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Shri_girl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Clara it's one hour now... i am sitting online on forum from the moment i saw your reply that you will be updating today..

Sabar ka fal meetha hota hai..mujhe to koi taste hi nahi aa raha😛

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: Shri_girl
Clara it's one hour now... i am sitting online on forum from the moment i saw your reply that you will be updating today..

Indiaforums wasn't responding, dear!

updating right away.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

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Dedicating this chapter to - CarpeDiem_ ❤️

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The last bit was scary, right? Guess, what the evil Lara will be bringing in next?😈 This last creepy bit was like a place filled with some clues and a tiny bit of precap. So, all you Sherlocks - sniff the clues out. 😉

And... did you like Suman as Thor in this chapter? Poor brothers had to run for their lives. lol...😆

Tell me which part, dialogue or scene you enjoyed the most? Your reviews always help me so much in writing.

Also, Shravan finally took his revenge on Pushkar. That black eye! haa haa...🤣

So, please don't forget to like and comment! Thanks to everyone for your likes and comments on the last chapter. Reading your comments made me updt faster this time, see? So, if you want fast updts, you know what you need to do. All writers need encouragement. That's why, dil kholke bolo yaro!🤗

Lots of love❤️ and tightest of hugs,

Lara.

P.S. PMs will be sent to those who've liked and commented. I've no PM list, so if you want PMs whenever I updt pls make sure that you've pressed the like and button and left a comment. Tada!

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Res

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"Because he wanted to be her nest and never her cage"

That's it! Dead! Did you know a simple sentence of a few words has the capacity to tilt the axis of a life? Yeh this one did! It cannot get anymore passionate than this!

Lara take 🤗

Now coming to the update, buckle up, thesis on the way.

Yes so him being a sissy! I love... He just can't do without her and even though such a level of love is scary, it is also it's best form.

He looks at a photo of her with a baby! Oh My God! Shravan Malhotra is such a romantic! Ogling law is it😉 Way to go! He can't wait to be a daddy can he?

"For love is not just sweet words, mind-blowing kisses and sleeping together for an eternity, love is also sour difference, mindless conflicts and making up."

Planning mass murder are we? It's a punishable offence just BTW!

"Please leave me alone, Brother." Now why did I read that in Loki's voice I have no clue😆

Pushkar's fear, their running for their lives, the whole boss brothers running as a crazed wife runs behind them with a hammer, I couldn't stop laughing. I read it thrice and laughed just as much each time 🤣

Finally Shravan realized he did nothing wrong, bevakoof!

For some reason at her alright then, I had a feeling she was going to fling the hammer in through the window 😎 Sumo was being Sumo after all, wouldn't expect anything less...

Shravan thought Pushkar was a brother. Staring at his stomach. Well it's kalyug anything is possible, I don't blame Shravan. But I'm LMAO!

🤣 Damn this is hilarious! Duck Duck! I Read it in Lucky Singh's accent from Lage Raho Munna Bhai..😆

"To show my gratitude to the angels for gracing me with the chance to settle the score" Oh my good God ROFL! I'm loving this! Hilarious! He has a black eye and I'm supremely content!

But you clearly hate to see me content! What's this curve ball now? What kind of skeletons does Shravan have in his closet that could shake the very ground of their relationship? I'm sure it's not infidelity... It's got to be the mental harassment he put Suman through earlier. Vindictive nemesis? Who has he ruined? Please tell me that God-Damned Khurrana isn't making a return?

That's as much as my Sherlock genes work.. Can't wait to see what you've planned next!

Loved this one!

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Shri_girl

@Shri_girl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

Res

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Unress..

Lol..lol..lol..sumo was amazing today..but last part was the best..

And for the clues- i think shravan did something bad but only for his love..his sumo..

Bas baaki don't know😕..

Jab ordinary lara hammer marwa sakti hai to evil lara to pata nhi kya hi karegi😆..

But as usual lovely update dear..eagerly waiting for the next.😊

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#526

Now that is something only your sumo could do Lara😃 my fav part was shravan returning the favor to pushkar.. and last part was creepy..did Shravan already got her sign on pre nuptial agreement or something during his mad days??

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#527

I was laughing like anything! My roommate is just rolling her eyes, and muttering unintelligible something! But who cares! Shravan thinking about having a family is ❤️

,sumo the thor was🤣

Eye for an eye! 👏

But what's cooking! Lara you better not do something horrendous to ShraMan! 😕

All in one the update was 👍🏼

Thank you for the pm! 🤗

Please update soon, like real soon! 😃

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#528

Wonderful update.

Quintessential suman...

Scores settled between the brothers regarding the black eye.

Girl, you are scaring me with the ending. ..I hope it's more to f o with nirmala and past memories then...shravan sumo divorce. ...

Thanks for the pm

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#529

Oh boy 🤣 this is me.. on the floor. with the SUMO-THOR scene. He sprinted thinking he had done something wrong. bwahahaha 😆😆 husband mentality

Pushkar is going to be killed if he doesn't come up with something smart and quick soon to fix this.

gaah. still laughing. Shravan got his revenge as well 😆

the last part... hmm.. not a clue yet. but will have to go back I think in hunt for clues. Nemesis...

amazing update girl my eyes have tears from peeling with laughter.😆

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#530

Hi Lara...this is the first time I am commenting over here in spite of this story featuring among the top 3 of my all time favourites.

I don't really know why I have refrained from commenting all this while though. .perhaps you are so good at writing that I am intimidated. .what if the comments fall short of expressing my love.

Nonetheless coming to this update my favourite part was towards end, when you so deftly managed to snatch away the chuckle from my lips and replace it with a shocked O...

What could be Shravan's secret. .an ex wife?

I can be pretty dark while imagining the worst.

Loved every bit of this update, Pushkar being cornered made a hilarious read.Sumo in her sassiest best is always the most favourite one of mine.