NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chocolate Day
Even i love chocolates so i can truly understand Kabir's state because aapke saamne chocolate hon aur aapko maaloom padhe that you cant have it and moreover you yourself have to give to someone is the most difficult task. 😭
Vaise toh Rab jodi banate hain, yahan teacher ne jodi bana di😆
Kabir ek line sahi se nahi bol sakta Dhakkan!😡
Pehli baar mujhe Ashu aur Kabir par gussa aa raha tha. 😡 Yaar unhone roses thod diye nisha ke. 😭
Nisha ko no bhi mil gaya😆
Sahi mein yaar end tak sabka day kharab ho gaya😭 but i loved it still.😆😊
Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Prologue

Nisha tu yahan hai toh razai mein kon hai?
best dialogue😆. And when the mystery unfolds, RAMESH, SUKKU and BUNTY were behind the razai.🤣
Aur woh bhi kyun? Just to save themselves from jogging. Waise i tell you i am one of these characters only. 😆😉
Ghar se nikal doongi.
Bilkul yahi reaction mujhe bhi milta hai when i tell my family that i want to get my hair cut. And specially yeh wala dialogue. i can truly relate to it. main bhi baal pratadit hoon Nisha ki tarah. 😭
Truly main bhi yahi soch rahi thi with that Daamad waali line of Sukku that her best friend would be Kabir but you and your revelations are awesome. It turned out to bhi Saurav.😆 saare armaanon par mitti pher diya tune.
But woh waale emotions phir se jaag uthe when i came to know that Nisha has a crush on Kabir
Haaye! main sadke ke jaawaan!😳 and hamaari chaar zindagiyan inculde Nisha and Kabir and Saurav and Kirti. Well Nibir was expected but this new Sauro story is cute.
Tere morning Good karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Saurav sau saal aur jiye iske liye. and then nisha turned with her Gaali Galoch tone ready to hit the person who tried to save her. But the shock was here.😃 He was none other than Kabir. 😳
Tu bhi na Ashu... Nisha mat bola kar... Nisha Bhabhi bola kar...
nisha bahut lucky hai ki uske would be devar itne cute hain. So good they are as a friend. 😆
And then Kabir's dialogue about Nisha. The way he explained his possessiveness for Nisha and the reason for his hatred towards Saurav was real cute. 😳
I am becoming greater fan of Nibir with your story. Loved it.
Aur haan baaki replies ab thode chotte honge. Uske do reasons hai:
First of all mere paper aaj khatm hue hain so i am really tired
And most importantly, I am very aalsi.
i read all the chapters but didnt comment because of my aalas so you can imagine my laziness. 😆😉
sorry!


Thank u pikachu 😳😳
Jogging wala toh har ghar ka story hai 😆😆😉
Bestfriend wala part toh jaan bhuj ke confused karne ke liye likha tha 😉😆
@bold aww thanks 😳😳😳
Koi nhi will wait for your reply 😳
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Valentine's Day

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies."

Finally the day had come, which was new start for someone and for other, everything was depend on destiny, if something went wrong then this day can become destruction also.

sharon was wake up by Swayam's sexy morning voice because swayam and sharon talked whole night. SwaRon was in full lovey dovey mood, they were completely enjoying their togetherness. SwaRon talked a while but their call was interrupted by ramesh as he was worried for his daughter and may be swayam can tell the reason of nisha's sadness so he called swayam early morning and call him home immediately.

swayam told sharon that he'll talk to her later and then went to nisha's house to meet worried Gangwals. swayam listen to them carefully and realized that last day something had happened as nisha hadn't talked to him. swayam went to nisha's room door and asked " nishu kya hua tujhe...?? Nishu darwaja khol na ?" And he knocked also but get no response. After a while getting no response he increased his speed and knock continuously.

Nisha was not able to sleep whole night due to kabir's confession. She was hell confused, she don't know what to do, as her heart and mind was battling, her heart saying she too need to express her feeling while her mind kept reminding her kabir's past. Many times nisha had seen kabir hugging, kissing or more with many girls. Then her heart say the girls who dated kabir was not good at all, they also don't have any feeling for kabir, kabir spend huge amount on them and they do accordance to him and this give them popularity also as kabir was the most popular guy and being his girlfriend is great achievement. Then heart say exactly kabir want only one thing he'll definitely going to use her that's why he had gifted nisha those things, I love you is a trap for nisha.

Hearing her mind and heart she fall asleep at 5 in the morning. But her sleep was broken by swayam's hard knock as he was about to break the door.

Ek minutes swayam aa rahi hun " she said to stop swayam from breaking her room's door.

Kya hua tujhe aise kyun door pit raha tha? " asked nisha opening the door

Kya tujhe hua hai nishu kal se kuch khai kyun nhi hai pata hai uncle aunty kitne pareshan hai " said swayam entering into the the room and settled himself on bed

swayam... " nisha said in low voice as again tears make way in her eyes then told him whole incident of last day and also that kabir come and told her that he loves her.

First swayam was hell angry at kabir kiss incident then hearing that he loves nisha he was calm down a bit.

Nishu tu kya chahti hai ??"

Pata nhi yaar kuch samjh nhi aa raha "

Kis baat pe tujhe doubt hai...kabir tujhse pyar karta hai ya tu kabir se pyar karti hai "

Tujhe lagta hai main kabir se pyar nhi karti??"

Nhi main ye janta hun tu kabir se pyar karti hai or ye bhi janta hun kabir bhi tujhse bhout pyar karta hai "

Hain...par kaise "

Aaj tak vo mujhse itna nafrat kyun karta tha??"

I don't know may be competition"

Yes competition to get special and more place in your life "

What ??"

Yes nisha ab mujhe sab samjh aa raha hai... Why he only hate me warna vo sab se ache se baat karta hai or yahi karan hai ke sab use bhout pasand karte hai "

Haan...par "

Ye jo par war hai na use baat karke hata le or shakal theek kar apni bahar happy happy Jana hai uncle aunty ko pareshan nhi karna hai "

Theek hai main baat karungi use...or abhi chal bahar "

Or ek or baat main hamesha tere peeche hun...koi bhi problem bas ek call or main aa jaunga or agali baar koi problem ho or tu mujhe nhi bataye toh phir dekh liyo maar dunga tujhe "

Nisha smiled hearing his cute warning and nodded.

Then Nisha and swayam went out and told everyone that nisha is fine they don't need to worry. Nisha too ensure her family then five member family enjoyed with each other as swayam left they again went on their daily routine of pulling each other leg and enjoy family time.

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swayam had planned something for sharon to make their first Valentine's day special. So it was night when swayam had went to pick up sharon for a very special and romantic date.

On the other hand nisha was hell upset with kabir's behavior as he come to her house at the morning for talk to which nisha was hell embarrassed as her parents started talking about her rishta to kabir and treated him like he's son in law of the house. Any how she hushed her parents and told kabir that she don't want to talk with him and ask him to go but kabir was kabir, like yesterday he went infront of her house sat there on his bike and this was unknown to nisha and her family.

Nisha beta ??" ramesh inquired entering into nisha's room as she was sitting in her room from afternoon.

Haan Papa... " said nisha seeing her father

Dekh toh main teri maa ke liye ek gift laya hun bata toh kaisa hai " he asked

Okk..." She said and went with him to see the gift as gift was outside of the house

As soon as nisha put her leg outside of the house ramesh pushed her and closed the door.

Hain ??? Papa ??? Kya ??" Asked a hell shocked nisha

Kya kya...aaj Valentine's day hai " ramesh repiled

Toh kya hogaya ??"

Toh kya hogaya ?? Beta ji aaj tum jao kahin bhi jao apna bf banao or party karo "

Ye kya bol rahe ho aap "

Maine tujhe ghar se nikal diya hai.. "

Par kyun ??"

Kyunki aaj Valentine's day hai or aaj ke din ghar me nhi baithte apne bf ya gf ke sath bahar ghoomte hai "

Arey...par mera koi bf nhi hai "

Sharam kar nisha sharam kar tera bhai bunty bhi bahar Valentine's day manane gaya hai tu bhi jaa "

Whaat ??? "

Ab tu jaa kam se kam 3 baje se pehle mat aana... Or main chala andar apna Valentine's day banane teri maa ke sath akele "

Arey par rooko...Papa ?? " she asked as she felt that there is no one behind the door

She looked down to have glimpses of herself as she was wearing white loose tee-shirt and black shorts like casual dress for sleep.

Aise kaise kahin bhi chali jaun ?" She questioned herself then moved towards the main gate of her house and then she saw kabir was standing there at a distance but infront of her house and enjoying the drama that was just happened between her and ramesh.

Nisha looked at his smiling face was lost in it. After a while he stopped and looked at her back locking his eyes with her that when reality click her mind and she realize that she was wearing shorts and she never come out wearing shorts.

Kabirrr " she screamed making kabir startled

Kya hua nisha " he asked worriedly as she went behind the wall

Turn around turn around " She ordered him

Okk I did it ab batao kya hua "

Tum jaano or tum kab aaye "

Main toh kahin gaya hi nhi main subha se hi wait kar raha hun " this make nisha heart welled up she feel guilty

Tum kya baat karna chahte ho ??" Nisha asked him finally

Nisha I'm sorry first of all, mujhe tumhe kiss nhi karna tha I know but nisha you know what jab main tumhe old couple jinka accident ho gaya tha last year or tum unki help ki thi tabhi mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya...phir maine pata lagaya toh tum mere college ki student and I was pleasantly shocked when I got to know that you're my classmate too "

Main tumhe janana chahta tha...main jaan gaya tha ki iss rude ladki ke peeche koi bhout beautiful ladki hai use milna chahta tha or pata hi nhi chala kab main tumpe hak jatane laga..."

Toh kabir " nisha asked softly

Toh nisha main chahta hun ki tum meri girlfriend bano jisse main shadi karunga jab main settle ho jaunga tab " kabir said making nisha gasp on shadi word

Shadi ??"

Koi jaldi nhi hai nisha main tumhare Marji ke bina koi faisla nhi lunga par main tumse hi shadi karunga "

Kabir main..." She hesitate

Kya nisha bolo na please "

Kabir main koi bhi relation me nhi Jana chahti... I'm sorry kabir but I can't be your girlfriend "

Nisha main sach me tumse pyar karta hun kabhi bhi chod ke nhi jaunga "

Main samjh gayi hun ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho par main koi bandish me nhi rehna chahti kabir "

Bandish ??"

Haan jab main tumhari kuch nhi lagti tab tum mujhe order dete rehte ho or by chance agar hum bf gf ban gaye tab toh mujhe uthne baithne ke liye tumhari permission leni padegi "

I know nisha Maine ye mistake ki hai par I'm sorry yaar main aisa kuch nhi karunga "

Phir bhi na hai kabir "

Tumhe lagta hai main jhoot bol raha hun "

Nhi kabir ye baat nhi hai, agar main tumhari gf banugi toh you'll expect me something more or main iss sab chizon ke liye kabhi bhi ready nhi ho sakti "

Nisha I'm not going to make false promises yes I'll definitely going to expect from you something but I'll never going to cross my limit...today I'm surrendering myself to you and wait till my last breath for you... Jab tum chahogi tabhi kuch hoga "

Kabir tum mujhe apni gf banana kyun chahte ho ?"

Matalb ??"

Matalb jo bhi ek ladka chahta hai apni gf se vo sab ke liye main ready nhi hun toh phir kyun "

Nisha main tumhe janana chahta hun or apne bare me batana chahta hun ek rishta banana chahta hun sirf trust ka "

Sach me kabir tum mujhe chod ke toh nhi jaoge na ?"

Nhi nisha kabhi nhi "

Main bharosa kar Sakti hun na "

Haan nisha I promise you that I'll never ever leave you "

I love you too kabir " nisha spoke finally blushingly hearing this all of sudden he was shocked is an understatement. He just stood straight at his face the scream loud and started dancing in middle of the road.

Nisha come out from wall to seeing him dancing like mad person her heart swelled up with happiness seeing her dream infront of her. Kabir was so over excited that he saw nisha was about to jump on her to hug her but stopped in middle then make lil distance and said " I love you nisha I love you thank you so much "

Kabir turn around " she said again hiding behind wall

But why are you doing this?? "

Just do it please "

Okk done "

Kabir can you give me sometime ?"

My whole life is yours nisha "

Okk main kuch chize clear karna chahti hun... Tum mujhe or main tumhe equally space denge "

Okk " he said nodding his head though nisha can't see him but feel it

No touchy touchy "

Hmmm done "

And most irritating thing is janu sona mona baby aise faltu ke naam se toh bilkul nhi bulange please "

You too hate it ?? Actually me too you know my previous gf used to call me baby that so irritating..." He stopped as nisha come infront of him with angry face and hand cross around chest

You remember hum abhi abhi bf gf bane hai ?? " nisha asked sarcastically

Sorry..." He made cute sorry face

Nisha pout then said "cute act ki dukan "

When she finished her line there was fire work on sky and that was almost covering whole sky. Then it started writing I love you on the sky.

swayam ne liya hai ye " said nisha

swayam ne ?? Kiske liye or tumhe kaise pata??"

sharon ke liye kiya ye or Maine bhi madat ki thi " said nisha

sharon ke liye ?? "

Long story tell you later "

NiBir were enjoying this beautiful scenery infront of them was lost in it when kabir said "I love you nisha " looking at her nisha smiled hearing his confession and looked at him and said "I love you too " they were lost in each other when a wired sound broke their moment, nisha realize what was that then started laughing turning her face other side while he made face as its sound of his hungry stomach.

Subha se yahi tha toh kuch khaya nhi na iss liye " he defended himself

Okay I'm not laughing now "

Chalo mujhe bhout bhook lagi hai or tumhare Papa toh darwaja kholenge nhi...chalo koi restaurant chalte hai "

Abhi or vo bhi aise?? " then she again realize that she was infront of him again in shorts

Kabir turn around " nisha said and try to again go behind the wall

Nisha stop " kabir said and she did

He opened his jacket and give her and ask her to tie it up around her waist. She did it.

Ab ? "

Bhook toh mujhe bhi lagi hai par..."

Chalo na please "

Okay par koi achi jagha na jahan koi group na aaye couples ko pakadne "

Okk " he laughed and took her out for a date to start new story of his life.



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I'm changing characters name 😊
Kyunki main swaron or nibir ko sath leke hi imagine ki thi baad me roops or sujay bole ki swaron se hi likhna tha par main bhout likh chuki thi 😛 toh baki ke parts saki nhi swaron ko imagine karna or dono hi couples important hai pichle parts edit nhi kar rahi Hun main abhi se aghe imagine kar Lena na please😊



Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Beaauuutiiifulll..!!!
Soo much in love wid d update
Adorable seriously..

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