~Revenge~ Thread - 7 Updated Epilouge on Page 42 : Completed ;) - Page 30

Amazing update

I LOVED ...,,,IT ..BUT STORY KATAM HO GYI ...!!'I ENJOYED IT ..FINALLY EVERYTHING IS FINE B/W THEM ..

Chappy-50..
Awesome chappy..
Sry for late reply...
Hell angry with u for finished this lovely story...
Now come back to chappy..
Jo is correct for taking time from Ja..
For girls it is not easy to start again..
Hope so this time both ja n Suj will improvw..
How cute ja is listening jo on FM everyday..
Also emotional update..
Hope so jo will recover soon after taking break..
Thanks for pm..

Chapter-51..
Sry again for late reply sweety...
Lovely chappy..
When Jo Said aap then i thought its ja but nikala Sujamal..
Finally Suj n Jo tell all the sorrow to each other..
Now jo n suja are in good condition..
Jo is shocked to See ja n confuse by his behaviour..
After seesing ja conditions Jo is hell worried but at same time Ja said why should u worry..
Thanks for pm..

Chapter -52..
Fantastic n sweet chappy...
I am totally enjoyed it..
Woee Ja taken jo in their house..
Jo is full on nautanki mood just like u sweety..
Jo is flagbasstered to see the condition of house..
Ja is trying to calm himself but jo is provoking him...
Finally they become one..
Sujamal is teasing her doll n even ja..
Sweety yaar atleast kuch romance dikha deti...i didnt expect from u that..
Upar se story khatam bhi kar diya..
Btw i totally enjoyed it..
Thanks for pm..
This time no sry for late reply..

Epilogue ke toh keh kehne...
U again roch the floor with your power on performance..
I totally enjoyed it...
I love their noke joke at each sec n each day..
Now jo is torturing ja n so called seeking is revenge from ja..
Ja is full on latu mode on jo..
Ja is ready on jo to each n everu command..
First of all he is angru but our little jo make up to her hubby..
Woww Misha is labour pain...
Sujamal is worried abt her but same time he get support from his little family..
Wow Jo named her Amita..
But same time ja is frowing bec he wanted to name his daughter..
Jo is go all tomato red from shyness...
While whole family laughing..

Thanks for pm n even thanks for such a lovely story u r given...
Salute to your writing, your imagination, your creativness, perfect sentences n so on..
I really dont want to u from end this story ...
But its your wishes to end..
Jo ho maiya biwi raaji toh kya karega kazi..

Once again thank u so much..
Love u Sweety..
May god bless..u...

OMG neetu
U ended this story I hate u for this but love u for writing it so beautifully and ending it more beautifully
I love bro sis reunion as much as I like ja jo reunion
And end with lil baby name on amita was perfect
Finally all moved on with happiness and satisfaction
If possible do write it's second part
Love u neetu
Thanks for pm and beautiful story
Sorry for late reply

Awesome ending Neetu dear <3