Sumo's Predicament described in my version of 'Saare sapne'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Everyone,
Sumo's Predicament after accepting Aditya's marriage proposal described in my version of "Saare Sapne Kahin Kho Gaye", as she breaks down holding her memory box. This song was sung by Alka Yagnik for a music video. One of my sister's favorite song. I love it too. Hope you like this version. I want to dedicate this to Reshma, as she became Goldie today. Congratulations Reshma!!! Now let's get back to emotional song now.πŸ˜†



Sare sapne kahin kho gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye

...


Jo tumhi nahi kuch nahi hum

Tum ho saanse to hai zindagi hum

Hum tere the tere ho gaye

Hai hum kya se Kya ho gaye


Un raahon se jab guzarte hai

Sach kahe pal pal marte hai

Un yaadon me hum jo gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye


Tumko Armaan jo banaya tha

Tabse jeena hame aaya tha

Phirse toote jo tum kho gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye


Let me know if anyone of you ever attempted to sing this or any other versions of my songs. I know Reshma did. But please let me know if it fits right in the tune. Thanks.


Lubna❀️





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Tinna28 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its tooo good
How do u write so welll lubs


[B]Wish to send my appreciation,
You deserve a standing ovation.

Genuine, is my gratitude,

I really like your attitude.


A positive person, I must say,

Hard worker, that enjoys to play.

I could only say good things,

When you're around, good fortune brings.
[B]


Feeling so emotional now



Luv
Tina


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinna28


*****************
Its tooo good
How do u write so welll lubs


[B]Wish to send my appreciation,
You deserve a standing ovation.

Genuine, is my gratitude,

I really like your attitude.


A positive person, I must say,

Hard worker, that enjoys to play.

I could only say good things,

When you're around, good fortune brings.
[B]


Feeling so emotional now



Luv
Tina


Now you made me emotional by your comment. Thank you so much Tina. You are a lovely person. Appreciate it so much. You are such a good writer yourself. Thank you so much for such beautiful lines. Can't think of any words that would thank you enough, first time received such beautiful lines for myself.
You made my day. Love you.πŸ€—

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Lubs!

This was so beautiful yaar..πŸ‘.and this song 'saare aapne Kahin kho Gaye' ..this is my all time favorite..
I am listening to this after a long time thanks to you.

And as always, the lyrics fit the tune to the TπŸ˜ƒ

My favorite part was this one:

Un raahon se jab guzarte hai

Sach kahe pal pal marte hai

Un yaadon me hum jo gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye


This breakdown was also her own acceptance of the end of her relationship with Shravan.

Every memory of hers with him must have then hurt truly. She had nurtured so many memories of his in that box, and how do you forget someone who gave you so much to remember.

Great one here Lubna!!





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Hey Lubs!

This was so beautiful yaar..πŸ‘.and this song 'saare aapne Kahin kho Gaye' ..this is my all time favorite..
I am listening to this after a long time thanks to you.

And as always, the lyrics fit the tune to the TπŸ˜ƒ

My favorite part was this one:

Un raahon se jab guzarte hai

Sach kahe pal pal marte hai

Un yaadon me hum jo gaye

Hai hum Kya se Kya ho gaye


This breakdown was also her own acceptance of the end of her relationship with Shravan.

Every memory of hers with him must have then hurt truly. She had nurtured so many memories of his in that box, and how do you forget someone who gave you so much to remember.

Great one here Lubna!!





Hey Resh,
Thank you so much, your comments always bring smile on my face.So glad you liked it. I keep remembering random songs and cannot take it off my mind. This was one of them. My sister loved this one so I had to listen but this is such a beautiful song that you can't forget it.
Sumo breaking down scene was so emotional I still think Shravan should have seen that, Preeti saw but didn't do anything. Agar Shravan dekh leta to sab acha ho jata. They affect us so much.😊

Thanks again Reshma. πŸ€—

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lubs as usual your poetry soothes and then kills as well
Phirse toote jo tum kho gaye

imagining this in alka yagniks voice I feel sad inside..😭

the original is so heart wrenchingly beautiful and your words would play so well with the tune and her voice. ouch. hurts.

galib ki nani rocks as usual πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey lubna

Jus saw this on TT n loved it 😳

Sumo breaking down .. the memory box . So wanted Shravan to see it 😭 god knows y they brought in Preeti ... when she was gng to do nothing abt it πŸ˜• this memory box shld hve had an episode at least dedicate to it .. with Suman and Shravan getting to know abt it .. I rem how most of the fans kept tweeting to the creatives abt this 😑

Khair when it comes to EDKV the rant does not stop πŸ˜• the song selection is after a very long time .. the last two lines .. #Shramanfeels
Mayuri ❀️
Edited by amks2016 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lub you are such brilliant writer dear your each lyrics was too amazing ⭐️
i tried out this with karaoke and it fits perfectly πŸ˜ƒ

i loved you last stanza πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

Lubs as usual your poetry soothes and then kills as well

Phirse toote jo tum kho gaye

imagining this in alka yagniks voice I feel sad inside..😭

the original is so heart wrenchingly beautiful and your words would play so well with the tune and her voice. ouch. hurts.

galib ki nani rocks as usual πŸ‘

Thanks Dips. I know this song is so heart wrenching. Actually I saw it today after posting my version. This song was always on the back of my mind even though I didn't hear it so many years. Thanks again Dips. I keep singing until I get it right.πŸ˜†
You know I recorded my version of the title track, 6 stanzas, as the 7th one in the last update. it's funny to hear it in my voice but I still like it. πŸ˜†

OK Dips, have a good night sleep and a great weekend ahead. Take rest.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lubna,

Even though I have not heard this song, your poetry made me feel a strange tugging at my heart...

This was heartbreaking yet it had something inherently beautiful about it that I just couldn't stop myself from reading it... Since I try to avoid anything that is angsty or painful.

You have one hell of a talent and we are glad that you are here on the forum, reminiscing ShraMan with us through your works! 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next...

Till then
Love
Cas 😊

P.S. I can't seem to be able to like any posts today
Will try to do that soon though...

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