon se jab guzarte hai

Sach kahe pal pal marte hai

Un yaadon me hum jo gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye

This breakdown was also her own acceptance of the end of her relationship with Shravan.

Every memory of hers with him must have then hurt truly. She had nurtured so many memories of his in that box, and how do you forget someone who gave you so much to remember.

Great one here Lubna!!

Hey Resh,

Lubs as usual your poetry soothes and then kills as well

Hey lubna

Jus saw this on TT n loved it 😳

Sumo breaking down .. the memory box . So wanted Shravan to see it 😭 god knows y they brought in Preeti ... when she was gng to do nothing abt it 😕 this memory box shld hve had an episode at least dedicate to it .. with Suman and Shravan getting to know abt it .. I rem how most of the fans kept tweeting to the creatives abt this 😡

Khair when it comes to EDKV the rant does not stop 😕 the song selection is after a very long time .. the last two lines .. #Shramanfeels

lub you are such brilliant writer dear your each lyrics was too amazing ⭐️

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Lubs as usual your poetry soothes and then kills as well

Phirse toote jo tum kho gaye

imagining this in alka yagniks voice I feel sad inside..😭

the original is so heart wrenchingly beautiful and your words would play so well with the tune and her voice. ouch. hurts.

galib ki nani rocks as usual 👏

Thanks Dips. I know this song is so heart wrenching. Actually I saw it today after posting my version. This song was always on the back of my mind even though I didn't hear it so many years. Thanks again Dips. I keep singing until I get it right.😆

Lubna,

Even though I have not heard this song, your poetry made me feel a strange tugging at my heart...

This was heartbreaking yet it had something inherently beautiful about it that I just couldn't stop myself from reading it... Since I try to avoid anything that is angsty or painful.

You have one hell of a talent and we are glad that you are here on the forum, reminiscing ShraMan with us through your works! 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next...

Till then
Love
Cas 😊

P.S. I can't seem to be able to like any posts today
Will try to do that soon though...