~New OS: Saiyyan~~ [COMPLETED] - Page 3

Originally posted by: dakshumhatre

Nice os
it was awesome
after so long read something about arjuhi
thanx for this
superbly written
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: miabindu

Outstanding nd perfect ending

Totally loved it

Waiting for your other works

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007

as vigi said i also thought that i'v already read it but then i came to know that it was another os with the same name *sorry* ☺️

erm why this arjun was so workaholic h

why dint he even had a time for his eklauti wife 😡

oh god she went into depression 🥺

but finally at last he came to know about his mistake aah

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007

btw why m i not ale to quote any of the dlg of this os

koi privacy lagai hai kya tumne

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Wow beautiful OS

In the beginning Arjun made angry as he was bg with his work

Didn't spend time with arohi

It was reality check to Arjun when got to know arohi is in depression

He spend more time with arohi & have their conversation

Finally everything got in place in their life

Arjuhi happiness got double when they to go know abt their first baby

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

Oh wow that was beautiful sneha
Finally aru got her Arjun back - thx to the doctor
Lovely OS dear

Originally posted by: Arjuhi_kk

Feels great to read something on Arjuhi ❤️

Short Simple & sweet Story 😳

Arohi's breakdown was beautifully written 💔

Arjun...He may be jerk at times ..but I love him...Bas

loved the last convo between Doc & arjun 😆

Thanks for writing this 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it...

Originally posted by: secretwriter19

Yaar it is just awesome.
I so love this.
It's beautiful.
Sneha can I kiss your hands.
Yaar firstly this song is beautiful.
This song is very close to my heart. I can't explain how much I love this song.
And secondly you have written this story beautifully.
Seriously kal ke chakkar Mei hum apne aaj ko jeete hi nahi hai.
Aaj log itna tej bhag rahe hai Ki unhe pata hi nahi chal Ki kya aur kaun piche choot ta ja raha hai.
Beautiful thought Sneha and beautiful story.
You're awesome.