Ankahee Baatein - Part 3

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

God!! It's like a fine piece of literature..It's too good yaar..Yuvraj n Suhani doing all dis for Saiyyam's betterment is a vry good idea..It's a vry different one..Good job

N I'm waiting to see how u show Krishna as Saiyyam's wife..

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow! This left me so speechless. It's a promising start - loving the new concept.

You've conveyed Saiyyam's feelings so beautifully! I could imagine it.

I'm waiting to read how the parent-child relationship develops. And also the role of Krishna as his wife. 😳

Please continue writing. PM me when you update! THANKSS 🤗

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its so fresh and exciting..I loved the fact that yuvraj has accepted him as son n Sayyam too mentions him as father,...I loved the way you conveyed his feeling of being defeated ..I am loving it..I can imagine Saiyyam..Please continue dear.