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Parsi

@Niharika_

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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Story of ManYasa

Rules : Should be short (not more than 200 words).

And fiction stories that got more likes will win...

**Liking is allowed only from 11.00-11.30pm for this contest... **

Edited by Niharika_ - 9 years ago

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

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Posted: 9 years ago

how is it possible to write a story now? you could have told it before that you will give a topic on spot... i have written a story on manyasa something else and not related to tpk.. because you mentioned about manyasa story😔

Edited by Rinka_Ritz - 9 years ago

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Parsi

@Niharika_

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz
how is it possible to write a story now? you could have told it before that you will give a topic on spot... i have written a story on manyasa something else and not related to tpk.. because you mentioned about manyasa story😔

Ok... THat's it...I meant ManYAsa story... ok baba...

I'll edit it...

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Alia

@alia919

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

r muje kam se kam ek week chahy story write up krne k liy🤣... ma story with picture bna do🤔

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

FRIENDSHIP RULES: NO SORRY, NO THANK YOU

A boy roughly about the age of 24 was waiting for someone at the bus stop with his car. He was desparately looking at his watch to see how time was passing by and he was getting late.

A young girl of about the age of 22 comes up to him.

Girl speaks dilligently, "Manish let's go."

The boy was feeling nostalgic, "Jigyasa, is it time to come? I thought to pick you up on the way. We are already late for the shooting. Our creatives are going to kill us. How much time do you girls need to get ready!"

Jigyasa- "Sorry Manish, I wasn't getting a proper matching shade to wear with this dress."

Manish- "Again sorry? I told you in friendship, there should be no sorry."

Jigyasa- "Okay let's leave now."

They sit in the car and leave. They reach near the shoot location when Manish stops Jigyasa's way. Manish takes out a small box from his car neatly wrapped under a beautiful cover and hands it over to her.

Jigyasa- "What is it?"

Manish- "It is for you. Happy Friendship Day."

Jigyasa happily unwraps the gift box.

There were the beautiful combos of varieties of shades for her.

Manish- "I had specially bought these for you for the friendship day because I know how much you love those shades."

Jigyasa- "What a pleasant surprise..Thank you, I really loved those."

Manish- "Again thank you? I told you in friendship, there should be no thank you."

Jigyasa takes out an another box from her bag and gifts it to him. Manish opens it and finds his favourite delicious chocolates and cadburies.

Jigyasa- "So Friendship rules: No sorry, no thank you. Only love, trust, support and care."

Manish smiles back and they both feed each other cadburies and share a friendly hug...

MORAL: FRIENDSHIP RULES: NO SORRY, NO THANK YOU...

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devika

@d4devika

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

I will also takes at least 45-60min .how's it possible 😭 😭

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Parsi

@Niharika_

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: d4devika
I will also takes at least 45-60min .how's it possible 😭 😭

Make it short dear...post something... It will be good...please post something...

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Aisha

@Kar_Nan

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

A girl of age 22 was running fast to catch the lift. She screamed plz pause the lift. A boy of age 24 peeped out of the lift and saw the girl running. He paused the lift n the girl entered. The girl was out of breath. The boy looked at her and saw the mole near her lips. He found it very attractive. The girl was of medium height and long hair. She was wearing a very nice western outfit. The girl finally saw the guy and gave jim a smile. She noticed that the two were all alone in the lift. The girl finally realised that she has not yet thanked him. She said "Thanks". The boy smiled and his dimpled caught the girl's attention. He was abt 5'10 with a very fair complexion. He had this naughty eyes.

The lift stopped n everything became dark. They relaised that the lift had malfunctioned. The girl got nervous. The boy also became serious. He told the worried girl not to worry. But the girl got nervous and shut her eyes tight n started ti say sthg. The boy came closer n heard her saying "God plz save me I will obey my parents" Boy smiled. To make the girl at ease he held her hand abd told her that everything will be fine. The girk opened her eyes n looked into the boys eyes. She felt some relief. They both stood close looking into each other eyes for some 5 mins and then the lights came back n the lift finally moved again. The doors of the lift opened and they realised that the have reached their floor.

The both came out. The boy finally asked the girl her name. The girl said "Jigyasa". The boy introduced himself as "Manish". They both said bye and started moving towards their destination. Less they knew that they were walking towards the same destination that is the audition of TPK. And soon they were to meet again to become Manyasa forever

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

what is this? I don't want to win uncontested...please come up with the stories...time is also up...oops thanks to aisha di...she came up with her story...love you too di

Edited by Rinka_Ritz - 9 years ago