ArSh FF Badmaash Dill #6 Chap 60 Page 132 (28 NOV18)

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"Ahmmm..." Making a sleepy sound, Armaan lazily opened his eyes and blinked.. His hand reached out to grab his mobile phone from the side table which he has adjusted as per his own clock.. "Urghhh.." He took a deep breath seeing the time. It was around 10 in the morning and he had his meeting at 1.
Shilpa and Armaan reached early morning around 5 am the hotel and then he immediately retired to sleep leaving Shilpa with her choice since, due to medicine she has slept good in the evening last day plus she even slept during the flight whereas he was busy thinking deep about various recent events in his life and trying to gatherup himself for the future..

He sat down on the bed taking a deep breath, stretching his arms.. "Neend arahi hai yaaar!!!" He yawned and then looked at Shilpa who was all covered up from feet to hairs with the blanket provided.. "Kitna soti hai!!" He again yawned blinking eyes at her and then got down from the bed to have a shower and freshen up..

Taking a warm refreshing shower, he came out only to find her still sleeping.. "Shilpaa!! uth jao!" He called out loud while moving towards the phone to order some breakfast for them..

Ordering breakfast, he looked at her again and again said.. "Uth jao!! Naashta karlo phir so jana mere jaane k baad!!" He nudged her a bit which atlast made her move a little and groan... "Hmmm..." He heard her..

"Bhook nahi lagi?" He asked while openeing his suitcase to decide what to wear and then got busy in getting dressed.. He got dressed, made his hairs and then moved towards his laptop bag to prepare himself for the meeting..

The door bell ranged, he took the breakfast in and then again turned towards her.. "Shilpaaa!!" He atlast walked upto her with his mind made up only to move away when she will be out of the bed.. "Utho yaar!!" He moved away the blanket from her face and as he touched her found her burning.. "Arre.." Two frowning lines appeared on his forehead..

"Bukhar ho raha hai tumhe.." He sat down by her side as she opened her eyes slowly.. "Hmmm.." She nodded..
"Hmmm kya? kab charha?? uthaya kyun nahi mujhe??" He asked..

"Uhmmm.." She said nothing but just made a face.. Now who the hell will tell him that she was scared to tell him thinking that he will blame and scold her for the fever as she was the one who went out in cold in Dehli to enjoy the rain..

"Chalo ab utho.. naashta karo! Panadol lo aur phir araam karo.. Theek ho jao gi!!" He said and did what casually he would do for anybody or anybody will do for him..
"Nahi main panadol nahi leyti mujhe mana hai!" She made a face and spoke out in a weak voice..
"Huh??" He tried to question her but she so don't look in a condition of simple fever.. Her looks and weakness were giving him impression as it was more than just fever.. "Ab yeh kya musibat paal li??" He looked at the clock and mentally calculated for doctor and other options.. Half of the doctor he himself had become after treating himself for years but she was different!! She was the wife.

"Acha kuch khao to.. uthao! himmat pakro thodi!" He tried to make her sit..
"Mujhe bhook nahi hai.." She clearly refused to get up..

"Arre yaar!!!" This was a mess, he had no idea about Shilpa's health or medical issues.. "Shaadi se pehle yeh research bhi karni chahiye!! Point noted!!" He mentally told himself and got up from there to think... He has never in his life seen anyone this down with just fever..

"Ab iss waqt doctor..." He gave it a thought and then fetch the phone to call the reception and ask..

"Thank God!!" He took a sigh of relief when the receptionist conformed him that there is a Pakistani doctor staying in the hotel who is ready to pay a visit to them in few minutes..

"Shilpa!! Thoda sa kuch lo.." He made her sit down forcefully on the bed and then passed her some water.. "Uhmmm.." She made a face after taking few sips.. He don't remember any grown up ladies in his life which he has seen acting so much like a baby over just fever.. To him fever was nothing to worry about.. If it would be him on her place, he would probably had taken the medicine and gone office to attend the meeting.

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"Normal bukhar hai, fikar ki koi baat nahi hai!" Dr. Amna Hasan smiled at Armaan when he told her that he doubts it its a simple fever since she is acting so weak..
"Panadol rakhi hai apke pass??" She asked..
"Main panadol nahi leyti.." Shilpa interrupted..

"Kyun??" Dr asked arching her brow..

"jaundice mein panadol nahi layte.." Shilpa slowly spoke out.. "Mujhe jaundice hua tha aur wo diagnose nahi hua tha.. tab tak mujhe bukhar k liye panadol di thi jisse panadol poisioning hogayi!!" She just told the highlights...
"Oh!!" The doctor nodded.. "Painful treatment!!" She looked at Armaan and said..
"Ahhh actually... we just got married a month ago aurrr yeh pehli baar mere saamne beemaar padi hai so i have no idea!!" Armaan explained his cluelessness..

"Its okay!!" She smiled.. "Injection de dun??" She asked..
"Haan haan bilkul!!! injection would be fine!" Armaan spoke out before Shilpa would say how scared she is of the needle..
"Ahh.." Shilpa felt so helpless in front of Armaan... He was dealing with her completely different.. Very unlike how her family treats her when she fall sick.

An Hour Later...

She said nothing after the injection but she was so mad at Armaan for not asking her and just deciding to go with that... He even gave her tea and biscuits but that was it.. He was back over his laptop..
No doubt she was feeling much better but that was not the way she was treated ever in her life..

"Better??" He atlast looked up from his laptop screen at her and then asked..
"Hmmm..." She nodded in a yes..
"Good!!" He smiled and keeping the laptopn down, walked upto her.. "Yeh paise hain! Inhe apne pass rakho.." He gave her the envelope.. "Aurrr iss pe bhi sab set kar diya hai!" He gave her a mobile phone.. "If something goes wrong, call me... Main ajaoonga 3-4 ghante mein.." He told her so...
"Kya???" Her eyes popped open... "Matlab app... mujhe aise bukhar mein chor k chale jaenge??" She asked..
"3-4 ghante ki baat hai.. tum soti rahogi aur wese bhi.. ab tum kaafi behtar ho!! bukhar he to hai!" He took it very casually...
"Nahi... app.. mujhe aise akele chor k nahi ja sakte!! please mat jaen!!" She pleaded leaving him dumbfonded..

"Shilpa tum theek ho yaar!! main aya he iss meeting k liye hun yahan.." He tried to reason her.. "Tum araam karo!!" he added..

"Uhh.." She opened her mouth to say something but he shut her off.. "Chalo chalo lait jao.. Araam karo! abhi to main yahin hun.." He said and sat down beside her on the bed with laptop on his lap..

She did wanted to say more and argue but he was the husband and very much new in her life.. It was not just coming to her where she would act stubborn and insist him for this..

Making a face, she lied down flat and looked at him working.. "Mujhse zyaada to meetings ki value hai inke liye!!" A thought formed inside her head with which after few moments she dozzed off to sleep..

Atlast it was time for him to leave, he looked at his sleeping wife and got up to go..

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"Take it or leave it! My rates are fixed!!" Armaan looked in the eyes and said.. He was admant to seal the deal over the price he has quoted..
"Are you sure there is no space for negociation??" The client asked..
"Nope!!" He replied in a firm tone..
"Ok then! we'll sign the deal tomorrow!!" The client agreed at last to which he smiled and bidding bye shut the laptop screen down and shot a look at his sleeping wife.. "Huhhh..." He led out a deep breath.. He tried to go but her request had made him land in some delimma which atlast didn't let him leave her but stay and arrange for an online meeting after trying hard..

He got rid of his upper office attire, down he was in his track pants and then lied down lazily beside her... His hand crawled around her waist then under her shirt telling him about her temperature which felt quite normal..

He got a bit closer to her, hugging her from her back and placed a soft kiss near her ear.. There was something very different about Shilpa he has started feeling since he got back... She brings a certain joy of peace to him when she is around him.. He always thought wife would be a burden for him after he was heart broke but she wasn't giving him that feeling at all.. He feels a certain sense of completion she was giving him.. Maybe that was because he knew that she is actually the one who belongs to him! Not a wish or a dream but in real and he do only believe on reality.

"Nidhi!! Tumhara msg aya hai!" Sid said watching her choose dress for the night.. It was one of Sid's friend's wedding reception and so they were invited tonight..
"Dekh lo tum.." She said not paying attention to any message.. This what to wear and what not after weeding sucks for Nidhi!! She was more of the casual person and not paying attention to pupil dressings but Neha; her sasu mom was very particular about her bahu's appearence and all.. She also feels like its a bit of tradition difference too between Mumbai and Dehli.

"Aaa..." Confused Sid looked at Nidhi with an open mouth.. "Armaan ka msg hai aur mujhe ek lafz samajh nahi araha issne kya likha hai!!"
"Hehehe!!" He made Nidhi laugh.. She took the mobile to see and then said.. "Wo keh raha hai he has sealed the deal.."

"Kaunsi bhaasha mein??" Sid made a face making Nidhi smile more..

"You do know our situations!!! So humay saalon se adat hai.. hum encripted talk he krte hain!! Humari apni language jo deewaar se takar maarne pe bhi kisi ko samajh nahi ayegi!!" She stretched her lips and threw the mobile back on the bed..

"I don't believe this.." His made a face arching his brow..

"Cool!!! Usse pehle wale msg mein ussne sirf ek word likha hai reached!! Ab tum usse decode krne ki koshish karo.. samajh mein agaya to jo tum chaho!!" Nidhi challanged him..

"Pehle tumhe to decode kar loon!!" Sid chuckled trying to act mischevious..

"You wish!!" She rolled her eyes..

"Betho betho!! ja kahan rahi ho tum??" He held her hand and pulled her down on the bed before she walks away...
"Kya hai???" She narrowed her eyes at him..
"Ab iss waqt tum normal lag rahi ho... to mujhe batao.. k kya hua tha??" He questioned..

"U don't wana know!" She spoke out in attitude..
"Arre..." He made a face as she again tried to go...

"Dekhna hun main bhi ab tum hilti kese ho yahan se mujhe batae bagair!!" He pulled her hard this time and pinned her under him..

"Not a problem.." She smiled and before she will make a move he glared at her and said.. "I Think i am the husband here!! Criminal nahi hun jo tum peeto mujhe!!" He made a face making her laugh... "hahaha..."

"Seriously..." He too laughed and relaxed over while tucking her hairs behind her ears.. "I have right to know the reason for burst out at me!" He demanded an answer..

"Hmmm..." She looked down and exhaled a deep breath.. "Ghalti tumhari nahi meri thi!!" She admitted the fact and looked up at his face.. "Tumhe yaad hai? humari shaadi pe apni iconic speech dete hue Armaan ne bataya tha k wo aur mein kese mile thai?" She asked..
"Ahan.." He encourged her to go on...
"So u don't know the real me.." she paused making him confuse.. "Tum mujhe wese he jaante ho jesa tumne mujhe dekha hai!! Main kahin bhi urr k jaati thi because i know i had someones back!! A sense of security!!" She pressed her lips together..

"Aur ye sirf Armaan ki baat nahi hai... We both were protected by the outsource!! kyunki hum unke liye zaroori thai!!" She tried to explain.. "Aur ab... wo sab ek dum se zindagii se chala gaya hai!! The more i wanted to get out of that mess!! i hate to admit i miss it!" She confessed...

"Don't you dare tell me that!" Sid's mouth hung up and he asked in horror.. "Tell me you guys are out of it!!!" He wanted conformation...

"We are out of it!!" She looked in his eyes and said.. "Problem ye hai sid k... Armaan ek sense of security raha hai mere liye humesha se.. Ussne kabhi mujhe kisi bhi aire gaire k saath akele nahi jaane diya kahin bhi..." she licked her lower lip.. "Wo mere andar k darr ko itni tarah samajhta hai k... meri mu se wo baat nikle usse pehle he..." she sighed..

"To tum compare karne lagi thi??" Sid asked..

"Haan!!" She confessed truthfully.. "Maine realise he nahi kiya k jo tum jaante he nahi, usse tumse expect karna bewaqoofi hai!! Mujhe kehna padega!!"

"I am sorry!!" She whole heartedly apologized for the things she could and looked down...

"Saza milegi!!" Her eyes stopped moving on hearing his mischevious voice and then narrowed down and looked up at his grinning face.. "I do know what i signed up for Nidhi!! Isliye in baaton se mujhe koi farq nahi parne wala hai!! Relax!!" He winked at her..
"Huh??" Her mouth hung up.. Here she gathered up so much courage to tell him just that feeling tired of repeating Armaan's name but what could she do?? He was all over his life.. And its nothing for Sid! He took it pretty simple..

"Simple si cheez ko tune complicate kiya! Phir mujhpe gussa nikala and i am sure Armaan ko bhi nahi baksha hoga!! Saza to milegi!!" He bit his liower lip going more close to her..

"Mujhe saza deyne ki adat hai!! Sehne ki nahi!!" She arched her brow throwing some attitude at him..

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"App gaye nahi??" Shilpa asked slowly as she woke up feeling thirsty..
"Tum comfortable nahi thi!!" He smiled placing a soft kiss over her cheek..
"Paani..." she asked for some water to which he nodded and got up to give her.. It was cold in Dubai aswell..

She drank some water and he once again lied down.. His plan was to spent the day in this room only to just relax and relax..

"Meri tabeat theek nahi hoti!! to main akele nahi rehti.. koi na koi humesha mere pass hota hai!!" She slowly told him..
"Matlab??" Confused he asked..
"Mama humesha mere pass bethi rehti hain!! phir chahe mujhe bukhar ho ya sirf mere sar mein dard ho!!" She told him innocently freaking him out.. "Aur Papa to office bhi nahi jaate.." She added..
"Huh?? Sirf tumhe.. bukhar ho to wo office nahi jaate?? Aur aunty pass bethi rehti hain??" He asked with an open mouth.. He can recall how only over her headache they came to check up on her..

"Hmmm..." She nodded in a yes..

"Great!" He stretched his lips to form a fake smile.. "Main to phir pakka sautela hun! jab tak kuch bada na ho! koi poochne nahi ata.. aur bade pe bhi zyaada nahi.. halka phulka.." He mumbled comparing her situation with his..

"I am sure apka ulta system hoga!" She added..
"Hehh.. thoda waqt do!! mere saare system pata lag jaenge tumhe.." He scoff.. "Lekin..." He held her hand in his.. "jese ajj tumne kaha.. tummm... keh diya karo!!" He spoke out softly pulling her a little near him..

"Matlab??" She questioned out..

"Matlab... lets make some rules.." He looked down at her face and said.. "Since we are from two very different worlds so.. agar kahe bagair hum expect karenge! to ek doosre ko hurt karenge!! Aurr hurt hona mujhe pasand nahi hai! Aur tumhe mein karna nahi chahta!!" He pressed his lips together.. "I justtt don't!!!" He shook his head.

"Hmmm..." She gave it a thought and nodded.. "Aur agar na kaha jaye to???" She questioned..
"Touuu..." He gave it a thought... "to hum likh leyte hain! aisi kya baat hai?" He raised his shoulders making her giggle.. "Hmmm hum diary banate hain! jis mein jo hum na keh saken, likh dete hain!!" She chuckled..

"Ahan.." He smiled at her..

"Lekinnn... phir hum usse ek doosre k saamne nahi padhenge!! aur jo padha usspe no reaction!!" She decided safe zones aswell..

"Aisa kya kehna chahti ho tum??" He narrowed his eyes at her in a dramatic way..

"Bhae!!! ye achi musibat sar pe la k daal di hai!!" Aliya was so so pissed of by Rohail.. He was practicaly dictating her now and she was damn frustrated.. Why the hell world doesn't understand her Point Of View??

"Ladka hai naa!! Kese samjhe gaa?? I am damn sure issko bhai ne bheja hai!! Aurr ab bhabhi ko bhi le kar atay honge!! Kya farq parta hai agar mujhe embarass feel hoga to??" Her eyes welled up with tears.. "Kya farq parta hai agar main nahi chahti k mera tamasha bane aur kisi ko ye baat na pata chale to??" Her heart throbbed as tears made their way through her eyes..

"Yahan bethna he nahi hai mujhe..." She got up wiping her tears and taking her purse went out of the room towards the main door..

"Aliya???" Piya, who was heading out of her room bumped into her..
"Please!! abhi nahi... i need to be out!!" She showed her hands to stop and sniffing went out..

"Sss... yaaar!!!" Piya couldn't do more than shaking her head.. She was just thinking to put a stop on Rohail and Vikas.. She also felt like they were way too pushing her, telling her what she is doing is wrong.. "Ye ladkon ko ehsaas kyun nahi hota hai yaar??" She too felt pissed of at the moment..

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"Maine to suna tha apko films se allergy hai!!" Shilpa teased him as they decided to only go for the movie tonight so that She would feel a nice change and won't exert too much to again fall in fever...

"Kya karoon?? Agar tum poori tarah se theek nahi hui to humara future trip bekaar ho jayega! Aur tum to ek dum he khud ko chor dene walon mein se ho! sab dekh liya maine!!" He made a face.. He was talking about ones will power when they are ill.. She fall dead with little fever as if don't know how deep and serious it was..

"Koi nahi!!" She pouted.. She taught him something today!! She was not just the only daughter of her parents but was more than a princess and he needs to deal with her that way only.. He cannot just pop her princess bubble atonce to welcome her in the real world.. She was needed not to be campared with anyone..

"Future trip matlab?? ab kahan??" She asked.. "Aur hum yahan kitne dinn hain?" She added one more question..

"Teen din.." He replied putting a popcorn in his mouth..

"Kyun?? Main dubai kabhi nahi ghoomi... mujhe ghoomna hai!" She showed her interest..
"Acha! Abhi to bed se nikalne ko tayyar nahi thi.. khech k laaya hoon! Aur ab ghoomna hai?" He taunted..

"Bhae!!" She hit him lightly on his shoulder..

"Acha kahan kahan ghoomi hui ho tum??" He generally asked.. They were waiting for the movie to start..
"Hmmm..." He took a deep cold breath and rested her head at the back of the seat post..

"Chuttiyun mein naa.. Muskaan aur bua chale jaate thai usski dadi wagera se milne.. unke ghar rehne! Aurrr papa zyaada tar busy he hote thai.. tou kabhi simle, manali! India mein he idhar udhar.." She revealed..

"Tum India se bahar kabhi nahi ghoomi??" He was surprised..

"Nah!! Infact mein shocked thi jab Australia k liye papa ne haan kar di.. Maybe Abhi wagera ki wajah se.. Warna main aur akele kabhi kahin chali jaoon?? never!!" She shook her head in a no..

"Coorg to bade maze se agayi thi!!!" He smirked..

"Wo bhi mujhe nahi pata papa kese maan gaye?" She raised her shoulders in the air.. "Actually... Jab se wo Mauritius se aye thai naa app pe silent attack daal k.. tab se he itna faragh dill ho gaye!!" She actually gave it a thought making him laugh...

"Hehehe!! Biwi wo mujhpe silent attack nahi tha!! Unpe khud pe tha.. Vikas ko dekhnte he thunde hogaye thai!! Wo alag baat hai k mere wale donow k dimagh mein planning shuru hogayi thi k do do bakre mil gaye nachane ko!!" He made a face talking about Arjun and Billy.. "Maine kaha tha Mom, Chachi, Dadi wagera ko bhejo.. khud agaye!!" He gritted his teeth...

"Hehehe.." She giggled hearing out the scene..

"Lekin appko bata dena chahiye tha bhaiya k baare mein.." She eyed him..

"Yaar! Main kyun parta tum logon k jhagre mein... hain??? I was the outsider!!" He cleared his position..
"Aur patch up nahi hota to???" She questioned..

"To kya? ultimately sasurali sab naye he hote hain!! wo bhi naya hota tumhare liye.." He rolled his tongue inside making Vikas, Shilpa's susrali officially..

"Zaroor!!" She narrowed her eyes at him..

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"Huhh..." Vikas fell down on the bed makeing it bounce..
"Tch!! sula rahi hoon na main ussko!!" Piya frowned at him...

"Hmmm..." Vikas took a deep breath gazing at the cealing and then said.. "I just hope ye drama khatam ho jaye!!" He said..
"Drama tum donow mil k bana rahe ho ab!! Give her some space.." She frowned..
"SPace he nazar araha hai mujhe.." He moved his fingers here and there as if counting stars on the ceiling.. Sid ka phone aya tha.." He said...

"Don't tell mein Armaan ne usse bata diya!!" Piya frowned.. She got angry..

"Wo kya batata.. Uss Henry ko welcome karegi aur falana dhamka to khud issi ne excitement mein ussko bata k rakha tha.. kuch baat hui to ussne guess kar liya k yeh yahan ki story hai!! Prince falling for a psycho maniac girl!!" Vikas made a face...

"Sunn liya naa ussne.. gala daba degi tumhara!!" Piya hit him on his head lightly.. "Wese phone aya tha Armaan ka.. pooch raha tha k situation kesi hai?" Piya informed Vikas..

"Oho!! Usski khud ki situation kesi hai??" Vikas smirked..

"Well... Shilpa ko bukhar charh gaya hai mausam ki wajah se.." Piya detailed..

"Hahahaha!!" Vikas burst out laughing... "Ab agar Armaan Mallik sochta hai k wo biwi ko bukhar mein chor k bahar apne kisi office k kaam se jaane wala hai to ek dum ghalat hai!!" He announced..

"Shilpa jab beemaar hoti hai!! Tou usse ek second ko bhi akela chora nahi jaata!! Infact mamo to office he nahi jaate..." Vikas exposed few things infront of Piya... "Mujhe laga tha ab shayad aisa nahi hota hoga but maine iss trip pe conform kiya!! still its same!!" He chuckled..

"Kya???" Piya's mouth hung up..

"Bhae dekho... jitna maine mom se suna tha.. Shilpa premature baby thi!! So usse phool patiyun ki tarah treat kiya gaya!! Phir jab mami was expecting another one to kuch complication hogayi and then it was... you know! a stop!!" He pressed his lips together..

"Aur phir wo ek hone ki wajah se aur zyaada ankhon ka tara hogayi!!" Piya guessed...

"Yup!! Aur phir us ne bade hote hote kuch do chaar aisi beemariyaan pakri k jo jaan lewa thi kaafi!! So, the fragile child princess baby!! Remained the fragile princess baby!!" Vikas completed Shilpa's backstory..

"Hmmm... Phir to laad pyaar banta hai bhae!!" Piya nodded..

"Arre par limit mein rehna chahiye naa.. not to compare with someone but.. fighter hona chahiye insaan ko.. na k choi mui!!" Vikas disagreed...

"To phir Shilpa k liye Armaan kese pasand agaya inko?? Wo to suspence ki dukaan hai!!" Piya questioned..

"Mamo ne mujhse kaha k unhe apni ghalti ka ehsaas hai!! Lekin ab wo Shilpa ko aasmaan se zameen par laane k chakkar mein dhakka nahi maar sakte... to unhe laga k ek aise aadmi ko pakarna chahiye jisske parr hon aur wo haath bhi na chore... Taake aasmaan se zameen par jab wo usko le k aye to usse chot na lagay!!" Vikas tried his best to be philosipher...

"Wah!! Kya logic hai!!" Piya shook her head.. "Aur Armaan Mallik ki guarantee kahan se mili unhe?" She inquired..

"Ab ye sab nahi poocha maine.. jo unhun ne sunaya wo sunn liya!!" Vikas yawned while rubbing his eyes.. "Buss ab Muskaan k liye bhi ankhein khulli rakhen wo.." He commented..

"Yaar! ye Muskaan aur Shilpa mein itni partiality kyun hai? matlab.. door se everything looks perfect and fine.. thoda deep jao tou to... kahani he bigri hui hai!!" Piya atlast got time to ask this question aswell..

"Arre pata nahi yaar!! Mom ka aur Maasi ka rishta naa.. nani ki choice se tey nahi hua tha.. ab kya politics thi yeh sab nahi jaanta main... So, Dad aur Muskaan k dad se to had darja nafrat thi nani ko.. kyunki wo donow he inke customs aur oot patang cheezon pe fit nahi hote thai!!" Vikas explained..

"Infact maine suna hai k kaafi bawal hua tha jab Dad and family ne mom ko encourage kiya tha apni education complete karne k liye.. " He revealed more..
"Oh God!!" This nani never comes clear to Piya.. Sometimes she feels good! sometimes bad!
"Aur Pranav Uncle(Muskaan's dad) ki death k baad zyaada problem hogayi kyunki unke koi behn bhai nahi thai... Financial crises agaya! Sirf unke budhe parents thai jo pension pe guzara karte thai! Wo kese kharcha dekhte itna? Aur maasi ko to itna padhne he nhi diya tha k bahar nikal k job karti.. Mamo khud he bade shawk se le k aye thai!!" Vikas made a face and told Piya..

"To phir sink mein rakhna chahiye tha naa donow ko.." Piya added..

"O bhae... oppar se jo bhi dikhe andar to ehsaan ehsaan kar k zameen tak garh diya hoga nani ne maasi ko.." pause "Mom kehti thi k jese he chuttiyaan hoti thi, nani baqaida push karti thi maasi ko k apne sasural walon ka ek chakkar laga k ao taake mamo wagera ko agar kahin bahar jaana hai to uss mein addition ya interruption na aye.."

"Kesi maa hain yaar??" Piya felt really pity..

"Aisi he hain! aur kabhi kabhar milna hogaya theek hai! warna hum door he ache hain!! Mera aur tumhara bhi beda ghark he hona tha!! pata nahi kese bach gaye!!" Vikas was talking openly about this otherwise he never talks about that family with Piya or anyone..

"Infact main chota he tha but i still remember k maasi ko maine mom se rote hue kehte suna tha k maa mere saath aisa kyun kar rahi hain?? Muskaan ko wo mere pairon ki bedi keh rahi hai.. wo meri doosri shaadi kar wa deti agar Muskaan na hoti to.." And Vikas got angry too while narrating..

"Vik!! Relax!! Nahi sunna mujhe aur tumhe bhi yaad kar k dimagh kharab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!" Piya tried to put a stop..

"Dimagh kharab karne ki baat nahi hai yaar!! Kabhi kabhar agar yeh sab mujhe yaad ajaye to itna gussa ata hai k main bata nahi sakta!! " He exhale a cold breath..

"Agar so called sisters category mein main Aliya se sab se zyaada close hun to uski ek bohat badi wajah ye bhi hai!!!" He stated as a matter of fact...

"Acha bus naa... " She got up after covering Aadi with the blanket.. "Ek shower lo! mood theek karo aur sone ajao.." She tried to avoid the matter.. She had no idea what made Vikas talk out loud about all this today.. This topic never came crossed during any of their conversations in the past.

...

"Thats how we handle things.." Rohail finally found her and sat down on the bench she was sitting on.. It was not a rocket sceince to guess where she would have walked..
"SHUT UP!!!" She yelled at him..

"Okay!!!" He took a deep breath and let it be.. Piya has taken a good class of him and Vikas after Aliya left..

silence..

They kept seated in silence in this almost dark lonely park.. There was a huge park at the back of their appartment building.. Very beautiful, green and sophisticated. It was around 8 in the night and very less people were around..

The bench Aliya has choosen was under a tree, away from the park light and people..
"Wese... Kehte hain raat mein darakhton k neeche nahi bethna chahiye!! Bhoot pareet kabza kar leyte hain!!" He tried to tease her..

"Haan!! Mere andar churail rehti hai!! Ab tum jao!!" She shot fireballs at him...

"Oh!!! isiliye itna bukhar araha tha!!" He gave her a thoughtful look...

"MAZAAAK HAINA TUMHARE LIYE???" She got up and yelled out at him.. "SAMAJH MEIN NAHI ATI NAA?? ZARA SI BAAT NAHI GHUSTI KISI K DIMAGH MEIN???" She shivered with anger.. "SAGGE HO NAA APNE MAA BAAP KE... KESE PATA LAGAY GAA!!" She gritted her teeth..

"KESE PATA LAGAY GAA K AAS PAAS LOGON KI NAZREN AUR BAATEIN NA CHAHTE HUE BHI KITNA HURT KARTI HAIN!!" She blinked her eyes as the tears blured her vision.. "GHALAT HAI AGAR MAIN CHAHTI HOON K MERI WAJAH SE MAMA PAPA PE KOI UNGLI NAA UTHAE?? GHALAT HAI IF I WANT NO BAGGAGE???" She yelled out like a mad person..

"Aliyaa..." He held her shoulders trying to calm her..

"Nahi batao mujhe!!!" She held his collar.."Kya bigara hai maine kisi kaa?? Bachpan jab se iss baat ka ehsaas hua hai k meri choti se choti ghalti ek normal bache se zyaada ass pass walon k liye badi kyun hai? Maine.. sirf khud ko improve karne ki koshish ki hai!!"

"SORRY!! AGAR MAIN SILENT AUR DUKHI AATMA KI TARAH NAHI PHIRTI!! SORRY!! AGAR MAIN MAMA PAPA KO APNE MAMA PAPA KI TARAH TREAT KARTI HUN!! LARTI HUN! JHAGARTI HUN!! ZIDD KARTI HUN!!!" She was shouting and shouting without a care...

"TUMHE DEKH K KOI KYUN NAHI KEHTA?? K TUM KITNE LUCKY HO! TUMHARI JISSE SHAADI HONE WALI HAI USSNE TUMPE EHSAAN KIYA HAI HAAN KAR KE?? HUH?? yEH SAB SIRF MERE HISSE SUNNE KO KYUN ATA HAI??" She questioned out.. "Aisaaa... kyun bola jaata hai jese tumne mujhpe koi bohat bada ehsaan kiya hai?? Meri life mein har roishta jo hai!! wo mujhpe bohat mada ehsaan hai!! batao naa.. aisi nazren kyun uthi hai meri taraf??" She broke down and leaving his collar turned around covering her face..

"Huhhmmm.." She sniffed and he was speech less.. He never saw this side of Aliya or should he say, he didn't knew that bindaas chattar box bubbly girl is hiding so much inside her..

"Tumhe koi andaaza nahi hai kitni badi baat hai yeh mere liye... do minute nahi lagenge issko phelne mein!! Aur phir baatein aur sirf ghatiya baatein!!" She sniffed.. "Tum tak pohunch gayi!! I am sure kal parson bhai, bhabhi ko la raha hoga! ussko bhi batana zaroori ho jayega! doesn't matter agar main iss cheez k liye tayyar nahi hun to.. main nahi chahti kisi ko pata chala, mujhe kitna hurt ho but... doesn't matter!!" She kept on going taking it all out..

"Aliya..." He once again tried to speak...

"BURA LAGTA HAI MUJHE!!!! MUJHE BHI HURT HOTA HAI!!! " She turned around and said looking in his eyes.. "DARR LAGTA HAI!!" Tears shimmered in her eyes and he just stepped forward and hugged her tight ignoring her pushes...

"Its okay!!!" He rubbed her back and let her cry.. She was now crying freely in his arms...

...

"Arrr...maan!! Y eh nahi chalega!!" Shilpa freaked out when after their return, she was about to retire to bed and he brought the injection to insert in her.. "App doctor thodi hain!!" She looked bugged eye..

"Oh!! You know nothing!!" He laughed at her..
"What do u mean i know nothing??" She yelled out.."Appko pata hai mujhe kitna darr lagta hai injection se.. Ek to mujhse subha poocha nahi.. bas keh diya maze se laga do injection!!" She gritted her teeth..

"O Hello!! Hum ghar pe nahi bethe k tum araam araam se ek hafta le k apna bukhar utaro.. I want it quick and fast! Aur main tumhe kisi bhi doctor k pass le k jata.. maine tumhe injection he thukwana tha!!" He arched his brow..

"Huh!!!" Her mouth hung up..

"And she told me.. raat ko ek aur dose de diya to you will be completely fine by tomorrow!! Wo bhi a ke laga deti.. but i know how to do this.." He raised his shoulders carelessly...

"Main nahi lag waoongi!!! Aur app se to kabhi nahi!!" She frowned and almost got ready to run..
"Ab raat ke ek baje to main usse utha k tumne sirf injection lagwane to bulane se raha!! You have no choice.." He stretched his lips.. "Beth jao chup chap!" He held her hand and made her sit on the bed..

"Nahiii..." She closed her eyes tight and turned her face on a side.. He couldn't stop but smile over her reaction.. If she will ever know how he had dealt with bullets and sticthes, she might commit suicide then..
She felt the wetness on her arm and then the slight pinch which made her close her eyes even tighter.. "App mein zara bhi reham nahi hai!!" She commented..

"Hehh.. Hogaya!!" He laughed and moved away... "Drama queen ho tum!!" He shook his head.. "Ab so jao.." He said while disposing off the syringe..

"So jao..." She mumbled making a face, repeating him and quickly hide herself inside the blanket.. She was tired.

"Tum kahan chale??" Vikas looked at Rohail who was all ready in the morning having breakfast which Piya just served..
"You don't know??" Rohail arched his brow.. "I am on a training!!"
"Training to handle a fiance!! Nice!!" Vikas mocked at his face..
"Uhh!!!" Rohail snored.. "Sid ka phone aya tha.. he told me actually ek training chal rahi hai, if i would like to take!" He revealed..
"Sid ka phone aya tha!!" Vikas widen his eyes.. "Armaan ka nahi aya?" He was surprised.. Usually Armaan is the one who is most updated..
"He is out of it!!" Rohail raised his shoulders carelessly.. "Aur usko mat bol dena k Sid ko pata hai!! Kha jayegii sab ko!" Rohail warned..

...

"Hello!!!" Armaan greeted Shilpa as he came back to the room after the meeting! She smiled waving her hand.. She was sitting on the bed with ipad in her hands and looking quite fine and fit..
"Hogayi apki meeting?" She asked..
"Ufff... haan ho gayi!!" He sighed sitting down on the bed after keeping his laptop bag aside.. "Ahh.." Pulling out his shoes and socks, her fall on his back making a sound closed his eyes and unwilingly his head landed on her lap... "Kya kar rahi ho tum?" He asked rubbing his eyes..
She felt a sudden shiver ran down her spine feeling his head on her lap.. Her hands jammed and head freezed for a moment, she didn't know what move to make.. "Hmmm..??" He opened his eyes and looked at her face.. "Kya hua?" He frowned on seeing her still..
"Kuch nahi..." She shook her head and came back into the real land.. "Aise he dekh rahi thi k kahan jaana chahiye.." She passed him the i-pad and kept her one hand on his head..
"Ye kya hai?" He took the i-pad from her hands and started seeing... "Uhh.. Makeup ki dukaan!!" He mumbled seeing sephora on the screen.. "Ek ghanta sown gaa abhi... phir chalte hain!!" He kept the i-pad aside and got up to change..

...

He left her free and she disappeared in the shops.. They together have made the list calculating time and distances of places they could go together.. She was fine and he was completely free from work..
"Abay yaar!!" Armaan hit his head against his palm on seeing a fimiliar face in the mall.. "Kya hua??" Shilpa asked looking up from the bags she was peeking inside wile walking..
"Hey! Armaan!!" The guy waved him and smiled...
"Hiii..." Armaan too smiled and walked forward to greet him whereas Shilpa kept looking at the two confused.. The two man talked letting Shilpa know that they once worked together somewhere and shares a good rappo.. Armaan introduced Shilpa as his wife after which the guy invited them for the dinner and Shilpa just looked dumbfonded at Armaan when he refused politely saying that the dinner is already planned at Shilpa's brother's house who lives here and then tomorrow morning they are leaving..
"Jhoot kyun bola usse??" She frowned at him after the guy left..
"Tumhe uske ghar dinner pe jana tha??" He arched his brow..
"Uhh nahi..." She shook her head in a no..
"To phir???" He made a face and started walking again..

"Tumne apne ghar phone kiya tha?" He asked as they sat down over the dinner..
"Hmmm.. dopahar mein kiya tha!" She replied.. "Bukhar ka nahi bataya warna mama pareshaan ho jati!!" She added..
He looked up at her face with widen eyes as she ate...The fact was just not digesting to him that fever and headaches are such a big thing.. "Yeh.. tum itni chui mui kyun ho bhae?? Bukhar mein mama pass bethi rehti hain! papa office nahi jaate.." He asked.. "Matlab koi na dekhe, to tum khud uth k kuch na karo.."
"App khana khaen!!" She glared at him and said.. What can she do if she is cared about so much and he is let free. Its not her mistake!

I really thought i could sum up the whole holiday /honeymoon trip of ArSh in one part but that seems impossible now.. I have alot in my head to write and so cannot write it down all in one part..
Anddd... i am hell busy these days!

I Love all of your comments and read all of them! Sorry! I just couldn't reply to all plus hectic schedules of mine..

Guys! When i write, obviously the story is mine.. But then i am also connecting with so many of you in so many different ways! I know you all are here from the very beginning and you have showed your likes and dislikes through your comments and its okay! I appreciate it..

When i am writing down an angle, there would be one my POV, you will read and form yours.. I cannot expect to always receive positive comments about a thing i know which is complicated and ts completely fine..

Few questions are evident and i am in a hurry so i am only gona answer them here only..

Shilpa is selfish, immature and so on...

Just tell me.. who in this world is not?? But did she lashed out?? Its all within herself! We have free right to feel, think, get happy or jealous whatever we want!

Things change when we put our thoughts into action.. Don't forget the fact that Shilpa was the fan of Armaan! She instantly got ready for his proposal because it was like an unseen dream!
But when dream hits reality there are consequences.. And we normal girls do react to things around us.. Yes! at times career gets really important than anything else, at times love.. Its human psyche, we'll think something one minute and complete contrast of it the other..

And... i haven't revealed much about Shilpa yet!

Armaan said he doesn't wana be in the position to have Nidhi on one end and another loved one on another! What will happen if in future Nidhi is on one end and Shilpa on another!

What he meant and i think i failed to deliver was.. If he would have married her and welcomed her in his life and joint family.. Come on guys! Joint family mein ya kisi bhi family mein issues atay hain!

Ab ek side pe Nidhi hai aur doosri side pe Annanya or Rahul or anyone... He feels he is bound to pick Nidhi's side.. Why?? Because they have a past! They cannot change it! We can plan in life but it not always happens the way we want.. Life happens and what we are left with is to deal with it.

So, he doesn't wana be in that position and so didn't married her, let her go.. Ab now when he is not in that position why would Shilpa be on one end and Nidhi on another??

And Shilpa and Armaan have just gotten married! ab inke ek maheene ko Armaan Nidhi k dus saal se compare karna is maha bewakoofi!!

Muskaan Shilpa room thing and bad happened with Muskaan

I have just started Muskaan's story.. Relax and give it time..

Armaan didn't told Aliya's story to Shilpa..

Don't you think that story is about Aliya which she haven't even revealed to her own parents.. Will Shilpa like anyone to know that motorcycle incident happened with her??

And all the other questions you guys are so impatient to know about.. I just wana say.. Story has not ended!! I had two options since the very beginning.. I will write the core story! That would have ended by now for sure..

Second option, i write each and everything, every angle, irrespective of the length or parts... I choose the second option and i see you guys enjoy it!!
So just relax and read! comment what you feel no one is stopping you!

The only issue that even arosed recently was bashing.. I mean those people were not the regular readers, never commented and suddenly started bashing..

I hope i am not sounding rude and have made myself clear! All comments are welcomed...

Love,
Sameera😊

Edited by sameera_12 - 8 years ago

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MopuriMadhuri

@MopuriMadhuri

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#664

Finally u r going 2 update just can't wait to read the update

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..preeti..

@Preet123456

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#665

Wow...

Finally reserved to aya. Abhi pls pls jaldi se update de do ..

Eagerly waiting to read the next part...

Please...

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#666

So cute I love this promo
Khana pakana hai Magar aata nahi interesting.
Can't wait for update.

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Shweta

@2111_shweta

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#667

Res

*eeps*

I'm really surprised seeing the short update. And please don't take it wrong I know life mein baki things ko first priority deni padti hai!

Starting mein jab Shilpa ne Armaan ko jaane se mana kiya tabhi I was really worried as the earlier Armaan would have gone for his meeting by hook or by crook. But seeing him change for her is just so...I don't know. I can't find a word for that feeling.

Also Sid is the sweetest guy in this FF. I mean I can't recall anytime when he lost his cool and lashed out on someone.

Coming to Aliya and Rohail...I feel he is the mature one amongst the two younger brothers. Which clearly shows in the way he is taking care of Aliya. He may be over the top but I think that's not his fault. Aliya ke andar bohot cheezein hai jo usne kisise kahin nahi hai. I'm loving how their story is progressing.

Also the Malhotra family issue is too much to handle. That family is dysfunctional in many ways. Would love to see how would the story go jab Muskaan ke liye ladka dhunda jayega.

In my eyes there is one perfect groom for her😉 but no pressure you can choose someone else as well😛

Please try and remove sometime to write and update soon. I swear I've never waited so eagerly for any other story😳

Edited by 2111_shweta - 8 years ago

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#668

Hi Sameera

Came across this while searching for this story based on Maaneet...and figured out it is the same but the names of characters were different...and this story was way ahead of the maaneet's ...and could not resist myself from reading it...dont even know how many times I have read the last few updates and have been thinking about it constantly...that's how amazing a writer you are!!! Way to go!! Love it

Decided to write my comments here instead of at the maaneet site is that ok??

What can I say. as usual so much about every character in this story and of course with maan/armaan being the main character. I realized after reading all the parts that even Geet/Shilpa is a secondary character. No wonder Nidhi and other friends/family play such a vital role in this story as they are all part of maan/armaan. Without them he is nothing.

What a character he is..he is talking bout love being complicated he is the one who is so complicated and this is also due to circumstances and which has made him the man he is today.

Nidhi is such an integral part of his life she made him who he is today for sure or is a big part of who he is today. But was shocked and sad that my first instinct about her being his love came out true. Felt really bad for Geet/shilpa and Sid too. They really should be the first one in maan's and nidhi's lives but they are secondary. For these two the other person will always come first. And I am still wondering if at all something happens and they had to choose will they only choose each other before their spouses and I think they answered yes to that. that makes it not fair at all to their spouses. Wonder what will happen when they come to know about it. Wonder if Piya will continue to make the comparisons between nidhi and geet/shilpa when she comes to live with them. Will this not hurt maan/armaan more?? But we know that piya is more mature for sure and will not do that...hoping

Coming to changing geet/shilpa according to his lifestyle - am hoping maan/armaan is able to not change geet/shilpa fully but make her aware of the relationships which he shares with everyone and accept that fully and support him, because if not she will loose him for sure. Nidhi will not be there all the time to help her realize the folly of her ways. So far Nidhi has helped her multiple times making the right choice be it about maan/armaan or the dupatta issue. How childish geet/shilpa was during these times and also when rohail/rahul took perfume from their room without really asking ...She needs to learn about all this and accept it fully...which is going to be really hard for geet/shilpa...due to her upbringing...glad that her thoughts about her sasural has changed a bit, but she still feels alone when maan/armaan left...

Probably nandini/Muskaan would have understood maan/armaan better, but then this is life. Felt real bad for her to have gone through so much...waiting for her to get some relief from her nani...

Am confused about one thing: nidhi asks geet/shilpa about how her dad died? is it dad or grandad? is he not the monster they are talking about?

Thought the handas/malhotras are rich then how come the girls shared a room instead of getting one each...that was confusing too...that way muskaan/nandini would have felt better too...am surprised geet/shilpa did not consider the feelings of her cousin to make her feel at home in their room...Yes she is spoilt and never needed anything as she got everything she ever wanted but still she is not a spoilt brat for sure. Remember in the beginning of the story the Malik's or Khuranas thought she was a sweet respectful caring person...She does love her cousin a lot for sure, but then still does not make her feel comfortable that it is her room and house too I guess, but am sure this is due to her not being aware of what she is doing...If someone had pointed this out she would have made an effort for sure...

But sad to see her portrayed as one selfish person and one who has no consideration for others. She is shown as a selfish person here but on the other hand as a quiet and reserved good person as well. Maan/armaan always thinks of her as an innocent simple decent person, so she must be for sure. She seems as complicated as maan/armaan. Dadi and piya also commented that she is a good person but with love and guidance will be a better one...Did her parents not talk to her about all this about joint family etc?? Glad at least she adjusted well in her sasural while her hubby was there...She seems to be a more private person for sure compared to her bindaas hubby and his family...waiting for her to open up more to them too and give them all a chance...

But so glad that Geet/shilpa has opened up to her hubby for sure and he too has been accepting of her finally in his life as an important person...she is a completely different person with him and also with rohail and rahul/dev

So loved their talks over the bridge...

Felt bad for him at nidhi's marriage...on one hand he was happy that she was starting a new life and on the other that he is not the one who will be her saathi in that sense...

Piya was so observant when she told him neither did he propose to her and accept her nor did he let her go ...he just wants her with him all the time...and look at it that is what ended up happening...he got his cake and eat it too...he has geet/shilpa on one hand and nidhi his best bud his first love on the other...wow he now has to balance it and not cause any friction in his hoemfront with his wife...

Hope this works...

Initially I was SO sad and upset that what my fear was came true about nidhi...then what to do atleast he got geet/shilpa as his wife...now want him to commit to that relationship fully as he does to others..(I am a maaneet fan and cannot understand/take another woman in maan's life other than geet for sure) so am glad they got married ...

Loved nidhi's self talk...about how comfortable arman/maan has made it for her till now and she is comparing sid to him...she is guilty about that too...she also realizes maan/armaan loves her equally when she realizes he shot himself not for shilpa/geet but for her only..

What a confession from maan/armaan to nidhi about his love for her which will always be there...so confused bout this ...glad neither sid nor geet/shilpa heard ti...but this was needed for both of them to go forward with their spouses fully ... .((This is very real though...Know a lot of people in my life who loved someone but could not marry them due to family reasons, but are very happy now with their spouse...and also these guys told their spouses about their love earlier...The wives felt bad for sure and doubted their ehmiyat in their spouse's life, but then reality and life showed them that their husbands do love them and care for them...))

felt bad that he hid about aliya from her...should he not have shared it with her...she has surprised him so many times and acted more mature and understanding that what he gave her credit for ...maybe she would have understood this too...butthen he did not want to take a chance as she has no equation with any of them as yet I guess...

Love how he is taking her around the world before taking her to the mad house...felt real bad for aliyahoep rohail is able to help her out and make her feel comfortable with hm and that he would take care of her all the time...

Coorg...omg..what all happened there...crazy for sure..nidhi shooting him to save him; talks between geet/shilpa and maan/armaan...families coming together...maan/armaan getting so frustrated...

I felt real bad for Geet/shilpa but was glad she was not aware of it ...maan/armaan not being interested in his own marriage and wanting to back out if all the time and him doing everything only for nidhi and her happiness...where is it fair to shilpa/geet ...no wonder he was so sad/upset...and ignored her all the time...no wonder everyone talked about not like a couple they looked...

Piya's talks with armaan/maan once again helped him get over his past and move on and accept geet/shilpa for sure and his wedding...but then he did move on with her physically too at the end...

SO I am equally confused like maan/armaan - Does he love geet/shilpa at all??? am sure he cares for her, but if push comes to shove will he ever give the place which only a spouse deserves?? or will he choose nidhi even then???What about Nidhi...will she move forward??

from the last update it seems they both have moved forward and have accepted each other's spouses but with the feeling that they still have each other and will always have each other and their backs...for sure they share something which no one else does...but then once again I feel for shilpa/geet...atleast sid knows about the truth about nidhi/maan(armaan) truth about their other life but shilpa/geet is not aware at all...she has no clue ...i know maan/armaan kind of told people about how they met and what she means to him during her sangeet but still..

Just hoping everyitng will come around fine and geet/shilpa adjusts to her husband's crazy friends/family circle and his equation with nidhi...Sid for sure has accepted and I remember he had talked to maan/armaan about it once too...

Sorry for the rambling...am not a writer, am just writing as it comes to me...I don't know how many times I have read this story and have started to read it from the beginning once again...something pulls me to the story and characters

But absolutely great story and great writing...loking forward to the latest promo...wwo geet/shilpa cooking for her man!!!

Edited by Alamelu - 8 years ago

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..preeti..

@Preet123456

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Hi Sameera
Came across this while searching for this story based on Maaneet...and figured out it is the same but the names of characters were different...and this story was way ahead of the maaneet's ...and could not resist myself from reading it...dont even know how many times I have read the last few updates and have been thinking about it constantly...that's how amazing a writer you are!!! Way to go!! Love it

Decided to write my comments here instead of at the maaneet site is that ok??

What can I say. as usual so much about every character in this story and of course with maan/armaan being the main character. I realized after reading all the parts that even Geet/Shilpa is a secondary character. No wonder Nidhi and other friends/family play such a vital role in this story as they are all part of maan/armaan. Without them he is nothing.

What a character he is..he is talking bout love being complicated he is the one who is so complicated and this is also due to circumstances and which has made him the man he is today.

Nidhi is such an integral part of his life she made him who he is today for sure or is a big part of who he is today. But was shocked and sad that my first instinct about her being his love came out true. Felt really bad for Geet/shilpa and Sid too. They really should be the first one in maan's and nidhi's lives but they are secondary. For these two the other person will always come first. And I am still wondering if at all something happens and they had to choose will they only choose each other before their spouses and I think they answered yes to that. that makes it not fair at all to their spouses. Wonder what will happen when they come to know about it. Wonder if Piya will continue to make the comparisons between nidhi and geet/shilpa when she comes to live with them. Will this not hurt maan/armaan more?? But we know that piya is more mature for sure and will not do that...hoping

Coming to changing geet/shilpa according to his lifestyle - am hoping maan/armaan is able to not change geet/shilpa fully but make her aware of the relationships which he shares with everyone and accept that fully and support him, because if not she will loose him for sure. Nidhi will not be there all the time to help her realize the folly of her ways. So far Nidhi has helped her multiple times making the right choice be it about maan/armaan or the dupatta issue. How childish geet/shilpa was during these times and also when rohail/rahul took perfume from their room without really asking ...She needs to learn about all this and accept it fully...which is going to be really hard for geet/shilpa...due to her upbringing...glad that her thoughts about her sasural has changed a bit, but she still feels alone when maan/armaan left...

Probably nandini/Muskaan would have understood maan/armaan better, but then this is life. Felt real bad for her to have gone through so much...waiting for her to get some relief from her nani...

Am confused about one thing: nidhi asks geet/shilpa about how her dad died? is it dad or grandad? is he not the monster they are talking about?

Thought the handas/malhotras are rich then how come the girls shared a room instead of getting one each...that was confusing too...that way muskaan/nandini would have felt better too...am surprised geet/shilpa did not consider the feelings of her cousin to make her feel at home in their room...Yes she is spoilt and never needed anything as she got everything she ever wanted but still she is not a spoilt brat for sure. She does love her cousin a lot for sure, but then still does not make her feel comfortable that it is her room and house too I guess, but am sure this is due to her not being aware of what she is doing...If someone had pointed this out she would have made an effort for sure...

But sad to see her portrayed as one selfish person and one who has no consideration for others. She is shown as a selfish person here but on the other hand as a quiet and reserved good person as well. She seems as complicated as maan/armaan. Dadi and piya also commented that she is a good person but with love and guidance will be a better one...Did her parents not talk to her about all this about joint family etc?? Glad at least she adjusted well in her sasural while her hubby was there...She seems to be a more private person for sure compared to her bindaas hubby and his family...waiting for her to open up more to them too and give them all a chance...
But so glad that Geet/shilpa has opened up to her hubby for sure and he too has been accepting of her finally in his life as an important person...

So loved their talks over the bridge...
Felt bad for him at nidhi's marriage...on one hand he was happy that she was starting a new life and on the other that he is not the one who will be her saathi in that sense...
Piya was so observant when she told him neither did he propose to her and accept her nor did he let her go ...he just wants her with him all the time...and look at it that is what ended up happening...he got his cake and eat it too...he has geet/shilpa on one hand and nidhi his best bud his first love on the other...wow he now has to balance it and not cause any friction in his hoemfront with his wife...

Hope this works...

Initially I was SO sad and upset that what my fear was came true about nidhi...then what to do atleast he got geet/shilpa as his wife...now want him to commit to that relationship fully as he does to others..

Loved nidhi's self talk...about how comfortable arman/maan has made it for her till now and she is comparing sid to him...she is guilty about that too...she also realizes maan/armaan loves her equally when she realizes he shot himself not for shilpa/geet but for her only..

What a confession from maan/armaan to nidhi about his love for her which will always be there...so confused bout this ...glad neither sid nor geet/shilpa heard ti...but this was needed for both of them to go forward with their spouses fully ... .

felt bad that he hid about aliya from her...should he not have shared it with her...she has surprised him so many times and acted more mature and understanding that what he gave her credit for ...maybe she would have understood this too...butthen he did not want to take a chance as she has no equation with any of them as yet I guess...

Love how he is taking her around the world before taking her to the mad house...felt real bad for aliyahoep rohail is able to help her out and make her feel comfortable with hm and that he would take care of her all the time...

Coorg...omg..what all happened there...crazy for sure..nidhi shooting him to save him; talks between geet/shilpa and maan/armaan...families coming together...maan/armaan getting so frustrated...

I felt real bad for Geet/shilpa but was glad she was not aware of it ...maan/armaan not being interested in his own marriage and wanting to back out if all the time and him doing everything only for nidhi and her happiness...where is it fair to shilpa/geet ...no wonder he was so sad/upset...and ignored her all the time...no wonder everyone talked about not like a couple they looked...

Piya's talks with armaan/maan once again helped him get over his past and move on and accept geet/shilpa for sure and his wedding...but then he did move on with her physically too at the end...

SO I am equally confused like maan/armaan - Does he love geet/shilpa at all??? am sure he cares for her, but if push comes to shove will he ever give the place which only a spouse deserves?? or will he choose nidhi even then???What about Nidhi...will she move forward??

from the last update it seems they both have moved forward and have accepted each other's spouses but with the feeling that they still have each other and will always have each other and their backs...for sure they share something which no one else does...but then once again I feel for shilpa/geet...atleast sid knows about the truth about nidhi/maan(armaan) truth about their other life but shilpa/geet is not aware at all...she has no clue ...i know maan/armaan kind of told people about how they met and what she means to him during her sangeet but still..

Just hoping everyitng will come around fine and geet/shilpa adjusts to her husband's crazy friends/family circle and his equation with nidhi...Sid for sure has accepted and I remember he had talked to maan/armaan about it once too...

But absolutely great story and great writing...loking forward to the latest promo...wwo geet/shilpa cooking for her man!!!

Very well said...

I like it rather I will say I love it. You put all the thoughts and current confusion really well.

As per me Armaan do love Shilpa but may be as not much as Nidhi. She has to earn her place.

As in story...

She had no idea what she did.. His heart shrunk! She just made the decision for him.. Decision to let her go.. He knew he cannot survive without her.. She needed to stay in his life, the way she is and it was only possible if he put himself out from a position where on one end there is Nidhi and on other, Any other important person of his life..

What will happen if time comes and Armaan has to chose between Shilpa and Nidhi? He has separated her from his immediate family. I think Shilpa will handle it maturally, whenever she will know everything, but still...if condition ocuurs like chose between Nidhi and Shilpa?

Edited by ..preeti.. - 8 years ago